Transmigrating into a Mob Character to Rehabilitate the Villain Plan


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In short, this is the tragic tale of a saint-like man who transmigrated into a web novel as a mob character and wanted to rehabilitate the villain, only to realize in the end, he became more and more villainous.

The ludicrous story:

Unable to bear hurting the villain he helped raise, but when it came to compensating with his own body, the unfortunate, straight male reader figured he’d better escape… …

Many years later, the same unfortunate saint rubbed his neck, asking, “This is a dog collar you put on me, isn’t it?”

The handsome villainous boss gave a glance with his elegant, almond-shaped eyes, and then replied with a devious, charming smile, “That’s to prevent you from running away again.”

“If I stay put, will you refrain from destroying the world?”

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Xuyên Thành Bia Đỡ Đạn Chi Phản Phái Kế Hoạch Bồi Dưỡng
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New Berlin rated it
September 18, 2021
Status: v4
A word of warning: this is the kind of yandere novel where the ML is forceful and consent is dubious. I've seen everything so far so nothing much bothers me anymore. I prefer him when he started out tsundere.

Volumes 1-3 are great, honestly. I just didn't like the premise in Volume 4 with ... more>>

MC getting amnesia. Even though it's understandable that the ML traded MC's memories in order for MC to live, I'm just sick of reading amnesia tropes. Fortunately, MC gets his memories back, but I don't like how the ML is so impatient and keeps mol*sting the MC and forcing him. I'm ok with noncon but I don't like it when it's justified as okay for the sake of love and shoehorned into HEs. But cause the MC and ML did genuinely love each other in Volume 3 before the memory wipe and MC still does, it doesn't put me off so much. This would get a 4.5 or 5 from me if the ML had restrained himself and just focused on stimulating the MC's memories instead of stimulating his body physically against his wishes in V4. Like dude, he doesn't know who you are. Wth are you doing, I thought you'll be smarter and have more restraint than that... I actually prefer if this had less xxx scenes...


Overall, it's an enjoyable read despite how the ML goes from cute tsun to yandere to the typical forceful ML. <<less
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New yukicchi
September 9, 2021
Status: Completed
The volumes 1-2 were great but the plot turns meh on the last volumes. The only good thing about it is the smut, I already know there's a r*pe tag but I still can't accept it tbh.

I was actually expecting the plot would turn out good in volume 4 but sadly it didn't.

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Ling Xia transmigrated once again using his own body and I really love that twist however, Yu Zhi Jue is really a scumbag, he r*ped Ling after seeing him. Alright, I understand his longing but doing it after they met and Ling not recognizing him since he lost his memories is the dumbest thing to do. I actually think Ling is a strong character, his personality is pretty good, it's just that he appeared to be weak due to lack of physical power. From his first death, his body became weak but he tries to help the protag and villain in every way he can. It's just sad how the author didn't give him the chance of being strong. I think that this story would've been better if there's a character development.


2 stars for the plot and 2 stars for the translation team. <<less
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winter-t rated it
January 11, 2017
Status: Completed
This is really funny and cute, with a lot of action and adventure, a love story that slowly develops, and a plot that's quite different from your typical transmigration story. This was a novel that made me laugh, cry, and pull all-nighters to finish. I wouldn't be translating it if I didn't like it to this extent.

The humor is what drew me in before anything else, and I've long lost count of how many times I had to pause to laugh because of the MC's reactions or the situations he... more>> ends up in. I won't spoil much here, but this plays on the transmigration trope (among a few others) in a fun and ridiculous parody-like manner, but still ties it back to the plot.


There are both plot-intensive and cute/fluffy arcs. It's mostly action/adventure plus some cultivation in the first half, along with a lot of adorable moments that lay the foundation for the relationships of the main cast. The focus shifts to a romantic one in the latter half, but there's still plenty of humor and action.

I really like the MC. He's humorous and feels very real as a modern person abruptly thrown into a fantasy world: someone with knowledge and skills but isn't OP with insane cheats, and sometimes fails despite giving it his all. While he is fundamentally a very kind person, he recognizes that this new world has it's own rules, and tries his best within those bounds. The love interest can be quite pushy, but my favorite part about him is that he never forces past the MC's bottom line. The times when MC told him to seriously stop, in the end, he stopped. The side characters are also very likeable and have lives and goals outside of their relation to MC, which is something I rarely see but loved a lot. My only lament is that the author didn't give us more details about them.

