would have continued with what happened after they won and how they handled being the first out and gay couple in Chinese esports if not in international esports that didn't also have to quit because of it but no the moment they win the last match in the international competition it goes straight to the epilogue which was nice but kinda bland.

His parents are both doctors and hella busy so he and his sister grew up mostly by themselves, I kind of wish they explored this more because it would have been really interesting but it's mentioned less than the amount of fingers I have on one hand and only very briefly.

With the exception of like Brother Xiao and maybe the manager if I stretch it but those are almost purely to support the main characters, like the MC noticing the Brother Xiao was trying really hard to get over his injury and feeling bad about it, etc.

Also like, gotta ignore some of it because I'm pretty sure that not that many teams just up and surrender after one game, one was already one too many but I think it was like 3 times? Bro you only lost 1 game of 3 and you're giving up just like that? Wouldn't happen irl in a competition like that.

This kid is majoring in law and still somehow passing while also training but still less than the team but is still improving at astonishing speeds which I get is because he's a main character but still. It was nice when he finally took a year off of school but he honestly should have just done it earlier because there really wasn't any meaning to him staying in school (it's only barely mentioned other than him complaining about exams that he has zero time to study for and he's only gone to class one week in an entire semester and a few other scenes like that. There's very few scenes in general involving his university after it's first introduced). but I guess the author wanted to show off how quick his growth was anyway despite these setbacks? Who knows.

speaking of that guy's major, why is he still only a livestreamer after getting a law degree in the epilogue? I'm not dissing on the job at all but the MC has literally said in the novel that if not for making money why would he be a livestreamer and that he liked learning about law so like???? It just doesn't match up with previous novel chapters which kind of made me upset.

Look, the MC is very straight (or thinks he is lol) and that's like a running gag in the entire story (his nickname is NoHomo because that's what his original livestream was named) and he's so painfully naive to the ML's approaches (which btw we don't ever get to know exactly WHY the ML likes him, he just... does? Just like "oh a cute puppy w chunni syndrome" and bam insta love). But the ML doesn't even properly confess he just like kisses the MC and is like "you should know what I mean you have until 6 PM to give me an answer" bruh if it wasn't for the plot and the sister's manipulation in the background the MC really would not have gotten it at all.

Which speaking of manipulation, YEAH I disliked the sister and ML going behind the MC's back to make them get together. I get that it's supposed to be funny and like aww look the sister is so supportive, such a great matchmaker, but like the MC has said previously that he was straight and doesn't like guys and she's just like "haha nah ur gay imma nudge you in the right direction". Like yeah ok he's never liked any girl before but that doesn't mean he's automatically gay what's with that logic? It irked me that when he was confused when the ML just kissed him outta nowhere (for him at least, literally idk how he's so dense) and the sister is legit just like "Well if you're not averse to the kiss it must mean you like him!" like sorry what that's not how this works, at all. But guess what, the MC, dense idiot he is, believes it and is like "yup I'll date you" to the ML. Other than that though I quite liked the sibling relationship between the MC and his sister, it was pretty funny and sweet but the way she tried to get him with the ML was kind of aggravating and I can't get over it.

xenophobia here, its funny anyone the MC meet theres hostility there even with suppose friendly matches, it feel like one dimentional character villains