Saving the Tragic Adonis

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Shu Ning read a CEO novel. In it, there was a beautiful and tragic villain. He was clearly the true young master of a wealthy family, but he was switched at birth and became a delinquent. Later, he returned to the wealthy family to go against the fake young master, fought for his fiancée, and finally fell from the top of a building and died.

After his death, the fake young master inherited his money and his fiancée, his career and his love.

Shu Ning resentfully tore up the novel and transmigrated into the book that very night.

The little villain shook his legs, cursed, had horrible grades, dyed his hair yellow, didn’t have a single good point.

Shu Ning’s eyes twitched: Before sending him back to the Wei family, let’s make some changes. Otherwise, he’ll be rejected by the Wei family again.

After being reformed by Shu Ning.

The little villain didn’t shake his legs, stopped swearing, and cut his crazy, scene-style hair. He was as beautiful as a fairy and took first place in the entire grade.

Daddy Shu Ning shed tears of relief: Our baby is so good. He’ll definitely be able to get rid of that fake young master!

But isn’t baby a little too good?

He casually created a piece of software and sold it for hundreds of thousands.

He casually bought some stocks and made millions.

Before his wealthy family had even found him, he had become wealthy all on his own.

Every time he earned some money, he would offer it up to Shu Ning, buying him this and that, even buying him a villa!

Shu Ning (drooling): This damn villa, quickly take it away, don’t tempt me!

Yin Mingzheng thought that he was tr*sh of unknown origin, someone that no one cared about. He thought that he was someone who should have perished long ago.

Until that day, when he met the only light in his life.

So he clung onto the light tightly, refusing to let go.

His light said: You have to improve yourself.

So Yin Mingzheng worked hard to become better and stronger. He wanted to protect his only light. Because his light was the sole meaning of his existence.

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拯救美强惨反派[穿书]
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Lightkaitou
Lightkaitou rated it
September 18, 2021
Status: Completed
If you like to see character progress then this is the story for you.

While there is not much progress for the MC because he was originally an adult before coming into the novel. You will see the progress of his feelings for the ML.

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It took a long time for the MC to realize that he loves the ML. He never felt anything involving love for any gender.

He only realized when he was about to leave the ML after confirming that ML could spread his wings and fly on his own.

It started out small and then slowly expanded as the MC began to explore and understand his preference in love.

The MC cares more about others than himself and never planned to confess his feelings.

Throughout the story, the MC always went above and beyond to help the ML. More than any other story that I have read so far.

He used his own money to help raise the ML. Buying milk and nutritions so that the ML grows healthy. Clothes and shoes in his correct size. A phone and laptop to help with learning. Guiding the ML in the correct direction with hope that he will be accepted and loved by his biological family.

All while hiding that it from him and letting the adopted mother take credit for it. Even going as far as to pay the adopted mother to spend time with the ML when he was in the hospital. Cause all the ML wanted was family love.

The MC worked as a translator to help make money to help the ML grow up safely and strong.

In the end, the MC wanted to adopted children with disabilities. And even own an orphanage for ab*sed and disabled children.

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On the other hand, there is a lot of progression for the ML. The ML starts off holding grudges against people but ends up learning to be forgiving and accepting flaws in people as they are only human.

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The ML did not care about any of the bad things in his life so long as he had his mother’s love. Never complaining about anything so as not to make it difficult for his mother. Always taking the beatings for his mother, cleaning, cooking, and saving up money from empty bottle to help his mother live a bit easier.

At first, the relationship between the MC and ML was rough as the ML disliked the MC for being one of the many people that bullied him. The ML held a strong grudge and distrust against the MC for a long time.

Later on, the MC saved the ML when he ends up in the hospital for protecting his adopted mother from his adopted father’s beating. Due to his adopted father finding out the ML is not his biological son.

Cause the adopted mother exchanged her real son with the ML so her real son could live a good life.

So the adopted father thought he was cheated on. But finds out later on that the ML is actually not related to either of them.