This is my favorite type of love story, where the build up is gradual, and there are a lot of hints and character development before they finally get together. There's enough drama to keep it exciting, but not to levels of soap-opera extremes. Their love and devotion is 100% mutual, and the extent in which they both go to protect the other is enough to give you diabetes (and heartbreak). And for those of you wondering, yes there are are R18 scenes (only in the latter half though).

I'm not a fan of romances that rely on repeated misunderstandings or falling for a rival's schemes to create conflict, and thankfully, this has neither. It's far from smooth-sailing though, so be ready to prepare your heart. Seriously, prepare your heart. I just about died over the course of cheering them on, but worry not, the ending is very satisfying and sweet. Their interactions are not only adorable, but also ridiculously hilarious at times.

Reading this was definitely a roller coaster ride of emotions, but for the most part, it's very light-hearted and will leave you full of smiles. It's an excellent blend of action and romance, with conflicts stemming from both external forces and internal turmoil. If you like transmigration stories where the characters establish a bond of affection and trust before falling in love, plenty of plot that doesn't revolve around said romance, and a happy ending (plus some extra chapters that act as fluffy icing on the cake), I definitely recommend giving this a try.

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Attica rated it
August 8, 2018
Status: Completed
I'm gonna be honest, I really enjoyed the first two volumes of this novel and would probably have rated it 4/5. There was an excellent blend of plot and romance, with great character interactions not just between MC and ML but between all the characters.

However, starting in volume 3, the book started to go downhill. It seemed like the author was starting to give up entirely on the plot, so almost all the side characters began to disappear (if they did reappear, it was only one at a time). The... more>> extremely abrupt and awkward time skips did not help. As a result, the ML's personality suddenly changed in the blink of an eye, and the MC-ML dynamic was immediately shoved into the "oh now you're my love prisoner" territory. There were also a parade of smut scenes that felt uncomfortable because of the rapidity of the aforementioned personality change, and started to get rather dull since they followed pretty stereotypical BL dynamics. I did like the ending to volume 3 though, since it brought the plot back on track. However, Volume 4 made it worse with nonconsensual (well, definitely extremely extremely dubious consent) scenes between MC and ML. Stuff like the memory loss plot point was also done in a rather cliche manner.

I will say I love the side characters in this novel though. I appreciated the fun start, and only wish the rest of the novel had followed that. I think the novel would have benefited from abandoning the time skips so the MC doesn't feel left out of the plot. <<less
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KimiKazoo rated it
March 2, 2017
Status: Completed
One of the best yaoi stories that I have ever read in my life. This is coming from someone who basically read every yaoi manga that exists. The chemistry between the two MCs is so sweet, cute, sexy, and heart wrenching all at the same time.
The plot of the story is extremely unique as well.

Reading this, I smiled, laughed, squealed, and cried. Highly recommended, you won't regret it.
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happysheep rated it
January 7, 2019
Status: Completed
i had so many expectations for this one ok. I wasn't thinking it would be like the grandmaster of demonic cultivation level with all the intricate backstories and worldbuilding but shit, this novel just went downhill harder than a skydiver with a broken parachute dude.

we start off so promising, there's a good premise and interesting characters, the main guy isn't completely useless and has a decent personality and a goal- to raise evil brat properly. we get good exposition, some background of the cultivation systems. main dude's whole refinement thing... more>> is interesting and we get the shifu who's cool and waiting to be expanded upon. I HAD EXPECTATIONS OK. sh*t WAS GOOD.

then volume 3 came and suddenly main's personality becomes nonexistent, his personality is like wet toilet paper, he has to be saved all the time and inexplicably starts to fall in love with evil brat. evil brat starts doing creepy ass sh*t and the dude's like -oh I don't like it *moans* ah jue do it harder - with a side of r*pe and Stockholm syndrome. let emphasize we now have a shitton of r*pe!!!! somehow more than all the other bls i've read before.

without mentioning all the r*pe, the plotline also goes downhill it's like super rushed and like no characters but evil brat and main guy are like mentioned, good brat literally is there for some reunion feel goods to pretend this thing isn't all about the f*cking now. hahaha did I mention that? the plot is sidelined so the two can f*ck in increasingly more disturbing and r*pey scenarios. like. that's the whole plotline v.3-end. r*pe p*rn, dubcon p*rn, stokholm syndrome p*rn..... etc. THERE'S SO MANY PLOTHOLES, AND PEOPLE HE JUST LIKE... FORGETS ABOUT? LIKE WTF DUDE YOU SPENT ALL THIS TIME TRYING TO GIVE THE READERS SIDE PEOPLE AND LIKE ALL A SUDDEN YOU CUT THEM OUT LIKE U GOT AMNESIA????

