Villain Heal: The Villainess’s Plan to Heal a Broken Heart

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“In this life, can I fall in love once more?”

As if having your best friend steal your fiance wasn’t enough; I died by falling onto the road from an accidental push.

I, who had just graduated from medical school, suddenly found my status changed by this ‘Devil-in-God-skin’ or ‘Hades’. He sent me to be reincarnated into an otome game that I once played. I found myself becoming the vampire villainess who has the doomed fate of being killed by her vampire fiancé.

If you think that this will make me surrender, then, NO WAY! No longer will this happen to me, and I will never ever let myself die because of some man.

I WILL NEVER LOVE ANYONE AGAIN!!!

“What?”

“The captive character is feeling ill?”

“It can’t be helped, I will nurse him until he is healthy again.”

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Villain heal ปฏิบัติการเยียวยาหัวใจของนางมารร้าย
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I Refuse to be a Supporting Character (2)
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The Lazy Slug
The Lazy Slug
April 8, 2018
Status: c9
There's just something about the story and the world that ticks me off. Typical Mary Sue MC, a bit standoffish in a sense that, as a reader, I really cannot feel her at all, and rather arrogant for my tastes.

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For example: I mean, it is one thing to say, "the tutors were surprised and all praises with how quick this ojou-san learns" but another thing to put that plus additional MC-perspective lines like "I came from a good family, finished doctors, was very successful and learned everything in just one week that the only bad thing that happened was that my boyfriend who had the same social standing as I am cheated on me." Then again, it turns out even that cheating is "alright" because "I am successful anyway so I can find someone else. Besides, I think that boyfriend only love me because of my money anyway" even though she just stated that they were from the same standing?! So like.... I don't get the logic...?

I would've reallly appreciated a humble MC. They have a certain charm to them, and not to mention make them easily likeable in my opinion.

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Anyway...

As for the translation, it is average at best. Then again, I've seen that translator-san tried his/her best in doing the translation, and I salute the efforts. Moreover, the translation wasn't fragmented and actually understandable, so it didn't impose any difficulty for my part. This lazy slug is lazy in learning new languages, so I'm happy someone took the effort to translate it and share it with me.

Then again, going back to the world building.... AHAHAHA :| Well, one thing I'm really looking for in a story is a story that can pull me in to its world. This would have to depend on the narration, the development, and ofc the MC. But then, as mentioned, MC did a poor job at that... imo. And the story.... uhh, sure, the premise is mighty interesting but I'd have to say there's really something about the development that's... weird and unnatural. There's just something... wrong with it.

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First, the only reason this story took form is because, after MC died, because she was sooooooooo good, the person who guards purgatory or something can't put MC yet to heaven because of some problem or whatever so... send her to another world as a villainess instead to push her to do evil! Or test until what point can she remain "good." Yes, a very convincing plot.

Another, for example: In the "debut" scene where MC visited the palace for the first time, after running and hiding behind a bush in order to escape those "social-climbing" nobles, once MC was finally able to gather her bearings, she looked down and realised she stepped on someone! And stepped on that someone real hard. And I was like "Is this supposed to be a poor attempt of an M? A sad excuse of an encounter?" Apologies but it's not working. I mean you'd have to be really soooo detached from your surroundings for you to not notice that you were already stepping on a person. Like hello? A change in ground elevation? Change in "texture"?

But, lo, of course that person turns out to be the capturable prince so it's alright. But then, next thing that happened was that prince insinuating that MC cared for him. Like... huh? Idk... but he did keep on asking and insisting that "Why do you care about me? Why do you care about me? I just want to know!" The person just asked you if you're alright and did CPR because your heartbeat stopped and it already becomes an abnormal, romantic kind of caring? Well, that scene did pretty much make me feel that way. Yknow... kinda like those typical cliche scenes where ML kept on pressuring and asking MC why MC cared so much for the ML until MC ends up confessing and they get their happily ever afters? The only difference is that that should happen after considerable progress had happened between MC and ML, not on their first meeting! :| Worse. I actually wouldn't be surprised if that's what will happen. Happy ending. End of story. lol :|

Also, I don't understand... MC is just about 5 years old, but going to the palace was already considered her "social debut"? Sorry, but when the debut was mentioned, I automatically thought that it was the same kind of debut as to that that should take place when ladies turn 15 or so. Even how good they are. Even if they're already engaged to a prince. It's always somewhere 10+. So uh... if 5 is the norm in this world or if it's just because MC is sooo good hence the obvious advance for her case so.... I'll just give it the benefit of the doubt. -_-

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Borrowing LazyDays' words, "has potential but it's not sticking so far." There's just something about the "common sense" and progress of this world that threw me off. Not to mention the contradictory parts.

