The FL overall was pretty likable, she was a very calm-headed character who understood the plot of the story as she WAS the author of the comic. It was usually cute when she thought of the people around her (especially the leads) as her children. I think the only thing that bugged me in this story was the FL's hidden power that she never really used after using it for two characters in the story, I.E her being able to see people's luck and how they would die. They never really bring this back and at most mention it from time to time but is never explained? Felt that it was such a shame that this was not expanded on as it would be interesting if it did! The FL was very funny and cute, Kinda had a Hannah Montanna moment with her switching identities. The relationship with her brother is adorable and I loved the interactions.

The ML is your typical iceberg, overbearing, yandere tyrant CEO. What I liked about the character was that although he was stubborn/was a bit pushy (pretty much in line with what you think of when you read about tyrant CEOs) and did not understand the meaning of personal space, he didn't anything inappropriate with the FL, at most hand holding (LOL). The ML was cute but overall that was all for me, he never really changes, and honestly, it's kinda sad that he barely speaks. his character was honestly kinda bland. I did like how he starts realizing that he's in love with the FL but it's more like "I can't imagine someone with her, it fills me with mu*derous rage" or "being with her makes me feel comfortable". The ML is very straight to the point and brunt about his likes and dislikes. I wished that the author had expanded more on why the ML is surrounded by an evil spirit/ terrible bad luck. It is never explained and honestly felt like a plot hole. something to explain how the FL gets better/ stops vomiting blood. (btw lmao only way to get better was to do the deed) Lastly, I liked the description of the ML, It was more on the refreshing side, I'm a sucker for traditional clothing so him in a Tang suit with Buddhist beads was very interesting,

Wow... there is a limit to how brain-dead a character is.. the OriFL is as basic as basic gets. Just foil for the FL and honestly get dealt with so smoothly that honestly forgot about her after she was dragged away. we get no pov after she is dealt with, just through a passing conversation. your typical jealous, hysterical/ brain rot cannon fodder

The brother was super cute and fluffy. Honestly loved the interactions between the FL and him. Liked the descriptions about him being a milk puppy following his sister. Thought that it was very cute that he is the FLs biggest fan and supporter.

My overall thoughts on this book was that it was very fun and entertaining but also a bit bland and tame. The story does not have much conflict and is honestly just the FL getting through the whole story. Although I loved the fluff/ sibling affection/somewhat of a romance. There are just too many things that aren't explained and the epilogue does not help at all and most makes the ending even more lackluster because it does not answer anything. I felt that the characters were a bit 2 dimensional, they never had any development throughout the story except the ML at the very last bit at the ending (which honestly didn't change anything because he was still the same). A lot of things aren't explained well like 1. Why is the FL able to see the luck/ deaths of people? 2. Why is the ML always surrounded by such a dense cloud of bad luck/evil spirits? 3. Why did the OriFL become a reincarnator?? Although I had a lot of unanswered questions, this book was still pretty fun to read!