When an Alpha is Marked by One of His Own Kind

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Within the industry, everyone knew Team DG’s captain Lu Zhe and Team BLX’s top laner Shen Qiao didn’t get along. They said it was due to hormones. They said it was a basic AA incompatibility.

Lu Zhe once said of Shen Qiao: “Obsessed with kills. Lone wolf.”

With a cold smile, Shen Qiao said of Lu Zhe: “Command’s mediocre. Shitty jungler.”

But then…

When Team DG, champions of the last tournament season, stumbled during the Spring Tournament and fell during the semifinals, someone cut through the furious cursing and swearing that had consumed the internet and leaked the news—

Shen Qiao was going to be traded. He was joining Team DG.

When that news came out, the internet roared.

Did Shen Qiao and Lu Zhe fight today?

On esports forums, trolls and haters placed their bets. It was endless, until Team DG won its second world championship crown.

Half a month after the tournament.

The players of Team DG hosted a livestream: “The lodgings were awful. Captain and Qiaoqiao had to share a room. Aren’t we pitiful?”

Shen Qiao, sitting next to the monitor, glanced over through hooded eyes. He caught a glimpse of a bullet comment and echoed it out loud: “Did we fight?”

He lifted a hand to his neck. “We fought.”

Lu Zhe approached with a cup of black tea. Just in time to see Shen Qiao touch the bite mark on his throat. He added:

“We even broke the bed.”

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When an Alpha is Marked by One of His Own Kind [esports]
当Alpha被同类标记后[电竞]
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Kari95
New Kari95 rated it
November 20, 2021
Status: Completed
I love it. I highly recommend it. This is one of the first novels wherein the main couples are both Alphas. It was a good read considering it was my first time.

I love that it doesn't have the common trope wherein eventually the main character changes into an omega. Till the end, he stayed as an Alpha. Showing the hardship they both experienced in life and towards their relationship. This novel is more on second chances honestly. The main couples working out their way through their career and love.

It has... more>> family drama between the MC and ML but rest assured it wasn't drawn out and wasn't too rushed as well. Although personally, I wanted the father suffer most but in the end, it is still a bit satisfying.

I also love how the author showcases the love between fellow Alpha. The MC is not soft and meek but just like any Alpha as well. It gave a good combination for both of them. The author did a good job complimenting them as a pair despite being an Alpha.

In the end, it's worth reading so gives it a chance. I won't spoil it so you have to read it and find out why I love it. Although preferences are different, I'm sure at least you won't hate this novel. Unless you are not a fan of ABO. <<less
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ZeyFletcher
New ZeyFletcher rated it
November 12, 2021
Status: Completed
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4.5 because there were unnecessarily detailed games?? like some games were explained the whole time but I don't see it's importance in the story line at all, like it could be summarized in just one paragraph and then there were games that would actually be more exciting cause it included the DG team that was just summarized in one sentence. It was a bit, inconsistent, I actually had to just skip some (really just a bit) of those parts until the game finished to see why the author had to drag those games out for 😅. Also, I think I'm just not really a fan of too much flashback? cause I want to know more about the characters first to feel more attached to them and It feels like I don't know them much when there is suddenly a flashback, and take note, the whole issue here is a flashback, the whole pain and suffering is a flashback and I kinda wished I was there when they were experiencing it but because it's inly a flashback it lessens the empathy towards them? cause they're already better now, anw, it's my personal opinion. It didn't affect the storyline, it was good, sad, and just complete dog food HAHAHA

ASIDE from that, the games were exciting, the storyline was unique, I can't believe their parents made them suffer so much?? wth was wrong with them, it never really stated their side but I don't really care cause they just suck. Lol with how Shen Qiao honestly answered Lele in the beginning about his relationship with Lu Zhe HAHAHAH half brother and ex-boyfriend. even I didn't expect both to be true, thought it would just be one of the two.

Other teams, I honestly don't feel that attached to them cause they just come and go?? Like when the author needs a 3rd pov, they just put them in, and when they don't they're just out. Anw they were still good players, the only ones that were really mentioned were Lele, Momo and that annoying xu xiao.