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Early on, it was already mentioned the new world was from an otome game someone close to MC played. Of course, it's not MC herself because playing games was beyond her, she had no time for such things because she was soooo busy studying and making money. But! A few chapters later and you get something like "The Prince route was like this and that. And I chose the Prince route because of this and that, " as if she was the one that played it. So umm... what?

If the start was any indication as well, she should be avoiding the prince (she did imply she'd do so) but in all their meet-up scenes only showed her submitting to whatever Prince do to her... like bite her neck for example. She's complaining, but she's not doing anything herself!

Also, she's supposed to be a doctor. So I actually thought there's some medicinal development involved, like a medicinal explanation of the prince's condition for example. Then, lo, of course, MC diagnosed everything was just psychological after all! So one way to learn more about and/ solve it? Teach him basic fear! Blindfold him, grab a belt and do whipping sounds to stimulate excitement fear. I really don't understand this development.

This just ++ convinced me that author-san doesn't know what to do and is just putting in random 'good' things he/she could think of just to start the suggestive M scenes. Idk. Irdk. Hah, I'm tired. :|

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Apologies if this review is full of criticisms. Then again, you could take this as a warning... or with a grain of salt, considering I might've been a bit cynical while reading this thing (and the fact that after reading too many novels, ahh my standards and reviews became severe). Or maybe because I took this way seriously than I should. If you cannot find anything else to read, then I guess this one's good for a light one. Overall, I still hope it improves. There's plenty of room for it.

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Also, did I forget to mention after prince did an insisting-pressure-questioning if whether or not MC cared about him, he also asked her to grope him next? So... yeah. Whatever.

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Ahmya
Ahmya rated it
November 25, 2020
Status: --
I really liked this from the start, but then the truth was revealed...

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FL's friend had a crush on ML. She was friend-zoned by the ML, but she asked ML for a kiss as her last request. THE ML f*ckING AGREED TO HER REQUEST!!!!! LIKE WTF, DUDE! YOU AND FL ARE ABOUT TO GET MARRIED, AND YET YOU ARE OKAY WITH THAT! I wouldn't be happy if I were in FL's position, even if it was just a request... I GOT SO f*ckING ANGRY THAT I WANTED TO SHOUT AT THIS AUTHOR!!! FL then appears, and they got caught! I f*cking hate the ML. He doesn't deserve FL... She's better off with someone loyal... I really liked this, but I was disappointed... I didn't even bother finishing with that type of ML... (so unloyal..). They were about to get married too...

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I liked this in the beginning.. but this was also a big disappointment... <<less
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Haruko
Haruko rated it
April 5, 2018
Status: c31
I do disagree with LazyDays, I wouldn't say that story that is full of S & M and alltogether a bit perverse characters is from typical side.

True, it does have villainess noble girl story elements which are seen many times already but they can be expected from the genre from the begining.

Translation is ok, some spelling mistakes but overall easy to read.
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Kurobito
Kurobito rated it
April 7, 2019
Status: --
Seriously, the story could have been better than this. The synopsis attracted me but the content of it disappoint me. The story feels that it has no depth at all. Maybe I read too much otome game transmigration stories that I find this not up to my standard. The love between MC and ML is sooo shallow. Like I can't really feel the love between them.
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BobChan
BobChan rated it
May 31, 2019
Status: c13
To be honest, I really tried to read it but the story was really killing me. It's written in a first person aspect (as most otome game novels are) but the writing level at best is mediocre, not to be mean. The story is cute, but it's just how the author words/ portrays things that just kills everything.

The first thing is the MC.

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she's someone who is supposed to have no sin, but as far as I could tell... She should have 'pride' as a sin. Plus there's no way that someone is as pure as to have committed no sin, unless you didn't live at all. It's not like she's humble or modest, you can say. She blatantly blows herself up at any chance she gets, constantly reminding us, readers that she's a 'great' doctor and has lived for 20 + 2 years. It's too a point where it is the ticket for her to go the Imperial Palace (I forgot what it's called.) so that her father can go show her off to people. But when they get there, she's abandoned by her 'doting' father and is left to the wolves, who only want her as to climb up the hierarchy.

