After Running Away With a Cub, I Became Everyone’s Favourite

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Xia Qingshu transmigrated into a book. He was now the beautiful, arrogant, but slow-witted cannon fodder that always antagonised the protagonist shou. Finally, after a retaliation, he met a very miserable ending.

Xia Qingshu, who found himself already in the villain’s luxury suite: “Wuu, how can I be so miserable?”

So, he decided to run away.

Chen Zhiyu is a wealthy boss, the richest man in the world.

He was abstinent and conservative. Handsome in appearance, clean, and always at the top of the cantaloupe rich list.

Because the family business has always been handed down to a single heir for the past nine generations, Chen’s parents are always pushing for marriage and birth.

Chen Zhiyu: No marriage. After death, all the inheritance will be donated to the country!

The distant relatives looked forward to the extinction of the Chen family like vultures. They are waiting for the opportunity to adopt their grandsons into the Chen family to inherit hundreds of billions of yuan in inheritance.

One day, Mother Chen found Xia Qingshu, who was close to Chen Zhiyu, by the maternity unit leaning against the wall with morning sickness.

The Chen family boiled over. Mother Chen rushed to Xia Qingshu: “I’ll give you 100 million…”

Xia Qingshu quickly opened the payment code: “Auntie, I’ll buy a plane ticket right away, and make sure to stay away from your son.”

Mother Chen: “Marry my son, I’ll give you five billion, and also let the child be born!”

Mother Chen went wild, and gifts piled up on a mountain to welcome the new life.

Xia Qingshu: ? !

Xia Qingshu: “Auntie, I also can’t let go of the little life in my stomach… I don’t want the five billion, only the child. As for your son, I don’t want. ”

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“Secretary, Is Xia Qingshu still spying on my whereabouts every day? ”

“President. Xia Qingshu has never appeared again.”

“Then is he not suffering?”

“…Xia Qingshu has become a top-notch streamer. Not only is he a popular anchor, he is also an upcoming movie star/top streamer, and the second richest person in the world. ”

“??”

“President, Xia Qingshu is on a blind date. He will never pester you again! ”

“….”

“Secretary, you are seeing things, right?”

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怀崽跑路后我成了万人宠
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xiao Yi
xiao Yi rated it
July 25, 2022
Status: Completed
Hmm, fun and weird.

Fun because the MC is a bit s*upid and the hard to get ML is also a bit narcissistic, always felt like the MC loves him to the core.

Yet in the end, it was the ML who was crazily pursuing his wife.

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The MC as you see always treats himself as an outsider, a transmigrator. So he doesn't want to get involved with anyone at all, then the "bun" of course happened.

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Its a bit of a silly story, just to pass the time.
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Xiu_er
Xiu_er rated it
April 29, 2022
Status: Completed
While reading this I could feel some of my few braincells withering. Not sure how to feel about that. It's like when you walk close to water, be careful of splashes. I wasn't careful enough and thus could feel my IQ dropping to fit those of the characters in the novel.

Out of all the characters in this novel I don't remember one with a decent IQ/EQ or at least one whose IQ/EQ did not drop when in contact with the Gary Stu, milky cotton candy MC. The MC himself is... more>> already a questionable character. At first I was not sure whether he was just acting dumb and naive. I eventually I came to the conclusion that even if it was all pretend in the beginning, acting became reality and green tea became a genuine white lotus.

With so many braindead people the plot could only follow suit and became equally ridiculous. The Mary Sue halo was just too strong for the plot not to bend to highlight the charm of the MC at every turn.

Then there is the translation, too. Actually, I'm not sure whether the source text wasn't at fault here. But either way, wrong use of pronouns and minor inconsistencies also dampened the reading experience.

While I already knew that I was about to read a no-brain CEO chases wife BL novel, I did not expect how much of a brain-killing novel it was going to be. So anyone who is contemplating reading this, beware of the risk of losing your last braincells. <<less
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Kitix
Kitix rated it
April 26, 2022
Status: Completed
Honestly, this is not bad story, but also not that great.

