God Of Soul System


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All Things of this World, Turn to Ashes, Flowing Blade-like Flame!

Crossing over to the world of pirates (the One Piece world), eleven years after Gol D. Roger’s death, Roja becomes marine hero Garp’s nephew and obtains the Sword Soul system, which lets him gain strength without limits and learn various skills.

Flowing Blade-like Flame (Ryūjin Jakka), Mirror Flower, Water Moon (Kyoka Suigetsu), Moon Fang Heaven-Piercer (Getsuga Tensho), Thousand Cherry Blossoms (Senbonzakura)……

Roja looked at Akainu in front of him and told him seriously
“If this sword descends, you may be roasted to death.”

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God Level Sword Soul System
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New Mahesvara_
November 23, 2023
Status: c221
First and foremost. This translation is ruined my immersion on several levels. Using google translation on raw sites is still better than this insufferable translation.

So many missing paragraphs, and the sentences makes the story feel pretentious like for example in the raw it says "Roja is a little surprise for a moment" it was calm and subtle but in the translation it says "Roja's eyes popped out of their sockets" which made it look cartoonish, overreacting and removes the seriousness of the MC.

There's also a high amount of inaccuracy like... more>> for example: From the raw novel the MC is talking about how to learn a sword skill by 'swinging the sword several times in a second' similar to kicking the ground 10x to learn Soru Rokushiki. But in the TL the MC is talking about using 'weights for training', both came from the same novel but the content is completely out of context. The TL from translatin_Otaku is basically butchered version of the real novel.

Also, the translator also keeps making unnecessary comments in the middle of the story. I hate these kind of attention seeker translators the most. This actually caused missing paragraphs, the translator probably got excited adding his own 2cents and because of that he most likely accidentally erased the important paragraph that should be there.

PS: I found Novelhi had complete content and overall better grammar than translatin_Otaku but some names of the characters are spelled wrongly.


This is a very low quality fanfic. The only reason I'm even reading this sh*t is mainly because of the source material is interesting enough and MC's powers bit by bit climbing the ranks of the world. The MC definitely has plot armor but it's not very obvious and he undergo the process of getting stronger.


  1. This novel had a good "Weak to Strong" element in it. Just following MC getting stronger is fun in itself. This is the only good thing in the novel.
But there's so much bad than good in this novel.


  1. Translation is tr*sh and incomplete. It's not about the grammar, it's about the very content of the story. So many necessary paragraphs are cut off from the whole novel and it's also obvious that the Translator doesn't understand what he was translating at all.
  2. MC's personality is all over the place, at first MC mostly acted like a normal person- then he get stronger a bit he became arrogant as if world is beneath him as he starts calling people "Ants"- then sometimes he will turn cold as if he doesn't have any emotion- sometimes he acts like a young master telling people " how dare you question me"- then sometimes he is humble as if he couldn't even harm an ant- sometimes he acts like a complete snobby guy condescendingly look at others as if they don't matter- sometimes he does random sh*t out of nowhere! (Example: MC meets Nico Robin, Robin tries to run away from him because MC is a marine, but MC playfully blocks her prevents her from leaving and then he killed a few criminals trying to act cool in front of Robin then he suddenly just ask her "Why are you still here?" MC basically blocks robin for no reason now he ask why the f*ck is she there?!! Fvck. And then after that Robin never appears again only giving shock reaction about MC whenever she read newspaper about him! That's it's) MC's personality is a complete turn off for me, I would rather have a robotic emotionless MC rather than this erratic MC that doesn't make sense, this is just plain abomination. Author also keeps making the MC "Acting cool" almost everytime. For example: MC will appears in front of female characters trying do a cool pose by crossing his arms while leaning to a wall to look cool. MC's personality is Cringefest.
  3. Everyone underestimates the MC and it's very overused to the point of ret*rdation in this story. MC basically grows from Nobody to Stronger than Admiral level and yet people keeps trying to downplay the MC's achievements. Also, whenever MC fight someone all mob characters will whisper among themselves and mock the MC then they'll praise the MC's opponent listing all the achievements of the opponent, saying the MC is no match to that guy or whatever. So when the MC manage to beat the Opponent the people will deny it and say "How can he beat him?!" "This is impossible!" Basically like those mob characters from cultivation novel. This happens every single time in all his fights. Even akainu was like "He manage to become as strong as vice-admiral in just less than a year but eh, he will never catch up to me." MC's growth from a Weakling to a Vice-Admiral level in less than a year was enough to surprise everyone but still keeps downplaying the MC as if he's nothing special. Lol.
  4. No notable side characters that are interesting. Everyone is bland and has no depth, they all exist to give shock reactions whenever the MC shows his power.
  5. Cringe and chunni.
The one that annoyed me the most is the MC's personality and too much underestimation of MC. I read this far because I was expecting it to be gone later in the story when MC finally becomes very strong but it never stops. MC being mocked by weak mobs because they think their boss is better keeps happening.

