A cute story! Definitely sibling goals between the brother and sister!

The novel is nice. The interaction with the FL and ML are cute and funny.

The brother is a total siscon that is a bit silly.

All in all if you want a relaxing read that doesnt have too much drama read this.

It was fine at first and I was interested in how the FL and brother relationship would pan out, but after ch4 my interest got less and less. At this point I'm just reading because I'm too lazy to switch to something else.

To be honest, I don't mind the ML too much. Fiction isn't reality and I'm not against MLs who are sadistic and cruel and cause the MC to suffer. I'm also fine with the OFL, she's the type of character I love to hate. I even like the... more>> MC when she's being wimpy or a little silly. I don't even mind Mary Sue MCs as long as it's interesting! It's the writing problems that bother me.

1. Author very often falls into the CN novel pitfall of overly praising the MC. Less than a day after MC posts her first basic chibi comic, she's being treated as a treasure by a bigshot in a new webcomic company. There are so far no negative comments on her (only!) webcomic series, only immediate fans. Everyone loves her no matter what.

2. Problematic author. There's a chapter where a character says her daughter is "slightly autistic but the doctor said it can be cured if treated early enough". There's even more anti-autistic rhetoric scattered throughout the whole novel. I think it's good that the translator/s didn't make the TL less accurate by changing it, but I am upset at the author for writing it in the first place. I can only hope that the author has learned better now.

3. The MC flipflops character, like the author doesn't really know what she should be like and is just making her whatever is needed for the scene. Sometimes she's a cowardly introvert who just wants to stay home and work, other times she's a white lotus schemer who knows what she's doing. It's more ironic because the reason given for OFL being annoying is that she's a white lotus (though now I think she's more of a green tea b*tch) but sometimes MC acts the same way.

4. Inconsistent writing, to a really obvious extent. You'll see when you read it.

I sort of feel like I just ate cold leftovers. I satisfied my hunger (boredom), but I'm not happy. <<less

I love the siblings interaction and netizens' reaction.

What I dislike is the ML. He is too overbearing, too controlling and acted as if Siyu is his toy that should accept whatever he does to her. He even controls what she should wear!

The usual plot with cliche and not much character development, this one feels more bland and stilted flow than others.

The usual MC suddenly liked by all, original kind and smart FL suddenly has her brain go offline and become villainous, super OP ML with no clear plot as to how he is so OP, liked MC for no reason and starts spending money on her like crazy (here it's even more absurd than 'oh she is different so I will notice her', no reason!!). He comes online, stands and throws... more>> his aura around, bullies MC with pampering hidden in eyes (!?) for no reason, goes offline. No dialogue between them, no pov from his end, no thoughts apart from oh face slap that cannon fodder, he bullied this FL who is total stranger to me, when I usually don't look at girls at all.

Bit meh.

Some good points, esp if new to the genre. MCs sis-con brother is pure and cute, FLs original drawings are somewhat nice. May be later chapters has some character development. <<less

It is a really bland novel tbh. Had a good start but the plot just went out after a few chapters just some unsatisfying faceslaps, acting job stuff and her webtoons. MC's aura seeing ability was just forgotten after one incident. That had so much potential but the author just dumps it.

Also MC's strength and determination went out the window after meeting ML and she became the typical Mary-sue FL.

And ML is so Overbearing that I hated it. No character growth whatsoever.

The brother was the only good character but soon... more>> gets forgotten by the author later on. And God knows what happened to the Og FL. Making her so dumb was totally uncalled for lol.

Just a single word for this novel- Meh. <<less

It is a 4.5 for me. It would have been 5 if not for the rather questionable, 2-D personality of the male lead.

This is a really fluffy story, with just a little dog blood and a bit of Mary Sueness. However, it is a very enjoyable light read. I strongly support the brother and sister CP. Their interaction is so cute, I couldn't help but be ... more>>

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Yay! Custard bun with sesame filling!

