The problems of the novel are various but as far as I have read what I have found are the following:

1. 1. Emotional development: the novel had a certain rhythm at the beginning, where both are getting to know each other, the MC begins to become aware of the ML and out of nowhere there was a declaration with an ultimatum, an acceptance of trying very little credible because out of nowhere trying becomes their first night together, it's very abrupt and it doesn't really feel like the MC was in love before that night, there may be appreciation on his part and out of nowhere boom, caught (even though he's technically as strong as ML his resistance was very little symbolic and to my understanding it seemed that he did not make enough effort to avoid it so it is interpreted that he also wanted him but without an apparent sign) and in love.
   2. Forced but not forced: I have mixed feelings at this point, the novel seems that Wang Cheng takes advantage of Chu Yifeng, but from the beginning of the relationship it is Chu Yifeng who takes advantage of the MC, the story has many scenes where they imply that They have s*x, but most of the time it lacks a romantic atmosphere, even the first time it was not romantic at all, he put it in and took it out and that's it, if it weren't for the lack of writings that mention true resistance of the MC, it would seem more like a scene Violation for the abruptness is that they will go to bed without showing a romantic development, but somehow it can be justified (or so I try to do) by their principles taught by the monk with an attitude of going with the flow.
   3. Intelligence couple: the novel implies that MC is cunning, and it is with words to offend and like that, but not in business, although the novel disguises it in a way that does not seem that it depends for everything on ML, the truth is that any business that Wang Cheng started was always consulted with the ML, he asked for contacts, he asked for favors to achieve business and / or he borrowed money, no business carried out by MC lacks at least one point of the aforementioned, but it is presented in such a way that it gives the feeling that it improves or does it the same, but in the end always with help.
   4. Villains: the most powerful of the villains is how they justify the relationship with the MC to face them, outside of that the villains do not have much to offer other than problems for the MC's family, either for himself or his direct family, but that they don't really give a sense of crisis, just annoyance with such a one-sided battle where they think they can fight but they tear them apart easily, especially when ML advises MC not only to defeat them, but to crush them completely.
   5. Details in the story: The novel has many details that nourish its narration and that give a feeling of expanding the novel, but it leaves some inconsistencies in the story as it progresses, they are small like Mama Wang's cooking skills, first normal, then as good as her son to have the teaching of his mother and her recipes, for the retailers this will echo us every time her cooking scenes come out. The truth is that no matter how good details it may have, there is no emotional development with the characters.
   6. Pregnancy: the m-preg feels very forced, it is part of a new medical technique little known to the general public but if you have money you can find it, the problem is that it turns out to be a part of the plot that is very forced since it appears in the plot with the scientist who does it saying that he is the perfect man for it that he always hoped, the question is that everything is directed to that Wang Cheng will be the bearer, without a conversation where the ML is also contemplated, no, it still does not happen, but many signs are already shown, which subtracts many points because the abrupt romance that entered the novel that sometimes if you believe it and other times you feel that it does not matter so much, I feel that the pregnancy will only diminish the idea of their mutual love already that the whole story has been told to show that MC and ML love each other, but have children to obtain the approval of their families, that artificial insemination or any other type of technique is not enough, but that they must necessarily imp**gnate a man to that has it as naturally as possible to a child of two men, contrary to other stories where they have children or not they fight to be together no matter what their families say until they accept them, or that they resort to an artificial womb to have babies of both as in "Rebirth of the Wolfish Silkpants Bottom", no, they have to imp**gnate a character who is very masculine except that he became the bottom very easily, when they could be a perfect couple that exchanges places, as if in a relationship one should always give in to being the female part as does MC's friend who showed him the method of pregnancy, this story has so many good ideas poorly developed but I still hope it is good......
      
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