Plot: 2/5

Concept: 2/5

Characters: 1/5

Enjoyment: 2/5

Translation: 1/5

Overall: I'll give it 2 stars.

PS: If you're gonna read this better read multiple story at once and read this only on the sidelines, If you focus reading this I don't think you'll just get pissed off and you will want to drop it. <<less
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Rujiro Taicho rated it
August 17, 2017
Status: --
I'll try keep it as brief as possible.

Story- 5stars, I love one piece and bleach. I cant wait to see how the story progresses based on the authors perspective while drawing inspiration from two groundbreaking unbelievable hit stories.

Translation-4 starsu, I think its good. I can easily picture the scenes in my mind and it has a good, slightly fast paced plot. Cant wait for more

Site- 0 stars, At first, the ads were acceptable. The translator needs to earn some money and it didn't affect me at all. I use ads... more>> too. But now, I cant access th site on my pc, before opening the page, it redirects. When I use my phone, it opens... for 3 seconds, then redirects. Thats not too bad, I just go back, but I cant even scroll now. Every time I scroll, it redirects. Recently, I'm seriously considering whether I should keep reading it. To the translator, please consider your readers, even if just a little.

Overall- 3 stars <<less
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OldManGu rated it
January 28, 2018
Status: c709

This is a great story to pass time. My biggest complaint about the one piece arc is that everybody had their same power level 9 years before the start of op. There is no way Doffy would be that strong 8 years ago. Its also dumb that Magellian could 1v1 Kaido. The MC kills the 3 emperors and locks Shanks in prison. Shanks would rather die than be locked in prison. He would cut off his feet like Shiki and escape. Luffy would also go to save him. The MC fakes Ace's death. Luffy knows because of his vivi card. The MC makes Luffy stop calling himself a pirate. Its s*upid because the real Luffy would never agree. He would have said thanks for helping Ace but I'm going to be Pirate King!

Now for the Naruto arc.

Might Duy's 8 gates should not be that strong. He couldn't even beat the 7 ninja swordsman. His 8 gates had to be weaker than Might Guy.

Kimimaro should not be alive when the Kaguya clan rebels against Roja.

They call Kimimaro their secret weapon. He is 7 years old in this novel. This is 1 year after the 3rd ninja war. Minato has just become the 4th Hokage. There is no way that he could be alive. Kimimaro was only 15 when he died. Naruto was 12 when the manga started and 13 when Kimimaro attacked.

The author also thinks Haku is alive right now. He is practicing for the anbu. Haku is the same age as Kimimaro and should not be alive at this time. He at least cant be that old.

The Sage of 6 Paths is not immortal. He died a long ass time ago. That was just his chakra manifestation in the manga. I think the manga said he could see the future and sent his chakra there to help Naruto. There is no way that he could fight Roja.

Obito still attacks the Leaf. Roja destroyed the Leaf because they attacked Hancock. The 3rd Hokage had already made everybody escape before Roja came. Why would Obito try to destroy the Leaf with 9 tails when it was already destroyed a year ago?

The author underestimates how much chakra the tail beasts have. He says that the three sage creatures have way more chakra than them. Thats super dumb. They may have more than the lower tail beasts. But they could not have more than 8 tails. 9 tails should have way more chakra than them. Naruto only had half of 9 tails chakra. Half of 9 tails chakra was still way more than 8 tails. The author said a full powered 9 tails only had ultra kage level chakra. This author is super dumb.

