Waiting For You Online

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At the age of 15, He Jin found himself a “husband” in an online game, their love was filled with loving affection and sweetness. However, because his study was being interfered with, his parent cut off the internet, he didn’t even have a chance to say goodbye and had to disappear from the game.

8 years later, the online game in the past was about to come out with a revised edition and turned into a virtual reality game. He Jin decided to login again and unexpectedly discovered that his “husband” had become a powerful player and ranked number one in the whole server, moreover, he had not divorced him!

However, the husband that was abandoned by He Jin for eight years, his initial impression of him was that of a pure boy, but now he seemed to somehow have become…….a little evil?

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freeonlyonholidays
New freeonlyonholidays rated it
February 7, 2020
Status: c155
(This is the third revision of this review.)

Personal Rating for Novel: 3

MC:

... more>> This will be a somewhat personal thing for me, because I actually see a lot of myself in the MC.

Raised in a meritocratic society where everything is based on hard work, and the paths to 'success' are basically fixed for us, it's very difficult for closed-off, sheltered people like the MC and myself to be able to open up ourselves to the outside world. In this aspect, I have to say -- this story really strikes me to the core.

The MC here is about 23 years old already. He is about to graduate from uni, and he is worried about his aimless direction in the future. Does he truly want the path his parents set for him? All of this is very realistic. (especially to people in the same shoes)

One day, he revisits the game he used to play and found a person from 8 years ago still waiting for him. You have to understand. For people who have limited social contact with the outside world, close bonds like that are extremely treasured, even if they have been dropped before. It's like, revisiting that best friend you had from middle school and suddenly wanting to talk about the memories, but not knowing what to say. It's that kind of feeling.

Before you read this story, there is one aspect you have to accept about the MC first:

In the Asian culture, parents are gold and according to traditional customs, children are commonly born for the sake of working to feed their parents in the future. This is the filial piety that is instilled into each and every one of us. We are raised with the mindset that 'Our Parents love us' for every cane and smack and scolding we receive. It's a little like stockholm syndrome, so do understand and tolerate (regardless of my upcoming words).

ML:

Initially, I adored him. A person who remained affectionate even after 8 years, how can you not?

Here are the good parts:

He's incredibly sweet to our MC, carrying him and escorting him around both in game and real life world. He's also straight to the point,
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telling the MC he's being controlled by his mother when he hears that the Mother is controlling All of MC's finances. Keep in mind, MC is 23 and gives his scholarship money up to his mother.

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. What I also enjoy is that he can be ruthless to MC in gameplay and don't bat an eyelash at other girls' flirting. You go, Sir!

All in all, he is a good husbando character. He was a good husbando character. But all that came to ruin because of the next part:

Relationship between MC and ML: (This part is included to have my analysis of the progression of relationship to avoid unhealthy / imbalanced relationships)

The two characters really are not suitable for each other.

MC is traditional and unable to open up his mind to suit the ML's modern beliefs:

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For instance, he raged on the ML immediately after ML posted a photo of the both of them following a date. A photo that doesn't even have MC's face in it!

MC also retained the mindset that 'the MAN of the family has to earn more', and he gets discomforted whenever he realizes ML earns tens of thousands while his wage is 'just' 3000. Like, really, Honey, that's not low at all.

He's also unable to bear the psychological burden of being Gay and tries to hide initially. Then, he rages on ML whenever ML so much as holds his hand in public. Then, he rages on ML when he so much as holds his hand in the game. Then, he had to move to a whole different place entirely to escape the reality that he is gay. This same conflict is repeated over and over again, while the poor innocent ML is just constantly not understanding and getting raged on.

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Between the MC and the ML, there is an unhealthy imbalance of contribution to the relationship. To be blunt, I really do not see the MC making an effort at all.

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ML sends 999 flowers.

MC only send flowers after trying to break up with ML.

ML is the one suggesting all the dates in real life, eyes twinkling and anticipating.

