CONS:

• very confusing (honestly one of the most confusing stories i've ever read idk if this is the fault of the author or the translator)
• i have no idea who was talking to who

PROS:

• I'm a sucker for stories like this where the fiance can't help but gape because he was wrong all along (serves him right!)

Also, I think there were more than one pair of twins but I'm not sure.

The ending made no sense to me too.

Meh. It says in the description that it's a fad story concerning engagement annulment, and you can tell that's what the author was thinking when they wrote it: a story to follow the current fad of indignant falsely convicted villainesses and their turned around fall-to-ruin scenes. It's written so poorly, it takes a while before you even realize who is telling the story in 1st person. That's the only interesting part; it's not the false villainess, but some random dude (and not a love interest) who happens to be a... more>> twin, for no discernible reason, as the 'plot', and I do use that term lightly here, doesn't require such a thing at all. Honestly, I'm pretty sure the writer just had a thing for Hikaru and Kaoru from OHSHC.

Long story short, this felt more like a middle schooler's first fanfiction than a proper story. But, hey, we've all read those and gotten some enjoyment out of them, so give it a shot. It only takes 5 minutes to finish, anyway. <<less

I think this story could be better if the author made it clear from whose POV the story's told and also the background of people who told the story. If not, it'll become so confusing to read. But the ending was still considered satisfactory because the cheating bast*rd got dumped by his fiancee in the end.

It's great tbh, It's not confusing.

seems like all went well, but truly, it sure was confusing for me to read this at first. I had to start from the top again at some points to know whose POV I was even reading. But I think a good story at how they unveiled that liars lies.

Truly speaking... I was really confused.

It took me a long time (as much as a short story can provide) to realize who was telling the story.

In addition, the end had no impact. But I must say that there were 2 interesting things about the way this story was written:

1. The storyteller was neither the supposed Villainess nor the Heroine, much less a love interest.
2. The "Let's break up our relationship, since you can't even try to hear me out" thing. (I loved her attitude).

But the last one is probably because I love... more>> when Cheat Bastards go to Karma Coffee Shop and have what they deserve. lol <<less