The MC never uses Aizen's Kyoka Suigetsu. He can control everybody's 5 senses if they see his sword. The illusion can never be broken for the rest of their life and he can control them at any time. The Mangekyou Sharingan can not even see through it. Yamamoto could only tell when the sword was stabbed inside him. Why does he never use it? It would be fine if the author said the MC likes fighting and wants to train. But he never said that. He could have used it on Might Guys dad when he was using 8 gates and he would have been helpless. It was also dumb that he said Minato never looked at his sword. There is no way Minato did not see his sword. Minato is super vigilant and notices everything. There is no way he didnt look at the MC pull a sword out of thin air. He would have never suspected it would be a illusion. He even said that he saw the sword when he was dodging it.

Why does the MC not just absorb the tailed beasts? He said that he didnt want them to make him crazy. But his sword should be able to absorb them without any problems. It should be able to get rid of their wills and keep them as pure chakra.

Roja cut big moms soul in half and never cut anybody's soul again. Its s*upid because his sword stands for soul cutter. All of his attacks should be soul attacks. It should go through any defense.

The Uchiha clan was still destroyed by Itachi even though Donzo was dead.

Kisame still left the hidden mist even though he didnt have to kill the woman that he loved.

Naruto used 5 tails when fighting Gaara. The seal was to strong back then and Naruto's will was not weak. He only used 2-3 tails when fighting Sasuke. He wasnt even that mad when fighting Gaara. I dont think he used 5 tails until he fought Orochimaro and we all know how much he hated that guy. Naruto would have never convinced Gaara to change if he went 5 tails mode. Gaara would still be crazy if Naruto couldn't keep his sanity and use talk no jutsu on him. The leaf would also lock down on Naruto for going 5 tails mode. They would all be scared of him. Naruto never lost control in the leaf unless we count the pain fight. But nobody cared at that time. Everything was already destroyed and Pain hurt them more than 9 tails did when he attacked the leaf.

Obito revives the 1st Raikage. The author said the 1st Raikage was the strongest Raikage. He said that he had chakra on the level of a tailed beast. This is s*upid because even Naruto and his mom dont have that much. I think Kisame was the only person with tailed beast level chakra and that was because his sword was eating everybody's chakra. It even ate tail beast chakra. This authors power levels are bs. The manga even said that 3rd Raikage was the strongest one. The author made 1st Raikage so much stronger than the 3rd that its s*upid. The author said his attacks are as strong as a bijuu bomb.

The MC should of had the yin element when he first came to Naruto world. The MC only had fire, water and wind. Thats because of his soul reaper powers. How could he not have yin=death when he is a soul reaper?

Every one of his attacks should be a soul attack! His sword is even called a soul cutter!

Naruto, Killer Bee and Gaara got killed by the Akastuki. Minato didn't care when he heard Naruto died.

Orochimaro was still alive during the 4th ninja war and never got his arms sealed by the 3rd hokage. So he may have killed Sasuke.

The MC let Momoshiki run away. Momoshiki could come back at any time and destroy the Naruto world. The MC went to the Bleach world. The MC's friends wont stand a chance and can only wait to die.

Now for the Bleach arc

Some prisoners try to escape and the MC goes to stop them. We find out Aizen talked them into killing the MC. The author says that one is the first captain of team 7. He went to prison for trying to overthrow the soul king. This is s*upid because he was super weak. It feels forced to make him work with Aizen. The other guy was a former Kenpachi of team 11. The author said that he was always in bankai form and can absorb the reiatsu around him. The author said Aizen's Kyoka Suigetsu doesn't work on him. Thats s*upid because thats the same ability as the Quincy's and we know his sword works on them. It even worked on the Quincy King Yhwach! This author is a idiot!

Orihime was never taken by Aizen. Aizen used Orihime's power for the hogyoku in the manga.

Aizen did not create Wonderweiss in this novel. Aizen created Wonderweiss for a reason in the manga. It was because Yamamoto would have killed him. He wasn't that strong after he just fused with the hogyoku.

It felt rushed after Rukia got saved.

The last chapter was cringeworthy.

The MC is married to Boa Hanc*ck and they have never had s*x. He said that he wanted them both to become immortal first. But they became immortal before he left Naruto world. He also has a mountain of maids. He should also be able to have s*x without getting them pregnant.

