The Scum Villain’s Self-Saving System

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Can’t I read stallion novels anymore?! [TN: genre with OP protag & harem]

Shen Yuan is reborn into a young man and scum villain destined to die, Shen Qingqiu.

But it must be known that the original Shen Qingqiu was sliced alive by his disciple, Luo Binghe, into a human stick! A human stick!

Shen Qingqiu’s heart is a full herd of grass mud horses running full tilt, yet:

“It’s not like I don’t want to hug this main character’s thighs, but who let this fucking man be so black. The revenge that needs to be taken is some thousands of deeds!

Why is all the romance that should be going to the women in the plot imposed on him?

Why as a scum villain, should he still have to block gun and knife for the protagonist and sacrifice himself?

Shen Qingqiu: “…… _(:□)∠)_I think I can still save him one more time.”

He wants to prove – even scum villains can live, and live coolly at that!

It’s also the story of a small white flower who later became a black flower attacking a scholarly, scum villain type.

This is the story of a master and disciple’s everyday unknowing, very strange, dog-blood process of falling in love.

It’s also a scum villain’s firsthand account of the male protagonist turning from a small white sheep into an overbearing black king, sort of story……

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Hệ Thống Tự Cứu Của Nhân Vật Phản Diện
人渣反派自救系统
重生之人渣反派自救系統
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TheLadyWhoLikesBoyLove
New TheLadyWhoLikesBoyLove rated it
September 29, 2018
Status: Completed
This bl actually has a plot and doesn't immediately go PA PA PA (S*x) it started out mild and then it's actually good because the ML is not blindly in love in middle part because of some misunderstanding.

Bitch this is good so you better read it that's all thank u
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rakuu-en
New rakuu-en rated it
September 24, 2018
Status: Completed
I loved this so much after devouring all the English translated chapters available I braved the rest of it with my banana chinese. AND I FINISHED IT.

This novel. Is hilarious. Plotwise it is fairly intriguing by itself, if a bit simple; it doesn't compare to the hair-raising plot twists in Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation, for example (yes, comparison is inevitable, I suppose), but neither is it glaringly cringey or gaping with loopholes, and it does its job of moving the story and the relationship between the two main characters along.

THE... more>> CHARACTERS. SQQ continually breaks barriers in breaking the fourth wall. The way he does so is just REVOLUTIONARY. He scathingly deconstructs the harem novel cliches of the original book. He scathingly deconstructs the new BL cliches that he is CURRENTLY LIVING OUT. Every time he encounters a character that fits your typical harem wuxia novel role, he scathingly deconstructs every single one. Hell, he doesn't spare HIMSELF when it comes to his immense skepticism. Whatever cliche scenario he's about to land himself into next, you can bet your bottom dollar he's ready to say something hilarious yet scarily incisive about it. I laughed out loud multiple times while reading this book, and thinking back on some of the scenes still makes me smile uncontrollably. LBH just... subverts all the normal cliches associated with the protagonists of such novels, by attracting an alarmingly dwindling number of girls (as commented on by SQQ), by being attracted to approximately none of them, and being a complete failure in building a harem (as commented on by SQQ), and by being, in essence, a Crybaby with a glass heart who hangs on to SQQ's every word (as commented on by SQQ. a lot. SQQ is savage in this novel, and we love him all the more for it.)

Is the romance in this novel ideal? No. SQQ spends a good bit of it being oblivious, which is hilarious, but I didn't really see how his initial horror at discovering LBH's true feelings morphed into genuine affection, when all LBH did was
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kiss him several times against his will, lock him in a house against his will, and apparently sleep (or more?!) with his corpse for the 5 years he was presumed dead..... against his will

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Not to mention the final resolution scene where the author suddenly
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dropped a badly written and totally unnecessary rape scene on us. It makes me slightly disappointed how SQQ was able to brush it off so easily.

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That being said, the two have their cute moments and I did find myself rooting for these two deeply flawed characters in the end. I'm also glad the novel maintained its hilarity from start to finish- I would read this just for the laughs alone. If you're in need of some laughter in your life, this really is the book for you. <<less
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NyxEclipse
NyxEclipse rated it
June 14, 2017
Status: Completed
So I'll be careful to no spoil anything here at least.