And since they are not related, they refused to pay for the ML’s medical bill to save his life. Even though the ML ended up in the hospital in the first place due to him protecting his adopted mother from his adopted father’s beatings.

The MC paid the for the initial down payment to save the ML with all the money he had. Then asked his parents for help and set up a donation page for the ML. While clearing up the misunderstandings of the ML that people had of him.

After the incident, the ML got smarter but lost the ability to see color.

The ML always returned the favor of anyone that was nice to him. So after he found out about the donations to save his life. The ML began to start learning how to make money from small jobs to programming, to finally investing in the stock market.

The ML later on repays everyone that helped him out.

At that point, the ML started to fall in love with the MC. Starting from wanting an excuse to talk to the MC, to relying on and trusting the MC, to finally falling in love. But never confessed because he knew the MC did not love him romantically. The ML only confessed after the MC fell in love with him and the feeling was mutual.

In the end, the ML forgave the people that bullied him and accepted the flaws of his biological parents saying that they were only human.

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Overall, the story held a lot of good aspects. The development of feelings for both the MC and ML. The projecting of both the good and bad in people and accepting the flaws in people due to their own self interests. The fears of being in a relationship. The idea that money and success is nothing compared to your loved ones. To love someone is to not only care for their physical need but emotional need. This story is like a chipped diamond with many sides and meanings that could easily be missed. Clearly a gem but not perfect. But that is just as good cause the story tells the meaning of accepting flaws and appreciating what is given. <<less
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Abiry
Abiry rated it
March 16, 2022
Status: Completed
It started so good, but the ending was too abrupt.

Obviously a popcorn novel, nice characters that grow together, well thought drama

until you realize you're at ch62 and there's only 63. The ending felt rushed, or like the author messed up where to add the relationship in the (otherwise well done) plot until 2 chapters to finish.

... more>> The extra feels like it was cut in the middle, rushed (again) and really lacking at, what I think was supposed to be, the "preview" of their future together.

Not to be rude but it really shows that the author is a little lacking in redaction skill but compensates with the quality of plot, using heavy subjects rarely seen in a comedy novel without loosing the charm overall.

Could be worse, at least I was only kinda disappointed at the end. <<less
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PhoenixPlume320
PhoenixPlume320 rated it
June 22, 2022
Status: c43
Gosh, I was so tired of the MC. He used to bully the ML with the rest of his classmates but suddenly became good to ML once he got his memories of the plot in the book.

Really strange to me that the author didn't just make MC transmigrate when he suddenly remembered the plot. Instead, MC transmigrated when he was little and forgot the plot, only to suddenly remember... I can't tell what this accomplishes because the MC's personality still did a 180 once he remembered he was in a... more>> book. If you bullied someone before, just because u suddenly sympathize with them, your not gonna magically become a holy Mary good person. But that's what happens to the MC. He constantly butts into the ML in hopes of fixing him and it's kinda embarrassing to read.

It smoothes out a little more and problems are solved, ML doesn't dislike MC anymore for trying to improve and fix him... But ML is rly... Op. Like, super overpowered later in his teenage years after he starts to improve. Honestly, I have no idea why this story has a +4 rating. Romance is shallow, MC is annoying, no one wonders why MC's personality suddenly changed after he fell... What a mess. <<less
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Lemonfxx
Lemonfxx rated it
March 9, 2022
Status: Completed
It's fine. Not bad, but not that great either.

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I was just really frustrated and disappointed with how lackluster the romance in this story is that I was wondering if there's still gonna be a development in their relationship even though I'm almost reaching the end! So if you're looking for a fluffy and sweet romance, there is nothing here. I felt like the author just wanted to be done with it and call it quits. Plot is so-so.

ML is too ridiculously OP. Just how old is he? Not even 18! His OPness had me rolling my eyes several times.