MC complains, not in a fond way but in a 'Why didn't you tell me earlier? Do you know how much work I have left behind?' and reluctantly goes along.

When their relationship is officiated, MC rages on ML in tears about how "he can't bear this anymore", specifically referring to the realities of being gay. ML is the one who buys a whole apartment and asks him to move out with him to escape the eyes of those in the uni.

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You can argue that for the MC, just going along with the ML's leads is already enough of a psychological effort for him already.

However, being in a relationship, does it really mean accepting the other party's nice gestures, then repeatedly rejecting and hurting them thereafter for no other reason than that they like you?

I'm sorry, but I sincerely don't see much of a concern for the things MC does for ML. To me, his actions are more a selfish preservation of how he wants to look in front of ML, not so much of caring for the ML's feelings. (I don't think I've seen a line so far regarding this.)

In the long run, having one party of the relationship always giving and the other always abusing and always absorbed in their own world... This is clearly toxic, and 'unhealthy' might even be an understatement of an adjective.

Next point,

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In the last around 10/15 chapters? MC leaves ML for his 'depressed' mother without even bidding a goodbye in-face with ML.

A few things to take note here: MC drops everything and leaves because he receives news that his abusive mother till now have been doing it cause she's diagnosed with depression. This is his ABUSIVE mother who'd basically disowned and gotten into a fight with him not half a year ago. Even I, with the Asian background, can't get the filial piety at this point. This boy's so 'filial' to the point he'd make preparations and leave just One (1) letter to ML as goodbye and fly off.

No talks. No discussions. No nothing. Even though they've been cohabiting for months now and should have discussed things. Actually, they haven't even reached the stage of talking about 'gay insecurities' / did anything save escape run from their problems together. Why am I surprised they won't even talk about the parent thing?

The lack of trust between the MC and ML is so prevalent, even if they do get together at the end of the novel anyways, there'd be permanent insecurity arising from this repeating error.

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Then, finally,

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When they reunite 3 years later, ML rapes a drunk off his ass MC.

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Yep. There. You just had every reason why I stopped reading here.

Featured Side Characters:

Game Characters (Fellow Players) are amusing and cute. After a hundred chapters, you're bound to remember most of them. My only complain is the author seemed to have abandoned what plotlines they were intending to do with real life meetings and those game characters. Instead, they detracted to the one character who didn't have anything to do in this story, and that is Mother dearest.

Mother Dearest: I give a facepalm to this character.

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Mother Dearest sent a child off to uni. He was gay and he broke up in a relationship and he committed suicide. She fell into depression and proceeded to become controlling over every aspect of MC's life; she'd take his scholarship money, take his part-time job money, matchmake girls for him, considering 'fixing' his gayness by therapy, claim that she's doing this all because 'mommy loves you, you have to listen to mommy'etc. etc. etc. Did I mention she is 60 years old this year? What an energetic 60 year old this is!

Considering that the number of good memories MC has of her is clearly nil, I wonder why he'd still drop everything to race off to her.

I'm asian, I share the asian culture. I like to think I fully understood the story until I reached this point.

This is no longer the mentality of an modern person. Even ancient time people, who'd lived more traditionally than we do, would not do such a thing for such a 'Mother'. This is no longer Asian culture itself, but just strict illogicality.

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You know what's the worst thing?

The worst thing possible is that I saw the shadows of Mother Dearest taking roots in MC for a while right before their supposedly 'romantic' cohabitation. I didn't know why I thought that way, but it felt like I was reading the progression of MC's development into a character just like Mother Dearest. It felt... slimey.

Personal Rating for Frustration: 5/5 (This is ironically unique to this novel)

2 reasons: (1) The relationship factor as explained above.

(2) This is also what I raged about in my 2nd revised review. -- When you reach the 2nd translator in this page, you'll realize what I'm talking about.

