In Different World with Naruto System

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At Divine Wind Continent, there is cultivation system—douqi, illusion and magic.

Ren Tian You was a fan of Naruto, single carelessness caused him to arrive in different world.

Unexpectedly only to discover within his body possessed Naruto system.

What? You will use douqi! I, your father’s taijutsu is also not weak! Look at my shadow dance!

What? You will use illusions! I, your father however have every illusions’ ancestor, Sharingan! Look at my Tsukuyomi!

What? You are a magician! I, your father am a ninja! Look at my fire style——– grand fireball!

In Different World with Naruto System average rating 3.4/5 - 557 user ratings
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Bringing the Hokage System to Another World
Dai zhe huo ying xi tong dao yi jie
带着火影系统到异界
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SunsetChaos
New SunsetChaos rated it
April 17, 2017
Status: c255
Better than what I expected out of this, didn't cringe as much as I thought. Obviously catered to those who already watched/read Naruto otherwise it'll be harder to understand/visualize the moves and references.

I'm mainly here for the fights and the inevitable steam rolling everything with OP ninja moves and tailed beasts and stuff. Most of my ratings comes from this and expectations for future fights. I'm sure most readers are here for those too.

Ignoring the fact that we have the MC with ninja and tailed beasts stuff, it feels really... more>> fucking weird having one of those Chinese cultivation world with Chinese culture and cultivator stuff, and then out of nowhere you get western(?) dragons and elves and dwarves. But elves with Chinese names though. Even the supposedly western flying lizard dragons seems so Chinese because of cultivation and clans.

In the end, feels really Chinese like Chinese chuunibyou. Yea it's a Chinese novel but still... mixing Chinese and other cultures like this...

Another thing that irks me, he's got transformation jutsu but never used it even once. Wouldn't that be extremely helpful? Also, how the f**k did his elder sister even learn to use chakra... I thought that's something unique to his cheat system. <<less
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odinlowejr88
New odinlowejr88 rated it
April 16, 2017
Status: --
There are a ton of small technical problems that make reading this novel difficult.

Most have already been mentioned by other reviewers like the overuse of the word "Well" to begin sentences, overuse of the MCs full name, the simplicity of the writing (it's like it was written by a child/teen rather than an adult), the abundant cliches (such as academy cliche, tournament cliche, cliched harem, MC is a nerdy otaku but turns out is actually really handsome and cool, etc.), the level of non-ironic/non-parody chuunibyou (god it's freaking cringworthy),... more>> the fact that shoehorning the naruto chakra system (with a shit ton of upgrades, AI assistant, and magical shop -_-) into a random 'chinese otaku everyman' in a world transfer chinese novel is already somewhat sod-breaking and cringeworthy, etc.

None of these were actually deal breakers for me but when you add them together it goes from the level of 'eh, that's annoying but I can just ignore it' it would be with just one or two of those issues to the level of 'oh, that's annoying but I can just igno.... oh another annoyance well I can just igno.... oh another one again.... *repeat a few times*.... yeah, think I'm done here'

The biggest thing that actually annoyed me, which I'm probably blowing way out of proportion, is how inaccurate the author was with what the naruto 'chakra power' is and how it works. The best example is how when the MC first gets access to his 'naruto system' and starts 'cultivating chakra' (see excerpt below)

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First was gathering the chakra, after all chakra is basic foundation of all ninjutsu, genjutsu and taijutsu and without chakra they cannot be used.

He opened the Ninjutsu System and looked for the chakra gathering method. Chakra is energy gathered from the cells of human being. He carefully look at the method of gathering chakra inside the Ninjutsu System. After that he sat on the ground and began to cultivate for the first time in this alien world……….

Chakra is a kind of energy produced from a perfect fusion of natural energy essence and bodily energy and is used as the starting point for ninjutsu, genjutsu and taijutsu.