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Another issue is the MC's action with her age. She's... 22 mentally when we first read about her in the otome game world but she acts and thinks as if she's a preteen that had yet to reach puberty.

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Not only did she decide to hide in a rose bush that would have stabbed you and left many holes, she stepped on the ML and act as if she's never experienced contact with a body before. Also, her 'doctorly' actions were poor and you probably wouldn't want her as your doctor.

Moving on from their initial encounter that was crudely done, it goes onto the MC's and ML's interactions that are as flat as Salar de Uyuni. The ML's attraction to the MC is that she makes his blood 'pump' because he has a condition where his heart isn't normally pumping blood. (Makes you kind of wonder how he's survived this long) Meeting the MC and drinking her blood (which tastes like chocolate (strange to say)) triggered the attraction. Then it turns strange but isn't bad, where the ML is an 'm'. The sounds of whipping made him feel excited. Just prostrating himself on his knees before her was making his blood pump faster than normal for him. *cough*

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Mustn't forget that she's only two in the otome game world initially and only three years had lapsed since then, making her only eight.

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She then gets a 'wicked' idea after that little part to bite him as he wanted her to, to scare him. (Like... Did you forget that he's an 'm'? You're basically gifting him a present there ?. Her luck is as bad as ever, getting caught by her father as she straddles the ML. It really makes you wonder what the f*ck is actually going on and does the author remember that they're very young children?

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Secondly, is the introduction and how flat the parents are.

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Not only did they make up in the worst kind of way ever (with the MC acting totally OOC and not for her age), with a pointless red blanket/ sheet thrown over her father and her mother coming in to see this... like that's another sin there already for the MC, deceit. Ahem, but going on... aren't you a vampire? So how could you not tell that your lover is dead or not? Not only did you fail to use your senses, the make up was just a 'total misunderstanding' with both side not wanting to speak to each other...

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There's some more issues but too lazy to write and go back to it.

Overall, it would have been a one star with the one too many unrealistic and incomprehensible ideas but the translator tried their best to translate the story... And they deserve a standing ovation for sticking with the story and trying to translate it.

Character Development: 1

World Environment: 1 (basically almost nonexistent with barely any information given to paint the picture)

Translation Quality: 3.5

Story Development: 1

Recommendation? No, unless you have a lot of free time and a big brain, then perhaps so. <<less
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winterprison
winterprison rated it
December 27, 2018
Status: c49
It's cute and I love the concept. But for me, there's a real problem with the grammar/the way it's written.

Maybe it's because of it's how it's written in its original language, the tone and the dialogue feels awkward at times so I can't really blame the translator for trying. But it gets so unbearable to read at times I had to skip and skim through the chapters instead.

It's a shame, otherwise it could've been a really enjoyable story.
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aaeiklm
aaeiklm rated it
July 20, 2019
Status: c80
The story is great!... Until it wasn't. White, our female lead, leads a great almost perfect life until she finds her fiance kissing her "best friend" where as a result she gets into a car accident and proceeds to be reincarnated into an otome game as a villain because she's too nice and it wasn't her "time".

And in this life she manages to of course not just accidentally capture the main lead, but the other characters as well. BUT she doesn't gain a harem instead she matches the capture targets... more>> with their respective fiances. I loved that! I even beared with the cringe facing the fact that they were like 13 for majority of the novel. BUT THEN the author just pulls this ridiculous plot twist out of nowhere that made me think they had a major writer's block after writing the extras' stories more than the main leads.

MAJOR SPOILER AHEAD. DO NOT CLICK UNLESS YOU READ THE NOVEL ALREADY.

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I mean, come on! Hades warned her not to mess with fate but he was actually the one who messed with fate? To the point where he had a freaking CHILD with her? To the point where he cut the red string between the main couple and literally stabbed her with the scissors he used. And I read a spoiler that the heroine was actually the conniving "best friend" of White reincarnated. *sigh* There are only a few chapters left and I doubt we'll see character development or retribution from her.