Honestly? The MC and his student are a hilarious pair together. Sure things get a tad bit angsty in the future, but what's a story without some good old drama?

The system never fails to disappoint. I swear it's so troll about its point system and quests that I feel like slapping it sometimes. It's a good reminder that our MC is actually not from this world.

So read this for the humor, sassy characters and hopeless puppy love. Yes,... more>> there's plenty of that is this novel.

So without any further delay,

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The romance of the MC and ML can be said to be built on misunderstandings. Although, that is not entirely the case. The ML appears to have fallen for the MC quite early on, but the MC only really decided to accept the ML quite late, somewhere around chapter 80 or so? At that point the MC proved his decision to stay with the ML through some... really painful s*xy time...I winced inwardly at that part.

It was quite touching to see the ML's dedication towards the MC. (Dude hugged a corpse to sleep for 5 years wtf.) The earlier parts (before the system forced the MC to push the ML into the abyss) was this mutual happy daily life arc. Both parties were content with life as teacher and student. At this point, ML was a really devoted student and his fondness might not have crossed into love yet. Either that or he just hadn't realised his feelings yet.

Then came the 'I'm back from the abyss!' arc. It kind of threw the MC of guard since the ML came back faster than expected. But oh well, he went with it and tried to awkwardly avoid the ML as much as possible thinking that his student hated him for kicking him into the abyss. (As per the original story) The two kind of fell out because of this, so when MC was being framed for some crime ML failed to defend him, resulting in the MC being thrown into jail. After escaping with some help, the MC travels to a city and has a dream along the way. In the dream, he abruptly realises the cause for the strange the point gaining method thus far. This part was honestly gold. The rationalisation that the MC used to figure it out plus the ever so helpful kiss from the ML had me rolling on the ground in laughter for a good while.

Then MC fakes his death, leaving our little puppy devastated. Of course he returns after 5 years, but many thins have changed by then. This final arc helps to fill up some plot holes, introduce us to a deadpan father who says ridiculous things and give our side characters a little spotlight. The ending is a happy one despite all the hardships our MC and ML had to face. The troll system continues to troll, but at least it was kinda helpful towards the end. We are also treated to some extras including an interview where 'interesting' questions are asked about the MC and ML's relationship, as well as a an occasion where the original ML (the one from the harem stallion novel) and the puppy love ML are swapped. No, original ML didn't kill MC on the spot, but it was so damn funny how the MC realised that the ML was a different one. (Really? Your technique in bed is too good to be him?)

Come to think of it, a lot of the misunderstandings stemmed from the MC's initial over reliance on the original story's plot. Because of that, he kept misreading the ML, causing much suffering on both their parts. The MC also realises this near the end, thinking that if only he understood how the ML actually felt all this time, they could have avoided so much pain and suffering.

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I wish the translators all the best in translating this wonderful novel so that more can enjoy it! <<less
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solomaize
solomaize rated it
May 22, 2017
Status: c8
Only 8 chapters in, but this story is lit! The releases are a little slow, but it is worth the wait.

The BL tag grab my interest, but the humor sealed it. So far I'm okay with the MC. He got transmigrated into this novel that he hates as one of the villain. He is tasked by an editor-like system to improve the novel while not breaking character. If he does something OOC, he gets penalised by the system.

Fearing for his life and limbs, he is trying his bumbling best to... more>> find loopholes in the system so he can avoid the bad ending (like really bad). Anyway, I can't wait for the story to progress more. Especially to see the relationship progress with the ML.

Translator is doing a great job, I love the footnotes, lengthy as it may be, so jiayou!! <<less
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Gav
Gav rated it
May 15, 2017
Status: v1c4
Currently having fun reading this, the main character amuses me very much and the ability to comment on this is pretty much the entire reason I joined the forum in the first place.