100+ ads got blocked in one 'chapter' alone. No, I can't even call it a chapter. It's a fraction of a chapter. The 100+ ads spammed and made my laptop lag, so I removed ad blocker. Then you know what? I had to be blinded and flashed by every darn ads that flew by.

I'm also not sure if every chapter here is sponsored. If it's not, then I give my kudos to the translator for taking up this novel. I feel like this is a project for masochist. Just reading it made me feel like a maso begging for pain. I can't deal with this. However, my initial opinion when I saw that "Click Donate for the next chapter" was not good. Accessibility wise, this novel immediately dropped three stars in my books. <<less
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SQ
New SQ rated it
January 24, 2020
Status: c1
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having so much feels after reading this novel.

but it was so like that in china, since they called LGBT is taboo and some of children is can't argue with their parent.

but no worries between Qin and He jin in the end He mom give her permission for them together.

i was crying ugly happy for them😭❤

SQ.

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yourheatherness1297
yourheatherness1297
December 15, 2017
Status: c12
MC: 10/10: cute and dense online, but "calm and collected"-ish offline.

ML: 10/10: Very sweet towards the MC. As a character, He is actually pretty funny! He is like one of those shameless and persitent MCs aka, idiot MCs. On the other hand, he treats everyone else indifferently compared to how he treats his wifey.

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Even when though was a low level player, he tried to take revenge on the high level player that killed him and his wife (MC). While his wifey wasn't around, He challenged the high level player ten times, but since his character was low level, he kept dying. Even when the High level player went offline, he waited for him until he went online to challenge him. The High level player was like "jfc! You again!" 😂

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Relationship: 10/10 Fluffy RomCom type. Wifey Trope.

They already "know" each other online and unknowingly interact with each other offline.

Story: I feel like its a sweeter and cuter (and better) version of 59 seconds. So, If you liked 59 seconds, then you'll definitely like this, too!

Each chapter is gold! No boring parts whatsoever. Nothing is dragged on. The pacing is very nice.

(Do not get me wrong. I like 59 seconds, but there were times when it concentrated too much on the game and group chats that it got a bit boring at some parts because didn't give any romance factor until the latter half of the story. This, however, is full on adorable!) <<less
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azortex
azortex rated it
February 18, 2018
Status: c161
Recommended too cute, I could do with less angst. Definitely a roller coaster ride, the angst, the happiness, the angst, the happiness... you get the picture. 1vs1, HE, true love, timid MC, possessive ML.

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Chapter notes

c21 Qin Yu IDs He Jin in RL (High Fever)
C93 Qin Yu blurted out and shouted: "He Jin -!" in game.
C100 QY kissed HJ while asleep in car & awoke
C101 QY confessed "He Jin, I like you." in RL
Qin 炀 watched He Jin's eyes: "I'm sorry, before cheated you... I Is flaming fire, is your husband in the game. "
C116 both kissed in QY's room
C129 "What - Jin! I - love - you!"
C134 "Dad, this is what Jin, my boyfriend."
c148 QY snatched HJ from restaurant

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Bloodline
Bloodline rated it
December 14, 2017
Status: Completed
If you read this novel, be prepared to experience a rollercoaster of emotions.

The ML is suuch a 10/10, honestly.

The MC is a very insecure person. He has many traumas from his childhood and is therefore.. Very complicated.

... more>> It's not a 5/5 for me, because sometimes.. The story is just too angsty for my personal preferences.

But the story is very very sweet and it made me smile like an idiot during some chapters.

I would recommend giving this novel a try, if you like more realistic Bl stories and you can cope with some (*cough* unnecassary) family drama every so often. <<less
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Anna88
Anna88 rated it
December 12, 2019
Status: c181
This story is one of the few real life depictions about coming out of the closet and also trying to find oneself as a same s*x lover young person. Qin Yang has known for quite a while and has a supportive family whereas He Jin lived a repressed life due to his family and his feelings are unfamiliar and not simple to him. Most are not as lucky as Qin Yang and we should not judge He Jin's decisions. He's a very naturally shy and conservative character and we'd agree... more>> he did come out of his shell a lot to the point he'd reached with his boyfriend.