DG team is just good and funny, Qian bao (Money) in the mid lane who likes spicy food, Er hua (Flower) bot lane who is suffering from old wu's voice HAHAH, Old wu (Woow) and his bottle lol the only side couple HAHAHA, Lu Zhe (ZHE) and his OP jungle skills and memorable starting lines, Shen Qiao (Wolfy) and his aggressiveness and his cute desire to use glass vases in the top lane. They really just OP and cute and fun.

Lu Zhe is so loving and shameless, and really good as a jungle. The things that happened to them was no way his fault, he was just too powerless but like Shen Qiao said, he always comes at the right time. He really also suffered when he was sent abroad and the way his freedom to enter BLX was taken from him was so ugh. I like his straight forwardness, his hornyness HAHAHA, his skills, and his never disappearing sexual tension with Shen Qiao, srsly, is sexual tension a criteria for e-sports BL? they always have that feeling hahahah. Btw, the smexy scene, 👀🔥, alpha's vestigial womb? biting the gland? I didn't expect a detailed smexy scene in chap 86 cause the previous ones were just "....." but I think that was their first time?? idrk, it was just hot, and how QiaoQiao begs huhuh so cute, Laogong~. Anw, he really worked hard with his college and with his e sport career, he deserve so much. also, all the banned accts from when qiao's streams hahhaha I just hope that he confides more in Shen Qiao, cause I know he loves him so much that he doesn't want him to face any problems anymore, but it would still be better if they face those things together. 💕

Shen Qiao, he was so wronged. That aversion therapy was just wth shen jinyi sigh. He was really really in the dark before he encountered Lu Zhe again. He deserves so much, I'm glad that he got to at least have e-sports in his life that kept him going and allowed him to live a bit better. It was a pity that no one really knew (aside from the insiders) about what happened to him so that they would know him more but he's an alpha and he probably doesn't want to be pitied. We really got to see how he was changing when he begins being with Lu Zhe, I'm so happy for him. His sudden bouts of being sweet are just 💗. Lu Zhe is his salvation aww. it's true tho. I also like his aggressive plays and lol btw with how Wolfy and Captain Lu would have differing opinions in "Charge, Charge" and "Retreat, retreat" hahahah it's just balancing each other out~ Wolfy is so cute, huhuh scared of horror games and out alpha bot loll, when he said he dreamt hahahahaha I guess they won't change positions cause Cap Lu won't allow it, at least they get to mark each other hehehe again, smexy scene was hot, QiaoQiao was just really asking to be teased lol.

I love them so much, they suffered so much and they deserved NONE of it. Seriously! They deserve that 4 time world champions!! And I love how they came public hehehe AA ftw. LuShen ftw.

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This was a good read! It ain't all fun and games, the BL was 💕 good and sweet, I am full with dog food. It's probably better to know the game LOL first before reading this, cause it would be easier to imagine. It was exciting and funny at times. The ending was satisfying 💛
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Macabre74
Macabre74 rated it
June 21, 2021
Status: c103
ABO - check
Esports - check
Strong Male Lead x Strong Male Lead - check
Humor - check
Chemistry - check
Hot Bed Scenes - check

If you're looking for more than this I'm sorry but your system has raised a spicy chicken host. (´Д`)
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Hades97
Hades97 rated it
April 13, 2021
Status: c2
Not sure why the rating is so low when there aren't any proper reviews so bumping this up for now. Read the 2 chapters available so far and feel this will become a gem.

It's got that Strong X Strong vibe I love. Translations are great quality. Looking forward to more chapters! (Thanks translators!)
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yangyouming
yangyouming rated it
April 18, 2021
Status: --
mtl-ed the novel on jjwxc before so I can say that this novel is written well and the story was very interesting! For the translations, the quality is great and made me enjoy the story as I reread~ loved the dynamic between the two characters, since they're both alphas its fun seeing them try to dominate one another XD thank you for picking this up translator!
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thebadgirl05
thebadgirl05 rated it
July 14, 2021
Status: --
ML made me choke on air a few times already. His shamelessness really wants to make people kneel and I'm living for it. The AA match up and sexual tension between the two protags are the cream and cherries on top.

MC is handsome, cute and adorable but not s*upid as observed from many novels. Gosh, I hate it when they're nearly all described as soft and cute to the tips of their fingers and to their toes.

Character build up is interesting and flashbacks don't disrupt the progress of the story... more>> but adds more insights, depth and spice even more. I'm really surprised not many hasn't read and reviewed this yet.

