Kon’yaku Haki Suru Kawari ni,-ka to wa en o Kira Sete Itadakimasu

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The daughter of Duke Senette, Lucia Sennete, engaged to the second prince, Randall, was having her engagement annulled at the Royal Magic Academy’s graduation commemoration party.

Lucia was condemned with the sin of bullying her step-sister and was thus expelled from the Ducal Household… No she is the one who is going to abandon them. This girl is holding a secret that none of them know….

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In Exchange for Annulling the Engagement, Allow Me to Cut Ties With My Family.
婚約破棄する代わりに、家とは縁を切らせていただきます。
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Recommendations
Common Sense of a Duke’s Daughter (4)
Konyakuhaki ni Zettai Kioku de Tachimukau (3)
I Will Quit the Entourage of the Villainess (2)
Albert Ke no Reijou wa Botsuraku wo go Shomou desu (1)
An Otome Game’s Burikko Villainess Turned into a Magic Otaku (1)
Hakushaku Reijo ha Chito Tensei Mono (1)

Latest Release

Date Group Release
12/13/16 Incarose Jealousy MTL part2
12/13/16 Incarose Jealousy MTL part1
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Twilight Reverie
Twilight Reverie rated it
December 13, 2016
Status: Completed
Not a bad short story. All the required elements are present, the characters have some level of depth, and there is a basic plot that is described throughout the narrative. That being said, I feel there are far too many elements for the length of the story.

Characters, situations, and plot developments are thrown in the reader's face one after another, leaving no time to digest the content. This results in the story feeling rushed, as if it's riding the drawn out peak of a conflict. Additionally, because the narrative begins... more>> with that peak it feels as if much of the story is missing. It would have been much better if the story began a tad bit slower, and if it had been two to three times longer. As it is, this work is mediocre at best. <<less
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Kumarae
Kumarae rated it
February 23, 2017
Status: part2
I really like this story because main character really calm and use her moves on right time. See another review, I feel that its should not take serious and put low rate because of that. Its only short story and not expect to have good background details about magic. But there really good ideal plot if in long run but sadly its short story. Its really cute and simple short story. So not be avoid read this because of another reviews.
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slay_mithos
slay_mithos rated it
January 14, 2017
Status: part2
Fairly good overall, but as Twilight said, it contains way too many things, compacted into the same space, making things messier than it needed.

For example, magic could very well not have been introduced at all, it serves only on 3 minor points but adds too much complexity without explanations (the character has at least 3 elements, no actual casting involved either, it's just "magic just because it's convenient for plot reason").

Most of the cast are simpletons, especially the "bad guys" that are complete moron despite supposedly being from influential backgrounds,... more>> the adults among them are even more dumb.

Spoiler

The father and mother are supposed to be high nobles, but they go along with the "public defamation" plot of the daughter, with no regard to things like etiquette and public image, which is usually a big no for nobles.

They don't even try to make it seem like they were not part of the plot, or that they wanted to resolve this more quietly either, being very happy erasing the person they saw as an eyesore.

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If this was a bit more worked on, it could have been a nice short story, like plenty others, but as it stands it is sadly a fairly mediocre one based on an interesting (although not quite unique) idea. <<less
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kidkat7
kidkat7 rated it
November 10, 2018
Status: Completed
A cute short story and a not too bad female MC. Probably too short for any plot development.

It would be much better off as a one-shot manga.

Spoiler

A cool handsome female MC with hidden identity & abilities as a Knight commander. That's what I like and I would love to see her illustration.

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Croc
Croc rated it
February 7, 2018
Status: Completed
The short story was good. It had interesting characters with intriguing encounters and backstories. The story mainly centered around how the MC was getting accused and her clearing her name. Although I enjoyed it, I would have liked to read more about the MC's development and encounters. I also feel like if the author wrote more about the MC's development, it would clarify a lot of things to the readers that weren't apparent in these two chapters.
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kari
kari rated it
January 11, 2018
Status: part2
It's a good short story.. think of it as reading from simply the confrontation & ending part (with some info about how it reached here), rather than the prologue+story development.

If the author wanted he/she could totally continue the story in a flashback format... fanfiction could be made too... this ones actually perfect for creating fanfiction.. :)
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