I am very intrigued by the spoiler thread for this too. *___*
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BitterSweetTea
BitterSweetTea rated it
May 30, 2017
Status: v1c6
One of the best BL novels I've read in terms of comedy and plot progression. The MC is hilarious, the ML is such an adorable bun and the side characters are all vivid in their characterizations. I've kept rereading all of the six translated chapters and yet I couldn't get enough of them!
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Attica
Attica rated it
June 17, 2018
Status: Completed
Reading the Scum Villain's Self-Saving System is a ticket onto a true rollercoaster of emotions: heartwarming fluff, depressing angst, and of course lots and lots of laugh-out-loud humor. Like any good parody, it simultaneously makes fun of common tropes while also triumphantly embracing those very same tropes.

1) Story

The Scum Villain's Self-Saving System is predominantly a parody of the infamous power/revenge/harem fantasy genre of books, nicknamed "Stallion novels". You know, the whole "OP Protagonist is tormented and abused as a child, then gains a sudden boost in magical power which he... more>> uses to exact merciless revenge on his old tormentors--while also amassing a giant harem of beautiful ladies."

In fact, the protagonist of Scum Villain is a reader who detests one such particularly poorly written Stallion novel (starring the male protagonist Luo Binghe (LBH)). This reader's hatred of the novel is so great that when he dies, he gets transmigrated into that very same story. Unfortunately, he happens to be given the role of Shen Qingqiu (SQQ) --the "scum villain who tormented the child protagonist and cast him into hell, and was later brutally tortured and murdered by the grown-up protagonist."

As you can expect, our main character, the newly reincarnated SQQ, is very eager not to get brutally tortured and murdered like the original SQQ was in canon. He also has all his knowledge of the original book's plot to help him survive (and poke fun at the cliches). Unfortunately, he cannot act freely. His transmigration comes with a "System" which forces him to act in character and maintain at least some of the canon storyline--including the crucial turning point where SQQ traitorously casts LBH into the equivalent of hell.

The result is a perfect recipe for both hilarity and angst (though mostly hilarity). The story is vaguely split into a fluffy beginning (where SQQ serves as a Tsundere teacher to the adorable teenager LBH) vs. a second half that's both humorous and sad (where SQQ navigates a complicated/uncertain relationship with the powered-up LBH who returned from hell).

On a more general level, Scum Villain's Self-Saving System creates a vibrant high fantasy setting while parodying it at the same time. The use of magic and demons follows the usual tropes, but having SQQ giving silent audience commentary makes everything feel fresh all over again. SQQ successfully fills in many of the original story's plot holes along the way :P

Overall, "Scum Villain's Self-Saving System", is a cohesive and beautifully written story that uses even the smallest of details. Of course it's not absolutely perfect. I'd say the 2nd half of the plot has quite a bit of angst resulting from miscommunication, and the pacing can sometimes move at a breakneck speed. However, I personally find these to contribute to the story's uniqueness, as opposed to detracting from it. (ex: The miscommunications in question actually made sense in-character. The story definitely does not drag.)

2) Characters

I think it's fair to say I love every single character in the Scum Villain's Self-Saving System. It's funny because the original novel's characters were almost entirely 1-Dimensional, but the world of SQQ's revised story truly feels alive.

First, let's look at our main character Shen Qingqiu. I find his character to be super interesting for a MC. He manages to put on a "calm, smooth, badass" appearance, but we as an audience can see his inner monologues where he is always secretly freaking the hell out, swearing at novel cliches, and smashing the fourth wall. SQQ is a rare protagonist who falls under the "stoic sagely mentor" character archetype but hilariously subverts it at the same time. (Makes you wonder what all the other stoic sagely mentor characters in other works of fiction were always thinking beneath the surface...)

On one hand, SQQ shows himself to be incredibly intelligent, driven, kind, wise, powerful, clear-headed, and easygoing. On the other hand, he has clear flaws that naturally stem from those very qualities! His stoicism successfully hides his inner freak-outs, but also prevents other characters from seeing his true thoughts/feelings. His biggest strength (using the plot of the original Stallion novel to his advantage) also becomes his biggest weakness (thinking the living people around him are still the stereotypical characters they were in the original novel). And yes, it is extremely fulfilling and satisfying when he realizes and overcomes those flaws <3

SQQ is probably the first Isekai protagonist I've ever loved, and I adore his character. (... legit the only thing keeping me from cosplaying him is how he doesn't have an official design yet)