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I just can't continue. Hey, try it out you might like it. Personally, the twist was just too complicated for what seemed like a light story for literally 70+ chapters. <<less
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Nebulae
Nebulae rated it
July 31, 2018
Status: c40
I’m honestly really enjoying this story. The S&M stuff is usually portrayed in a more silly manner, and makes me laugh, and I adore the MC/ML interactions (ahhhhh, the ML is such an M!)
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Kailyria20
Kailyria20 rated it
January 17, 2020
Status: side story 8
Sigh, Gigantic sigh...

Ok it started well, kinda, the translation is legible, just some grammatical errors but not enough to not understand what's going on and it ended on a bitter note for me for the main cp.

It was going well until halfway I was bombed with total bitterness... the other 3 CP barely let me pull thru to the end because I almost dropped the story in absolute fury.

3 is because of half the story, the translator's effort and the other 3 CP, the other 2 lost stars are because... more>> of the author's decision for the main CP to sacrifice the innocent to make her point how one cannot go against fate.

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The big giant sigh is for the dog blood the author dumped this story with, in order to prove one cannot go against fate, she sacrificed the supporting male lead and their child.

Really, author you didn't have to go that far, I don't hate the ML because he's a sweet slightly yandere but I feel absolutely miserable for the7 also very sweet supporting male lead and their pitiful child.

She parted them when the child was only 5 years old, and gave them hope when MC woke up again several years later due to her child wanting her back and then parted them again for all eternity this time and the worse part is, MC doesn't remember one bit of it... she doesn't know what she lost.

I have to say I absolutely HATE memory wipe for the sake of convenience, yes supporting male lead probably did something wrong trying to cut the fate of MC and ml, but ML asked him to take care of her and fate s*upidly made it so that ML would die w/o every getting together with MC for TWO LIFETIMES!

Can I blame the supporting male lead for wanting her to not be in pain and grief for the rest of her life and so he severed her memories and connection to ml... I can't because he didn't do it entirely for selfishness.

But to go as far as to wipe her memories of her child, really f*cking great, I feel so damn bitter and fury at this, her child did nothing wrong, did he deserve to be forgotten forever by his mother? f*ckING NO.

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linnil
linnil rated it
November 17, 2018
Status: Completed
This is so good. It is the villainess theme I want to read.

There is many CP in the story and it not that out of main story too much.

The story is short and I like both Chiwa and Luler. Their personality match and it Hilarious reading their S & M gag.

All the loop holes in the beginning have the answer in the end.

The ending is so satisfying. (I read in original thai language so... he he)

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This is super spoiler!!

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Aye, the heroine of the game is a reincarnator too. She is that two face best friend in MC's previous life.

She try to kill MC because of you know... same old habit but got punish in the end. And Luler X Chiwa is happy ever after~~

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Riellana Louella
Riellana Louella rated it
February 25, 2019
Status: c68
I read this novel because of its "Villainess Noble Girls" tag. At first, I thought that this was your typical cliche one. I was suppose to stop reading it but my friend told me that it's good and should try to finish it. So I went ahead again to read it, and as I am reading this one, I got hooked. Yes, I got hooked, the characters are just so lovable and some of them are too mysterious that I couldn't help but read some spoilers, like Hades, MC and... more>> ML's origin.

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It seems that the three of them knew each other. It all started when Hades was punished to live his life as a mortal being and then he, being a child tried to su*cide to go back to the Underworld, then a female child rescued him and he. Hades, became her foster brother. The MC was betrothed to her childhood friend which is the ML and the three played together. Soon a war broke out, ML and Hades has to go to the war and ML died protecting Hades, telling Hades that he needs to take care of MC now that he's gone. Hades knew that the ML and MC are destined to each other because of the red string of fate that is connecting them, so when he told the MC about the ML's death, MC cried and fell into depression. Hades then ask our MC if she would like to forget her lover. She said yes, because it is too painful for her to bear, so Hades, with a scissors of the Underworld that could cut the red string of fate, cut hers, so that she could forget all of her past memories and was sent to the Underworld. There, she didn't remember anything and Hades told her that they were lovers, they became together, she then got a son with Hades, the son then went to a "closed room" and was found by our MC touching the scissors of the Underworld that Hades hidden, but due to some sort of accident she cut herself with it and Hades came at that moment. Hades knew that the soul of MC will now go to the "Circle of Reincarnation" but he stabbed half of the scissor to MC's body, in that way, her former body will stay in the Underworld, their son then cried not knowing why his mother collapsed and why did his father, Hades, stabbed her mother's body. Then, Hades encountered White which has the soul of his former wife, he then decided to send MC's soul to a world where she's going to die fast, in that way they are going to reunite together in a faster way. After that, he then encountered the soul of MC's fiance that died after White because he couldn't live without her which is the ML's soul and thought of sending him to another world but when he saw that the ML and MC's soul has the red string of fate, he remembered his childhood friend and sent to him to a world where White was sent, there, they became Luler and Shiwa. Also, I think it's heavily implied that both Luler and Shiwa had that destiny to be together but Hades butted in. Hades is once again trying to bu*t in between Luler and Shiwa.

