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Renegade Immortal
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5 | 59% (682 votes) |
4 | 17% (194 votes) |
3 | 11% (128 votes) |
2 | 6% (69 votes) |
1 | 8% (88 votes) |
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13 Books / 2088 Chapters (Completed)
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All Time Rank: #44
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Monthly Rank: #367
All Time Rank: #159
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Links are NOT allowed. Format your description nicely so people can easily read them. Please use proper spacing and paragraphs.Wang Lin is a very smart boy with loving parents. Although he and his parents are shunned by the rest of their relatives, his parents always held high hopes that he will one day become someone great. One day, Wang Lin suddenly gained the chance to walk the path of an immortal, but found that he only had mediocre talent at best. Watch Wang Lin as he breaks through his lack of talent and walks the path towards becoming a real immortal!
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One entry per lineHain Ölümsüz
Tiên Nghịch
Xian Ni
XN
الخالد المتمرد
仙逆
Tiên Nghịch
Xian Ni
XN
الخالد المتمرد
仙逆
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Date | Group | Release |
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04/19/15 | Flower Bridge Too | c57 |
04/19/15 | Void Translations | c56 |
01/21/16 | Wuxiaworld | c56 |
01/20/16 | Wuxiaworld | c55 |
04/19/15 | Void Translations | c55 |
01/19/16 | Wuxiaworld | c54 |
04/19/15 | Void Translations | c54 |
04/19/15 | Void Translations | c53 |
01/14/16 | Wuxiaworld | c53 |
01/13/16 | Wuxiaworld | c52 |
01/12/16 | Wuxiaworld | c51 |
01/07/16 | Wuxiaworld | c50 |
01/06/16 | Wuxiaworld | c49 |
01/06/16 | Wuxiaworld | c48 |
01/06/16 | Wuxiaworld | c47 |
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There simply isn't much to him. He is supposed to be intelligent and stubborn, but there isn't anything else to him. Even after more than a 1000 chapters, he feels like a stranger most of the time, especially when he shows emotion (which happens maybe once or twice every few hundred chapters). I think he would be much better suited to being part of the 'lead cast' or protagonist's best friend, actually. He's also very cautious, which sounds great on paper, but in actuality it often leads to uninteresting conclusions.
There are many mysteries and 'adventures' the main character goes through, but ultimately, the author rarely builds upon what is already there. He introduces new concepts, new artefacts and abilities, while old ones are reduced to honourable mentions. Explanations about how things work are usually just vague nonsense, which is supposed to give off a feeling of mystique. With that said, it is in line with the whole theme of the novel, so some might not find it to be a flaw.
I'm not sure if this is due to differences in language and culture, but most of the things characters say or think sound like a parodied version of some ancient speech, which is perhaps fitting. There also isn't any dialogue at all, as pretty much everything is resolved through a show of power.
The author will often 'fix' a plot hole by saying it was a clue to something greater. He also often throws around clues to future mysteries without planning which he uses once he's come up with a use for them. I could be wrong about the clues, but that's how it seems to me. With that said, this is not necessarily a bad thing, as a webnovel is pretty likely to develop plot holes due to quick pace of writing.
In my opinion, this is the biggest flaw of this novel. For example, when a character gets angry, their eyes shine with fury; when a character is supposed to be lustful, their eyes shine with lust; when they feel resentment, their eyes shine with resentment. And so on, and so forth. These descriptions are often unnecessary, as characters can show their attitude through actions or dialogue, but that pretty much never happens.
2. The main character is done very well at the beginning a child without talent for cultivation wanting to be a cultivator, whilst having a devil whispering into his ear to become one himself. 3. The character personality is great and could be witnessed strongly changes; innocent child, somewhat scheming youth, a youth against killing innocents, youth forced to commit crimes to survive etc eventually a brutal killer after which acheivig the goal which forced him to become a brutal killer he decided to walk a normal path where he wouldn't kill unless it was absolutely necessary. As for MH he had some good developments but then became ret*rded again after around c700 which lost my interest at that point but with this, I read somewhat ahead and it keeps getting better!! 4. Cultivation is more difficult as well as has more complications and other aspects.
5. Romance done somewhat well as you will notice around the beginning of 200s as well as around the beginning of 300s as they are expanded on... Well whether you like it or not but you have to know 1 important factor by the time WL was 200 he didn't kill many at most 1 thousand as for MH when he was 200 he killed 100 thousand so when you say that WL is a brutal killer and MH is a cool and nice guy think about it this the fact that by 200 years old MH killed hundred times that of wang Lin by 500 let's not even compare that... because it's huge a difference as MH is mu*dering brat that doesn't have any proper character development as compared to Wang Lin
The MC creates an avatar which is supposed to be able to live 30 yrs, however after 40+ yrs the avatar is still fine.
The descriptions of a breakthroughs sometimes span across multiple chapters and those chapters usually are fairly lengthy and painful to read.
MC is an idiot, he has a certain capacity for learning AND he is perceptive, HOWEVER I sh*t you not he screws up like 10 breakthroughs.
MC has a ancient artifact that let's hm train in a sortof timechamber. Half of the time he doesn't remember and wastes his lifetime in real world instead.