Mental shackles however esp concerning emotionally blackmailing parents aren't easy to shake off. Others will never know what it's like unless they're in those shoes. I wish people wouldn't treat LGBTQ issues lightly and just romanticise them in their bl fantasies, it's a whole other world they wouldn't understand esp in places these rights aren't easy.

So when one is commenting on a story character, pls think twice these issues may look like fantasy while you read but they speak about real peoples situations. <<less
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redbeanbunny
redbeanbunny rated it
October 8, 2019
Status: c151
  • TLDR; I found some enjoyment in this series. I love the beginning portion especially, when Fire and Ah-Jin are getting to know each other again, and the character developement of the MC He-Jin. The greatest flaw I found was the romance, as I found the ML to be incredibly creepy at many times even though he thought it was romantic and meng. I'm shocked at all the reviews praising the ML. I ended up really disliking him.

    He certainly goes beyond "doting" and does things forcefully and possessively. Its really annoying, especially
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    when hes actively testing MC, and when his identity is finally revealed. He didnt even reveal it openly.

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    he rigged the lottery to get Ah-Jin's REAL LIFE information but I kind of let it go at first?? And his clingy actions

    in the game like... Its just a game

    Many moments like that are treated romantically and its just not so... He seriously violated MC's trust. And it makes it hard for me to enjoy the fluffy parts where it could be touching like

    encouraging MC to be independant from his family bc this guy is so overbearing. And
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    even though he literally scares/terrify/horrify He-Jin with his creepy actions, breaking promises/set boundaries, the lies, forced kissing and intimacy both irl and in-game, having He-Jin be reliant on him for housing, he is pretty easily forgiven for his it and he does not properly repent at all. He just gets more clingy, acts meng and more unapologetic bc he knows the MC had a crush on him and is convinced MC will come around

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    If I was MC's friend I would be scared for him and advise him to cease contact immediately. I was so glad to see MC not taking it lightly but then everything is so easily dropped. I did think the romance and misunderstanding was dragged out a lot at some points, but I feel like the redemption was not the place to compromise. I couldnt stand things especially around ch100 and above which is where it snapped for ne. Maybe this is typical fare for romances but I dislike it all the same. And it doesnt help that
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    ML is too perfect. #1 player and streamer that makes millions? Okay. But hes also #1 in sports and jacked on his tennis team, and hes also a top scoring student at a prestigious university. And hes mega handsome and mega popular both online and irl. Nope its just not happening. His only flaw is the relationship with MC and being a creep and manipulative but those arent even really addressed as flaws so. HE'S BORING! He is really one-dimensional and a 3 paragraph sob story about his family will not fix this. Definitely lost the charm from the start where he wants to hold onto Ah-Jin but hasnt gone full creeper mode yet. Hes all I dont wanna scare off MC! I wanna support MC! But he only actually about his actions for a sentence before it bounces back to being uwu I love him and he loves me!! For example he realizes HJ will not clamor for him like the girls and what happens but a paragraph or so later? He is cocky and is all but HJ loves me so! Or thinking about how great his forced kiss with HJ was even though HJ pushed him away and was scared ans tried to run away but was held back by ML... But the ML is being all but he actually liked it