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There's no such thing as a 'chakra gathering method' and chakra is sure as hell not the fusion of natural energy and bodily energy. It's the fusion of two types of bodily energies 'yin' (spiritual) and 'yang' (physical) the base level and improvement rate of which are set genetically and are then raised by improving the mind and body (most commonly through training although some other ways exist such as being supplemented by biju charka, constantly being drained by something such as samehada, etc)

The fusion of natural energy and bodily energy is known as senjutsu and is dangerous as hell considering the slightest mistake in balancing the energies immediately turns you into a statue. Further, senjutsu is a temporary boost to and replacement of bodily chakra which increases the potency of the users chakra abilities and extends the amount of chakra the user has access to while it's being drawn in. It's an active ability with completely temporary effects, not some permenent upgrade system.

It would have been fine if the differences were pointed out in the novel such as his helper ai system thing explaining that the naruto system the MC has had to be changed in certain ways to work in a cultivation world but instead these differences are described as if that's the way chakra actually works in the naruto universe. It's a pendantic and nitpicky thing but it just bugs the hell out of me. <<less
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UncleOddball
UncleOddball rated it
June 19, 2016
Status: --
@Dhaliwal, potential my ass.

Let me clarify. I love Naruto. I've read the manga, watched some anime, played Naruto games, played Naruto PBF games, researched it's whole depicted world via wikias and databooks for the sake of my own PBF game.

And when I see "anime was a masterpiece" and "he liked it for no reason at all", I just want to (ノ ゜Д゜)ノ ︵ ┻━┻

... more>> That aside, it's very poor story. I can see that already.
"Oi, Uncle, there's like two chapter atm, bitch!"
It does not matter. I already know. Why?

- MC is "handsome" otaku, a virgin japanese typical walking trope.
- MC is reborn in another world in a loser body trope. Check.
- Worst of it, he is a "handsome loser", who pick up girls like flowers. Yuck.
- The reason why he was thrown out was so dumb, it made me cringe.
- The "Naruto System". If it was like, he can use Naruto mechanics, and use his otaku knowledge to train himself. I'd buy that. It would be awesome. But no. He have to kill stuff(monsters etc), do quests, and he gets reward points for this and can unlock any technique and stuff from Naruto universe, without training or researching it. (ノ ゜Д゜)ノ ︵ ┻━┻
- And the final and most grave sin. It almost gave me cancer, it almost costed me my table, 'cus I was about to flip it by sheer rage and confusion. The dude, on top of that, got mature sharingan. From. The. Very. Beginning.

Believe me folks, if I could give less then one star, I would. <<less
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Little King12
Little King12
June 20, 2016
Status: --
Hello, I am current translator for this novel. I just wanted to clarify some things.

Most of the Mc of chinese novel is handsome without question. There is no objection to this. And also at first they are all virgin, what happens later, we can only see. I think that, the reason for throwing him out is not that dumb. But opinion differs.
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also please read chapter 2 carefully, there it is already mention that he could learn ninjutsus system only by practicing hard not directly exchanging.

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As for sharingan, nowhere in the chapter it is mention that he had awakened full mature sharingan. Read chapter 3 and you will know.

Thanks for all your review. <<less
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A S A D U
A S A D U rated it
June 22, 2016
Status: --
I hate naruto. I hate its shounen bullshit, its blatant plot armor, its pathetic attempts at emotion and most of all i hate everything to do with sasuke.

That said, I love this shit. the author tho, that dude has to be on 900 levels of irony to write this lol. the plot is really dumb, but Im not here for the plot. Im here for the overly inflated xianxia cliches, dumb references, ridiculously convenient abilities, and everything else this masterpiece of ironic crapheaps looks to be.

10/10 ign would read again
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thunderhill
thunderhill rated it
June 29, 2016
Status: c7
Despite it's ah...use of copy*right* stuff and its acclamation for being a hardcore naruto fan; if you ignore all that, it has a decent story.

I mean, who hasn't, ever, thought of having the epic powers of a ninja from the Naruto Series??? Most people these days like those OP MCs with OP powers, then how does this not align with that??

It definitely scratches that chunnibyou itch inside of you (if you enjoy that sort of japanese culture) ;)
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jagged
jagged rated it
June 22, 2016
Status: v1c4
Don't listen to any of these reviews they're just being idiots when the story hasn't even advanced enough to show all of it's potential, and to that guy who said he didn't have the one totem you're tottally wrong the latest chapter (4) shows he does, so before you run your mouth learn how to read.
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KIWI
KIWI rated it
July 5, 2016
Status: c2
Okay, people, listen up. I barely managed to make it to chapter two. There are tons of things that I could complain about, but this time I'm gonna keep it simple.