I'm telling you, this is bomb to eSports lovers and to those who get disuaded by the eSports genre, give it a shot and you won't regret it. I for one don't like eSports that much but this one is mwah! <<less
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Sexual tension is everywhere in this novel and the chemistry between the MC and ML are out out of this world

Plus it's an E-sport novel

All just makes for a good read

... more>> 10/10 would reccomend

Edit: Completed, it was pretty standard and not much of the side characters play an important role

Even the antagonist, MLS father only showed up in a few paragraphs

It's a light read and mainly focuses on the main couples romance but it was cute and as I said the tension between the two of them was out of this world.

Alpha×Alpha is now my favorite trope. <<less
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Doxen
Doxen rated it
August 12, 2021
Status: c30
I'm not too familiar with omegaverse settings so I feel like I'm missing something, such as the personalities of alphas/omegas/betas. Just felt that the main chars were kinda flat and so edgy most the time. The chapters themselves were a constant tease, it got irritating after awhile, do something or don't, focus on story instead. That is, of course, all my personal opinion. I think certain people will like this more than me. However, if you're someone who cares about a developed relationship, supporting characters and an intriguing setting, you... more>> might feel the same.

The one thing I will give this novel, though, is that the e-sports scenes are really good. I have never played LoL before but I found it really interesting to read about. That raised it to a 3 star rather than a 2 star for me. <<less
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Common_people
Common_people rated it
June 9, 2021
Status: Completed
This novel pretty interesting. It's abo setting in e-sport. In short, it's about clearing misunderstanding between MC and ML in the past.. Yep they are in relationship before. And break up. If I remember corectly,

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Spoiler

ML chase after MC to the e-sport career after MC break up with him. MC and ML still in love.

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mc's mood always gloomy, easily offended, but more reserved. He's the type of keep the problems to himself and lets everyone misunderstand him. When he met ML again, even though he was tense, what he showed was apathy and indifference, even seeming challenging. And our ML is the kind of possessive, like to tease but not that Flamboyan kind. When both of them meet, there Will be a hot vibe and sexual tension, full of pheromones. Well written.

Some problem happen between MC & team, so the ML's team management grab him into the team. And here the start to cleaning dirt of the past. To each other they push and pull like a kite.

MC have past trauma and depression problem.

*Don't read below, it's the main tragedy.*

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it's relate to his and ML's family. MC an orphan, adopted by Beta mother (ex-wife of now ML's jerk father) when she married in bussiness with the jerk. The jerk then leave her and make ML's mother, the mistress, become the main wife. ML's mother always looking for trouble with the mc's mother. So the proud Beta mother become a bit crazy. When she know the relationship between MC &ML, her mind crazier even more and inject an alpha pheromone, thats the ML's pheromone. So it make MC have pheromone Disorder trauma. ML don't know this incident b'cuz he is in foreign. So thats what I remember.

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After the misunderstanding clear, MC ML get together again, MC'S trauma get better. The story Lil bit gloomy, but it's pretty hot. <<less
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omgquiznak
omgquiznak rated it
September 8, 2021
Status: Completed
Somehow, I remember reading his but I never marked this as completed before? The e-sports scenes are really well written. There are some more dramatic parts, but it’s not unreasonable, at the very least. If you don’t know much about lol, you might have some trouble reading the more heavy scenes, as it’s really detailed without much explanation. The romance is mostly well written and I can say it’s quite good, especially if you consider that this is an ABO. There are some more things it could improve on, especially... more>> since the author was relatively new to writing novels when they wrote this, but i’d say it’s a good read that’s enjoyable. <<less
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Kazekaachan
Kazekaachan rated it
August 19, 2021
Status: Completed
This is my first time finding AA relationship! 😭❤

Even though the theme is games or esports, the story is very interesting, really. Well, actually this novel is about LoL game, i've played it but don't understand that deep, but if you skip the game part it will be a very hot romantic novel!!

Yes, especially our ML!! He is a lewd beautiful alpha, even though the author writes he is beautiful, but he dominates.

... more>> Our MC is a cute ferocious alpha, he's very shy and a bit tsundere hehe.