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This is a book that can be read for fun without expecting much from it but the brother-sister pair will leave you smiling. Though I firmly believe that the scenes with the ML should have been reduced and more brother and sister scenes should have been included. <<less

It's lighthearted and funny, full of fluffs and although there's schemes by the FL's mother and Xu Qingwan, it didn't really affect the FL that much since those schemes are not high class. Btw, instead of the ML and FL, my favorite is that silly little brother, Ji Lin. He's just waaaay too cute and a total fan boy of his sister. Anyway, I just felt that the ending is kinda rushed and I'm little dissatisfied with that. I think that the story can still be stretch a little more... more>> like for example,

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where the hell does Xu Qingwan went? She just disappeared? Is there any explanation for Zhou Siyu's transmigration to her own novel? How about Lu Yuanhe's bad luck? Also, I think Zhou Siyu's ability to see one's luck isn't utilized very well aside from Beibei and Tiantian's case. More importantly, I actually like it more of Zhou Siyu stay a little bit more in the entertainment industry. But I think the author decided to end the story already so she tie some of the loose ends. What a pity.

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. Anyway, 8.5/10. Everything's good and fun, just that the ending is kinda rushed. <<less

For an embedded narrative story like this one, you can excuse the flawed/non-existent logic, bogus physics, and extreme behavior for the most part because what didn't make sense in the first place wouldn't make any more sense later. So to a certain degree, it's tolerable because it's nicely written (and translated).
Trigger warning: extreme stalker behavior

The deal-breaker was the enforced romance. Not sure why the author thought adding romance would be a great idea with a premise like this one.
ML goes after MC because she could dispel his physical discomfort (not sexually).
She can either, A. Meekly comply or, B. Be forced by a bunch of men in black into shady lowkey black vehicles according to his whims.
The ML is human garbage. A typical modern emperor type that leans more strongly towards dictatorship. A bug, an error, 404, that doesn't compute in any sense.
Funnily, in the first scene of his appearance, ML sounded more of a 70-year-old clan elder than a handsome young man of MC's generation.
If you're being overly generous, you can call it 'mysterious' but as a realist, the only description one could have is: otiose.
His main selling points: boundless wealth, revered influence, and absolute power.
If you'd delete this character and insert this power into ogML and make it a purely fluffy comedic family caring relationship, it would be at least a 4.5 star.
He goes off breaking laws more frequently than cannon fodders have done in their first and second life combined in less than a weekend.

Feelin' cute, gonna end your career, your life, and the life of your entire family.

He doesn't have a concept of human rights, social norms, morals, and mutual consent. In that aspect, setting the story in ancient times would've made him more reasonable and tolerable (ancient norms BS, no modern expectancies y'know).

The MC falls in love with him eventually due to the suspension bridge effect and Stockholm syndrome. It also happened from 0-100, and no steps taken, catapult-launched into romance. He behaves slightly better, but still on a scale of 1-10 being normal, a 50 down to 35. The fact that they have 0 chemistry doesn't help.

Cannon fodders acted like lunatics high on all kinds of drugs ramming their heads against concrete walls. The OG storyline was derailed long ago, but at least the half-sibling relationship between MC and ogML was adorable.

The story idea and the setting are both very interesting and quite unique. Unfortunately, all the characters, including the FL, are psychos, lunatics or both. So the content, though mostly funny, can get extremely annoying at times. Granted, the setting is a world inside a particularly heavy dog blood manhua, where the FL, being the original author transmigrates into. So this over the top s*upidity of the protagonists is strictly not even wrong in the sense of the world setting. It's only that I'm not that much into dog blood... more>> settings myself. Speaking of the FL, I'm rather conflicted. On one hand she is an overachiever and can stand her ground in most cases. On the other hand, she is too meek from time to time, especially towards her overbearing boyfriend. Also something I don't like. Two other weak points are the isekai aspect which is never completely explained and the conclusion of the story which kind of fades out and leaves a lot of plot threads and world background unresolved.