First things first, before I even got to the plot, the subpar quality of the translation made me stop and stare at the ceiling. I loathe bad grammar. However, no biggie, I've seen worse. So I carry on reading.

Then we get to the plot. I came here to read a story that would incorporate one of my favourite anime... more>> and manga series into its novel with some humour on the side. But, WTF dude? What the hell is this supposed to be? I cannot put my dislike into words. There are so many people rating it five stars, and I have NO FUCKING CLUE WHY. It's... It's just so..... Stale. I cannot connect to the character, what's his name. Ren something. (I already forgot) He acts like he's in control of everything, even though the author made a point in telling us how very out of control he is. The same old cliche jokes were used in such a way that they weren't funny, and I'm seriously starting to get a headache whenever I try to predict what he's going to do next. Honestly, just don't read it. Such a waste of time. @UncleOddball, I'm sorry I didn't take your advice. <<less
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Gordon
Gordon rated it
June 24, 2016
Status: c381
Spoiler

I finish reading the raws and it's a pretty decent XianXia novel with naruto elements. Sure at first the MC seem to be really OP but the fight isn't one sided since the people in this world can live to millions of years. I personally liked the fight scene in this one.The Naruto elements is done well enough the Ninjustus and Taijustus that he use are all in the manga and he does actually need to train to use these skills, though he learns them really quickly but so does everyone else. Other than that the other XianXia elements are there and for the most part is what people tend to complain about in the reviews.

It's a short WN in Chinese standard so give it a try. It's decent enough.

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ZeroIn
ZeroIn rated it
July 1, 2016
Status: c10
******Latest Chapter:10******** JULY,01 2016*****

!Don't believe Other negative reviews. (read it yourself)

Don't think to much about the Naruto skill set because it fits perfectly with story so far.

... more>> Pro:
-Good Story with a twist to power and skills
-MC has a goal.
-First thoughts where when i saw the title that it was going to be shit. (BUT ITS NOT!)
-Fun and enjoyable to read . (so far)

Con:
- Slow updates. (but still thank you)
- Chapter seem small or i just go through them to fast.

This is a great novel. (so far) <<less
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Raphael
Raphael rated it
July 7, 2016
Status: c10
Not something I like, maybe some do but I feel it is just fan fulfillment rather than a well thought out story. Actually just feels like it's pandering to Naruto fans who want an even more OP character than the blonde MC from the manga and by itself is nothing.
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Sheep
Sheep rated it
June 16, 2016
Status: --
Cringe is the word i would say.

Unless you are a damn masochist (not that i hate masochist, but you guys like to be abused right?!)

and would like to awaken your dark past read this.

... more>> TL;DR --> Cringy story with no backbone of its own, if you are looking for novel to fill your time don't bother on this one

Originality: 0/10, plagiarism is one thing but literally mentioning naruto..blech, what can you expect from these type of story..the more he goes the less he have since the author is pulling content /system from another author

Story/plot: Cringe fest, look i sacrificed myself to read this just to tell you not to read it. Unless you need more cringe and teenager fantasy fap don't even bother.

world building: You think this would exist under the condition author can't even wrote his own pieces but borrowing Naruto system instead ? Heh.

Character : Yeah no, aside from stereotypical + cringe..i don't even.. <<less
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heishiken
heishiken rated it
July 7, 2016
Status: c18
While this story is not a 5 Star Story, it is not as some people rate it a one Star Story. It is however a fun novel to read and you can only recommend it to others, while there are some inconsistencies in the Story, you do not have a mc who goes from weak to op in a day, as some reviewers wrote. It takes some time and quiete honestly this story is just different, so read it with an open mind.
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estelionsharluluasheelvinchancecelenalia
If I'm going to read a wanky YY novel where the protagonist gets some Heavenly Cultivation Method, then that method may as well be Naruto's jutsu system!