There are lots of misunderstandings and delusions, some side-characters disappear into oblivion and never appear again. Chen Zhiyu is one of the most delusional male leads ever, I didn't hate him tho, at least he tried to change and reflect on himself by the last 15-20 chapters. As for the main character... I feel like his personality was almost non-existent, I got tired of reading how cute, perfect, small, etc. he was every chapter... He had good personality start, but... more>> it was overshadowed by his appearance descriptions. Him being pregnant was forgotten for 90% of the story, by the end of the story he is still only on 5th month and you won't see the baby.

As for other characters, I loved MC parents (adopted and real), they cared and stand by him. In comparison, ML family was the worst I ever read (in terms that they are not actually villains), really didn't like his mother. Love interests... they appeared and disappeared: He Chen promised to change and chase after MC properly, but he disappeared right after that; Shen probably appeared just to be compared to ML, but he had weird relationship with 2nd bro so idk at least make that side CP (?) ; Wen Shen... tbh he was the most 'normal' one, but it was hinted he may have double personality or anger problems (?), in the very last chapters it was hinted he didn't gave up and I was waiting for some bloodshed drama, but nothing happened, among all 'love interests' he was the most interesting character and had development potential. Also a bit sad that first brother small actor 'boyfriend' never appeared again, would have been cute side CP (imo) and maybe good friend for MC.
By the way, MC's profession of live-streaming was mentioned and done only once in whole series so don't expect it that much, it's mostly love story based on hilarious misunderstandings of ML.

As I said it's not bad read, but it was probably rushed and many loose ends. I would categorize it as light read and just enjoy delusional Chen Zhiyu (ML) brain circuits. <<less
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ciel_annn
ciel_annn rated it
February 8, 2022
Status: c13
I rated it 3 only because of the effort from the author and the translator. I don't know whether the fact that the narration seems so amateur to the point that it's ridiculous is due to the translation quality or the author's problem. Let me give you an example:

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The protagonist got head injury from the villain/cannon fodder and the policewoman who came to save him IMMEDIATELY diagnosed him with a BRAIN STEM INJURY. Can you believe that? Ok, let's just slide the fact that the person who is not doctor just has an CT vision and immediately diagnosed. But, the BRAIN STEM INJURY> HAHA. It's so hilarious. If you damage your brain stem, your autonomic nervous system which controls your vitals such as respiratory and circulatory system stops functioning. I can't contain my laughter. Please author who seems like a high school student, at least pay attention to your biology class.

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And a plot-wise, there are also a lot of ridiculous scenes. It won't even reach to the minor spoiler, so let me say it without spoiler tag. The narration pointed that the protagonist's family has a royal blood, and blah blah blah. But, I can't understand it well. It just sucks. And whoever saw combo of our protagonist's innocent, bright eyes and seductive face just falls in love with him. HAHA. So funny.

So in conclusion, it's ridiculous and I somehow enjoy reading it. Sorry, even writing this review, I can't stop laughing. HAHAHAHAHA <<less
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solticube
solticube rated it
February 3, 2022
Status: Completed
Story is good, however, you need patience while reading it.

There's not much drama going on and I hoped that there was an extra chapter with their
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family and future

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One thing I didn't like is that
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the MC was dense and at least had slight common sense

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. Sometimes his dense nature makes me want to hit him...

Either way a great story, I'd recommend people to read it if they're bored.
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judeiiro
judeiiro rated it
February 2, 2022
Status: c59
This isn't that bad but I personally cannot continue on 😂 It's a typical story of MC accidentally gathering a harem of suitors with his pure and dense head

It started off pretty fun with MC deciding to play dumb for his survival.... but he really became a silly white sweet boy =w= ... more>>
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MC is supposedly originally from a medical family and his mother's an actress. His family in the novel world is also the same. You'd assume he's at least some sort of smart but he just became a dense blockhead. I guess the host's brain really affected him huh

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and ML... gosh ML. I'm pretty sure he's the ML anyway
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I'm talking about Chen Zhiyu aka MC's baby daddy

He's so... ??? so annoying. one of those CEO MLs that just assumes MC should like him through thick and thin even though he has rejected MC. Though to be fair MC doesn't really communicate well either so it's on both of them

and the fact that ML gets so disgustingly jealous around MC, I can't take it anymore =口= someone just take him away!!!!

