to turn out and become a school tyrant was very funny

a bit annoying, but I’ve seen cases where MC was against Lord God and system, like QWFoD. As such it didn’t feel very novel.

They don't start a relationship until chapter 80+

How the 'rubic cube' and system world resolved. It was too perfunctory —for me. And too short.

Personally speaking, it was a shame that zzy's potential of being a great love rival and great supporting character went to waste, alas he had become a rather forgettable fodder character that was thrown away at the end of the story. If the author decided to make him keep his past-life consciousness, it would be a great addition to the story.

One thing that bugged me was the ending of the extra chapter, it felt too abrupt and should've been dragged out more so we could read further about the CP's college life; in other words, I just wanted more sweet moments of the cp in college (lol). Plus, I hope the English publication will fix the description of sy's brown-to-black-to-brown-again hair because I was also bugged by that.

MC transmigrated into a side character in a novel, he found the plot infuriating and the ML pitifull, so he decided to help ML avoid and kick thos scume that tormented the ML so much.

After MC woke up in the hospital and was confirmed healthy enough to leave (he is terminal ill with an unknown illnes, but MC doesn't feel the slightest bit sick and assumes that the illness was just imaginary creation for the novel plot with no actual effect) he was sent home and met the originals family who is very busy. He decided to use the excuse of knowing no one in A-City because of his long coma visit his grandmother and stay there to attend school there and get close to ML. MC intentionally, accidentally met ML when he encountered gangsters and called the police. In school MC prevented him from sitting next to the school bully who was intrested in messing with ML, when he didn't stop MC beat him up and took hiw school bully reputation. MC in his last live had marital arts training. And when MC was challenged by a group of students of the same school who wanted the title of school bully, he won and declared that he wasn't only a school bully but also a study god. Reason being his father had called him, they goight and made an unrefusable agreement of him (MC) having to get into the top 100 in the next test or else he had to return to A-City. If MC however achieved it he could stay and would recieve a one million worth watch for ML. Afterwards the school principal turned up and punished all who went to the roof to fight but MC got away running to get to ML (he knew ML was in trouble because of the plot and a text message by that scum?) who was called out by that scum + his group of followers (who wanted to r*pe or undress ML and make a video) but ML beat them up befor MC arrived. That scum also wanted to interfere with ML's announcement speech using his connection to replace him, but because MC has more powerful connections than him his plan failed.

MC also threatened/made some s*upid students who wrote disgusting words with gravity about ML's mother remove them.

MC is also an awsome online troll, who calls himself Your husband brother Yu. Many girls fell for his scum lines and became avid fans.

Truth or dare were they had to confess to the other or kiss? I don't know anymore.

They wet to an internet cafe and someone borrowed MC and ML couple accounts, a healer and a combat account (the names were cute and funny). When a student told a ghost story about the cafe and the lights suddenly turned of. ML ACCIDENTALLY kissed MC. Ahhhhh!

Sport festival, MC had to do the sprint and ML stood at the finishing line catching him. ML slowly guessed and investigated MC's past and analysing his present behaviour getting close to the truth. ML also occasionally teases MC with ambiguous sentences.

MC and ML get along super well~

Flashbacks: MC recently dreams more of the 'originals past'. Adult MC, take notice of a childhood acquaintance/friend = ML having a difficult time, because his family (who ML was head of for a few years and led the company to climb up high) tuned their backs on him and are trying to crush him and also two guys are crazily pursuing him after he turned them down (ML's in the novel MC read in the real world). He contacts ML after some thought, but ML was rather cold and silent, until ML asked him to step into his appartment and was suddenly surprise cabadeed against the wall and kissed! [Excerpt: He kissed briefly across his lips, tongue probing domineeringly into his mouth, hooking around his own tongue and teasing him skillfully.]

Afterwards MC was angry, ML placated by showing loneliness and so this awkward friendship lasted. MC didn't know why he kept this up, but couldn't ignore ML (who was at an all time low) and kept visiting that jobless and stay home guy. Until on day ML languidly asked him for a home since he couldn't pay his rent anymore. MC was confused about his feelings for his childhood friend. Pscho pursuer guy turns up and was fed dog food =a kiss initiated by MC, later tries to explain it was just an act of playing lovers and ML languidly asked if they haven't been lovers since the start!! Ahhhhh such a flirt! I just cant! Ahhh and this confused, blushing, awkward adult MC is also so cute!

Back to reality: ML is aware of his pst life.

MC's class was preparing fo a theatre act in the auditorium with MC being the director. After the performance he gets tricked and gets locked up in there on a cold Friday evening. He gets sick and discovers (through talking with the system) :

So there was the plot of <Gentle Control> in which Xie Sui was supposed to end up with Zhao ZiYu/called scum 3, and then in reality it couldn't happen because Xie Sui fell in love with Song Yu and shot Zhao ZiYu. Then, in this life 008 was put into Song Yu's body and sent Song Yu's soul into another world, but then his soul came back?

In the end ML returns to his family in city A and watches how his "family" tear each other apart. MC and ML confess to having memories of a past life + MC reveals the system, the "main god" and the OG plot of "Gentle Control ". After some drama we and MC find out:

Turns out the "main god" is some random dude who found the technology of a higher lost civilization and used it to steal luck from people in different worlds by garnering love and hate points. He puts many obstacles and tribulations in peoples lives so they can be more miserable. He/The systems create/s and follow/s a guideline like a novel with dog blood story (Gentle Control). They (MC and ML) overpowere the system and god with their stronger soul force?. They hastily reveal their relationship to MC's family and than they finish highschool and go to university.

END

At first, the story developed exactly as it was described; MC transmigrated into the book and met the system, which told him that he would play a minor role in this world. In 5 years, he would meet MC and help him forget past grievances. During these five years, he would be free and could act as he wished. There was only one rule: He shouldn't change the plot. MC, because he hadn't anything to do, decided, out of kindness, to help ML, who was having a hard time at this point. It doesn't count as not changing the plot, but because the system was absent, he just acted according to his will. But after he met ML, he slowly began to doubt everything the system told him. He had strange dreams and adapted too well to this new world; he also felt wonderful despite being ill, as the system claimed. So he became suspicious. From this point on, the story became more gripping. (And everything ended with a big plot twist.

It was a bit funny that ML knew about MC's feelings even before he himself realised what he felt. He was just waiting for MC to figure it out himself.

one thing that annoyed me is that..

when song yu was 5 yrs old, he was protagonist childhood friend before going abroad to treat his illness.

before the present song yu transmigrated. The real song yu. Got sick and die..

so I can conclude that song yu body was a sickly body coz he have illness way back childhood that is incurable disease before the present song yu transmigrated but the present timeline contradict

song yu was to fcking healthy. Which is different from the real song yu. I get that the real song yu die and MC just borrowing his body. He's using the body of the past song yu. So his body probably unhealthy and sickly. Yet there's no sign of sickly..

he's too badass aura, he's really healthy as f*ck when song yu appear in front of xie su. When it's not long of how he was discharged from hospital and need recuperating..

its too contradicting to my mind that it disturb my reading. I dont want to read anymore. Jeez.. I feel like its gonna bug my mind all the way thinking hes sickly while the present timeline didn't seem like that.