Now onto the other main character--the male lead of the original novel, Luo Binghe. LBH is a really fun character, with two obvious faces: the "innocent hard-working lamb disciple with a maiden's glass heart", and the post-hell "ruthless overpowered genius demon lord out for revenge". But instead of how you'd expect these two faces to contradict each other, they actually co-exist perfectly!! Given the unique way these two sides interact with other characters, every scene with LBH is a joy to read. (Interestingly enough, he technically falls under the trope of Male Yandere. But when reading the novel I never once thought of him as a tropey character, simply because his thoughts and emotions were written so naturally.)

As you can tell, I love both main characters. But the supporting cast also has its share of wonderfully 3-Dimensional people, each with their own badass/touching/heartbreaking/funny moments. My favorite side characters are probably Liu Qingge and Yue Qingyuan. Liu Qingge is absolutely hilarious as the unfortunate straight man to the SQQ/LBH chaos, while Yue Qingyuan is the warm big brother figure with hidden depths.

There's not a single person I can truly hate in this story, even the original "scum villain" SQQ or the spoilery Big Bad. All in all, I honestly have absolutely no complaints about any of the characters. Oh wait, I guess I do have one complaint--I wish the story was longer so we could get more time with all the characters :P

3) Overall Enjoyment

This is of course entirely subjective. But from my personal perspective... reading the Scum Villain's Self-Saving System was the most fun I've had in a long while. It had the perfect blend between drama, fluff, and humor (which I find pretty impressive since the original author seemed like he had a fetish for tragic backstories LOL). It never takes itself too seriously and has a great time poking fun at high fantasy popcorn novels, but it's also not afraid to tell an earnest story that delves into realistic human emotions and situations.

[Miscellaneous Comments: Since the author of Scum Villain also wrote Mo Dao Zu Shi / Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation, a comparison is inevitable. I do love both works, especially how each fulfills its own unique niche! I will say that on a subjective level, I find Scum Villain more enjoyable to read. Its humor and fluff is relaxing/easy to digest and pretty much everyone gets a happy ending, while MDZS sometimes ventures into depressing/horror/tragedy territory. Though that's just my personal preference for comedy/optimism showing :P

Also of note, the BL romance in Scum Villain's Self-Saving System is relatively downplayed. While the interaction/relationship between Luo Binghe and Shen Qingqiu forms the absolute core of the novel, it only become a reciprocated romance near the end. Poor Luo Binghe has most of the feelings, while SQQ is completely oblivious for over half the story. I definitely did not mind this though, and found it felt quite natural.] <<less
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Ritu
Ritu rated it
May 22, 2017
Status: c5
Complete and utter crack... The plot is something you might have seen before, the normal human hating the plot of a novel transmigrates into the the novel as villain. In most of the novels the MC strives to change himself and not be like the villain. Now the plot twist in this novel is that he is not allowed to act ooc. If he acts too much ooc then he can die. This plot twist has lead to many interesting situations. Very funny characters till now.

I'm enjoying reading this.

The... more>> translation is well done too. Let's see how the novel proceeds. <<less
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srrrahim
srrrahim rated it
December 13, 2017
Status: Completed
I am not a fan of BL stories, but this one looks interesting

AND IT IS. I am totally hooked (I even went as far as reading raw using MTL that gives me brain cancer, but I don`t regret it (●≧ω≦) 9)

The system love to troll the MC, and the plot is really good. The comedy is the one that cheer me up to keep reading it. And the romance and misunderstanding give me shivers

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The ML hug The MC dead body for 5 years. Creepy!. I am not a fan of Yandere, but The ML puppy love towards The MC really cute and I can`t really hate him. I love him even more ƪ (♥ﻬ♥) ʃ

The Original Shen Qingqiu has a really sad past *damn ninjas cutting onions! (ಥ﹏ಥ)
I cry a bucket of tears when I thought his elder brother had died. The original Shen Qingqiu thought that his elder brother is abondoning him, but he didn`t. And because of that, his elder brother is so loyal towards him (I won`t spoiler who he is, but you can totally guess it 😁)

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Just read it. You won`t regret 👍👍 <<less
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ResidentialPsycho
ResidentialPsycho rated it
September 23, 2017
Status: c21
The MC wakes up as Shen Qingqiu, a nasty teacher that the original Luo Binghe grew up to torture to death. He must act in-character as Shen Qingqiu while trying to preserve his life. To avoid his death flags, he decides to become the MC's ideal teacher and starts spoiling and favoring him.