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weepingbadwolf
weepingbadwolf rated it
January 27, 2024
Status: Completed
It was so bad I wanted to give you a zero. But that's not possible. So I'll give you a one.

The synopsis is so fake 🤡🤡🤡🤡 none of the things listed there happens and it felt like the TL just made up something else for a novel that never happened (ofc this is not correct ❗❗❗

The start was enjoyable. It was like the start of something new and then you were felling "oh it's coming" "it's up next" "almost there" but then nothing. Black screen. It went downhill

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The boy Qingshu already transmigrated at the worst timing possible and was lying through his teeth fighting for his life saying that he was drugged, someone put him there in the MLs room, naked, but that's ok he likes the ML and admired him. And the ML (zhiyu) was like "oh his milky scent 😃oh he looks so young and innocent and pure and white 😃😃😃" and then they f*cked.

The next day he runs away, ready to never talk about it again. BUT THE ML WAS THE NEXT DAY IN HIS COLLEGE TRYING TO TALK TO HIM???? The ML had a pose like "I never lost my v**ginity bcs losing something is for losers" and for some reason he wanted to Qingshu do something about it???? As if he didn't ALSO lost his v**ginity (whats the big deal) ????

Qingshu was also very good doing the "oh I'm so dumb my IQ is like 60 please believe I'm so unintelligent 🤪🤪🤪" bcs in his previous life he was an actor and know how to act when people are difficult like this and he's been in the entertainment industry for years and when he wasn't working he was studying, that he got caught up in his act and by the middle of the novel he actually got the IQ of 60❗❗❗ oh he doesn't understand how human relationships are he never had friends oh he was so isolated 😪😪😪 come one bit*h pick a struggle 🙄🙄🙄

The ML Zhiyu is also so full of himself it's concerning???? The author doesn't know how to do a domineering CEO he just sound childish and a lot like a loser 🤭🤭🤭 he never listing the Boy, just do whatever he wants and the Boy has to work with it. The most of the novel he was throwing temper tantrums bcs the Boy didn't give him enough attention and wasn't liking his bu*t all the time.

The little villain is the Og!protag Xia Yubin who already lived this life and is a white lotus and was also throwing temper tantrums for some reason??? He had the idiotic demise "everyone likes Qingshu so I'll bring his downfall but failed and now I'm in prison"

The pregnancy plot is just in very few chapters also??? Like by the last chapter Qingshu was only four months.

The "mother in law" was also a awful character for everyone but in a way that he wants to have grandchildren so since HER SON WAS A CHILD she was already pestering him about this topic ❗❗❗

We got a lot of things that just was left and never touched again like:

1. Qingshu was in college and then dropped out (never talked about it again, no one says what degree he was doing, why it was said at the start that was a school)

2. The contract marriage his family of knights had between cousins

3. He got a job at MLs as intern, then though he was with cancer, never went to the job again, no one ever talked about it

4. He said that he wanted to become an actor (went nowhere

5. He said that he wanted to become a producer (also went nowhere

6. He became a streamer (did like 2 times and never touched the subject again

7. He never became the second richest person??? Rather the contrary, was at the very MLs mercy bcs he had no money (synopsis

8. He also never wanted the child and he really was about to sell the kid for 5billion

9. The ML never lost touch with Qingshu so the scene in the synopsis also never happened not even close

10. The second ML the actor Qingshu's mom introduced was way more cool

11. We got more plot about Qingshu cousing that was divorcing a scumbag and was a lyricist than the pregnancy (also her plot was more interesting too)

12. Idk don't remember anymore by the 75-is chapter I was just scrolling fast and reading few sentences and changing chapters so the nightmare would end.