Or at least that's what I thought... I had thought that since I was going in prepared for wanky (but mildly entertaining) bullshit I would be fine for whatever terrible writing lay ahead.
But the level of bad writing was completely beyond expectations. The author just plain has no idea how to write. He basically just throws in these events and antics and personality... more>> traits that he thinks makes the story cool and funny, but it just doesn't work out.

Normally, one of these typical junk food novels would have a flat protagonist who is ruthless against enemies, loyal towards friends, a big lecher, and a determinator. Unfortunately, the author hamfists these four traits in so badly that even simple 2-dimensional traits like that are unbelievable on him.
The interactions with that group of youngsters where Ren Tian You gets into some antic and everybody laughs ha ha ha is actually so cringeworthy that I had an easier time reading Watamote.

On my junk-food novel rating system of 0 to 5, I would give Stephanie Meyer's Twilight a 3.
This gets a 1, and that's only because I can't go lower.

Compared to this, MGA feels like a literary masterpiece filled with characters so life-like they feel like real life friends. You would do better just reading MGA or PMG.

tldr; You know how in anime you get those horribly clichéd scenes where the protagonist says something "shocking" or "revolutionary" (even though it isn't) and then the other guy goes from shock to laughter and joins the protagonist because of how "interesting" they are? Imagine that, but for the entire duration of this novel. <<less
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CaptainToast
CaptainToast rated it
August 15, 2016
Status: c50
Previous Review
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I was kinda surprised when I started reading this novel. I started with a rather bad view on it from some reviews, and with how he gets the naruto system, but after reading a bit I started to like it.

The way he gets the random power isn't really all that different from the usually godly luck and deus ex machine a normal xianxia character. After I got past that, I enjoyed the story. The fights are rather interesting and it's cool to see him use the variety of Naruto powers against common xianxia abilities.

There are a few things I find rather annoying about it. The last few chapters 40-50 have been nothing but a large info dump. While the info is needed for world building, the author could of done a LOT better of a job.

The other thing that bugs me is that it doesn't seem like the author is actually keeping track of how many points he has to upgrade. Just recently he killed several thousand magical wolves (assumed to be tier 2-4) which should be worth several hundred thousand points. In addition to that, he's fought 2 major battles (didn't kill his opponent though) as well as killing several bodyguards of a high ranking noble. He didn't get points for any of them for some reason.

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Gonna have to lower my score again. The story took its somewhat original idea and then shat on it with a bunch of common boring tropes.
Spoiler

He randomly meets a group of girls. Then he joins their academy and immediately goes into a f**king tournament arc.

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F**k this story for getting me interested and then f**king it up right after.

Also. This story continually says the MCs full name every damn sentence. Instead of "John says hello," it's "John Doe says hello." Every time it should mention the MC by his first name, it mentions him by his full name.

It makes it so cringeworthy to read. It's terrible. <<less
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Zeikfried
Zeikfried rated it
July 4, 2016
Status: c14
Do you know what would have made this better? If you just cut out the middle man and just directly made this a Naruto fanfiction by having a "Naruto" character be reincarnated.

What is the appeal of having a character "reincarnating" to another in the first place?

If he's a modern Chinese person then it's his understanding of basic modern technology and science, from astrology to chemistry to geology to literature to music and so on. This is one element a majority of authors neglect for some reason especially with... more>> this story.

If he's a talented person, either an assassin, a swordsman, a martial artists, or whatever, then the sudden reversal of fortunes of the original loser-like host or even just the general awe of the people around the protagonist is what sparks that flame of interest. However, the characters are so distant and undeveloped in this story, their reactions are negligible.

If he's a person from the future then his foresight creates the twists and turns for the plot.

There's none of that in this story. Why bother with a joe-schmo reincarnation at all? Just bring over a "Naruto" character.