like I am so disappointed. I literally created this account just to post this like I'm so angry. it wouldn't have been as bad if this was a straight up p*rn novel, but it had lots of potential to be a good story and not just a f*ckfest with bland stock characters, like legit, I don't even remember their names now and it's been like what, 15 min since I finished the novel? I'm sorry but all you 5 star people are like delusional??? vol 1-2 was decently mediocre and 3-4+extra is just p*rn there's no plot anymore. the parasite in authors brain ate it like it was main guys as*hole and he was evil brat.

wait lololololol the premise of this story is about some guy complaining about some sh*t ending and author did a sh*t ending, truly some great irony right there.


ps. if you really still want to read it after reading through this rant read vol. 1-2 then hope that it gets popular enough for some fanfiction writer to write a satisfactory ending. the other half read for smut if you're into that type of shit.

*spit* I spent 5 hours on this piece of sh*t peace out <<less
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drollawake rated it
October 3, 2017
Status: Completed
Edit (2019) : I warned everyone back in 2017. You all got fooled.

I slogged through the chinese raws thinking it would get less cliche but it turned out to be yet another story with a blushing protagonist and a r*pey, controlling and possessive lover. You know the drill: the protagonist protests about bottoming and wallows in his feelings of emasculation, while the r*pey lover is so full of love for the protagonist that you'll never see him bottom out of consideration, or you know, take no for an answer. If... more>> that's your idea of sweet and fluffy, then good for you. <<less
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KKristen rated it
August 22, 2017
Status: v1c24
Don't be fooled by the title, description, or yaoi genre -- this series is surprisingly genuine and takes its plot seriously.

It's not just slapstick humor or smut (there is none in the entire first book). If I didn't see this was marked "yaoi, " I would have thought it was a normal transmigrator/reincarnator xianxia story.


When the author of his favorite LN suddenly gives the story a bullsh*t ending, our main character angrily takes to the forums to write a scathing review. Most of the main characters die and the villain... more>> destroys the world?! Unacceptable!

Little did he expect to wake up the next morning in the beginning of the story -- and as one of the first mob characters to be killed, too! Determined to survive his new life as a cannonfodder character, the main character decides to reform the villain. But his valiant efforts seem to be having unexpected results...


The few characters who have been introduced so far are pretty well-developed. The main character is earnest and hard-working, and the villain is adorably tsundere. (Later, sexily yandere.)


The author actually created his/her (?) own world, cultivation system, monetary system, etc. I appreciate that it's not just a copy-paste of the usual xianxia world. The writing is nice and detailed without being too much of an information dump, and the pacing makes this an easy read to sink into.


Winter's translation is one of the best I've ever read. Perfect grammar, engaging language choices, attention to detail. The great translation quality was a big part of what helped me to really start to enjoy this series. Unfortunately, people keep stealing and reposting Winter's translations on for-profit aggregator sites, so he/she is dropping this series at the end of Volume 1. Such a damn shame... Winter, if you're reading this, thank you for all your hard work!

Another group may be picking this up starting in Volume 2.


For now, I'm going to give this 5 stars based on the quality of the chapters that are currently translated. I'll update this review later.

Edit: Winter was kind enough to post a super detailed summary of all of Book 2, and let me just say... this TOTALLY deserves 5 stars. A yaoi LN with actual feels, likable female characters, tragedy, and really well-written romance scenes? WHAT?!


For those of you who are wondering (you know who you are... ;P), there are apparently a lot of R-18 scenes much later on in the story. (Especially starting in Book 3.) It will be a long while until then, though, so read this for the actual plot. You won't regret it. <<less
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icecream rated it
April 17, 2017
Status: v1c15
HOLY CRAP!!! As one reviewer already said, this is probably one of the best if not the best Yaoi/shounen ai I have ever read. All the main characters are sooooo good and the romantic development seems so much more real than any romance I have read about. It is first built on trust instead of lust. This is the best kind of romance, where you really know how much the characters love each other and the depths of how much they will grow their relationship. Obviously this is a slow... more>> burn romance, and this is slow burn in the best way. It scorches my heart because everything is too hot even with the smallest interactions, or contact, or smile. Like my heart is freaking burnt to a crisp right now, how am I alive???!!! How the hell will I continue this amazing story if my heart's already not working!! <<less
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ToSilence rated it
August 10, 2018
Status: v4c17
I really enjoyed the first two volumes of the story, however the 3rd and 4th volume started to get duller. The side characters stopped appearing, the MC seemed to stop caring about anyone but his loveinterest, and as much as I love their interactions, having other people mixed in made it that much more entertaining.