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    As for things outside of the romance plot, I liked most of it. I really enjoyed MC's character growth and his inner struggles. It was really great and I enjoyed that sooo much. On the otherhand ML had none to speak of. I like all the side charactets except Flower Yiyi who I felt was done a hugeee disservice by reducing her to the jealous scorned woman. The game world is described in detail which is both nice but also a word dump. Its better not to think about it too much bc its extremely unrealistic (even given the advanced gaming tech) and sounds like a terrible game actually. Giving other players so much control over your character thru domestication is boring and makes things weird. Super secret missions that are only available to the 0.001% aka MC/ML and make them more OP.
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Fujoshi1993
Fujoshi1993 rated it
April 13, 2018
Status: c49
At first I thought it'll be boring but man oh man was I wrong. This novel is really good 10/10 so far. Being a gamer myself, I wanna try the holographic helmet... (π.π)
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adustyspectacle
adustyspectacle
November 8, 2019
Status: c165
Dropping this because I really can't take anymore how the ML interacts with the MC. I'm sure the author intended it to be fluffy and/or romantic but it just really came across as unintentionally creepy for me.

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Like, I get that the ML is supposed to be the one breaking out the MC out of his dull life, and it might've come across better for me if the MC didn't have trauma stemming from his very controlling mother, but as it is, it just seems like this time it's the ML who's controlling him instead of his mom, so yeah... no thanks.

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lukibunny
lukibunny rated it
October 25, 2019
Status: c162
I really liked this at the beginning it was so cute. Around chapter 80s is when it goes down hill. The ML fell in love too fast and the MC falls in love too slow. It's really dragging. It took sooo long for them together and even now at 162, it feels like the MC is not commit.

Both the ML and the MC has flaws. MC doesn't seem to know what he wants, just that he feel unhappy but doesn't really do anything to change it and he takes it... more>> out on the ML. The ML is too perfect that he is impossible, but emotionally he is unable to perceive MC's internal conflicts and has no idea how to help him.

I wished they focused more on the gaming then mc's wishy washy feelings. =/ You never really got to see how amazing the MC is at the game. <<less
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pookaloo
pookaloo rated it
February 17, 2018
Status: c30
So far loving this and I keep refreshing for updates!

I like the characters very much. The way the ML nurtured his love for the MC gave me the feels. Imagine turning your teenage crush you briefly met online -- then gone AWOL for 8 years -- into someone you truly care for and then love is nothing short of amazing. The dedication and perseverance of the ML is just aww. The MC is older than the ML but the ML's EQ is higher so he is the anchor and driving... more>> force in the relationship so far. He is not super OP in the real world but in the game he is of course (why, he is the game's unofficial poster boy). Did I mention he has a swoon-worthy sexy voice? I just imagine Junichi Suwabe's voice in my head when he speaks...

The MC is a relatable fella anxiously growing up under his mother's watch which suppressed his personality. He is less inhibited in-game which describes many online avatars/personas we have actually. Internet anonymity and all that. On another note, he doesn't feel completely useless unlike the MC in Love You 59 Seconds in that this guy actually have skills apparent in the real world and not everything was handed to him on a silver platter. Don't get me wrong, I loved LY59S with all the kyaa moments but I feel this novel has more fleshed out characters and depth. The side characters are much more interesting too! <<less
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earlgreyt
earlgreyt rated it
January 16, 2020
Status: c143
---SPOILERS AHEAD---

Through this story, I understood the huge cultural gap between China (or maybe even other parts of Asia) and western countries. I almost dropped this book because the MC runs away for the nth time after he finds out that he needs to give up everything to take care of his mentally ill parent.

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The parent is depressed.

Depression isn't a joke, I've personally taken care of a chronically depressed person day after day for months. It's difficult, grinds down your spirit, and it's easy to become more emotionally fragile too.

However, what I found frustrating is that, for his depressed parent, the MC is willing to completely give up everything that he loves, all of his dreams and hopes, and essentially follow the orders and wishes of that person like a robot for several years, all because that person has depression.

Now, it's already difficult to put time and effort to take care of someone who is depressed, and I understand the MC's attachment and feeling of duty to his parents, but to also give up all of his own personal happiness in order to stay under the control of the depressed person?

Practically unimaginable for people like me raised in the west.