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don't read this or you will become dumb as Qingshu <<less
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Marshmallow Skye
Marshmallow Skye rated it
October 5, 2023
Status: c19
I tried to read this. I really did. It's been less than 20 chapters. But I cannot handle even a page more of this soft baby eyed lemon milk shou whose skin squeezes out water. The plot is illogical. Maybe it gets better ahead but eh
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AnuBis28
AnuBis28 rated it
October 3, 2023
Status: c21
I'm done.. Don't trust the summery.. The story is beyond silly..

Most of the novels portray the shou as soft and fair and small.. Tell me why can't a tall, tanned and strong guy be a shou.. I don't understand why the shous have to be petite, cringy and weak asses..

MC here is soft and boneless, has watery eyes, smells like milk, talks like a baby.. What is he ??? A hybrid of squid and rabbit and other animals ??? Also milky smell can be quite nauseating when coming from a... more>> grown up dude's body..

ML is delusional.. Other side characters are just boring..

Anyway I'm outta here.. <<less
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Rinmoyi
Rinmoyi rated it
September 12, 2023
Status: Completed
The story was below average! There was lots of plot holes! Abrupt reasons deviate from logic or even normality, for example age of MC, ML, MC's brothers, real child of a MC 's previous family! There were abrupt ending for some characters, Then at last not a thing about MC's all suitors.
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Every character in novel was delusional, sometimes brain damaged, every single of them. They thought what want to didn't care about what's in front actually!!! MC wasn't "free-meal" so how could every single one like him in novel (no reason nothing just liked because of his face). Even for literally good person it isn't possible so how could it be for overly dumb MC. Only the villain had normal IQ most of the time, and his low IQ maybe the influence of MC. Everyone can use logic and brain when seeing villain's schemes but their IQ falls when they see MC.

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MC was sissy! He was perfect definition of "green tea". I don't think he had any smartness normally expect sometimes author thought to make him little normal human being. He was the dumbest MC I ever read. Well, it was mentioned "original body" of MC in book was mentally handicap before transmission so it's possible as only MC's soul transmigrate.

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ML was the definition of narcissist and delusional. Then at last he became hand-picked husband without any dignity. Is it even possible for a person of top chain lower their dignity to such extent just because he fell in love?!? ¯⁠⁠_⁠ಠ⁠_⁠ಠ⁠_⁠/⁠¯

And there was no romance or love. ML fell in love and MC got together just because it was convenient. ಠ⁠ಗ⁠ಠ Only thing liked about this novel is some funny lines and Xia Mei's story!ヽ (≧Д≦) ノ

Don't read if you have something other to read! Waste of time!!

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Inari Noctifer
Inari Noctifer rated it
November 17, 2022
Status: c40
Rating: 2.0

I thought I'll be satisified with this even if it's the usual trope but it's getting kind of annoying. I know it's necessary to make Xia Yubin suffer since he's the antagonist but along the story, I kind of pity him. His biological parents doesn't want him, his adoptive parents doesn't want him, he doesn't get anything in his name.

The MC is also annoying, so s*upid and at this point, he's able to get everything he has now not because of of his "logical" mind but because of his... more>> golden finger. I hate that so much, like he doesn't even need to lift his finger and everything's just go along the way that benefits him the most.

I expected him to be more logical especially when

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he became preganant, like why doesn't he tell it sooner!? And about his younger brother in his adoptive parents. After he moved out and left his house, who took care of him? His adoptive parents went to his grandparents house and now that he's not there, who the heck provided him food? I guess the you ger bro was too much of a side charac that the author didn't spare and single paragraph for his wellbeing

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There's so much plothole. I hate this story so much. I was waiting for the bun but I saw a review upstairs (when I decided to finally read the reviews because the story was getting too taxing) that

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The bun was not born.