This naturally results in jealousy from the other students.

As the MC is completely oblivious to Luo Binghe's affections, it's pretty funny to see how he misinterprets all of Luo Binghe's actions. Luo Binghe definitely hints at liking Shen... more>> Qingqiu early on in the series, but Shen Qingqiu only sees it as Luo Binghe trying to build his harem.

I am really looking forward to the actions the MC must take in order to stay in-character and continue the plot lines without being eliminated by the system. The future betrayals that must occur will risk the MC's fate on the line.

This is a fun action/comedy/Xuanhuan that is well-worth trying out. <<less
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Jass
Jass rated it
February 17, 2018
Status: --
I'd say this is one of the few romance BL novels that is fluffy and comedic enough to have male readers find some charm in this novel. Mainly because this sh*t is not just a romance, but also a gigantic parody of xuanhuan harem novels. Plus it's under 100 chapters which means they won't play out this comedy too much to get stale, and the fillers are practically non-existent as well.

In addition, the protagonist and male lead have something that I believe makes it stand out from the other chinese... more>> BL I've read - the subversion of the "seme/uke" or "gong/shou" trope. The MC is a man, and he makes it clear he's a man. He's not feminized or emotionally weakened with his developing romance with the male lead and keeps a firm grasp on his choices and freedom, condemning and portraying the ML's insane and obsessive actions when he attempts to obtain the MC's affection. This results in a much more balanced relationship dynamic between the ML and the MC. Much better than other BL that I've read.

The romance is light hearted and built up on a hilarious amount of misunderstandings. Yes, there is a s*x scene, but it doesn't come until the very last chapter. You can just probably just skip it with the extras if you don't want any smut.

For a majority of the time the novel barely takes itself too seriously, and while it does become a lil dark, it still retains the comedy as you read on.

ML + MC pairing is very cute and believable as well, you can see how the MC starts to develop feelings for the ML. <<less
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rICKY
rICKY rated it
May 10, 2018
Status: --
dude I need to gush about this novel. there's so many interesting things about it.

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I think it's cleverly structured (love the restrictions in the beginning to keep the MC in "character" ha. that was pretty smart), and I enjoy how the system isn't overwhelmingly present but is more used a plot device to move things forward occasionally. It doesn't feel like this universe is some sort of weird game to the MC where he's just detached. In fact, my favorite moment is when the MC realizes he's been treating ML like a chess piece. Sure, he always has had real feelings for ML, but in that moment, he realizes that he didn't have to strictly adhere to the "system, " and realizes the true impact of his actions on ML. I think he sees ML for who he is for the first time, instead of some caricature of a harem king from the original novel.

Another interesting plot point is that in the end, the "villain" is ML's deep insecurities over being his perceived abandonment by the person he loves. Which is truly subversive because the final boss isn't some overpowered dude that the characters have to take down, but rather a truly intangible thing that is only overcome with love (or okay...a badly written smut scene...). It's in line with the way the whole novel seems to be dismantling genres and labels.

But my favorite aspect is that ML isn't cool at all and is just a overpowered crybaby. And that is depicted as "happiness" instead of being a demonic overlord that has 3000+ wives. Like yea, ML is super useless and a crybaby but f**k it! He's happy, infinitely more happy than having all the power in the world and basically any pretty girl he wants.

Only disappointment is that it's never really revealed to ML about MC's true identity (like how he's transmigrated blah blah). Like yo...i have a hard time believing that ML and MC can be in a relationship w/o this coming up accidentally at some point. But else wise - a super super interesting BL novel. So many tropes are dismantled (and ok f**k, I kno, BL tropes are EVERYWHERE in the novel but at least the het tropes are dismantled??) and it makes for a refreshing, touching read.