Many people have noted how little the protagonist actually has to do with "Naruto." He's not even a real fan of the show. For that reason, he has no real connection to the myriad of abilities the story is throwing around. He's not Naruto, whose Rasengan was created by his father, he's not Kakashi, whose Chidori was completed with the Sharingan of his best friend. Imagine if you were reading "The Eagle Shooting Heroes" and your random protagonist just magically learned 18 Dragon Subduing Palms, Dog Beating Staff Technique, the Divine Flicking Skill, the Nine Yin Manual Techniques and everything else. Each technique has a long back story associated with it, which makes it special. This story trivializes all the fantastic abilities it's banking its backbone on. <<less
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Raine
Raine rated it
June 22, 2016
Status: c381
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Don't know whats all the hate, I mean this story is what naruto should have been, there is no filler and MC gets thing done, if you are a naruto fan I highly suggest reading it, the only problem was the sudden end. Author probably said lets just end it, so the ending is kind of meh but it gets thing done, MC gets his wish, PS i wished it was at least another 100-200 chapters longer :(

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DemonKIngArata
DemonKIngArata rated it
February 19, 2017
Status: c252
I don't know why this light novel getting so much hate it's really good in my opinion I mean who doesn't want a MC with a sharingan? Though, I do agree that he seems to be getting everything without training for it (except for the nature forming thing) but he also has to get use to using it otherwise it could may as well kill him. We also have to remember this novel is not complete unless you read the raw. from what i read i enjoyed it very much.
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GonZ555
GonZ555 rated it
December 10, 2016
Status: c150
The start of the story was pretty good, but the MC/author keeps doing the same thing in every fight which gets REALLY tiresome..

It has some funny moments, but more than not it feels like the author is just throwing the MC some powers, random girl and some more forced plots..
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Tembulon
Tembulon rated it
July 3, 2016
Status: c11
It's basically a weaboo/chuunibyou mash up. A college student living out his fantasies. Simple as that. I was expecting some HN1F comedy but it doesn't look like that kind of story or main character. I'm only giving it such high score coz I like the idea. It's a ripoff, not a great one but a fun one nonetheless. I recommend reading it when you're bored and have nothing to do. This is definitely not something you should follow seriously
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Twilight Reverie
Twilight Reverie rated it
September 27, 2016
Status: --
I can overlook the plot being the creation of a Naruto fanboy, so long as said plot is original and plays a prominent role on the story. This should be a given, but unfortunately that is not the case.

Rather than focusing on how the abilities the protagonist gains interact and are perceived in the world he finds himself in, the author instead spends far too much time describing the history of the various techniques which, even in this story, take place in a fictional world. This badly distorts the story's... more>> pacing and is entirely unneeded. Someone reading this story because they like Naruto will already know much of this information, and those readers who simply want to enjoy the story don't care.

The protagonist's goals also create a barrier that prevents the story from developing. Wanting vengeance against those who wrong him is fairly standard and easy to work with. Focusing on returning home, however, prevents the protagonist from making real, meaningful connections with other characters. Even when he recognizes someone as a friend, it always seems like a brittle, temporary friendship, as the protagonist intends to leave his current world entirely.

In summation, this is a story that fails to properly utilize an already-established cultivation system drawn directly from another work. It is written in a manner closer to an encyclopedia or wiki than an original tale. The character development is shallow and hindered by the protagonist's established goals. <<less
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ZhaWarudo
ZhaWarudo rated it
August 14, 2016
Status: c54
I was almost fooled by UncleOddball and started reading only out of curiosity with belief I will make a review bashing this novel. However that guy is full of misconceptions and didn't even read past 2 chaps. MC does not start with mangekyo but one tear sharingan.
" MC is "handsome" otaku, a virgin Japanese typical walking trope.
- MC is reborn in another world in a loser body trope. Check.
- Worst of it, he is a "handsome loser", who pick up girls like flowers. Yuck."

None of this is... more>> true and he needs to practice ninjutsu, only mangekyos are unlocked by points.

Still there are some inconsistencies as with all novels who use other works in them but that's minor stuff...

What bugs me most is the use of "Well" for no reason to start sentences and the lack of editor. What I like is awesome combat and sometimes the jokes are funny even though cliche. Side characters are meh but at least they have a story. All in all this novel surprised me and I recommend it to all Naruto/xianxia fans who don't mind a bit of bad grammar and aren't stuck up on facts from Naruto which aren't quite the same here.

Edit: I can't stand the lack of editor, sentences are like written by a 10yo (story might be written by a 13yo so not much difference there), reducing this from 3 to 2 stars and droping it <<less
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