Especially volume three was a hard read for me, volume 4 seems to get a bit better, however at this point it's way too late to save. Also it's barely connected to the rest of the... more>> volumes. Really.. It's a strange way to end the story, but I guess I'll take it.

The MC starts out really nice, and turns into a weak and whimpy guy which I'm really not that fond of. Also the love interest forces himself a bit too much on the MC for my taste. <<less
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BillionJellyfish rated it
October 22, 2018
Status: Completed
The first 2-3 volumes were good till the ML decided to lowkey sexually mol*st/almost r*pe the MC... like wtf?!?!

It might just be my personal preference, but teasing MLs that want to get reactions out of MCs is fine and all till ya start harassing/mol*sting the MC, cause at that point, I would want to report the ML to the police and get a restraining order on the ML. I don't understand why the author tries to romanticize r*pe when the MC in the novel explicitly tells the ML to stop... more>> his harassment, especially when the MC couldn't recognize the ML (who was in disguise as a random stranger). For real, if any one was sexually harassed by a random person (didn't know the harasser was his/her lover), it is perfectly normal to feel disgusted, yet somehow the author makes the MC like?/feel pleasant? about being sexually mol*sted? I am so confused on why/how the author thought that these mol*sting scenes would have worked out in any way...

So in summary, everything was good up till the last volume where the MC kept on being mol*sted/harassed/almost-raped/teased by the ML and even somehow easily forgave the ML, like why/how?!?! I guess the author was trying to pass the point, "love is blind", across in the last volume, cause if that was the case, then I can only agree that love is indeed blind, so blind that the MC tolerated being sexually harassed and almost r*ped and even easily forgave the harasser/potential rapist. <<less
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Life is a molester rated it
February 25, 2019
Status: --
So I've finished up to volume 2 and so far, the story is really good. Really like the plot and absolutely love the ML's jealous and possessive moments. Another thing I really appreciate is that the MC is not a damsel permanently in distress and actually has a usable brain.

But now that I'm ready to start on volume 3, I can't access the site Bonbonbltranslations because the IP address couldn't be found or something like that T_T Am I the only one facing this problem? Can someone help please?
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bmb rated it
January 24, 2019
Status: Completed
Well, it started well in the first two volumes of the novel. Then in the third volume things started to get a bit boring but in the fourth volume the writer just completely ignored the plot and left a lot of plot-holes that I was expecting them to be gone in the extras but I was once again dissapointed.

And this without talking about all the dub-con/non-con things the ML does to the MC, he almost r*pes him...[saying he can't hold on... like are you a f*cking beast ] ; im... more>> truly mad with this writer for messing up the novel tbh we didnt even get a good end.

Im giving it 2 stars for the first two volumes.

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raindroptree rated it
January 30, 2019
Status: v2c6
I'm with all the others who said that they liked the first two volumes, but not the others. Too much r*pe, not enough good plot development/story. It almost felt like reading two completely different stories (first two volumes compared to the rest). It felt like the MC changed too much and gave up the things I liked about him all for being r*ped by the ML and being broken to pieces. Sucks because the ideas of the story were really good, but everything kept going back to development of this... more>> rapist ML. The MC started out great, developing into a character of the world he transmigrated into really well, going through ups and downs, encountering interesting stories, then all of a sudden he is just a s*x toy for the ML and there is just a lot of cat and mouse play the rest of the storyline. I am like some others, I had to stop reading because it started to feel like sandpaper on my brain, then stumbled upon it again later on. <<less
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Fathom rated it
June 19, 2017
Status: Completed
One of the more amusing plots of transmigration that uses all the same types of tropes as other stories but still makes it unique in it's own way.