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seasaltxx
seasaltxx rated it
September 26, 2022
Status: Completed
Its a cute enough story, goof for light reading. Tbh the title is quite misleading.

there's no running away involved, and even at the very end (at least of the translated not sure if there are extras) the baby was not born yet

despite the title, the pregnancy was ignored several times. I don't get how and why he'll hike up the mountain when he knows he's pregnant. People tend to be more cautious if they know they're not sure of the limits.

the emotional line was also quite lacking, its like MC... more>> doesnt like ML then MC reveals pregnancy, then suddenly MC also likes ML. There's no proper build up to the feels. What made him fall in love??

and also the synopsis happened like halfway to the story and there's a lot of fillers, other men who did not even make it to the end and has no significance at all. Even the part where Wen Sheng said he won't give up then he didnt appear anymore ????

aside from thay, the last chapter was quite sweet but its such a lacking ending <<less
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Mal12345
Mal12345 rated it
September 7, 2022
Status: Completed
One main problem I had with this novel that frustrated me to no end

was that the title and the description were kinda misleading. Although the book had its own perks. It was hilarious and I did enjoy it to a certain extent. Despite the very bad character development for all the characters the hilarity of some situations made my day. So I guess it wasn't that bad of a read.

The story did end extremely abruptly. Like the guy got to know the uke was pregnant in like ch 76 or... more>> something and then the story just ended with both the families meeting. Not only that but all the other love interests were just pushed aside without telling us what happened. I think this story could have used more chapters for a proper ending. Additionally it just felt like all the love interests including the male lead only liked the uke cuz he was extremely white and adorable, and how could I forget his eyes.

This novel took me 4 days to complete when I usually read such novels in a day. But a good read nonetheless if you're into the love interests kinda being in love with the face of the uke and the book being a little funny. Not only that but it was extremely annoying when the ukes IQ became like a 0 every time he met a gong. I mean wtf.

  1. I kinda felt bad for the adopted brother at the start and I think the author knew that so she just blackened him in an extremely weird way which in the end made every1 and of course me not like him. Maybe it's cuz I've read alot of QT and rebirth novels where the adopted brother is like the MC and you get to see how it was unfair from their pov. Hence I felt even more sympathetic for him.
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runenightshade
runenightshade rated it
September 2, 2022
Status: --
I need to write a review to remind myself not to read this novel lol. I dropped this before then randomly found it again. I was confused why the story is familiar but I don't remember finishing it. Now I know why 😅.

For a transmigrator who knows the plot. MC is shallow, hateful Mary Sue. He does not deserve all the things he received in this story. I also hate the ML's parents. Everyone here seems to have low IQs even the villain is kinda dumb.

Anyway sorry to those who... more>> liked it but I'd rather waste my time reading other novels. This novel has too many elements that pisses me off and I regret wasting my time with it. <<less
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TaekaixTaekook
TaekaixTaekook
August 3, 2022
Status: c50
It started well and then went downhill. The MC becomes more and more of a white lotus catching rotting peach blossom everywhere. There is a difference between acting dumb and being dumb. The transmigrated MC is so annoying, like each time he met a potential gong his IQ plummet to negative 50 while the rest of the time he act clueless but still has some smarts. I don't see much difference between the MC and the adopted brother, two side of a same coin. I rated 1 star for the... more>> work of the translator <<less
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Rain in the sunny morning
Rain in the sunny morning rated it
August 3, 2022
Status: Completed
Disappointed honestly. I'll summarise why in a few paragraphs.

first off the description says:

(“Secretary, Is Xia Qingshu still spying on my whereabouts every day? ”

... more>> “President. Xia Qingshu has never appeared again.”

“Then is he not suffering?”

“... Xia Qingshu has become a top-notch streamer. Not only is he a popular anchor, he is also an upcoming movie star/top streamer, and the second richest person in the world. ”

“??”

“President, Xia Qingshu is on a blind date. He will never pester you again! ”

“...”

“Secretary, you are seeing things, right?”)

Bro becomes 'a top-notch streamer', ' popular anchor' and 'upcoming movie star' when does this happen??? did I skip something?? And fr? 'second richest man??'

I think that the author must have wrote this and planned for this to be a few hundred chapters long but decided to drop it and give as a rushed ending because I'll tell you, that ending made me go 'that's it???' Coming from my heart, this novel is actually had pretty good potential. Just felt like the author wasn't in the proper state of mind when they wrote some of the part's because some moment made me go 'what the f*ck' out loud.

also when I read the description I thought that the ML's Mom sound's like a decent person, Wrong. Oh boy was I wrong. Their entire family must have been dropped on the head when they were a child (minus Ml) Like bro, yall brainwashing a child since he was young to have a son?? what the hell is up with them. You can brush it off as concern for their blood line but I legit found that weird. You sure the Chen parent's don't have problems??? Some character's can be so shameless in this novel, like omg just stop trying to break the law.

