Frankly, there's too much superfluous dialogue and descriptions, and the way the protagonist acts and reacts in situations feels unnatural for someone who's supposed to have been a battle-hardened knight in their past life. I'd expect a more calm and composed attitude, but instead his reactions are too exaggerated.

The combat so far is also rough, and it suffers from the aforementioned problem of superfluous dialogue, with it being interjected into a fight between two people trying to kill each other despite neither character having the leisure to do so.

I don't... more>> have much expectations that things will get better, so I'm dropping it here. I'd only suggest reading it if you're in desperate need a time killer. <<less

Did not make it far. He's supposed to be some great warrior but he comes off as an edgy preteen with middle school syndrome. Plus, I completely agree with the other reviewer. There's weirdly too much dialogue. Like there is a paragraph explaining and then the MC has to speak out loud to no one to show that the narrator was narrating something true. And then there's just so much detail in how he steals things but he's not a "trailblazer, " the world is just too emo.