Can’t Straighten My Back

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Cheng You opened a bar in the city and worked until 5am every day. Across from him, a beautiful woman opened a breakfast shop that opened at 5am every morning.

Cheng You’s subordinates knew that he would always go home and sleep after work and never had the habit of eating breakfast.

However, suddenly one day, after finishing work at 5am, their boss would run to the shop across the street every day.

The subordinates were curious and asked him, “Boss, what’s so good at the shop across the street that you’re risking your life to go eat there for an hour or two every day?”

Cheng You thought about the promiscuous woman who had been all over him the day before and replied, “p**sy.”

He was going to eat the shop owner’s p**sy.

(It’s a story about a rough guy bar owner vs. a lustful woman breakfast shop owner, a one-on-one relationship, both still virg*ns~)

Tags: Simplified Chinese / High s*xual Content / One-on-One Relationship / Heteros*xual / Sweet Story.

About the Title: This phrase 直不起腰(H) is a slang term that is often used to describe feeling physically tired or sore after engaging in s*xual activity, particularly in the lower back area. The English translation of this phrase is “can’t straighten my back (after sex)”.

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直不起腰(H)
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midori_13
New midori_13 rated it
May 15, 2024
Status: c18
Normally I always finish the novels I started reading, even when I don’t like the plot very much.

But I’m sorry. This novel was very hard to read. I had to stop.

The story in my opinion was about a chauvinist bar’s owner x an escort breakfast store’s owner.

... more>> Besides, normally I classify the smut novels in different types.

Smut novels that have a plot and occasionally some s*x scenes, or Smut novels that the whole story is practically revolved around s*x.

This novel is the second type. s*x scenes started from the beginning and in a lot of chapters.

Normally I don’t like that second type of smut novels of constant erot*c scenes, so here is a reminder if you don’t like those stories either. But if your goal is to read straight smut, then this story is for you.

But what made me stop reading the novel was the main characters.

Alert, a bunch of spoilers:

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The male lead was a chauvinist, second rich generation bar’s owner and the female lead was practically a escort (in my opinion) breakfast shop’s owner.

I’m sorry, I don’t want to be rude, it’s just that I discord about the other reviews that say that the female lead was pitiful.

She was poor, yeah, she was poor

She had a low level of education, yeah, she had a low level of education.

But poverty and low education doesn’t mean lack of character. It’s even the opposite. I think a poor person with low education can be very hardworking and righteous, since everything they have is thanks to a lot of effort.

Also, the male lead was chauvinist? Yeah, he was.

To prove that, look at the parts of the novel below:

The chauvinist male lead:

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If someone didn’t know any better, they would have thought she was a street prostitute, selling breakfast while dressed in a tight fitting spaghetti strap dress that was very short and barely covering her bottom. (First impression of the male lead Cheng You)

“You dress so provocatively, aren’t asked to be touched? You dress like this on purpose to attract customers, don’t you have any sense of crisis? Have you ever seen anyone who runs a breakfast shop dressed like you?” (Speech of male lead to female lead, a domineering man)

He was at a loss.

Because she wasn’t worthy the money, since she asked for more 80, 000 yuan. (After male lead borrowed her money)

Despite I particularly not liking to use revealing clothes, I think think that women have the right to dress whenever they like. They might like sexy clothes because they feel good about it. And not to call attention of the opposite gender. But men after seeing women dressed provocatively always thinks that these women are giving a green signal to be sexually harassed.

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While about the female lead, I felt that she (Lin Cheng) acted like an escort not because of the way she dressed, but because of the way she behaved:

Spoiler

Female lead friend advice:

“Lin Cheng, according to what you said, he’s handsome, has a good family background, good figure and is a big boss. This kind of man is not lacking in women at all, he has played with countless women, and is probably just interested in playing with you for a while. So you have to be tough and get a house from him first. I heard that the break up fee for city people is quite high, if worst comes to worst, you can just get pregnant with his child and let him pay for the abortion.” (Throwing up. A fetus, a life, to exchange for money)

Female lead didn’t say anything, so we can see that she agreed with the friend’s suggestion.

Later female lead asked her friend:

“I’m a little scared. I feel like he’s a good person. He even installed an air conditioner for me today. Do you think it’s not good to fake a pregnancy and ask him for money later?”

Female lead thought:

She had only slept with him yesterday, and today she was asking him for money. Would he suspect her intentions?

She asked for 30, 000 yuan. Even if that money was to be sent to her grubby money family.

Lin Cheng automatically thought that since he had given her the money and she didn’t need to repay him, so she let him have him way and have s*x with him. (That’s the way of an escort. No, sorry... I think I’m being rude to the escorts and even being rude to the prostit**es. Since that’s the way they have to survive. And they make very clearly that they are doing that for money. But in the case of this female lead, she didn’t make clear that she started sleeping with him to get money. Besides, her goal was to mislead him with pregnancy)

She (female lead) assumed he (male lead) wouldn’t dare to come back, afraid of being entangled with a money sucking vampire. But here he was. This unexpected turn surprised Lin Cheng...

Female lead thoughts:

She had seen a few movies and heard that men liked it when women were vocal in bed, whenever those women were genuinely pleasured or faking it. (That’s so degrading to all the female gender. So women had to pretend to have pleasure to satisfy men in bed?)

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Lily.rose
New Lily.rose rated it
May 5, 2024
Status: c1
First, translation is great! Props to the translator!

second, the plot...... more>>
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its very.. misogynistic. I felt so bad for the FL. She had a low self-esteem throughout the story and it never really changed. She grew up poor, only had junior (?) school education, had to work to feed her Money hungry family. She has the worst mother who literally want to sell her daughter for a few bucks. So girl is just trying to keep her head low and survive. So I understood her decision to try and be with a rich man. And it wasn't like she was asking for money for herself. Her mother was threatening her. So I just overall felt bad for her.

The ML was a misogynistic ass. I get it he's Rich so he gives her money. But I never felt like he loved her. It was always just lust between the two. They never exchange words of love. Ever. He wouldn't let her work. When she tried to earn some money, he constantly harassed her to the point she had to quite early. She herself feels like that she has lost her individuality. And this was never address in the plot. Author just makes her pregnant and brushes under the rug. She does all the housework and he watches video games. He forces her to do things she's visibly uncomfortable with, but she obeys him because she scared of making of angry (this was so distasteful).

and don't started in the r*pe. And it was r*pe. He was angry. And every intention of hurting her. She could even say no because she was so scared. Tried of authors romanizing r*pe.

gave my points just the translation.

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