I also hate that the MC never went back to one piece world after he picked up Hancock. He didnt care about his uncle Garp or his student Tashigi. He also left Hancocks sisters. Hanc*ck was super close with her sisters and it would have made her sad. Him and Garp were super close. Its weird that he never went back to see him. It would have been no trouble at all.

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chibigamer rated it
August 22, 2017
Status: c35
I like the story, I love how it fuses together elements from one piece and bleach. I do think that the story has a lot of potential, which is why I rated this 4.

The translation is readable, not the best, not the worst. There are some word mistakes and recently quite a lot of letter mistakes, I guess there is no one proof reading it, but still it is understandable and above machine translating at least.

As for the site... God. You cannot read anything without using adblock, because it just... more>> constantly redirects you to sites whenever you scroll or... sometimes even if you don't even do anything. I usually just watch the adfly, sometimes, very rarely undo adblock for a few seconds and then turn it on again, In hopes that the translator won't stop translating.

Anyhow, SITE OWNER, You really need to get a grip on the ads, so that they won't redirect you all the god damn time. <<less
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ExtremeRampage rated it
September 22, 2019
Status: c247
Dropped it after enduring so long.

It starts out pretty interestingly with this dude reincarnating in the One Piece Wolrd but with his cheat ability that allows him to use Bleach powers but the MC gets powerful way to easily.

The very first power he gets is Yamamoto's Ryujin Jakka which was already OP even in the Bleach Universe so the MC basically stomps everyone in the One Piece World and I never felt any tension in the fights.

But the main reason I dropped this is the MC. In the beginning he... more>> was humble and also trained hard but then, of course, he left everyone in the dust thanks to his "Protagonist Status", learned Haki and other Marine Skills in no time.

Then his character becomes more and more like a typical Xianxia cultivator and he basically just becomes an unsympathetic prick who just slaughters anyone who looks funny at him (or doesn't give him face). He doesn't really give a sh*t about One Piece even though he claims that he was a fan in his previous life, he's just apathetic to anything, really boring and annoying. <<less
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Bakaleaf rated it
November 1, 2017
Status: c4
Drop it after chapter 1

I thought a character from one piece goes to another world might be interesting but vice versa I feel reading it is a waste of time.

I mean there is NO creativity although I only read chapter 1 but since we are talking one piece won't it reflect the real one piece then where is the fun in that?

... more>> I read a novel who use Naruto System it was good but bad ending but this novel has no potential what so ever for me.

One piece fan might find this interesting but people who barely know one piece might be thrown out of the loop.

If one piece chinese then it might mix will but this like mixing to different culture japanese and chinese and as I read chines novel often it is not hard not to notice the bias approach of some towards japanese.

well this might be annoying as a review since I only read a few chapters in it but since I am not a One Piece fan although I watch the anime and read the manga to pass time but this novel is not for me. <<less
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Dg2 rated it
February 1, 2020
Status: c50
Yeah I read up to chp 50. Once again I'm proven right that mixing in the Chinese and Japanese writing styles ruins the story. You have the MC being underestimated and all of a sudden he beats up the arrogant marines. Having them becoming surprised by his strength. Also the MC has everything going his way all the time. Making this fic a very boring read. Who wants to read about some godly man who is stronger than admirals in 100 chapters with insane talent? I'd rather read a cultivation... more>> novel as it would have some tension in the story. Plus it is weird how multiple One Piece characters fall in love with this dashingly handsome MC for no reason... even though they disliked him the chapter before. Over all there is no character development for the MC or anyone else, but if you're looking for training montages you'll find this litter with them. Plus there is a lot of face smacking you might find enjoyable. I on the other hand am sick of this way of writing and would rather not waste any more time when I can already predict the plot. <<less
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Xx_Nekuma_xX rated it
October 26, 2017
Status: --
At first, I thought the story is not that interesting but I give it a shot. Apparently, I don't regret it at all. Although the MC is a bit OP with a cheat, the content is bearable.

If only the translation is not so bad then maybe I'll rate 5 star for this. I want to say, I ship him with Robin. XD
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Ignus rated it
September 13, 2017
Status: c53
I can't stand reading bad stories, but One Piece world was enough for me to enjoy this one.

Best way I can describe it is a Chinese Xuanhua meets One Piece.

There are looks of disdain and murmuring crowds. Tournaments that make no real logical sense in "The Navy's" training program. There is the MC being aloof and uncaring, but showing off at each turn of the page.