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It started promising, and I really genuinely liked it at the beginning, but when it started going downhill, I lost interest. <<less
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P2wo
P2wo rated it
December 17, 2022
Status: Completed
The first half was really good, I must say. I was so hooked up at the beginning that I read it non-stop. MC's relationship with his family, his relationship with his friends and teachers, and of course his relationship with ML was all believable and well-written. Especially his relationship with ML was so freaking touching. How he helped ML in his saddest times without wanting anything in return... that was so lovable. His bright and cheerful personality was really well-written. ML was truly pitiful, but he was tenacious and proud.... more>> He lacked a lot of common sense. But MC wanted ML to understand that world is full of love, that there are good people in this world. ML indeed deserved that. But what direction does the story veer into? A f*cking revenge plot!

The second half was just a f*cking mess. MC and ML both lost their original personality in the second half. Instead of character growth, ML experienced character "deviation". Also, MC used to act like a dad to ML, then he started acting like ML's lackey.

ML turned from being ab*sed to an ab*ser. He was schemed against just after he was born. And when he grows into an adult, he becomes a schemer himself. He emotionally manipulates his biological mother to obtain her love. Although Wei Ximing, the fake young master, originally hadn't intended to make trouble for him, he gives the other party reasons, making him scheme against ML. And then slowly directs him towards endless abyss. The guy was just 16 probably. Yeah the author makes a 16 yr old a big villain when the story actually didn't need that at all.

To sum up, ML actually doesn't see the goodness of the world. He just gets attached to MC and thinks that MC is his world. He never makes new friends. What the hell? A healing story turned into a revenge story. Really disappointing.

Also ML was already so successful. It would actually have been great if he never returned to his family. When you are doing good by yourself, why would you still go to meet your real family when you know that they would probably not like you? He already earned millions a month by himself, so ML actually meeting Wei family didn't even make sense. After going to Wei family, he had to fight for favor, receive cold treatment, manipulate his relatives with money or emotions when he wanted something, but ML was already rich as f*ck before he even went there, so was it all worth it? I personally don't think so. Yeah his mother loves him. But in the original novel, she didn't. ML could have just maintained a superficial relationship with them and kept in touch with his mother. Also, the rich high school drama and stuff... was so unnecessary.

But the translation is really, really good. Just the good translation made me read the story to the end. Or else I'd have dropped it midway. <<less
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periperi
periperi rated it
September 15, 2021
Status: Completed
5 stars

Rated purely for the amount of progress ML made (and face-slapping, this book is pretty satisfying in that aspect). Totally agree with the other review on the lack of romance though.

MC was the main MVP in supporting ML in the first half of the book but he took a back seat in the second half of the book so this is a real ML-centric book but I couldn't put the book down, really wanted to know what ML did next in his journey. ML's back story was really tragic... more>> and watching him slowly overcome the odds was really satisfying.

One annoying aspect in the first half (that was resolved later) :
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was MC having to support ML silently through ML's adoptive mother who was the worst character in the book. Annoying because this made ML had good feelings for her when it wasn't even her who did those kind things for him. It took half the book before ML found out and finally (thank goodness) cut ties with her. And she does later get her retribution.

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As with any switched at birth story, always tricky with the other child that gets to live the better life as they are still innocent. While
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author writes him off as without good will and against ML. I still felt a tad bad for him because he is a child. Like him wanting to hide the fact that he's not truly their child when his birth mother came looking for him for money could be seen as understandable as someone who grew up spoiled, for fear of being abandoned? But he also did a lot of bad things like staging an accident with the grandma to save her to get her gratitude.

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As mentioned, the romance is the one that's really minimal but they do have a close and supportive relationship.

Overall a good read of seeing ML overcoming the odds with MC's help at the beginning. <<less
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gryffinpuff
gryffinpuff rated it
October 19, 2021
Status: Completed
Story started out good with describing ML's pains and MC's efforts to help him - you would rage at ML's parents and other adults, you would cry with ML, you would like to cheer MC on. But, after the hospital arc, story went downhill - author used Brain Hemorrhage as a cheap device to give ML a convenient cheat to make him OP. ML's transition from an ab*sed kid at his wit's end to a cold manipulator was kinda abrupt...