Perhaps it's because we value personal freedom, individualization, and in a way, a more selfish pursuit of happiness, but I don't feel that it is right for a person (depressed or not) to have total control over another person's choices or happiness.

If a depressed parent says to a kid: "When you don't listen to me, I feel like killing myself, " depression becomes an excuse and a chain with which that parent can use at any time to control the actions of the kid. It's basically blackmail.

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The problem is, the MC is willing to be chained under this threat, because of his "filial" duty to his parents. Despite struggling with his own depression and unhappiness, he always puts his parents first. This is a big part of the culture, so it's explainable.

But here is where I very much wanted to drop the book.

If this were a different character, the aforementioned cultural gap and separation arc would have been totally fine because it adds depth to the story.

But unfortunately, this character is one who hasn't changed much for the entire 195 chapters released so far. As the reader, you are constantly forced to experience the MC's extreme wishy-washy-ness and daily indecision in excruciating detail.

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From the first chapter, the MC struggled with his exceedingly introverted and suppressed personality. There was a heavy psychological barrier created from the way he was raised and his familial relationships. But he makes pretty much negative progress--it's literally one step foward, two steps back.

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Yes, he steps out of his shell and other characters comment on how he's started to show more personality.

But, to the reader who has insight to all of his internal dialogues, it doesn't happen. The chapter 195-him is not different at all than the chapter 1-him. I guarantee no one would be able to tell the difference if you switched the monologues around.

And this is why I feel sorry for the ML.

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Reviewers have already mentioned how creepy the ML is, (I agree), but I also feel the MC really doesn't deserve the ML's dedication as he never put the ML first in anything.

Every single moment, the MC lives on the edge of running away/horror because he's constantly thinking of how he will disappoint his parents. Every single decision, the MC has self-hatred for his own cowardice, tries to walk out of his conditioned responses...

But ultimately, he fails.

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While this helps make the MC a more realistic character, this is also what makes this story a difficult one to enjoy.

I consider this story a tragedy because I'm sure real life homosexuals in China will frequently have this result. It's illegal, society is against it, and it's easy for external pressures to break up happy couples. Lots of them are forcefully married and have kids. Outside of China, LGBTQ+ people still suffer from a lot of discrimination. It's pretty heartbreaking.

I haven't encountered as much tragic/realistic BL on this site, so I will probably keep reading. But it'll be after the story is fully translated because I need a break from the writer's unbalanced pacing.

There is plenty of fluff/cuteness if you ignore the stuff that drags in the middle! <<less
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Boinkers
Boinkers rated it
June 19, 2018
Status: Completed
One of the best romance/comedy/drama novels ive ever read!!!!!

100% recommended for fujoshi lovers, like me~ (~_^) teehee~

Warning BL!!! Dont say I didnt warn ya

ฅ'ω'ฅ melting meng attack!~~
(mc's super secret attack)
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funezcookie6
funezcookie6 rated it
November 4, 2019
Status: c78
At first, it seemed alright and it looked like it was going to be an immersive plot, but the first 20 chapters are going to be the only real interesting parts. After that, things get kinda old and cringey. I had a few problems with this, especially the ML. He's kinda childish and annoying.

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There was a part around chapter 60-ish when MC didn't feel comfortable being touched by the ML. After MC says this to ML, ML gets unreasomably angry and startes to beat him a bunch of times in a Tennis Match irl where they don't know each other.

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There was a description where ML wanted to take off MC's shoes and "peel" off his socks to look at his feet. This may be a translation issue but it was still cringey to read.

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ML constantly goes after MC and becomes really overconfident in the ability to make MC want him even if MC wasn't gay.

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One major problem I had while reading this novel was the lack of a redeemable female character. It's not something usually noticeable in BL novels because females barely play a part but for some reason, many female characters that take a role in this novel are unlikeable, in contrast to the male characters where none of them are really an antagonist.

