Doom Lord

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The world had started doomsday, and I struggled for a year, before I died under an enchanted beast’s claw. Heaven has given me another chance, back a day before the end happen. Will I be able to change my fate, and that of my loved ones? Now, I will start my journey on becoming the strongest on the planet that the Gods have changed into a game world.

Doom Lord average rating 4/5 - 207 user ratings
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Doomsday Lord
Lord of the End
Tận Thế Lãnh Chúa
末日領主
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Slimikyi
Slimikyi rated it
May 24, 2016
Status: c856
So somebody finally decided to try to translate this.

I rounded up to a 3 for 'I like it'. I am feeling generous today.

It has the typical reincarnation into the past in an apocalyptic scenario. But the twist is that it is 99% integrated as a mmorpg/city building game. My favourite aspect is the city building and upgrade part.

There is a main class for killing stuff and a secondary class for crafts. There are also unique classes and unlockable classes for the public too.

It is fun.
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But there are issues. The author is plain TERRIBLE with romance and endings. I read his previous work and it is just initimacy with a single potential lover. There are some signs of crush or favourness but that is all. The endings, this and the previous novel, ended very abruptly. It felt like he lost interest in continuing but did so only to finish it.

His previous work:
He wrote another novel that was also game-like but with the three kingdom theme. It had the SAME style, half ass romance with excuses and rushed poorly written ending.

He literally had like no romantic scenes with the girl. The girl just waited for him and waited for him and waited till the last chapters. And then, their supposedly mutual feelings are known and accepted. So when the novel was ending, the author crammed their "romance" in like two lines. They got married and lived happily ever after.

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In short, it had a:
1. Fun start.
2. Decent and enjoyable progress.
3. Declining or deteriorating climax.
4. Shitty end.

Lastly, whoever named this as 'Doom Lord' should just take a shotgun and just start shooting his/her feet then legs then between the legs then the stomach then the chest and finally, the head. This 'translator', aka butcherer, turned a world saviour into a demonic lord. <<less
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clementtng
clementtng rated it
May 17, 2016
Status: c40
40 chapters in the raws. The story is ok with nothing mind blowing nor anything different. It's your typical time travelling with old memories changing future plot.

Would not recommend reading the "translated" English version as it is a mtl with 0 editing and quite a bit of information is either misrepresented or missing entirely.
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Erobos
Erobos rated it
May 15, 2016
Status: c1
The plot is good, that's what attracted me, sadly its like xxw prior editors came by. The 4 stars is solely plot wise.
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amelya85
amelya85 rated it
September 11, 2016
Status: c48
It's game world mixed with apocalypse and second chance. I really like this types of genre so i'm giving it 5 star. The story is moving quite quickly and interesting. The mc is using his previous life experience to get territory and I can't wait till the territory get bigger. It's too bad he doesn't have any family as it will be more interesting if he does.
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Guymaioh
Guymaioh rated it
September 3, 2016
Status: c40
This is a very good survival novel with the typical character who manages to go back in time, the catch is, it's not by 30, 20 or 10 years, but just 1 - which in fairness is really not that long, however it allows the protagonist to have one hell of a head start.

The MC is astute and understands that he's only going to have an advantage initially so he does everything in order to get as many thanks to prior knowledge!

I think, hope and believe this novel will... more>> get better after the 1st year is up - then we'll see what's up ^^ <<less
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SunsetChaos
SunsetChaos rated it
August 25, 2016
Status: c40
Better story and more realistic than God and Devil World at least. I actually like this more than that, even though they're similar stories. This MC doesn't make retarded decisions/actions. And most importantly, less trash characters than in GDW. In fact, I don't think there's any so far.

I was actually surprised on how readable the translation was, given how so many people kept mentioning it, it made me expect it to be as bad as so many of those poorly edited MTL. However, I do agree that the translator... more>> butchered some of the words and sentences.

For example, "Each lifting a small order, enhance magic attack by 3%"

WTF? How did you even translate to something like this? It's obviously supposed to mean each increase in order, aka level/rank up. These errors happen a lot. <<less
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Senior Brother
Senior Brother
September 9, 2016
Status: --
A promising story at first, interesting background building, characters until the apocalypse that is. Suddenly the author abandon everything. whether it's drama, or characters. it just full of killing monster, and the characters is just yes man, exist only to make up the numbers population of the city or town that mc build.