ML's interaction with MC and his family was very sweet and... more>> it was heartwarming to see ML getting some deserved love and care. I didn't feel much for the romance - not only MC is much older than ML, but from ML's end too, it seemed as if ML just latched onto the first person that showed him goodwill, and was possessive about said person. MC seems to be used as a tool to shape ML's personality...

Although the story got a bit boring/stretched out at times, as if the author isn't sure how to further the story, it's still a decent read. <<less
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UsaYuki
UsaYuki rated it
September 22, 2021
Status: Completed
Great story! I won’t say much, since others have already mentioned everything I could think of :)

I think.. it’s quite a sweet and heartwarming story. Teaches some life lessons, how one could lead a happy life (such as accepting people’s flaws, knowing that there is good and bad, etc.) so I really liked it!

I think that it’s very... human... how the characters behave and think...

some things that surprised me/bothered me a little?

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1. I didn’t expect it to be so... bloody ^^‘ it’s very rare, to read a modern day novel, where the ML (indirectly) kills someone... it’s always hard to say if someone deserves to die and who not (bc who are we to decide on someone else’s life and death) but I‘d also admit that I do not feel bad for them p*dos Death. Neither for the adoptive father to go for jail. It was just very surprise to see that happen.

2. Well, even though there was fortune in misfortune (the ML, after the hospitalization, got better memory, basically became a genius, and realized how good MC is to him, was trigger of everything that lead to a better life for ML) I still think that MC could have solved this „problem“, ML not being their child and trying to separate them to save the ML, differently. He could have consulted in someone, why not notify the police (tho maybe it’s different in China, I’m not too sure ah). The ending is good, but ML really had to suffer a lot...

3. Like someone else said, I do feel a little... bad for the switched out child. He is just a child who was afraid of loosing what he had nos... It’s just that, he really did a lot of wrong things. He was loved by many, and didn’t really *need* to resort to these methods to stay. He did grow up there for more than 15 years, I don’t think they would have abandoned him. Tho I guess it was his insecurities, his pride and all that, that finally lead to the ending that he had. Because, even though MLs adoptive mother had malicious intentions, it’s mit the Baby‘s/Kid‘s fault, to be switched out. It’s just him having done so many mistakes, that lead to this.

I wonder what he’s doing, now that he basically has no family. Both his parents are in jail, he himself is 15 or 16. What happens, if this happens in real life? Will he be sent to an orphanage? I don’t know ah

4. The ending was... so abrupt haha it suddenly ended and I didn’t expect it •7•) / welp, I like the idea of him having an orphanage to support disabled and ab*sed children! It’s just that I thought I’d see more of their love life ohhhh anyway it was good!

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So yeah, even though this kinda surprised me, I still love the story! Really recommend! Give it a try~ <<less
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shuulys
shuulys rated it
August 25, 2022
Status: Completed
Sweet and cute. Quite satisfying to read. Some parts (more of the end) are a little rushed and brief so the plot wasn't described too much in detail. The ending was also a little sudden. Kinda wished that it could drag on a little about their lives after they grew up. But overall it was quite a nice and short read.
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KeraShr
KeraShr rated it
December 27, 2021
Status: Completed
Awesome!!!

Unexpectedly great story!! I loved it! It was quite heartwarming, the way Ning family took in YM & mother Ning called him her 2nd son!! I loved SN's parents!! 🥰

This novel is also good because the author put in a lot of efforts on character building of both leads. From their childhood to their coming-out, made me feel as if I'm on a journey!!

I loved the ending, because while other mm/bl novels mostly end when leads give birth or adopt children, this novel ending in SN establishing a donation fund... more>> for helping disabled children who have suffered domestic ab*se!!! 🥺🥰

Hats off to the Author! Thank you for this Masterpiece!