Ex,
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The first one starts with Tongxuan, or MC's ex. She seems to still hold a grudge over MC dumping her but she's not too bad, however the way she's written makes you want to roll your eyes. The second one is Flower yiyi, or the main enemy (as of now when I read it) who seems to despise MC for getting back together with ML in the game as hubby and wifey. The Third one is MC's helicopter mom who needs to control MC's life. and the fourth one, which was the one who really made me notice this pattern, was MC's grandmother who had to control Mc's grandfather's life.

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I stopped at the point where ML and MC have a baby in the game because it was getting cringey.

The way ML was taking the game too seriously and this baby business made me go ‎ (=_=). Or how MC was nervous about being hugged in the game by ML and how quickly he falls in love with ML irl without any proper development.

There's also the problem of the setting. Where the game company literally makes revolutionary technology (holographic game) and nothing else is explained about how this has helped other industries. It's just kinda random.

Then there's needless descriptions where the author desperately tries to make the ML look "cool." He suddenly smokes in his own dorm while calling someone??? He just randomly does it and it's never been explained beforehand of him smoking and it never comes up again. It leaves a bad impression and makes people go ‎ (;一_一) .

Another desperate attempt is the need to make ML the star of the university. Everytime he's in a crowd, auther always has the need to add that girls are looking at him and blushing or fangirling. It gets obnoxious at some point because it made me go: "Yeah, I get it... He's popular but how does this affect the plot at all?" It did affect the plot at the start but I haven't seen his popularity affect him in later chapters.

Finally, the fact that MC and ML keep being the first ones to do something recently added into the game and the unrealistic reactions of players in the game going, "OMG ML did something with his wife!!!!" becomes very non-immersive and annoying.

I might continue reading just to see if it gets better, but I'm severely doubting it since the writing has only gotten worse. We don't see much development of other characters. It just feels like the whole world is only MC and ML and it's kind of boring seeing them together all the time. But I guess I just got to pray for it to finally pick up and get interesting. <<less
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Jeanne_DG
Jeanne_DG rated it
April 19, 2019
Status: Completed
You'd think it was all fluff but there are deep relationship issues that real world couples also deal with. The author is magnanimous and offers to let you off the emotion train if you get uncomfortable but if you decide to hang on, the reward at the end will make you sigh and smile.
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Noxidian
Noxidian rated it
March 20, 2019
Status: c155
Sweet junior high love. MMORPGs. Blissful reunion in college.

Waiting For You Online is the enactment of the dream most of us had while playing games when we were younger. We probably met a playmate on MapleStory and got married, thinking that they were "the one." Time breaks people apart, unfortunately, and many people eventually grow out of games to confront reality. Initially, WFYO appears to be a simple, two-dimensional love story whose sole purpose is to fancy readers' fantasies of what could happen if a virtual couple met in real... more>> life. The whole premise of the ML faithfully waiting for the MC for many years was ridiculous to me at first. Some of you probably agree. Rest assured, the writing, characters, and development get exponentially better as the story hits the halfway point.

It's an injustice to say that WFYO is just a fluffy danmei, especially if you evaluate it based on its MMORPG genre. The author dives heavily into dissecting the main character's thoughts, identity, and conflicts--in fact, this entire novel is pretty much a character study of the MC. It addresses serious and pervasive problems of modern (Chinese) society: seeking an individualistic identity, rebelling against parents, fighting the stigma associated with homosexuality, grappling with (clinical) depression, anxiety, and OCD, finding one's purpose in life, and learning to love. The MC is a medium for readers to relate to much of the turmoil that goes on in the novel. In contrast, the ML is a lot more distant from us and we don't get to read into him as well as the MC. His character is still fleshed out pretty well, but I find that his personality is nothing out of the ordinary. He doesn't manage to break free from the archetypal overprotective, black-bellied role that plagues the BL genre. His behavior in the game made me cringe a bit, but there's some decent justification for that as the story progresses.