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This is really good and interesting, so much plot twists and surprises. Also, you'll feel really bad on a certain character called Hades, I could clearly feel my heart shattering for him. I wish there is someone who could mend his heart. I'm glad that I decided not to drop this, I should really need to thank my friend for encouraging me to read this again. <<less
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LazyDays
LazyDays rated it
March 30, 2018
Status: c6
Typical "reborn into another world and plans to live life their way" kinda story.

Translation sucks in the beginning, but it's getting better.

Has potential but it's not really sticking out so far, besides the modern (?) -fantasy elements.

The best part is probably MC/ML interactions. As kids, it's kinda cute, if you ignore the reincarnated woman with a legit little boy part.

Spoiler

There's a palace and royalty. But there's also a car? Probably modern fantasy?

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Brasdf
Brasdf rated it
August 8, 2020
Status: side story8
This is poorly translated, but gets a bit better after the first few chapters. The grammatical errors remain rife. Surprisingly, most of the time the meaning is discernible so if your English is good enough you will automatically fix the tenses and replace out of place words with the similarly sounding appropriate word.

This is not a great story, but it is cute and fluffy. There is a twist at the end, which was clearly planned from the beginning, but was poorly paced and felt out of place with the rest... more>> of the story. The conclusion is also a bit unclear and if you think about it much, you will consider it tragic.

There is some light BD*M mostly for the laughs, but the story is a little bit steamy (a bit weird since the characters are 13 for most of it, but not unreasonable in Demon world context with Succubi being respected members of society).

Also, it seems like not all the extras were translated as they cut off mid-story, but the main story is wrapped up completely.

Some spoilery thoughts :

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The whole Sunny plot is a bit bizarre. Why did she kill herself after tricking White and not at least try to tempt Will again? I guess the son sent her into the game world afterwards, but it is sad to think Sunny is stuck as a third wheel for White even after reincarnation. Did she even know Will was the prince ?

Would make more sense if the son attempted to reincarnate as White's son in the game world rather then put his mother through this cruel ordeal, but this whole part of the story is somewhat messed up and tragic really. Is all of this a punishment for Hades? Obviously nothing remotely human could continue for eternity without making a mistake, cruel cruel God administration.

I thought it was funny Will gave up on looking for White after moving a country and then a school for her because there were 6 White's in the school. I mean it is just comical. How hard is it to go to six different rooms in a school ?

It is actually unclear at the end the prince won't die at 20, we just have to imagine the problem is solved somehow.

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DalangTala
DalangTala rated it
March 19, 2020
Status: c1
The translation could have been better. There are spelling mistakes and grammatically erroneous sentences. I found it hard to read.

I can't say much about the story because I cannot endure the chapter 1 anymore. But, it's full of uninteresting dialogues. There are barely descriptions on the speakers, just talk. The narration is bland. It failed to meet my expectations based from the synopsis.
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jazzykinns
jazzykinns rated it
August 13, 2019
Status: Completed
This book is a rollercoaster. At first it starts off with some standard ideas - villainess, school for nobles, parents separate because of dads supposed cheating...

But some half way through it plot twists, love twists, dimension & time twists the characters. There are layers of romance - every kind of romance - you can support.

I don't know about everyone else, but I bawled my eyes out for the pitiful boy with no red string of fate through the whole story.

Yes, it is bd*m. Prepare yourself for tying people up and... more>> drinking their blood.

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I feel for you Hades.

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siska
siska rated it
May 29, 2018
Status: c20
Love this, it's cute and have some fetish plot in some way lol ≧∇≦. Quite diffrent than any other otome novel. Really hope other chapter to come soon. Translation quality is good. Cheer for the translator-san ~\ (≧▽≦) /~
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Lunari
Lunari rated it
May 16, 2022
Status: c39
This is at best fanfic level. Sorry to be brutal, but it'd hardly make it and become a book. Which somehow is okay, because I mean, authors have to start somewhere and hardly it would be with a book.

