One Piece Talent System


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He doesn’t want to be wanted for bounty, or be a pirate, but if there’s no other choice, he can only become a pirate…..

Let the world turn upside down!

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07/01/20 DM Translations c457-460
06/28/20 DM Translations c455-456
06/24/20 DM Translations c452-454
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05/29/20 DM Translations c432-434
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05/20/20 DM Translations c423-425
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Mike777ac rated it
August 23, 2019
Status: c162
Imagine if a borderline sociopathic xianxia MC with Gamer Syndrome was transmigrated into the One Piece World, about 10-12 years before the original story starts. Honestly, the author is super lazy and barely gives any details about what islands, characters or ships even look like... If you don't google every five seconds or aren't a One Piece expert, it's really hard to imagine wtf the world or characters even look like at all. The MC isn't even described in appearance much from what I remember, and he's not a character... more>> you can google lol.

So basically, if you take One Piece, remove everything that makes it an amazing and funny show/manga, then you make the main character a ruthless pirate hunter (who also kills Marines and anyone else that's s*upid enough to try and murder him.) Then you have this story.

On the other hand, I'm giving it 5 stars because he actually kills people. And there are a 'lot' of people who need to die in One Piece lol. Especially those disgusting pigs who control the World Government. I'm looking forward to the day that he slaughters them all to be honest. And all the Admirals who protect those scumbags. <<less
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OldManGu rated it
November 8, 2019
Status: c15
I'm not a fan of the system. I don't like points and stuff.

It's dumb that he needs a strong body to use haki. Ace and Doflamingo could use conquers haki as little kids. Aisa could use observation haki at birth. Weak amazons could also use armament haki. Why does the author think shigan and others are harder to learn than soru and kami-e?

I'm not a fan of his fruit. The fruit branch skills are s*upid. His fruit is nerfed and feels limited.

I don't understand what the physique skill is for.... more>> He already has strength and agility skills. What does physique represent. Is it endurance/stamina or something?

The author is bad at explanations and describing things.

The MC seems weak for training for 6 months. That's longer than Coby trained before the time skip and look at him.

Why can the MC only get rewards for killing pirates? Does that mean he won't get any reward for killing Akainu or destroying the world government? That's pretty hard to accept.

Robin is working for a pervert that tries to r*pe her. This is so s*upid. Everybody thinks Robin destroyed 6 battleships and is super strong. How could he dare to mess with a 79 million bounty? The worst part is that she thinks about letting him r*pe her! She says what's more important survival or dignity! Wtf is up with this author! A scumbag like this would have reported her a long time ago to get his money. The author doesn't seem to understand that Robin wasn't a baby at 16 anymore. She couldn't be bullied by some nobody.

He acts like he has great insight for recruiting Robin. He keeps praising himself in his mind. It's obvious that Robin is capable! She's a member of the future pirate kings crew! You would be an idiot if you didn't know that!

I dropped the novel at chapter 15 and just read the chapter titles. I could tell that the novel wasn't getting any better. It looks like he gets Laffite and CP9 to join his crew later. I've read countless untranslated fanfictions that are better than this. The translator should be doing one of those instead. <<less
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Fujimaru24 rated it
January 20, 2020
Status: Completed
This comment is in reply to Oldmangu's review.

That 1 star review alnost misled me.
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Robbins last employer knows robbin because she worked for him and he is also the head of an information group, ofcourse his gonna learn that robbins bounty is inflated and not at all shows fighting ability

The MC can also get exp from marines and the system is pretty well explained idk what there is to be confused about

And the MC comments only about how great a crew member robbin is and emphasizes how its a great choice he had made in recruiting her. It doesnt even come off in any way as narcissistic as oldmangu proclaims

The MC system is great and while not op is also not that weak.. there are weaker fruits out there like the jelly-jelly fruit that needs a truly smart wielder to make strong his fruit is plenty strong enough and also has a lot of potential this aint one of those western fanfic power wank that youre used to reading

Also his examples of using haki are using rare individuals that either have inborn talents in using them while in the show it takes a lot of hard work for normal people to use them... I say normal as the amazons have been using haki for a long time its like their races talent, dont compare them using it as kids to other normal people in the one piece world. Also congquerors haki needs a conquerors disposition not every tom d*ck and harry can use em.