In fact, MC's past is sad, so is ML. They are half brothers who are not blood related, MC is an adopted child and ML is an illegitimate child. They fall in love with each other because they realize that their fate is the same.

They want to dominate each other because they are Alpha, it makes me unable to stop smiling. I'm surprised that ML ever marked MC, but MC feels unbearable pain because he's not Omega, alpha's instinct is avoiding other alphas...

All in all, this novel is good. Every chapter makes my lips tired from smiling. ML's lewd temptation is also very hot, haha. <<less
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Xavierthanos
Xavierthanos rated it
October 25, 2021
Status: Completed
this one is real good. E-sport chinese web story with cold faced shou (uke) and warm hearted gong (seme). The plot is real good. So.. This is worth your time, fujo tomoyo..
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Ritsuka
Ritsuka rated it
October 2, 2021
Status: Completed
This is a getting back together after breakup and separation plot! I thought I needed to mention this because the summary and reviews don’t mention it.I don’t read such novels but I was pitted since no one mentioned it!So take note of this before starting!

Starting from the plot, Even tho i’m not a fan of ABO, I was really intrigued by this because its AA! Strong x Strong! And i’m always a fan of a confrontational and passionate romance more than fluffy romance! So I read it and then discovered... more>> its getting back together story and I did actually lose my interest... But I did read ahead because ofc you can’t judge anything before even reading halfway and i’m kinda glad I did. My hate towards these stories are because of s*upid reasons of breakup and I too was scoffing at this couple at every chance I got until the author explained all the reasons gradually! And now being civil, I do agree its not one of those s*upid breakups! Everything did have a reason! For people wanting to know,

Spoiler

They broke up right after they got caught by their families and then ML was sent away to a place with no money and internet and MC was subjected to aversion therapy by his foster mom. So even tho break up was hasty. They truly didn’t have any means to get together. MC suffered a damn lot but even after that he wanted to be with the ML and wanted him to come to BLX but ML’s family intervened and put him in DG. So they could only look at each other from far until ML finally took his chances. Well, before knowing the whole story I actually scoffed at ML a lot of time wondering if he was a flowerhead and why he didn’t got to the MC when he was suffering but the reasons do tell me that he couldn’t but tried his best!

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There was cute and passionate romance mix but not as much as I expected, a bit of a shame but that one chapter smut was kinda hot (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).

The gaming part was mediocre and stretched and the author herself admits it. If you have read Glory or ICDI then it will be just okay for you. But REALLY GLAD that the author didn’t write any ‘except china, other Europe or America teams weak and Korea got mediocre but pretentious teams’ like I was so sick of nearly all the authors doing this shit! The author made nearly all her teams strong and respectable!

Not much side character building and team bondings involved. Anyway it was a mix of romance and a lot of gaming part.

It was an average read for me so try it for yourself is all I can say. <<less
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UnicornxChoco
UnicornxChoco rated it
September 28, 2021
Status: Completed
If you like LoL I think you will enjoy this book a lot. Captivating read. Not too much angst and sad bits.

Although it's an omegaverse setting, doesn't focus much on that. This is an AA story tho.

ML is shameless and really funny. MC is more introvert but shows his sweetness occasionally. Expected a lot more angst and misunderstandings based on their background but im glad it didn't happen.

Lots of gameplay explanation. Got a little confused so I just breezed thru those parts.
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dee_ism
dee_ism rated it
September 26, 2021
Status: Completed
The game element is good, the relationship also good, the couple's backstory is interesting, AA pairing!

ML shamelessness got me on my nerves, but then it got better once we get to know the MC stance on the relationship: MC also loves ML. It's important for me, as if MC has no feeling to ML, then ML doing harassments. But since MC loves ML, then ML doing tease. But again, teasing is okay, and this story has too much of it to become a bit repetitive.

And there's no closure about their... more>> issues with their dad, which is a bit disappointing <<less
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0213
0213 rated it
July 12, 2021
Status: Completed
Review : 4/5

This novel was a really good read. It has so much humour that I enjoyed a lot and my first time reading esports based novel and it was a good experience. The shamelessness and tenderness in this novel was really great!!!.

If u started reading it, you will started to love the side characters are lot. I didn't know whether there is extra or not but I'm satisfied with this storyline. The ending is short and sweet and it made me shed a lot of tears!!!..