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After reading his favorite online xianxia novel's conclusion, the MC curses at the story and author for such a horrific ending of the villain pretty much destroying the world. He curses the main characters to be gay. Low and behold, he ends up transmigrating into a minor cannon fodder character in the story that never had a complete background. He ends up meeting both the protagonist and the villain when they are kids and sort of becomes their nanny to try to re-educate the villain into law abiding person. However, his "education" ended up changing both the protagonist and villain in misunderstood and hilarious ways.

The villain's black belly ways are reminiscent of the seme in "Legendary Master's Wife", however, he still retains his respect for the MC. As for the MC, he's similar to "My Disciple Died Yet Again", where he dies multiple times. Each time he dies, he goes back to modern times. The only difference is that when he goes back into the story, a time skip happens, even though he retains his original body. It's a good coping mechanism for the age gaps and the potential shotacon.


Overall, a cute and amusing twist on the same old transmigration into a story plot. <<less
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blrblrb rated it
August 10, 2018
Status: v3c12
The first two volumes were so good. MC was growing his own unique skill and he was getting really good at it! He's a really likable character, and his interactions with the protag and villain are fun to read. MC's growing romance with the villain is so cute!

However, in volume 3, it feels like the nice and fluffy story I was reading turned dark and sad... ... more>>

MC is so weak and he's basically being dragged around by people like a ragdoll. And the smut is kind of uncomfortable to read... Feels one-sided and r*pey cuz MC can barely move and he is so uncomfortable with homosexuality...

T_T <<less
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holizshit rated it
June 18, 2020
Status: Completed
Why would someone rate this a 5 star? I'm going to keep this concise while venting my frustrations. I was conflicted whether on posting a brutally honest review or keep it civil...I just... ugh. I stayed up until 3 AM and couldn't even focus at work after reading this novel. And to think that it disappointed me this much...

This novel consists of 4 volumes. In volume 1, I was extremely content. The fluffiness is there, it's cute, blah blah. It would've been perfect to end it there and give some extras, maybe. Why? Because after volume 2, the quality surprisingly degrades to the point of being confused whether I was reading the story or not. Some plots from volume 1 were forgotten and I was like... okay... let's try reading... more>> more and see. The romance started to happen and I was pretty satisfied with the development (well, I predict the majority of us came here for that).

After starting reading volume 3, I thought that the quality wouldn't get worse, but I was wrong. The romance starts to get... murky? The smuts were pretty hot, I gotta tell you... but... their relationship started becoming too toxic. And the plot went into disarray pretty quickly. While the story heavily focuses on the romance between Ling Xia (MC) and Zhi Jue (ML), the other aspects of the story loses its details. At some parts, it feels rushed, but uses the romance to divert the focus from it.

It's like the author simply just decided to let go of the plot and just glossed it over by putting MC and ML simping over each other in almost every chapter. That's still okay, but in volume 4, I had to stop reading as things were getting too uncomfortable. I couldn't even continue reading. Please, please, PLEASE read the tags. There is a yandere tag and a r*pe tag. That should be enough to tell you what's going down.


After MC got revived for the first time, he "slept" for 4 years, and many details regarding those years were omitted thus making the story feels a little bit jumpy. It got worse after MC died for the second and third time. Suddenly things already came to a huge scale and there isn't a sufficient explanation behind it. Any related explanation was only from ML (the villain) 's point of view and a teeny tiny bit from the protagonist. It's clear how partial this story is, heavily leaning towards the ML. Making the protagonist the side character (lmao...).

Honestly? When he first died, I knew he was gonna come back eventually. But after the second and third... I'm astonished by MC's survival skills. Although he obviously became useless after dying multiple times. This is also something that I wanted to rant about. How come he has a huge potential like herculean strength and armament refining only to become a waste?? I feel disappointed. I'm aware that it wasn't his choice, after all he was dragged left and right by the intricacies of those sects. Still... what a waste.


If I have something else that I can't stand from this novel... it's the freaking. Male. Lead. Now hold on... I have plenty of arguments to back up my statement. Bear with me a bit since I'm literally infuriated right now.


Yu Zhi Jue, he's a f*cking r*pist and it disgusts me. You should feel the same. I clearly saw the signs that he was turning more and more possessive that it's ridiculous. MC isn't allowed to even look at others. He first sexually harassed him while the other was asleep, confined him in his home (for protection, he said), refused to give him explanations, hide important things from him, forced him to do sexual activities, blatantly r*ping him (note that at that time MC possessed no memories of Zhi Jue, but he was forced to the point of being bound and could only cry. Despite this, Zhi Jue got more excited and continued his actions...). And to think that MC sacrificed himself three times for this piece of sh*t??? Electric chair.