Recommended reading once... and again & again! 😁 <<less
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ddorai
ddorai rated it
September 4, 2023
Status: c18
I'm sorry for being a "snowflake" and giving this novel a bad review...

this wouldve been nicer if the story was about shu ning (MC) being transmigrated as a teacher in the school, NOT as a classmate. why? he would have more authority to help him effectively + he wouldnt need to resort in s*upid sh*t he's doing to "help" him.

(long rant below)

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what made me dropped this is on how MC "tried" to help the ML out of his abusive houshold by essentially making it worst. how he handled it is genuinely how a 14 yr old would handle it, not the adult he always claims to be.

he knew the ML was bullied and is sensitive to people making fun of him? let's "accidentally" make fun of him by imitating /mocking his chuunibyou phase in front of the whole class!

he knew the ML had a pe*verted stalker bc of his pretty face thats why he had to cut his hair in a weird way to ruin his image? let's force him to change his image to be prettier, causing the stalker to stalk him again and risk harming/assulting him bc he's (ML) only 15 yrs old!

ML has a trauma of someone taking pictures of him without his consent bc of said pe*verted stalker? let's take pictures of him secretly in front of his face!

he knew the ML's adoptive father was abusive, has severe anger issues and is ready to throw hands at his family at any time? lets piss him off by giving him a paternity test annonymously, making the only outlet of anger as his own son who was inside the house with him at the time!

i said "he knew" bc all of this were depicted in the novel he transmigrates into. Even if he doesn't, most of them can be avoided with common sense. Theres no excuses.

and how he treats ML's adoptive mom? disgusting. The world isnt black and white, and I think she fell into the grey area. Yes, she was a shitty person for switching the babies at birth, I dont want him to forgive her either, but isnt there something else you should be focusing on??? THE ML? HELLO??? Whether or not you think the mom did an unforgivable crime, the victim is still suffering and need both of your help. SHE is also a victim OF DOMESTIC ab*se. help them. you have the means to.

lastly, POLICE. HELLO? IS THERE NO POLICE IN THIS UNIVERSE?? IS THE POLICE THAT BAD/NOT TO BE TRUSTED THAT MC'S FIRST TOUGHT WAS NOT TO TRY AND GET THE POLICE INVOLVED FOR THE ab*se THATS BEEN HAPPENING FOR A LONG TIME, BUT TO TRY AND GET THE MOM TO DIVORCE THE DAD??? THAT SHOULD COME AFTER. GET THAT as*hole TO JAIL. GO GET CPS. DO SOMETHING???

(in the end, the MC sponsored his (ML) whole family with his allowance and part time job, which in turn only made the family financially depended on the MC and did not solve anything, bc the dad eventually found the cash, and took it)

of course you shouldnt just willy nilly-ly call the police "hello 911 my friend is ab*sed". Consent is also needed for this bc sometimes the victim does not want your help, but theres where trust and patience comes in. you have to do your best to gain their trust and convince them that what theyre experiencing is NOT okay and that you CAN help. its not an embarassing thing to get help. consult an adult (bc clearly you have the mind of a child as well), keep an open mind, and treat him (ML) as a friend and not a character. I say this bc it feels like he (MC) is not taking this seriously bc he knows the ML will get picked up by his real (rich) family later in the future. This is also why he took the aforementioned unconsensual picture of him, to UNCONSENSUALLY distribute it to the family.

the writer did a shitty job at everything.

i hate it.

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whew.. I got too emotional there.

Please, PLEASE, don't justify what the MC did or how he handled it.

In the end I dropped it because I can't wholeheartedly ship them anymore. You can disagree, but my point still stands.

2/5

(all the points goes to the translator for their hard work) <<less
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Devrai
Devrai rated it
August 18, 2022
Status: c64
Between 4 and 5 stars. Surprisingly good story and top translation.

While the Description is rather light hearted, the actual story has lots of tragic in the beginning. So keep some tissues nearby.

It's not mentioned why MC is transmigrated but he ends up as a neighbor to ML and he is part of the crowd bullying the kid. When MC finally "woke up" it was really hard to get close to ML. I really like the way how the writer let MC work hard here. I was surprised about about some... more>> parts that were rather realistic and spot on when describing feelings and inner turmoil.