It's like the author fantasy in his own wonderland.
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craBebe
craBebe rated it
August 27, 2016
Status: c41
This is your typical "survival apocalypse with rpg elements" novel with the added twist that there's a solid city building element tacked on. I get the feeling that the majority of the bad reviews are coming from the poor translation, and that's warranted. The first 20 or so chapters are really rough, and even at my current point there are still quite a few errors popping up, but grammatical errors aside I'm still really enjoying the read. What saves this novel is the city management aspect, I absolutely love base... more>> builders and this novel manages to scratch that itch better than most other novels out there. It pretty much reads as a city building mmo and that's basically it.

If you're looking for basically any of the elements they talk about in a writing class (plot, character development, world building, etc) you're not going to find it here. You will however, find a pretty entertaining city builder read. So if you like upgrades, building construction, recruitment, city defense, territory expansion, and a whole myriad of RPG elements, you'll probably enjoy this read. <<less
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sal
sal rated it
July 10, 2016
Status: c25
Doom lord feel like an interesting story. I like the skills and i will really like to see how the story unfolds. The character of having a second chance is interesting. If you are looking for a kingdom building novel this one shows a lot of promise.
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Llamia
Llamia rated it
June 5, 2016
Status: c15
The grammar and syntax has vastly improved since c3 I think? But it improves and it is worth reading. Okay, we all know he time travels and has a second chance. Based on that, it has town-building where the MC gathers his close friends and some strangers in order to ensure all of their survival by getting stronger and developing the town that will help strengthen them. He starts off well before anyone else, so we know he might be extra OP in the future, but I like it.
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Dream Seeker
Dream Seeker rated it
May 25, 2016
Status: c10
Though at first glace the premise is promising and should be a thrill, Ii's subpar work of an author of an lesson on bad writing along with translation that does not for it. Why minor inconveniences can be ignored such bland usage of English is most disappointing aspects of in this series It's at the level of "I walked the dog" and not "I walked the blue dog". As the reviews below say, this is most boring piece of work.

I do not recommend this series, for anyone.
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8Psycho
8Psycho rated it
May 17, 2016
Status: c30
Heavenly Calamity plus settlement management. That's it really, nothing i can say about story, hero everyone know, no gore, no drama, no suspense, no adventure. 30 chapters is all I could take.
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tyes77
tyes77 rated it
January 10, 2017
Status: c250
Apparently this novel seemed to give evidence of a rational MC and his town building. Despite this it quickly grows boring as you'll see the repetition of the MC doing the same actions to grind his city higher. Even with over 250 chapters, somehow the other cities stand close to MC's power despite the MC constantly trying to stunt their growth. Explanations keep going on how it'll matter "later" yet it seems more like someone saving for a retirement plan and continuing to read said story. No sense of urgency... more>> in the novel despite it being an apocalypse that I fell asleep multiple times reading this. The novel is written in a manner of someone writing up his homework 5 minutes before class starts. Wouldn't recommend wasting your time despite its initial premise. <<less
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Lowienator
Lowienator rated it
February 15, 2017
Status: c70
This is one of my Favourite novel so far. It begins as a typical Back to the Past setting within a Monster apocalyptic world. However the interesting twist comes with the ability of the MC to build his own town and improve it bit by bit.

The levelling system is also more realistic as it relies on cultivation time and not on the amount of monsters that u kill etc giving u exp.

Overall very interesting and would totally recommend more people to take a look at it and read... more>> it. <<less
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makenai89
makenai89 rated it
September 4, 2016
Status: c45
Reviewed at 45 chapters, rated 3.

Doom Lord was built upon similar premises to God and Devil World which has been translated earlier, with less depictions of human's evil desires and more emphasis on domestic/village/city management. However, with less than 50 chapters, I couldn't say anything more than that it has potentials.

I think the novel should be good, but the translated version is pretty confusing. Like other reviewers said, Doom Lord could benefit from better translator/editor. Still, the way it is now is quite readable, there's no problem for readers in... more>> following its plot development. <<less
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apaulose
apaulose rated it
August 21, 2016
Status: c28
It's true that the first few chapters are painful to sit through but the grammer gets better and you can really tell that the translator is trying to improve. Plot is good and it's nice to see one of these stories where most people are still good at heart. Usually you end up with a world where decent people are super rare.
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