Nothing comes easy in life, especially with relationships. WFYO does not shy away from ugly and often awkward topics such as masculinity and emasculation, social ostracism, and the infamous honeymoon phase (seriously, how many BL novels actually address this? Most relationships in this genre don't even come close to being as plausible as the one in WFYO).

To be frank, a lot of the scenes that took place in the game kind of bored me. I mostly skimmed them, since the real juice happens in real life. The tone of the story takes a huge turn after the halfway point as it starts addressing some pretty legit issues with relationships. I personally didn't mind it, especially since the emotional scenes were so well-written. The author's command of imagery and usage of details is breathtaking.

There are a few things in this novel that might trigger some PC people, but I think they're pretty minuscule and can easily be overlooked. (What I'm referring to is pretty typical of this genre, so not much of a warning here) Also just wanted to give a disclaimer that I MTL'd from Chapters 78 onwards using Baidu + referring to the og text from time to time to read some lines in Chinese. The novel was still readable and easy to understand, though it's possible that I may have missed a few things due to translation errors.

Worth reading? Yep. <<less
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laeticia
laeticia rated it
January 14, 2018
Status: c22
I don't even care this is one of the best out there, if your looking more towards the emotional interaction of the MC and ML. 100% recommend this.

I think I've fallen in love with the ML he so adorable, as we go further into detail about him I swear you'll agree with me, I am gushing with moe. Argggggghhhh.

And the main lead he is so shy, especially when he comes back to interact with our ML, I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.

yours truly,

forever fujoshin, MWA
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chrissy987
chrissy987 rated it
January 14, 2018
Status: c22
incredibly adorable, a bit slow and fast in romance (you will get what I mean when you read it). Satisfying slice of life pace. With the MC who is a bit slow in romance, calm in personality and has a inferiority complex with feelings of having never lived his own life truly under the control of his parents. ML is black-belly, knows what he wants and goes after it. But emotionally intelligent, as in he doesn't try to force the other guy or pressures him, far far away from all... more>> those forceful arrogant rapey tropes.

same brand like 59 seconds. But a different unique sweet flavor.

11/10. <<less
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macy2
macy2 rated it
September 28, 2019
Status: c150
Started off alright, but it gets old fast. Scenes just get dragged out and there's not much going on.

The plot is also not as deep or angsty (like barely any) as many other reviews make it to be. Its actually quite simple and shallow; it pretty much goes exactly as you would imagine just by reading the description.
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iam4pril
iam4pril rated it
July 2, 2019
Status: c124
I recommend this novel for you who looking for rolling coaster emotions story. The MC is cute and tsundere type, and the ML is funny and loyal type. This is my favorite novel rn. I wait for the updates everyday 😄😍
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cmall
cmall rated it
May 7, 2019
Status: Completed
Fluffy & sweet~ gave me laugh here and there with MC & ML interaction.

Even though if you're not a gamer (coz I'm not), you definitely still can follow the story easily

Love ML character who always giving his best to support/help MC. On the other hand MC is also a person who has strong will, appreciate others effort & doesn't take things for granted.

Spoiler

there's a sad & down period for their relationship but it's a HE

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Redroses__
Redroses__ rated it
December 21, 2018
Status: Completed
It is my first time to finish a novel using MTL. The story was so good that's why even though I only understand about 80% of what's going on, it still manages to make me smile, cry, frustrated, and squeal.

The story isn't exactly original. Most parts are cliche. But-but-but, I love how the story revolves around the main characters and does not introduce unimportant characters. Almost all the characters contribute to the development of the story.

My favorite character was the ML, QY unlike most BL stories is not forceful, rape-y,... more>> and obsessive. I mean, he is most of those things but he actually takes into account the opinion of the MC. Which is a like for me.

Overall, I have a smile while reading this esp the first part. Since I read for enjoyment, and I enjoyed thr story this is a five star for me. :) <<less
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