Of course the story became lighter and I often had a smile on my lips. MC and ML are pretty cute together. There are a lot of sweet moments but you need to be aware that there doesn't happen anything. They start their relationship basically in the last 3 chapters.

The reason why I can not give this full Stars is because some of the drama was really not my cup of tea. ML basically gets a cheat over night and he also became a lot more mature while MC behaved a lot like his body age... so not so sure about that. I thought that strange sometimes.

All in all, this is a really entertaining story that I binged and would recommend it. <<less
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earlgreyt
earlgreyt rated it
August 9, 2022
Status: Completed
Story had a lot of potential; many of author's viewpoints were super interesting and mature and on-point as well.

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There was a lot of enlightened language regarding ab*se, children with disabilities, and not becoming a yandere.

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However, author's viewpoints on nature vs. Nurture was very unenlightened. It's a common trope of CN fiction that genetics somehow always trump environment (which generally is not the case). Also, most "bastard" children in CN fiction are portrayed extremely negatively; half of the arguments used in the story was about how the OG protagonist owed the ML something because he "benefited" from the switch.

Furthermore, the author heavily reinforces that the OG protagonist despite being raised in a "good" environment turned out to be a bad seed because of his genetics. If you look at documentaries of switched children or any data based on children being able to get into good schools / top colleges, genetics have nothing to do with it; money does.

Anyway, despite the flaws, overall it's a cute story because the ML surprisingly did not become super yandere and the MC did a good job helping him and teaching him morals/ethics.

Translation was very nice, smooth and flowed well. <<less
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erialolita
erialolita rated it
June 15, 2022
Status: --
3.5, wasn't bad. I didn't realize the first half would be so hard on the heart. Really made me depressed. The second half was smooth sailing but not fluffy.

The MC in the first half was great but he slowly started to annoy me. MC was too lacking in the later parts.

ML was fine, but too dependant on the MC but at least took MC's feelings into consideration.

Just was a bit disappointed with the 2nd half and not much to their relationship.
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firefelix
firefelix rated it
March 30, 2022
Status: c15
this is the most un logic and unrealistic MC I ever read. He is said to be an adult but his way of thinking kinda like child, try to help the ML without much reason just because he read the book. Its ok if the reason so he can back to real world etc, but he is just pitying?. Try to help MC but kinda make trouble for himself. Is he saint? Also his way solving thing kinda troublesome. Its like to make it too much for drama.

well I wont... more>> recomend this if u wanna logical story or something make sense <<less
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damnmei
damnmei rated it
July 29, 2023
Status: Completed
Okay so I will be honest, this story is quite simple in nature and the characters are quite childish, as they are in middle school for about half the story. However!! It was a very heart wrenching and heart warming story at the same time.

I really liked both MC and ML, honestly ML was so strong to have gone through all that sh*t and be able to rise above it all. MC was also so doting and kind, truly the best complement to the cold and traumatized ML.

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I cried when ML found out that MC had been the one caring for him behind the scenes the whole time. Honestly f*ck his mom for not caring for ML as she should have. Definitely a face slapping moment when she realized that the person that had always been on her side was ML, the one she had cast aside.

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Honest rating would be more of a 4 but I feel like this novel deserves a read! It's just so sweet, and the characters really touched me, especially ML. <<less
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Mehmeh713
Mehmeh713 rated it
June 8, 2023
Status: c39
Started out great with a very cute misunderstood lonely ML that author turned into an OP robot after ML had surgery.

like ML was written as this vulnerable 15 year old who has been ab*sed by his family, and isolated and misunderstood at school. In order to combat the bad impression everyone has of him and to protect his self esteem (because he actually cares about what they think), he puts up a tough facade by imitating the main character from a cartoon that he loves. He’s also quite child like... more>> in how he behaves around MC (like wanting to compare their heights or changing his hair style because MC has the same hair style as himself).

but all of this changed the moment he had surgery. like... the cute vulnerable chunibyo ML literally vanished into thin air and got replaced by emotionless robot genius ML who makes millions and doesn’t care about what anyone thinks (except for MC).