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KKristen
KKristen rated it
September 10, 2017
Status: c21
This is another good yaoi novel that actually focuses more on the plot and world-building rather than just fluff/smut. While it has a few flaws, it's still a good read.

Summary:

The main character reads a poorly written "stallion" novel (the type of xianxia story with an OP, vengeful, cheat protagonist with a giant harem) and calls it a "stupid novel" before unexpectedly passing away. Upon awakening, he realizes that he has been transported into the world of the novel -- and into the body of a scum villain who will later... more>> be brutally murdered by the protagonist.

The world's "System" informs him that if he does something out of character, he will lose points. Having zero points will send him back to his original world and (dead) body; a death sentence. The only way to gain points is to assist the protagonist, participate in plot-based "missions, " and help the protagonist become cool and OP -- but won't this also lead to his death?!

The main character endeavors to become a good teacher and latch onto the protagonist to survive. However, the protagonist is becoming strangely attached...

Review:

For now, I would like to give this 4.5 stars.

The world-building and plot is detailed and interesting, and even though it's somewhat predictable, I can't wait to see what happens next between the unfortunate teacher and puppy-like protagonist. The protagonist changed his bad opinion about the main character a bit too fast, but since then their relationship is developing slowly and steadily.

The side characters in this story (other than the main character and protagonist) aren't developed much so far. The other male characters might develop more later, but currently this story is suffering from a common symptom in yaoi/BL stories -- boring and poorly-developed female characters.

Overall, this story is still enjoyable to read, especially if you like the "reborn as the villain" and "overly attached male lead" tropes. <<less
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sakurahime
sakurahime rated it
August 12, 2018
Status: Completed
Can't wait for the translation and try to MTL it. Not regretting it, turns out to be one of the best danmei. Now waiting for the donghua next year, author Xiu Xiu really know how to make the best plot with the best characters (even the support characters amazing)
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Fujoshi4747
Fujoshi4747 rated it
April 23, 2018
Status: c28
I frickin love this MC, he is smart without being black bellied and the ML is still a pure cinamon roll for now. I love their interactions so much!!!
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Kleep
kleepart rated it
November 28, 2017
Status: c24
One of the best Danmei on NU in my opinion.

The story is well thought out and well paced. The characters are well fleshed out and interesting, there's a lot of great humour.

The action is exciting, and the drama is just right.

I'm a huge BL fan but I think that anyone could enjoy this. The translations are also excellent, which really improves readability.
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AlyssaJusuf96
AlyssaJusuf96 rated it
September 16, 2018
Status: c33
Lucky the author never gave us any bad endings for main pairing. This is my first transmigration novel that I read, what makes me happy is it's very rare for find some stories with Teacher-Student as main pairing.
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scynnee
scynnee
July 9, 2018
Status: c55
"This is the story of a master and disciple’s everyday unknowing, very strange, dog-blood process of falling in love."

A very apt description of my entire thought while reading this book. I also don't know when unknowingly (or how) the ML falls in love with MC. I am now weighing between continuing reading this novel or giving it out. (I just can't imagine by treating someone kindly could result in love; how could the ML falls in love with MC so fast?) I just don't understand the bL in this.

DNF... more>> for now.

Seriously, I only continue for so long for MC's inner thoughts. The MC antics made me LOL at lot. The MC is by far the most humorous one with his inner thoughts, focusing on how to avoid the pre-destined death as foretold in the original stallion novel (where most the humour arise), how to live comfortably; never realising the butterfly effect of him changing the story by 1) treating the ML kindly, and 2) behaving OOC.

Undeniably, this is a funny story. You could feel the author's way of writing (it is quite similar to her other book) if you read her other book, the Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation (mo dao zhu shi). I love GDC, with the similar dense MC. I highly recommend reading GDC if you like darker with more mystery kind of premise.

I highly recommend anyone who likes this to read Transmigrating into a Mob Character to Rehabilitate the Villain Plan (VRP). The BL in VRP made more sense to me, with a similar storyline as scum's self saving system. <<less
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RenTheWitch
RenTheWitch rated it
July 5, 2018
Status: c18
You will LOVE the main character, he adapts fast, has humor and keeps his composure when needed. The plot so far doesnt go around in circles and its a nice read. The translations are very well done and the footnotes help understand better what a particular phrase means for us who arent used to them.