In conclusion, Zhi Jue doesn't deserve human rights, civil rights, whatever that is. He deserves to be in horny jail. It's all right to be a simp but he blatantly became a r*pist. Nuh-uh. As a horny patrol, I couldn't overlook this fact. I wish he could burn in hell and his manhood loses its function.


So, do I recommend this? Once again, read the tag and decide on your own. I rest my case. Have a nice day. Ah, it felt good to vent. <<less
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Amon rated it
March 10, 2019
Status: v3e01
Okay, great novel, but where is the rest? I remember there was translated volume 3 and 4 but now I can't find it. Only on fake sites, and some of chapters are not there. Now I'm so sad.
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September 1, 2017
Status: Completed
It's a great story! Super cute, a funny novel that transitions into romance fairly smoothly without coming across as too forced. The one thing I'm hot and cold on is the transitions between arcs.


On the one hand, it's fairly unique and interesting that the author keeps being sent back to his world upon "death" only to have to go back when he realizes the villain is straying further from the path of rehabilitation. This plot device was also a really nice way to merge his identity back on earth with the new world, rather than leaving readers hanging wondering what happened with family/another body possibly stuck back on earth like a lot of other novels do. However, sometimes the way the MC falls in and out of the world can get a little too convenient, you know?


But, I'm probably just overthinking it since it really is a very good story. And the smut scenes are satisfying, even if I'm just using MTL.
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PearlySkies rated it
December 29, 2020
Status: v4c18
This was incredibly disappointing. The worst part is that it really did start of strong. The plot was interesting. The characters, though pretty cliche, were fun and had some interesting dynamics. I didn't think I had found a master piece but at least a fun read with a bland but cute couple, but boy was I wrong.

By novel 3 you can start to see the holes and the flags popping up that the author just doesn't know what to do with these characters anymore. Suddenly the plot will just stop... more>> for the leads to have s*x and side characters that were prominent start showing up less and less. I still generally enjoyed it though. We could see some genuine moments between all the s*x scenes and even though the MC was turning into a white flower he was still interesting enough to follow.
Then novel 4 happened. Suddenly all the side characters we knew are gone and it's just a bland innocent lamb x yandere pairing. The ML gets stripped of any previous nuance that he had and is now the classic "I r*pe you because I just love you too much" kinda top. He just can't comprehend another way to make the MC fall in love with him than noncon/dubcon. It's so odd to see him talk about how he wants to protect the MC and never let anyone, even himself, hurt him. So manipulation and noncon isn't directly hurting him? The worst scene for me is when the MC start bawling his eyes out, because he's ya know getting r*ped, and the ML sees this, sees how scared and in pain he is, rubs his back for a bit AND THEN KEEPS GOING. Like he realizes that he is directly causing the MC pain and he just coaxes him for a bit and then keeps going. And the thing is we already had a very similar scene in vol 3 but the ML realizes that he's causing harm and that's why he swore never to do that again, yet here he is??? I honestly have nothing against dubcon or noncon if it's either just meant to be p*rn and not taken seriously or creates drama/conflict for the main couple. But it's basically inconsequential in the grand scheme of things, no one really cares. The author could've made those scenes 100% consentual and literally nothing would have changed. Authors adding noncon elements to their story and then just not committing to it is probably my biggest pet peeve so know that I am being slightly biased. <<less
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FengMing rated it
October 26, 2017
Status: v3
Completely in love with this novel. Would recommend it to anyone. All the recommendations were correct on how great this story is

side note, I'm glad to see someone else is picking up this novel. It was upsetting to read the last person decided to drop the translations (with in reason). But still decided to summaries vol 2 but not the last 2 volumes. Leaving everyone on an extreme cliff hanger with no intentions of ever summarizing the last two volumes. It was a hard pill to swallow being left there... more>> with no way of knowing how the story would be finished. But none the less I will re pick up where the new group started in hopes this group will finish the story that has capitvated many. <<less
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February 27, 2019
Status: v3c1
Can someone pleaseeeee translate Chapters 1 and 2 of Volume 3, please? They have gone missing and I cannot find them anywhere!

I am soooo engrossed in this story and I really want to continue but I can’t just skip these two chapters! My heart won’t let me D:

I’d be willing to commission it
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