I’m actually ok with OP unfeeling MLs that only care about their partners but it was just really disappointing to see given how his change was executed and how the change basically turned him into a totally different character. The author could’ve just given him a cold and rational personality from the beginning or at least changed his personality gradually instead of wiping out his entire original persona so quickly and illogically. <<less
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bebravenow
bebravenow rated it
May 27, 2023
Status: c64
I... had a hard time with this novel. I've finished it months ago and initially shrugged it off but it stuck with me in the worst way.

So ML is raised in a very abusive household; his father is severely physically abusive and his mother is emotionally abusive and extremely manipulative. (Also there's some outside influences that are awful and hurtful.) As a result ML (imho understandably) has some issues! He has a lot of anger problems and has trouble regulating his emotions. The world has let him down and he's... more>> suffering. The way the author fixes this is... by completely destroying his previous personality. It's not him learning or growing, it's not him recognizing he has a place in the world, it's not even the world around him accommodating him and caring. It's just hard reset his personality. It's not even a story about how someone with disabilities succeeding! It's just 'oh hey all those """"personality quirks"""" from years of ab*se and neglect? They're gone now! Isn't that nice!'

Then, later on, MLs birth family comes into play.
Spoiler

Then there's this whole thing where ML's birth mom HAS to choose between the son she raised and loved or the son she lost. Like??? Hey what the f*ck those are both your children why are we treating them like which fruit at the grocery store has fewer spots???

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This story gets some saving grace with the MC being very sweet and kind and loving and amazing but he cannot save the terrible world this story takes place in. <<less
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klarinha123
klarinha123 rated it
May 14, 2023
Status: Completed
If you're expecting a lot of romance, this isn't for you!

The plot is cool, but nothing amazing. About the romance... in a spoiler free way, this novel is very shounen ai.

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Spoiler

For you to have an idea, the MC only thought that he could love ML romantically in chapter 58 and they only got together in 63

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As I wanted romance, this novel was not for me, but it was good for a pastime. Of course, I liked how the MC was so dedicated and determined to take care of ML, to always be there for him, and then how the two clearly liked each other, but they didn't see it.

The chapters are small at first and then they get bigger.

Novel Rating: 7/10. Translation Rating: 10/10. Thanks for the work to everyone involved. <<less
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Winterrz
Winterrz rated it
April 25, 2023
Status: Completed
I'm supposed to be doing some coursework yet I spent a whole day binge reading this!!

Now this is a near perfect novel. Everything from the plot to the characters was really well thought out. I love how the author didn't just make the relationship between the ML and MC just automatically click; MC wanted it; so he did work for it! It seems like such a simple thing but many authors take it for granted!

And the character growth in this one was amazing; atleast for the ML. This is completely... more>> new in such novels; usually the ML has one sort of personality and it stays that way the whole novel.

Though I will say, whereas I loved how ML was decisive and handled the situation with his supposed "brother", the author overdid a little with the character change given to villain (the fake brother). I mean, this guy had been the protagonist in the original novel (the one transmigrated into), there was no way he'd be this dumb. Well anyways... I can't complain much.

My other issue was with the romance part. Whereas the whole plot seemed thought out; the romantic part was really lacking. Now I'm not saying the author should've made 2 teenagers go at it for my entertainment; however it was the author's decision to make them so young. It didn't seem that necessary to me, they could've been legal age and it wouldn't have changed a thing about the plot. Their getting together romantically seemed like such a last minute thought. Like the author was ending the novel and remembered; "Oh crap!! This was supposed to be a bl novel🤭. Let's throw in two 'I like you' sentences so as not to disappoint the readers so much!"

So yeah, romance part was really lacking. Revenge part Really satisfying. Great book though. <<less
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