Then there was this dumpling thing that I think was supposed to represent their space, which acted like a spoiled child with low IQ... I don't know... it was annoying...

I think the author used the dumpling to make the story more interesting... it didn't.

The enemies that die in the novel are pretty unsatisfactory, as in they die from someone else's hand and the MC had no part in it.

The MC and ML are absolutely perfect and there little dumpling is practically the cutest meatball EVER!!!

Although, I have to agree with everyone else. The ending..... well, its worth reading and finding out.

The bad guys die nevertheless, but just because of their own arrogant personality teaching us (in my opinion) that someone evil or coldhearted will often fail exactly because of those flaws.

I still wanna know why the sun suddenly came out. ;-; And honestly the author made EVERY ENEMY of the MC die accidentally. The cousin was attacked, Allen poisoned, The zombie king died by plant. I mentioned before that this can be nice, yes. But you know, I thought they would at least fight SOMEONE, like the zombie king. ;-; It did not bother me that much though.

Look, I noticed that both genders had cannon fodder characters in it. It's just that there were much more men than women in the novel cause, , Apocalyse" and stuff. And almost all of those women were shown to be s*upid and arrogant and characters who would throw themselves on men. What I mean is - apart from the old wife of one of the team members on MC side EVERY WOMEN was like that. Even if the author's argument is like: Women weak, have periods, all die" I still found it annoying that apparently every women left had no pride or intelligence.

But yeah I thought: Okay, this is not the only bl novel where I noticed this. It is not thaaat bad, so let's just ignore it.

Well, at the point where they visited the prison base it became too much. When the team is about to leave, it's described how a lot of women throw themselves on the team members to go with them (in return for s*xual pleasures). The team is then praised because of how they refused that temptation and yep, leave them all there where they die of course.

You see, first I could argue that those women... at that time in the apocalypse must have already experienced a lot of nasty and terrifying things. I mean, they were probably used to the fact that no men would bring them cause they are women if they don't look attractive in some other way. I could say that, but this is not even my biggest critique point. There was just no woman who went: Hey, I have an ability and I'd like to follow you. They were all just shown as useless people which the author often describes them as. Even the water ability users in Allen's team - they were always mentioned in connection with hooking up with him. The author seems to have a problem with capable or confident women since all women in his novel have to be s*upid and loud and those, , who have a bit of ability are arrogant and make s*upid mistakes and can't be left alone or in an important position" was the vibe I got. That disgusted me a little.

for example, Tuanzi's final evolution or even existence is never explained.

Or the cultivation stuff in the bracelet/space, or why their space is different from the other spaces.

all the women (legit every woman except the one sentence in the epilogue) is shown as idiotic, s*upid, weak, incapable, narrowminded, criminal etc. basically not a single positive female character.

although it's indeed awkward seeing them keeping all the good things to themselves, despite the people of other teams are clearly good people, It's their choice anyway. Them extending the helping hands when necessary is good enough.

seems to bear a direct resemblance to a certain Meat Bun from Half Prince (Yu Wo, written in 2005-ish). I imagine it will be calling the ML 'Mama' before too much longer but he wasn't talking as of c53.

they get together quite early so there isn't even the dramatic tension from an unsure relationship to fall back on. Both of them are OP for various reasons and up until I quit reading, they easily overcome everything that comes at them with a wack or two, so the action scenes don't have much excitement or suspense to them.

they're in the middle of a huge battle with very little hope in sight, and

why do authors absolutely insist on assigning heteronormative roles to GAY couples? Is it that they think we won't know which person is which if one is not referred to as the mom or wife? Or we won't accept their relationship without having a totally delineated, typically bi-gendered roles for each individual? I really don't get it. They are MEN and I personally get a bit of a fujishi thrill whenever I read about the 'husband and husband' or pair husbands, or the MC and his husband, especially since it's so rare. Isn't that what we're all here for anyway? Sigh. Rant complete.

how did the battle end? The sun came out, the sun came out. So the zombies are like vampires who were scared of the sun. And the zombie king baby, ppfftt. I think he got eaten by a plant? Sigh. Author could have used3-5 more chapters instead of condensing everything into 1 chapter, but alas, it is what it is