Iirc, I think the author said in the beginning she was just starting? And it shows. It's not only by the level or content of the writing, but that the impression that I have is that the author is really really young and doesn't even have much idea about... Well.. Life.

For instance,... more>> the MC is originally a 20y doctor... One which is well established in her career and almost getting a promotion (for real). So, to my knowledge, unless she was a kid genius who graduated and went to university at 12 or something (instead of 17-18) there's no way she can be a doctor... Much less a established one almost being promoted. Just uni is 5 years (22), then there's specialization and residency or whatever it's called in English.

Most docs won't actually start working on their own till they're around 25.. If not 27-28 because they have specialization, residency, got to go through ER rounds etc.

To be well established? Near a promotion? That's certainly 30+y. I'm sorry, it's just impossible to have a 20y well established doctor. Even if there are genius kids, considering the kind of career I don't know if the medical council would let one practice medicine.

I know I got through a tangent, but this is just one little thing I'm using to illustrate the problems (there are many more). All of them give me the sense that it's a really young, sometimes I even think a 12yo or something that's writing the story.

Cause that's what we used to do back then, as a 12yo we'd think we would be this kind of over competent, perfect adult. That had life figured and settled by 25, with the perfect/dream career, probably married etc etc

All the while having no actual sense/idea, and thinking we would be soooo mature and capable (but without an actual idea of what these things entail).

So, if you're reading this, regardless of your age, please take this work with a grain of salt and as utter and complete fiction. There's little common sense or versossimillance.

Actually, if things being completely illogical, breaking common sense, or even nonsensical break immersion to you, you better not even pick this to read, cause you will be questioning this work very frequently.

I think this should rather be read by also very young ppl (pre-teens prolly) or if you found it cute and light and you can ignore everything else. If you want something more congruent, or even normal level of realistic (or with any quality) this isn't for you.

That said, although I said it's for really young ppl, I should say and agree with the people saying there is a soft S&M theme. I mean from the get go it shows (and says, with this words) that the MC's father's into bondage. The ML is a M. The MC is turning into a S. The other couple, the Wolf guy is a S/bully....

And I won't even talk about the third couple cause they "tried" (focus on the ") to talk about depression and su*cide... Which ended up being a huge disservice and honestly, triggering me. It just shows AGAIN the author is really young and has no idea what they're talking about or how these things are, but this time regarding something awfully serious and that would be taken carefully.

This is not something to be taken lightly, so it's best to AVOID IT ENTIRELY than mess with something that delicate and pass a false image/info that might make it worse for someone.

So yup although still not s*xual (for now) still not entirely up for kids. Or rather please just take all the work as comedy and so into fiction it has no representation of reality - at all.

Having already said all that, if you still need to make up your mind, since this review is already long, I'll give the tldr and then the in depth in spoiler tag.

First: writing

It's really a just starting author, there are many beginner mistakes including NO CONSISTENCY. (Also no sense of reality)

Spoiler

when she transmigrates she's two, forget a 2yo body not being physically capable of somethings like talking properly or having high dexterity, she just solves up a "serious" relationship problem of her parents, that hasn't been talking to each other since before she was born with a prank (was it even serious at all?).

But from this she'll get a little bro.

Timeskips to when she's 5, lil bro is 2. Then next scene prince is coming over to her house and... Her mother is pregnant. Oh so there's a third one coming? No, she's pregnant of lil bro.

But wait... She's 3yo then?? No. She's 5. But in the scene she met the prince when she was 5, initially the prince was 10. Then he's suddenly 5y too and they're the same age. The same way in the future, the difference in age between her and her lil bro will be 3y, but in that scene the prince is visiting in which they're (now both) 5y, the lil bro that should have been 2y is still inside their mother.

Get what I'm saying?

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You'll also notice this with scenes transitions (or lack of thereof). From time to time there'll be scenes that say start in the school cafeteria with everyone around, and suddenly it's just the two of them in the bedroom. There's just no indication, it's like the author forgot to say "lunchtime finished, we bid farewell to everyone and continued the conversation in my room" and you just have to understand it cause "huh, where did this bed come from? Are they doing this is front of everyone, wait- where IS everyone??"