I hope the main couple have a daughter. <<less
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Daisy88
Daisy88 rated it
July 29, 2022
Status: Completed
never in my life I have read anything as absurd, and waste of time as this...i still regret reading this and also angry at myself for choosing to read it despite bad reviews... please guys save yourselves its like written by an 8 year old without rhyme or reason.

there is absolutely nothing likeable about this novel, neither story nor the characters.

in the end I really want to apologize to translators for giving such a bad review I absolutely respect you guys and I always commend your hard work and time.... more>> so I am really really sorry hope you guys will understand. <<less
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Bb_me
Bb_me rated it
July 17, 2022
Status: --
A lot of people surprisingly don't like this novel as much as I do. I'm not trying to defend it's evaluation overall in terms of plot, story, characters, etc. I myself think the novel's kinda idiotic at worst and mediocre at best, but I think the main reason why this novel isn't appealing to most viewers but is appealing to me is that I didn't take anything seriously while reading the novel. I didn't take the plot, story, characters interpreted as something someone would do rationally and instead just some... more>> over-exaggerated types of characters that can usually be found on reborn novels.

I'm not saying the story's good or bad, please rate it whatever you want to. I'm just giving advice if you ever want to TRY to enjoy this story. If you wanna enjoy this novel, I suggest reading this without taking anything seriously and treating it as a funny dumb story to pass the time. <<less
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Jun148weirdtroll
Jun148weirdtroll rated it
July 16, 2022
Status: c62
rating: 1.5/5

the beginning was enjoyable, but then the story starts progressing in a very weird way; people falling for the MC instantly, MC straying from his beginning character (he actually started to become like those annoying og MC in the og story of a rebirth/ transmigration book), ML being delusional and the og MC being so different from his character settings. I also disliked how the ml's parents are sexist and ml's mom bringing up some random things abt her youth with mc's parents is weird and makes her very... more>> unlikable. I don't like the way ml's mom assumes stuff very quickly without bothering to confirm. Mostly, the part that disturbed me the most is how the whole story started to get filled with potholes and bad transitioning. It gets tiring and hard to cope with by chapetr 40 somewhere. Overall, very disappointing <<less
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Akri
Akri rated it
June 29, 2022
Status: Completed
Sooooo many doubts!!!

I just won't give up on reading nonsens, really! ┬─┬ノ (º _ ºノ)

I finished this cuz I was just expecting it to go back on track, I was just rooting for MC to sudenly turn around and run away (cuz is in the title), have a baby (cuz is in the title) and become everyones favorite (cuz is in the title) !!!

Won't give away too much, but MC was awesome the first few chapters, he was smart, black bellyed, manipulative, money groober, excepcional actor, decicive, and well he had become one of my favorite MC's ever and then he got pregnant and the baby ate his brain, and he became wainy cry baby, naive, idiotic and just unberable.

ML was nice too (at least his background "persona" was cuz it was just out the window as soon as he and MC knew each other) it started going downhill pregressibly and there was no turning back.

Hated almost every side character except MC's mom and adoptive dad

The romance was not and it almost felt like stalking

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What happened to the actor superstar? Why was he sick? Wasn't he unwilling to give up? WTF with the 2nd brother? And with his bf? Was he his bf?! And 1st bro and his bf? And the villan! Gone just like that? ¯_ಠ_ಠ_/¯

Also the original story said ML was crazy for the villan and kill everyone right? Why? And why did he break the villans legs?

Plotholes! (༎ຶ‿༎ຶ

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Maybe I'm being too harsh on this, and maybe thats why there are so many mixed reviews but I was really desapointed by the progression of the story, it is tolerable and average romance novel, wouldn't recomend but if you really have nothing else to do you may as well try it.
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