The author clearly started with many ideas for the story, but Enchantress Amongst Alchemists has many problems, not the least of which are:

• Extremely disjoint story. The transitions between arcs are random and sometimes mind boggling
• MC as a ridiculously large number of relatives, something like 4 sets of parents (not counting the family of the male lead), 3 child (all older than her in a sense). Her relationships are so complicated, that every interaction is so awkward and hard to believe. None of the relatives seems real, and all of them end up being one dimensional and meaningless to the story.
• The author can't write battles at this point, all of the fights result in her standing in place and taking punches, then saying "this isn't even my final form", and the opponent goes "No! How can this be!" and admits defeat without continuing the fight. The alternative is the fights being extremely trivial. However, the author greatly improves on this area in subsequent novels, in particular, the fights in Ghost Emperor Wild Wife are much more descriptive.
• The author keeps telling you about how some things are important or incredible, and when it comes to push and shove, the actual events are unremarkable and easy to gloss over.
• After the initial parts of the novel where the male lead is some what different from the stereotypical ones, male lead becomes close to the worst one I've ever read.

Perhaps the best example to this novel's deficiencies is that the final boss have NO name. The novel just refers to the final boss as something equivalent of "super ultra level great beast", and this guy just came out of nowhere. The fight itself is 90% people talking with 10% being the MC setting up some magical array which she learned at a completely randomly time from some completely random person who has no significance what so ever, with exception to the fact that novel mentions that she became really strong at some point for some inexplicable reason that's not explained in the story. And this person also never actually make any cameos in the story.

Suddenly the older sister who was the main villain is in tears because the prince has other women.. But isn't that natural since he's royalty? And she's crying about it! Wtf after causing a lot of damage to MC this was your breaking point? Then she gets r*ped by the guy she loved! This is s*upid.

The MC husband also has been obviously lying to her that he's a honest and pure king but she still forgives him! I don't like it.

I do like the fact its anti polygamy! We see the perspective of Women being forced to married or being concubine. The feeling of wanting to be first and not sharing their spouse.

I love how she pats her pet beast like a villain. It's like Dr. Evil lol. But she's not evil at all. Even though the Author states her as a cold demon. But her heart is swaying so much emotionally.. truly s*upid.

Transmigrator into tr*sh body who is not really tr*sh but a genius that can cultivate after surpassing a minor hurdle.

Evil family member plotted to take everything from the MC, including her fiance who is the crown prince. The new body owner will repay the former grievances.

A mighty but cute beast is contracted to the MC for free.

A really strong Male lead that could trample everyone in the kingdom but is hiding in plain sight, falls in love at first sight and tends to pamper and protect the MC from the shadows.

The MC starts to make pills and go up in her cultivation really fast, doing in months what people take dozens of years.

During all this steps there is constant fights with her previous repugnant family and she is faceslapping them again and again while everyone who called her tr*sh is now second guessing their opinions.

Eventually she gets revenge against the family, while the previous fiance who cancelled the engagement tries to get her back, only to be humiliated too.

After getting revenge against, she discovers that she is actually a missing child and her actual family is super strong and far away.

Running down the street? A super important child is about to be run over by a carriage from snob people so that she save her like a hero and start problems with a new family in a new city.

Basically, when the protagonists starts to remember their past life and the enemy of their past life appears, everything makes nosense. First of all, the main reason for the female antagonist for being such a b**ch was cause she wanted to be a concubine and the ML rejected her straight away, so she went and exterminated all their past family and even tortured and "killed" their child. Ok I get it, but maaaaaan, I have never seen someone so eager for a f*ck, basically her argument was: have s*xual interc**rse with me, again and again, which was lame. And if it wasn't enough, the attitude of the protagonist was so: I don't mine if they kill our families as long as you're only mine, cause sometimes is nice, but they took it to the point of annoying.

The Mu family... what is even going on? A four year old child actually poisoning someone else? Send someone, who thinks you're his savior, to kill and r*pe the MC, but when drugged and r*ped herself, ends up blaming the MC for no reason other than gut feeling?

The meeting with her actual family is ridiculously far-fetched. The mother kept bringing up "oh, you're around the same age as my kidnapped daughter." Did I mention my kidnapped daughter? For some reason, they're mysteriously drawn to each other. How mysterious.

He was absolutely adorable when he was playing the fool, which was the reason why the MC really liked him. He was pure and untainted, child-like. But, then he rips off his mask, and MC is still okay with it? Why? Wasn't she just drawn to him because how pure he was? Turns out he's more sinister than she is, has been lying to her, and pretty much sneaking into the baths and her bed to grope her, but she's still okay with that? Why allow him to continually take liberties with her body when she barely knows him? Don't even get me started on mysterious feelings of attraction.

Once she and the Ghost King meet, the Ghost King completely changes. Where is the cold, arrogant person? All I have ever seen of him is a woeing person that calls around 'wifey' all day long. His personality is dull. He's nice around his wife, mean around other people. Nothing too special about him.

She accepts the marriage to the Ghost King easily. How long have they met? Months? That's hardly anything! She blushes rather easily when she sees him. Isn't it just because the beauty has given her a better impression of him?

MC is also far too strong. She defeats everyone at the alchemist's association and is the most talented out of all of them. -.-