Due to all these reasons it's only worth three stars for me. But if you are a fan of dog blood drama, it should be easily four stars for you. <<less

It started off pretty good and kept me invested but as the chapters kept going on, it kept going downhill. The plot is really bland. Not a lot of drama or action. Mainly just the life of the MC with a few bumps along the way.

I had high expectations cuz the name of the Novel sounded pretty interesting but then it became really boring.

The ending also felt rushed and weird. I don't even get how the MC went from "omg I can't breath when I'm next to him due to... more>> his bad luck" to "I love him". It felt forced.

Would not reread this again. <<less

The things I like the most in this novel are interaction between MC and his brother (ori ML) and the fans. So funny and cute.

But, I'm stress when ML appeared, maybe because there are tag yandere but its not really the worst. Just when he appeared I always think why he threat MC like that and etc, it is like dictator. Well, it is yandere.

The ending is like not ending, of course, they being a couple but when the ending like that, really? Already end?

Well, my suggestion you can read... more>> with a strong willpower. It is really not a bad story if you can ignore the ending and that yandere ML (he often appear and disappear in a little time, thats why I can continued read till the end). <<less

From the summary I knew this would be a black-bellied forced pampering, but since I saw the comment about how ML is actually not THAT bad, I decided to give it a try.

As I guessed, ML here is really not my type, but what angered me even more is author's bias towards FL. Sure, when others do that, it's 'using improper means' and 'going through the back-door', but when she at every turn makes it obvious she's backed up by someone, it's suddenly alright to have a backing! She doesn't... more>> use it to get a role, she only uses it so people wouldn't bully her out of the industry. Hypocrite much, hm??

Honestly, if just ML was bad, I maybe would suffered through the dog food scenes to read more about siblings' relationship—I love their dynamic; but if there's anything I dislike more that cold-blooded domineering bigots, it's author's blatant whitening of their Female Leads. Yuck!

If you're riding on your future hubby's coattails, at least be honest enough to straightforwardly admit it. <<less

It was okay. The romance was very little kinda left you wondering where is the love? Sure he provided her with meds and work opportunities but that seemed more like it had to do with his control issues. It wasn't that romantic just seemed convenient if anything. Parts of the story were rushed, it didn't have closure in certain areas, and some parts should have been cut all together. Overall just it was just okay.

I Really like tge story, I'm just disappointed and disbelief that the AUTHOR didn't mention that in the story ... more>>

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Siyu didn't tell or reveal about she transmigrating to the novel and about the SIYU made a story novel she made the FL which before she entered the novel, that she also recarnate to the book. This novel Really have holes that audience want the AUTHOR to talk about SIYU talk with someone about her previous life and the lucky charm where she can see it clearly.

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HUHU, I HAD NO ENOUGH, I WANT MORE CHAPTERS SADLY IT JUST END LIKE THAT <<less

cute and fluffy especially the brother sister pairing. They're so adorable. Overall, a light read. Just a fluffy dogblood story hahaha

As for ML MC dynamic.. So so? Lol

If you don't like overbearing, and possesive MLs then this isn't for you. I personally love this kind of character in fiction, but not IRL, so to each and everyone lol.

P.S., Ji Lin is a big baby 😂😂

Soooooooooooooo much fun!

Too many loopholes however this is the novel's word's fault. When you go to a not-so-rational world, what can you do? MC is not s*upid at least her IQ seems to be fine.

Anyway, this is a dog-blood fun Chinese novel. Just have fun with it and don't think too much. We all need such a me-time like this.

I've just finished read this novel and enjoyed it till the final chapter. The story is sweet, and there is not many unreasonable people. Everything can be solved pretty fast. No unnecessary misunderstanding. The interaction between female lead and his younger brother is very cute!!! 😆

i liked it, not too long, the plot wasn't too complicated, and none of the main characters were infuriating imo. It was cute, sweet, and simple.

Reading was a mistake~ started at 7am and it's now 1:09am 😭😂. The characters are too cute, and the villains aren't too evil. Overall, very wholesome :D.