... more>> MC gets OP to quickly, but if this light novel is shorter around 150-250 chapters only things will be ok.

Still, within all this nonsense, there are a few new devil fruit powers, a nice cast of young known marines, and a few comedic moments with powerhouse like Garp and Z. <<less
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Lazysword rated it
July 28, 2019
Status: c366

The story is lacking in a lot of things and the overabundance of OP MC is so tiring that you can literally sum up the whole plot to, Florida man gets an otherworldly weapon and becomes a god.

Not only that but the whole relationship between MC and Hanc*ck is soo brain-numbing, with how shallow it was, I couldn't help but feel annoyed at how the One Piece Arc ended. It would've been far better if they tried fleshing out the relationship instead of bringing it out of the left field.

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KingLycan rated it
March 10, 2018
Status: Completed
I have to say it's a good novel. I have completed it, and am still thinking or re-reading this novel again.

It starts with MC in one piece world, when he reaches the peak of OP World he decides to go to Shinigami World but is weak so is forced to go to Naruto world. There he train in chakra, grows to the peak of naruto world and goes to Shinigami World. He again trains to he peak.

So it's a Nice novel to read for those of Naruto, One piece, ... more>> and Bleach loving people and I recommend it. There are some plot Mismatch but it still have logic in it. <<less
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arahera rated it
May 10, 2018
Status: Completed
I honestly enjoyed reading this novel, some of the reasons are that I do like the actual history plot of One Piece, Naruto and Bleach.

This novel is focused on Roja (MC) and not the manga/anime main characters. At the beginning, Roja was pretty much of an ordinary guy, the thing I loved the most was how he transformed himself into a weak minded boy to a powerhouse.

Regarding the volumes (v1 - OP, v2 - Naruto, v3 - Bleach) v1 was pretty awesome, it had lots of details regarding the story... more>> itself. The only bad thing was that some of the characters were stronger than they actually should have been.

V2, Naruto world. The Naruto world was a bummer after having the great volume of OP, it wasn't that bad in itself, but it wasn't as good as the first volume.

V3, uhm... regarding length, v1 took like 400 chapters, v2 took 200 and v1 over 100 or so... it kinda says that the author actually wanted to finish writing the novel, the story in itself on v3 wasn't horrible, but it was rushed and had lots of timeskips.

Do I recommend reading this novel? I would say; yes and no. Yes if you like a fanfiction with an overpowered MC, and no if you totally hate your favourite anime/manga bein ruined by this overpowered MC. <<less
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Har D Rai rated it
May 18, 2019
Status: Completed
This novel is a pure power trip to apex of a badass MC and a good one at that don't go excessively deep into the some minor details of the original and you will love it!!
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Renaxan rated it
August 19, 2018
Status: c648
Its fanfiction novel based on 3 anime world, and its does very well at one piece, easily become best fan fiction over for one piece part. For other world, naruto just okay.. And bleach kinda messed up.

MC is usual op xuanhuan protag which have system similiar to cultivate to gain skill of anime character. MC doesnt have strong attitude, everyone like "omg its godly op roja" and praise the MC. Yah this is not good, but for one piece world building certainly its make the story readable, especially if you... more>> one piece fans. 5/5. Cons (spoiler) :

MC persude luffy to stop being pirate, rescue ace, beat yonkou in single night so if u hardcore fans who didnt like messing with plot, better dont start


in naruto part, he was already op from start and getting op, which I could say im bit losing vibe how to story going altho he did learn chakra and things. He's messed up with plot too like op world. 4/5 cons :

he is become strongest ninja ever, controling ninja village even akatsuki kinda afraid of him


in bleach part, im stop reading this. Plan to continue but simply I didnt really get this readable and myself not bleach fans. Lost all vibe from one piece world and story progressed too fast. 2/5 well what he did :

become genius shinigami become captain, messing with hollow world and several character (?) he is able use some op bankai yet he still didnt know by people


tho solid 4/5 from one piece world alone. <<less
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Draakon rated it
May 16, 2020
Status: c85
Utter tr*sh, no respect for One Piece setting (and I didn't reached any other) for neither character neither organisations keeps true to what they are cannonically, MC is arrogant sh*t overpowered too early on (from weakest marine recruit to Rear admiral in less than half of year of mostly closed door cultivation). Bunch of self-repeating fights where not many things beside opponents is changing, full of generic "wows" from onlookers.