Old man gu is such an awful reviewer idk if we even read the same story


Spoiler below is added after completing the series

I rate it as 2.5 (meh) out of 5


So I finished it and these are the things ill add

The system is way too OP and the threat of it disappearing that was insinuated in earlier chapters are bull MC wont ever lose the systen

Later on everyone gets steam rolled by the MC and there aint really any excitement in the fights

One piece aint finished yet and there are still a lot of things to discover but the way the author handled the story with what is available is pretty acceptable

The romance part with robbin is boring as ef, and nothing really happens till the end

The title of pirateking is pretty much ignored and useless even if Luffy got the title in the end

Story is pretty bland but a good time waster, it doesnt really have the charms of what made one piece great and turned into a power fantasy in later chapters

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Raneday rated it
December 29, 2018
Status: c12
So far so good.

Not really a One Piece fan but I'm enjoying reading this series, and I just hope that the direction that this novel's going would not diverge or something along those lines.
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Perpekto1 rated it
April 12, 2020
Status: Completed
Its great actually and the characters interactions are good. I like how the MC acts.. Actually he wasn't planning on conquering the world or become a pirate/marine, he just wanted to be a pirate hunter and earn bellies for living but then the marine framed him, at that moment he knew.. The marines are f*cked up. The story is great, the more the story progress the more interesting it gets.

I was bored reading this at the beggining because I thought it wasnt that great but then the story become more... more>> interesting the moment he became a pirate. I recommend you guys to read it, the only thing I dont like here is the author doesnt explain the specific details such as how does the MC looks like, the appearance etc. Everytime a character gets in the story I have to google it I cant count how many times I googled the characters hahahahaha but if ur a one piece fan and knows the characters its good because u dont have to google it. Anyways, God of Soul System is the best One Piece Fan-Fic I have readed so far. <<less
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Draghnof rated it
August 20, 2019
Status: c460

Finished the book.

Globally very good :

The system is well done (even if it's sad that at a time, the system was totally forgotten for a all 150 chapters...) It provides stength but not too much (being max level doesn't mean you will be the best, it can still be improves by the MC works) One of my two complains is that the strength improves is under-works for a long time (despite being one of the 1st if not the 1st stats who was maxed, the MC was still pretty weak physically for a long time) And the other one is that like I said, the system was forgotten for a all 150 chapters because it's very hard for the MC to gain points starting half the story :- ((Other than by killing, he can gain points by "having big achievements" but starting half the story, it's nearly impossible to have achievements. And to gain points by killing marines is again nearly impossible because each time, a superior is near so he can't gain the points...)

It's sad to say but the author creates near admiral power people in just a few months of time....... And Yonko have the same power than Fleet Admiral................. It hurts a lot at first but you eventually become accustomed.

Another sad thing is that at some points, Mihawk and Shanks aren't even side characters anymore and just decide to become like Rayleigh. (and a lot others characters retired or weren't even introduced....)

One incomprehensible thing is that Luffy managed to invade Impel down and after even managed to free his brother at Marine Ford. (like in the story.... but without Boa Hankock to make him enters Impel Down so I don't know how he even went there and without Mr3 or the key to take down the shakles....)

The story takes place way before the original story and was written before Wanokuni arc so don't be upset by the difference with the manga (even if it's big ones ahah)

But it's almost all I have to say for the bad points; the plot is well made, the recurring characters are equally well made, Ross is a very good MC (not s*upid at all).

