this is very importnantno but for real dont click this if you didnt read the endingi really cried when everybody thought FL was dead. I kept saying that she cant die after all but my eyes didnt agree with me.

I'm looking at you Pingtong Accademy breathing techniques.

So the main adversary at the beginning are the star beast (I would like to call them the Galatic Menace, but that just me). They are biotech monsters with partial intelligence. At first they kinda of feel like any other alien/beast invasions. But their might and ferocity started to leave a mark on me. The story really does feel like not only a technological arms race, but a biological arms race.

The mechs are pretty cool as well. They are made from the corpses of star beast. So the story has a nice transition from the weak mechanical mechs at the start to the more biological mechs of the mid point. However since the mechs aren't describe the best all the times, you have to piece this information together in an uncomfortable way.

There is also magic, well it's not called magic, but there is a magic system. They call it perception, and it allows the characters to perseve and control biological and mechanical process. It's a very limited magic system, but still cool anyway. Most people are only skilled in using perception in certain ways. Controlling mechas, creating mechas, and commanding other mechas. This goes a bit further since the difference vetween a mecha and a stat beast is practically null. Of course the MC also has one of the highest perceptions in the whole story and can use perception in two ways. Because of course she does.

I loved it when she made her friend group as shameless as her. Even the teachers saw her changing her friends to become shameless and thick skinned.

I don't need to shed tears again. I really thought she was going to die and stay dead.

Wei San made them pay her if they wanted to sleep in her room. It even caused rumors. Good times, good times

The Fire of The Empire did happen

Wei San is infected. Infected by what? This black mist that infiltrated the Federation. The older generations like the famous mecha masters and the Independence Army tried fighting against it. Wei San got infected due to that batch of nutrient drinks that was dumped out on her star. Her body then lowered her perception automatically to protect her against the black mist. So if you think she's getting stronger, then no. She was already strong, but had to become weak to protect herself.

The black mist is something that can take control of a person. It can infiltrate a person's body, only if they agree. The black mist will take control of their host. The black mist strives to become 3S so it targets people with high perceptions.

When they were on that planet that became closed off. Like there was a big spore mushroom at the end. I think it was the forest. I loved it when Liao Runing kept her in control by offering star coins every time. And omg what happened to Ying Chenghe when he offered mud to his cousin was so sad (around chapter 190)

Instead of transmigration, she could have learned some skills from the old man and simply have a passion for engineering

The entire tournament arc doesn't make sense from a motivation perspective and why does she even continue to go to school after earning enough money from the underground arena.

At the black factory, I have to say that I found her action of dismantling other people mecha is very impolite and too rude! She feel so heartbroken over every scratch on her own mecha, but she will dismantle other's mecha during the duell! She won't benfet anything of this, you know! She won't be able to study that no matter what while she fight others inside the ringe, so her action is very very bad!

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She reamemberd those who made her nearly lost her life when she was a child, but she just hated the blond hair man and was affiction towards the balck haird man?? How can you discribe this? How do you explian it?!
A normal person, when he see two people caused his near-to-death' exprience and even after that they left him fend for himself alone and gone without even looking at him after what they did to him, shouldn't he hate both of them? Why would he hate one and like the other whithout any any reason? It's not like one of them was nice to her or that she came to know him before or after!
Or is't just because the author want to hate the blond and like the black, without any logice? Well, it seems like that, as most of the novel! :D

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Another example, an interstellar age where they have even starships... etc. all the miilitery there don't even have a gun?! They don't have any- any hot weapons, and all the soldiers have to use cold old weapons, like sowrds, daggers, spears and so on!!! Please, author!