IT'S MPREG EVERYONE!!!! MC and ML will have 6 kids, 5 females, 1 beast/male. Their first child is adopted and in the end of the story MC will be laying 5 eggs. YES PEOPLE! LAYING EGGS! Bcs ML is a snake (don't ask me how many **** he has bcs there's no specific description lol. Their first time is actually quite funny, it's a misunderstanding but in a good way)

The male/female divide is extremely stark and honestly it's too weird to have this completely straight guy who just feel to a new world just have absolutely no problems with being suddenly gay. Also, ML - he's forceful and does not respect the MC, not truly. He listens to him but it's all done with a patronising must-listen-to-females thing. Everything that feels off, like being forceful & not giving personal space are just swept under the that's-how-thick-faced-beastmen are. Now you may find it cute, & that is perfectly fine but it bugged me too much. It also annoys me just how much everyone is depending on MC, like are you seriously telling me that people who are so smart that they can figure out how to make all these new things from MC's vague half-baked knowledge never discovered or experimented? Where I completely gave up was the first night The ML knows that MC does not know their customs. The so-called female friends of his know he doesn't understand what gifting handmade clothes mean and nobody tells him or confirms if he's okay with sleeping with the man!!!! He's just forcefully eaten brutally to the point he has bruises all over and can't even move & the ML thinks it's a good idea to leave MC & go hunting for some fruit that is apparently good for health and call in all the other females in who wake him with their laughter. He's half-covered, covered in bruises, has just had his first time without any mental prep and wakes up to no ML and people laughing at him. Now I get what the author is going for - oh he's so caring that he fought a sabertooth tiger for special fruit & called his friends so he isn't alone but No. Just NO. That honestly sounds traumatising. Maybe I wouldn't have felt so strongly if ML had just said this is what gifting clothes mean, "oh my goodness I'm so happy, do you feel the same as I do?" Or at least stayed till he woke up so that he doesn't feel so odd on waking up, especially since MC has repeatedly said he's a male where he comes from. Or if this fruit is so important, at least cleaned & covered him up properly and asked 1 person to check on him and be kind if he's not back by the time MC wakes up

The main character transmigrated over to a beast world with his original body (he gets it fixed and becomes like one of the native there later) and meets a wandering group of beasts. While he sets off with them, he gives ideas of building houses and ways of making life better to their group. Then, their leader and MC becomes lovers & they build their tribe together.

Drama happens from time to time, but mostly its slice of life on how to make the tribe better. For example, finding vegetables and seasonings to improve their food choices, making pottery and utensils for eating, weaving silk to make clothes.

Also the way the valley is written completely lacks common sense. Like the author mentioned the place was really big and hidden behind a big rock, but a few chapters later, the author has the little kids find a salt mine but then the location of that mine had to be hidden as well? was the mine inside the valley or not? No details.

This isn't as big an issue as the others, but the reason that hunter-gatherer societies were also migrants was because after you gather everything in an area, if you do not replant the seeds etc. you deplete the natural resources, making the next year's resources in that area more barren. Thus early hunter-gatherer societies moved around a lot like rotating their sources of food/crops INSTEAD of staying in one place, because if you don't actively give back to nature, it will not provide boundless resources. The MC picking unripe fruits and not replanting is completely unsustainable.

I cannot remember what the MC used to do before he transmigrated, but I don't think it was a architect. He tells them how to build houses and how to make food and he instantly gets treated as a f*cking god. It's amazing how he is able to identify wild plants, which isnt as easy as it looks. You can go into the wood with a book telling you which plants are what and still f*ck it up. Plants look very f*cking similar. Not to mention that most of these plants are much different than on earth.

The author tried to fit so much and such a small story. Yes 98 chapters for the main story is quite long, but the author tried to fit way too much. Most of the filler was these random couples that barley get any resolution. Not to mention how these drifter beastman randomly picks up females like they are just being thrown away. Weren't they supposed to be rare or something. the MC females friends all get their stories with their partners and as soon as they are together, the friends almost never appeared. I like romance, but their was way too much side couples that none of them really matter to me.

Another thing I want to point out is the pregnancy of the "females". I'm not a bl purist that hates male pregnancy, I actually like it when the author uses it. It makes me so mad when the author mentions that men can get pregnant but, they never get preggos. I understand if pregnancy is part of the story in another way, that makes it essential to the plot without the MC getting pregnant, but this wasn't it. I haven't read the extras yet, but I'm betting that it hints at him getting pregnant, which would make me so mad. Anyways..

Last main rant I want to go on is the unnecessary plots and the rushed ending. THERE WAS NO f*ckING REASON FOR THAT DUMB ASS VACATION!! I hated those chapters the most. Nothing happened! Well pointless sh*t happen. They adopt a random kid and meet another beastman and his kid (or something). The author does nothing with these characters btw. The beastman and his son doesn't go back with them and also doesn't do anything, but hang out ig. And the baby was just to.... idk...... Write about a baby? Idk why the baby was their. The baby disappears when they get back to the tribe anyways. Speaking of them getting back. Idk what the author was thinking about having these awful people just come and try to take over. It was interesting at first until you realize that this can't be handle right with less than 5 chaps left. The ending was just rushed and bad. I think the author got tried of the story when they did that s*upid vacation and then had to add a bit of drama at the end.

The cute lil buns!! Lin mu had one adopted child who was ADORABLE & later had 5 children (at the same time u know snakes being oviparous n all) I'm very satisfied!

But he does have way to be save in this new world because he's watched by the Beast God who after transmigrated him and love the foods MC makes, won't just throw him away after he 'use' him.