The story isn’t bad but I do feel like the foreshadowing could use some improvement. It gives MDZS and TGCF vibes but the mysteries just... more>> aren’t woven together as well. I also got 45 chaps in and the romance still hasn’t started. <<less

Minor editing issues. More importantly, not a very captivating or developed plot

Got all the way to chap 45 because I absolutely love the plot but it just wasn't developed well. It's just constant irrational hatred and when the misunderstandings are dispelled, it's not foreshadowed well, nor does it suddenly all make sense once the explanation is given. And I don't know if it's the translation or just the plot itself, there's constantly a bit of confusing for me as to what is going on. It's not enough that I can't generally understand the plot, but it is enough that there are details where I am confused by.... more>>

Also, I understand that websites need ads to make money but the number of ads on this translator's website is so obnoxious to the point that my ipad keeps restarting the page.  <<less

This has the whole sexualizing inters*x people trope which is absolutely gross,... more>>

The translator’s comments are also really obnoxious. Inserting your own reactions into every other paragraph is incredibly unprofessional. Comments from the translator, just like comments from an author, should only be said at the end, every time a translator comment is inserted, we’re jerked out of the story for an asinine comment like “lmaooo.” Absolutely unreadable. <<less

Inters*x trope again. Didn’t get far. Not interested in giving it a chance.

I thought this was historical… it is not.

Concept was amazing but feels badly executed as progression is too slow and the bodyguard is loyal to a fault. Translation also feels wonky and... more>> a tad confusing. Likely mtl that wasn’t fixed properly. <<less

Translation is slightly confusing. Read to chap 16 no clear plot so got bored