Also, on the writing.. There's hardly any rhythm to it, be it narrative wise or story wise. Don't expect high and lows, hooks, climaxes, cliff hangers, drama or anything. Everything is presented as it is, on the same lightweight tone.

There's no up and downs. As such, don't expect character or even plot development. There isn't even much of a plot at all. It's just she doing things "according to her personality" and living out her life (again with high unrealistic things).

There are some - you could say cough - character arcs. But again don't expect much of it, the level of "problems" or "seriousness" is just really really low. Things that get solved in say, one or two chapters (and 2 might be too much) or in two days in story.

Spoiler

after all what could you expect from our "genius" doctor/chemist/psychiatrist/psychologist? She could solve a relation ship problem so serious that got two (idk, 100y+? How old are they even) adults not talk to ea other for 3y!! Even with their first child being born and you don't know think they would have to talk about her (or to her. It makes it seem like her mom doesn't talk at all, lol) by just pranking them.

In the end it was only a misunderstanding of such a basal level you even wonder how they managed to become a couple and get married in the first place, much less wonder for how long they could continue married if they need a 2yo transmigrator genius kid to solve it for them.

Imagine if they had got a normal child... Poor them.

But likewise giving another example... The third couple that aggrieved/triggered me so. It starts with her going "oh no depression and su*cide are serious things it might take years to cure..." cue in next day (no, seriously) "she's going to kill herself! GO, SAVE HER 3RD ML, YOU'RE HER CP/OTP!!" *angel in shining armor rushes to the rescue* everything magically solves itself, curse and su*cide level depression by the power of LOVE!! (And only love this time. I swear the prince/1rst ML was by the power of S&M)

But I mean, why do we even need doctors right? When things can be cured by the power OF SM I mean, LOVE!

Gee, I wonder where did she get her degree w 20yo?

(That's actually the root of everything isn't it? She just bought that...

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Which actually leads me to the next point. No world/setting development! Again, there seemed to be an initial idea that could be used/expanded, that could have it's inherent problematic/conflict that should pour over and at least influence the cast. But nope, cause this just lacks -forget depth or development- COMMON SENSE!

Spoiler

oh so we have 2 warring nations that decided to stop the conflict through a marriage... Ofc you two can drop the arranged marriage. I'm sure everyone will understand, it's not like there's a war going on and ppl (apparently) dyeing left and right, you two being happy and not having to marry someone you don't love is much more important! We will stop conflict anyway, no need for you to marry, I don't know why we thought of a marriage in first place. Actually... Why are we warring?

Or... Oh, so there are 3 races, and the angels are so much better/more prideful than demons and won't mingle with that evil race! But they do sell ppl to be s*xual s*aves of nobles? How are they worse than the demons again? Why do they despise each other?

But wait... Angels are just... Ppl with wings then? Same thing?

Or so the only prince/heir to the vampire kingdom can die any moment and won't live past... was it 20? And his parents are... Completely okay with it?? Not worried with succession in any way or form or even their kid?

So, is he being completely cast aside because of it or is he getting some training for he may be the future king someday?

And actually continuing last spoiler box. She graduated in medicine ok... But since when do doctors actually know how to MAKE (yes, make, not prescribe) not only medicine but also cosmetics??

And she's going on about how there must be anti ageing creams and whatnot cause she's already 13!!! But...

Aren't they vampires? That don't age and live till 500? Would there even be a need/demand for it? Oth the sunblocker that might be more interesting will probably be treated as a measly cosmetic instead of you know... Revolutionary, life changing technology for normal vampires that can now daywalk!

Which wouldn't change their whole economy and probably even their bellic power?

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But anyways, see what I meant by she being this "apparently" super medic/chemist/psychologist/psychiatrist? But truth is she won't actually be/have the knowledge to back it up.

Some knowledges/professions just change how you think and look at things, and authors have to have enough at least superficial knowledge to emulate it in their characters. For IE an actual doctor would see someone ill/having a fit and at least have an idea of what it could be, what they could do our what they shouldn't do.

A character with military training probably access situations and places differently, like noting potential dangers and escape routes.

While a normal person wouldn't even think someone could be thinking these things.

In the end, in this story, her being a doc is just used to justify she being a holy mother, that'll will get into SM cause "that's what is curing the mc!!" Instead of say, actually learning about a vampires biological system, how it's different and trying to make a new medicine. No, that's her "treatment".