Definitely... more>> recommended!. Will do reread in the future!!! <<less
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scrapsd
scrapsd rated it
October 23, 2021
Status: Completed
I've got to say, the fluff is very good and I love the couple so much.... but, the gameplay aspect of this isn't written too well, it gets boring (if you don't get League of Legends). there are some loose ends ngl, but I love both MC and ml's past and how they got together at the end. Very heartwarming and def recommend.
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Ninjagal
Ninjagal
October 2, 2021
Status: Completed
Simple and straightforward.

Shameless ML AA pairing. No plot twist of someone suddenly becoming an O. Great interactions between the pair. Esports part was kinda rushed but it's alright. I'm here for mindless entertainment
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glitteryjoon
glitteryjoon rated it
September 28, 2021
Status: c1
Maybe I'm getting fed up with esports gaming novels at this point. Who knows, but if I'm being honest I think the novel is overrated.

Don't get me wrong, it was pretty interesting with its abo concept and the whole thing with SQ and his allergy, but I think I've become numb to esports gaming novels. I like the ones like You Boys Play Games Well where they're just regular online gamers meeting online. Or the one where the little streaming gamer matched with the ceo of the streaming platform.... more>> It makes it more interesting because they slowly get to know one another and the game play isnt completely competition based where, like every esports novel the end game is them winning the championships.

Initially, the only reason I kept reading was because I found the backstory of the characters very interesting, and then the attack on SQ's life by his adoptive father got me all the more interested in it.

Then that whole thing blew over and we were given filler chapter after filler chapter and I completely got bored. Like, I'm fine with reading game play but when I already can guess the outcome it gets old and with the last 7 game play I pretty much guessed it. Not everyone guessed it? True, that's fair, but even so, I feel like this could have ended at chapter 79/80 and then left the rest as extra because currently I'm beating my head against a wall trying to get through these and praying that the next chapter will finally give me closure to what happened with the father and LZ's mother. And yet.. Here I am, chapter 86 writing this essay trying to decide if I want to waste the two days I spent reading this just to drop it here or if I want to skim through the remaining chapters and call it..

Also, just as a venting thought, I'm actually starting to get rather annoyed with this couple match up. One is tsundere who's too shy and embarrassed to say how he feels outright while constantly trying to make everything a competition and the other is lowkey manipulative and makes everything a game/joke and only backs off once he completely pisses SQ off. I get they're alphas and alphas want to be in control and yada yada, but lord have mercy it is starting to annoy me.

if anyone reads this, take it with a grain of salt, because it could just be me wishing to read something with more plot or at the very least an equal amount of plot to romance. Or maybe my chemicals are f*cked and that's why everything's pissing me off. Who knows. <<less
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zenriu
zenriu rated it
September 26, 2021
Status: Completed
I have no idea how the game works but how the author wrote it make my heart flutter as if I am actually watching the game. I love the exchange of banters of each character and how the love story develop is not fast nor slow just right. This novel is not something I would read again but still giving it 5 star because I enjoyed every chapter of it. Best wishes Author and keep it up Translator-sama u have worked hard.
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xuevie
xuevie rated it
November 10, 2021
Status: Completed
Aaaahhh, AA really is true love!!!!! Super manly A x Super manly A!!!

So cute, so cute, way tooo cute TAT

Haaaaaa, MC and ML is just ever so lovely, even tho ML is way too shameless XD but love how they're willing to overcome and let go of their past suffering and walk towards a future where they're happy, so sweeeeeet (their backstory is too good - it made me wanna protect them >.<) ML spoiling our super cold and lone wolf MC was super nice to read about too!!!!

For the... more>> gaming aspect, honestly, it wasn't too exciting and I've no idea what went on - I've got the MOBA basics down from 'later, he became a royal healer'/'glory'/'the e-sport circle's toxic assembly camp', so I did get the general gist of it but when names from LOL characters and those references appeared, like how Graves can be used as either a top laner, jungler or middle laner, I was like wat???? Huh??? Well, you obviously need some knowledge and experience with LOL to comprehend those gaming scenes, oof.

Anyways, im satisfied with the journey of MC's and ML's team overcoming obstacles, working hard to stay at the top of the e-sports industry and winning that Worlds championship! Super satisfying!! So, you definitely should read this! <<less
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