And that damn sentence how MC looks "like a firelord" when he using his ability that copying sword from Bleach which... more>> belongs to Yamamoto and recieved from his first gacha, sentence which appear basically every fight so far, is pretty annoying.

Also, translation is not much better than machine now, so you can't even read it with on "brain off" mode.

One of the worst sizable One Piece fanfics that I read. <<less
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AkeShiro rated it
September 28, 2019
Status: c1
I love the three manga author picked and put his hard work on BUT, you can't just change the character or the things in there. And from what I see from this novel the author clearly didn't understand the story he/she wrote. No one would blame you if you put whatever imagination you had into another existing story, that's what fanfic is after all. Yet you didn't research the base story you turn into fanfic and this is the result of that. I think more comment is unnecessary. So from... more>> my point of view, this is not for the hardcore fans of either One Piece, Naruto, or Bleach. The author basically lacks the basic or only had the basic knowledge of the stories. <<less
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mayamaya rated it
May 23, 2019
Status: Completed
So far for me the bleach world is the best while the one piece is where the MC is most op.. Im glad his so loyal that he only had boa as his wifey..

Good thing his so op that he could just trumple his enemy easily. Wish it could update fast coz I already had nosebleeds and severe headaches at mtls...
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Yashintoshi rated it
February 21, 2018
Status: c709
I have completed this novel and I really enjoyed it. I liked the one piece part quite alot after the One Piece section I still enjoyed it quite a bit. I recommend reading this if you enjoy the major animes One piece, Bleach, and Naruto. Looking forward to reading his other novel Strongest Hokage.
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BigJMK rated it
November 22, 2017
Status: c156
This is essentially somewhat above average One Piece fanfiction with a main character who has powers based on Bleach (the MC unlocks the powers of different Zanpakuto's as he gets stronger and more skilled) . If you're looking for a high-quality novel like "I shall seal the heavens", that you can lose yourself in, then this really isn't for you. This is just something you can waste some time on when you are bored or while you wait for other novels to get updated.

The novel at most deserves 3-4... more>> stars because it's really just fanfiction and the translator isn't all that skilled. I only gave it 5 stars to counteract all of the 1 star reviews. <<less
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Legalt rated it
November 17, 2017
Status: c126
Pretty fun read, but ONLY if you like and know One Piece (mainly) and Bleach.

So far it's been very enjoyable to me, which is why I gave it 5*. I'm biased. I don't review stuff I dislike and usually give high ratings just for enjoyment.

Anyway, as a fan of OP and Bleach, the only downside to this novel (so far), was the translation quality. It was very rough the first like 50 chapters or something, but the translator has slowly become better and also gained an editor.

The story has been... more>> pretty good. You see other characters, like Garp, Sengoku, the 3 admirals, and many other familiar characters that are a lot younger, as the story is about 10 years BEFORE Luffy set sail to become a pirate. As for the characters themselves, I'd say the author has done a pretty good job at keeping the feel and personalities of the ones we know, albeit not 100% all of the time. The MC is pretty much OP and I like him so far. The tags have "weak to strong", but he becomes strong quickly. Imagine how quick Luffy/Zoro progresses in strength (weak to very strong within 2-3 years), but not having to spend 500 chapters getting there.

But, the biggest concern is also his strength. As of now, this novel is still ongoing and the raws are at 445+. I'm not sure how it'll work, but at this pace, he would most likely be the strongest in the world before chapter 300... Hopefully the author does something new and interesting that doesn't turn something that started pretty well, into tr*sh.

Anyway, I think the author has done a pretty good job with this story SO FAR, as it keeps the feel of One Piece but obviously takes the story in a different direction from the real one. I like it. If you know One Piece and Bleach, definitely try it out. If not, this is definitely not for you and I highly doubt you'd enjoy it very much. <<less
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Romaine93 rated it
November 14, 2017
Status: c123
It's a great story and it shows you how things would play out if someone got reincarnated in that world of one piece. People hating on the story isn't nothing new and doesn't mean the story suck, it's a different of taste that's all when comes to story reading
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