Knowing what he must do in the future, Shen Qingqiu will still try to give the poor child ML a good future... Even if he must harm him greatly for it. Qingqiu says its for the... more>> sake of his future, but he cant stop himself from seeing Binghe and the others as real as himself, its not a book but a real world he is living in, so the decisions he takes are not rushed or half hearted. A very good read im willing to follow to the end.

A novel from the same autor is Mo Dao Zu Shi (Founder of Diabolism). Highly recommended if you want a more dramatic and darker themed BL set in a xianxia world. <<less
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PotatoCakes
PotatoCakes rated it
June 8, 2018
Status: Completed
Probably one of the best isekai novels written. The plot is intricate, the characters are well rounded, and the story is both dramatic and hilarious at the same time. Unlike FOP, the entire story is focused on one world and the same 2 main characters. This allows the world to be better developed and the characters to be a bit deeper. Unlike most other novels in it's genre, the main character isn't OP or clueless. He has clear goals, motivations, and rational thought. The intermittent interaction references to the real... more>> world and system interface are well timed and provides both comedic value as well as tension relief. <<less
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Arrange
Arrange rated it
January 4, 2018
Status: c24
I'm not very a "HARDCORE-WHY THEY AREN'T TOGETHER YET-DAMN I WANT THEM TO CUDDLE!!1!!!!1!!11-" type of fan of yaoi novels.

It's not that I don't like them, it's more like I find them.. A little cringy? Sometimes? Ok most of the times.
Ok I'm a low-key fujoshi so I'm okay with BL things. Like they are even cuter and more fluffy than straight couple?!

If I were a guy.

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Back to the novel! This novel! This adorable novel! Was. So. Damn. Cute.

My soul was crying tears of rainbows when I was reading and my mind was full-AWWWWWWWWWWWW-mode.

Spoiler

The ML is such a good wifey <3

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max2payne0 rated it
September 20, 2018
Status: c34
So, I saw all these glowing, 5 star reviews and had to be that guy to come and rain on everyone's parade. I really do love this book, and I knew from the spoilers there was going to be some angst. I just don't like how it was depicted, and going from that to a loving relationship bothers me, even if groveling does happens.

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So, Luo BingHe was kicked into hell by a man he cared for a lot. A man he loved, even. He's understandably angry. I don't know if any apologizing is going to happen once he finds out that SQQ didn't do it to abandon him, but if there isn't, then my rating will drop, and I might just stop reading and skim through a few points. It leaves me a little disappointed, because it's by the same author of Founder of Diabolism, and I absolutely love that one. But when people that have a past of beating each other up, or one beating the other one up, even if it's just verbally and it's over a misunderstanding, I don't think it's an easy thing to get over, so I'll be looking into how it's resolved in this one.

Also, the Luo BingHe in the novel universe. I love that we got to see him meet SQQ in the alternate verse. I've only read that part in spoilers on the forum, but I feel like I'd end up sympathizing more with him than I do with the main pairing, just from reading the summary, I think he goes away feeling bitter, and the current LBH is happy not to have ended up that way even with the power and the 3000+ ladies, but that just had me wondering if the other LBH would get over it, and I wanted to toss the main pairing and rub the other guy's head a little.

When something bothers me, I can't get rid of it. It really feels like pressure on my chest, and I usually separate myself from the problem, blast music in my ears loud enough to give myself a headache, or find something new, or an old story I really love, to take my mind off it, it'll take days, and there'll be days when I remember and I have to start the process again. This is why I prefer stories where the guys in the old world just don't show up, and the protagonist takes over someone evil that wouldn't be missed (I have a hard time reading the Legendary Master's Wife because of this reason). So, I'm going to stop now and wait until it's fully translated, or close enough, and skim through.

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So, this is all totally my opinion, but there could be someone out there who hasn't read the spoilers and might feel the same way. It really is a good story up to ch34 when Luo BingHe loses his sh*t for a while, so you can take that warning if it means anything to you. <<less
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