When she's 5, she won't try to treat him because "we're vampires, we could be whole different beings to humans, and idk anything about vampire physiology" but because she doesn't have her tools.

Likewise, it's used to give her a free-pass to things the author thinks doctors should know, like learning alchemy in 1 week and making shampoo in 30m.

Idk if there is anyone still reading till here, but in any case, the tldr is what I said in the very beginning.

Don't expect anything from this work and perhaaaaps you can find it cute or the SM comedy parts funny and don't care about anything else.

If you don't have much time, or can't turn off your critic sense (or logic, or you know, common sense) this isn't for you. This a beginner's work, prolly by a young author, more of a fanfic than a LN.

If you think it seemed interesting/had promise, it's more because the original premise/setting seemed interesting, different or because there was so much that could be done with it.

But the truth is it won't because it just isn't that kind of work. It will always be at a really shallow level, with poor problematic (and solutions), same lightweight tone and comedy.

I forced myself to read till almost ch40 and that's it. I won't read other 40chs cause imo that's the level of the story and another 40 chs won't change it. Hopefully the author will continue writing, and when they're older and more experienced they'll be able to bring this raw creativity up to level. <<less
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The1Rin
The1Rin rated it
June 24, 2019
Status: Completed
I really enjoyed this novel, started reading it long ago so I waited until most of the chapters came out to re-read it and I still loved it just as much. There was a lot of important character so I often got confused who was who but I didn't hate anyone...

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Expect the "heroine". who was mostly just annoying.

It had a pretty slow start and near the end was faster as the MC finally realized her feelings so I was hoping the epilogue and side stories would be about the future of the MC and ML but nope, it was about the friends hanging out and it followed the fox and wolf romance even though they already liked each other since the middle of the story. All of a sudden their engagement was broken and the rest of the chapters were about them getting together even though it was implied they were already together, I didn't mind it and it was sweet but I wanted more from the main couple before focusing on others.

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I loved this novel and had high expectations for it with a unique MC and ML personality/relationship I really wanted to see their end and future, but there were no wedding bells or glimpse of their future. So I would have left a higher rating but the end ruined it as I spend a long time waiting for a happy end instead I got an incomplete side story because of it the MC and ML story doesn't feel finished <<less
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reed_wei_wei rated it
May 5, 2018
Status: c12
I just read them and falling in love with them because they just give you the moe~~ feeling.

You might just feel that it take the same route like others transmigration novel aka the villains comeback but hey... it just they few first chapter... it's worth the wait to see the how the development varies...

I will update my rating later after the novel continues a lot more...
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Aqua Leila
Aqua Leila rated it
July 14, 2019
Status: Completed
I don't know what to say.

I like the idea of this novel but it's entirety is...

At first, I thought its only reincarnation. Like those 'reincarnated into a villain in an otome game and reversed/change her fate' novel with some weird fitishes (bd*m and all that) involved. I would have loved that if it's only THAT!

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Around the ending it became weird! Like, What?! She had a son?! And What?! She had a fiancée even though she had a son?! And all those mysteries (ex: Noir) left by the author unfinished!

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I was really left speechless by this novel! And while I was left speechless the author ended it just like that with an antagonistic and hanging ending with some extra pages for shipping others. You serious?!

I really felt sorry for two, no three people.

1. Hades

2. Hades's son (forgot his name)

3. The heroine

Spoiler

They were hit by the collateral damage.

Although I'm really not sure with the 3rd if I'll feel sorry for her or not. But she was still a victim.

'Cause if she wasn't reincarnated with her past memories and had a fresh start she would have been a different person. Also, she was used for a plot/scheme to make the MC go back to the Underworld. In a sense she's pitiful.....?

Anyway, the third was doubtful, however the other two was what really made me weep, hard.

Why would you choose other man over the King of the Underworld?!

And you also had a son with him!

You sure you have the right screw girl?!

Even though I know that a story with all happy-all-go-lucky ending is a little biased. But I can't help it! The story itself is biased too!

Like, Are you for real?! Aren't they just high school students?! And they can have s**. And I was like, WHAT?!

Oh my three views!

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I don't know how to rate this. (But let's just give 3 for now)

'Cause in a sense I do like the plot (the beginning and half, not the end) and its extra bd*m bonus. But..... this was the first novel that gave me the most complex feeling I ever felt since I started reading in NU. <<less
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