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cole rated it
June 10, 2020
Status: Completed
didn't expect that I would like this when I decided to read it, I only read it cause I love one piece too much but damn, I was hooked. Binge-read this all the way I even forgot to sleep for one day. It was just too awesome.

for non-one piece watchers/manga readers, there may be a bit of details missing like the appearances of some characters so it may affect your imagery. The battle scenes were also nice and well-written.

hoped the novel was a bit longer but nevertheless, it was really... more>> really good. <<less
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Lin Meng
Lin Meng rated it
July 3, 2019
Status: c127
I like this one piece fan fiction a lot. The reason for this is that we don't follow the Cannon ark at all, the MC is starting his journey some years before luffy starts his adventure and is not shy to change some things.

There is a system but it does not make the MC instantly OP as I feared but it is still enough of a support to help him grow faster.

Give it a try and ignore those bad reviews which all Fanfiction novels have on novelupdates.

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Natsujan rated it
January 25, 2019
Status: c129
Iz's a great story as the author is a lot more original. His own devilfruit ability, starts years before the Straw hats, he doesn't use chinese cliché lines, the character isn't a pussy, but is dark.

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Though the gaming system made it a bit weird, it didn't make him too OP from the start. He actually has to kill high bounty pirates or high ranking marines.


The more I read it, the more intrieguing it gets. This is one of the good fanfictions, that don't rely on the real author for the story, besides the worldbuilding and cast. <<less
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Pavan4321 rated it
November 13, 2019
Status: c237
Excellent one piece fanfiction novel.

MC and main plot premise are the highlights of this novel.

MC is excellently designed.

Plot premise and progression are excellent and well paced.

Character interactions are very good.

System in this novel is interesting.

Hope the translation site releases more frequently.
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RabbitDabbit rated it
July 2, 2020
Status: Completed
I actually prefer this than God of Soul System. MC had a clear goal and he achieved it efficiently. No BS filler or harem.
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Casper Frost
Casper Frost rated it
February 17, 2021
Status: Completed
Honestly one of the authors who does pretty good One Piece fan fiction novels. MC is pretty much ordinary person in the One Piece world, given a system.

There were times when I would think well that is way too dark, but then I realized oh yeah pirates exist in this world. So it is not sunshine and rainbows or fun adventures for the ordinary people unlike the main cast in the manga.

I mean children get kidnapped and experimented on in the manga, compared to that killing some cast of the... more>> manga in a brutal or effective way is much more natural.

Romance is slow and meh, you don't need to care for it. This time it is Robin who gets the treatment much better than the previous one done by the author of Boa. Robin is with the MC from the start and is with him all the time, so relationship forms in a natural way to her character. It also does not happen right of the bat or is thrown in your face.

Also I kinda like this Ghost naming trope of the author it basically says to readers yeah he is a ghost not supposed to exist in this world. That the MC is an out the world existence like a ghost.

The only negative I can give is that the ending is rushed well nothing the author or any fan fic writer can do about One Piece fan fic as it has not ended and Oda is the master of world building and world storytelling so fan fic authors have to wing it when reaching the end. The author does a pretty great job handling this, he basically throws the past and focuses on his own future,

that is why him giving up becoming a pirate king or overthrowing the government is fine, as that is what he wants and not what the manga world would do or force him to do.


For people asking what MC looks like well it is basically said he is an ordinary looking guy in the world of One Piece, a run of the mill mob character in definition and he would remain so if the Marines didn't f*ck him over and make him tear down the establishment.

The marines well true to their nature fit their characters, they are well prideful and egoistic, instead of well making the bounty on MC head revoked when MC taunts them to do it. They stick to their pride and never let it go even until their demise. <<less
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Dravde rated it
July 1, 2020
Status: Completed
I would give this a 3.5/5

Fanfic design was good, MC was good, all in all it was just "good".

It was quite enjoyable to read in the beginning but the later parts of the story was quite boring. Good story and all but I was really bored in the last 100 (?) chapters. Can't actually remember but at somewhere around that point the story was just boring and I was just waiting for the end.
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