For example: I mean, it is one thing to say, "the tutors were surprised and all praises with how quick this ojou-san learns" but another thing to put that plus additional MC-perspective lines like "I came from a good family, finished doctors, was very successful and learned everything in just one week that the only bad thing that happened was that my boyfriend who had the same social standing as I am cheated on me." Then again, it turns out even that cheating is "alright" because "I am successful anyway so I can find someone else. Besides, I think that boyfriend only love me because of my money anyway" even though she just stated that they were from the same standing?! So like.... I don't get the logic...?

I would've reallly appreciated a humble MC. They have a certain charm to them, and not to mention make them easily likeable in my opinion.

First, the only reason this story took form is because, after MC died, because she was sooooooooo good, the person who guards purgatory or something can't put MC yet to heaven because of some problem or whatever so... send her to another world as a villainess instead to push her to do evil! Or test until what point can she remain "good." Yes, a very convincing plot.

Another, for example: In the "debut" scene where MC visited the palace for the first time, after running and hiding behind a bush in order to escape those "social-climbing" nobles, once MC was finally able to gather her bearings, she looked down and realised she stepped on someone! And stepped on that someone real hard. And I was like "Is this supposed to be a poor attempt of an M? A sad excuse of an encounter?" Apologies but it's not working. I mean you'd have to be really soooo detached from your surroundings for you to not notice that you were already stepping on a person. Like hello? A change in ground elevation? Change in "texture"?

But, lo, of course that person turns out to be the capturable prince so it's alright. But then, next thing that happened was that prince insinuating that MC cared for him. Like... huh? Idk... but he did keep on asking and insisting that "Why do you care about me? Why do you care about me? I just want to know!" The person just asked you if you're alright and did CPR because your heartbeat stopped and it already becomes an abnormal, romantic kind of caring? Well, that scene did pretty much make me feel that way. Yknow... kinda like those typical cliche scenes where ML kept on pressuring and asking MC why MC cared so much for the ML until MC ends up confessing and they get their happily ever afters? The only difference is that that should happen after considerable progress had happened between MC and ML, not on their first meeting! :| Worse. I actually wouldn't be surprised if that's what will happen. Happy ending. End of story. lol :|

Also, I don't understand... MC is just about 5 years old, but going to the palace was already considered her "social debut"? Sorry, but when the debut was mentioned, I automatically thought that it was the same kind of debut as to that that should take place when ladies turn 15 or so. Even how good they are. Even if they're already engaged to a prince. It's always somewhere 10+. So uh... if 5 is the norm in this world or if it's just because MC is sooo good hence the obvious advance for her case so.... I'll just give it the benefit of the doubt. -_-

Early on, it was already mentioned the new world was from an otome game someone close to MC played. Of course, it's not MC herself because playing games was beyond her, she had no time for such things because she was soooo busy studying and making money. But! A few chapters later and you get something like "The Prince route was like this and that. And I chose the Prince route because of this and that, " as if she was the one that played it. So umm... what?

If the start was any indication as well, she should be avoiding the prince (she did imply she'd do so) but in all their meet-up scenes only showed her submitting to whatever Prince do to her... like bite her neck for example. She's complaining, but she's not doing anything herself!

Also, she's supposed to be a doctor. So I actually thought there's some medicinal development involved, like a medicinal explanation of the prince's condition for example. Then, lo, of course, MC diagnosed everything was just psychological after all! So one way to learn more about and/ solve it? Teach him basic fear! Blindfold him, grab a belt and do whipping sounds to stimulate excitement fear. I really don't understand this development.

This just ++ convinced me that author-san doesn't know what to do and is just putting in random 'good' things he/she could think of just to start the suggestive M scenes. Idk. Irdk. Hah, I'm tired. :|

Also, did I forget to mention after prince did an insisting-pressure-questioning if whether or not MC cared about him, he also asked her to grope him next? So... yeah. Whatever.

FL's friend had a crush on ML. She was friend-zoned by the ML, but she asked ML for a kiss as her last request. THE ML f*ckING AGREED TO HER REQUEST!!!!! LIKE WTF, DUDE! YOU AND FL ARE ABOUT TO GET MARRIED, AND YET YOU ARE OKAY WITH THAT! I wouldn't be happy if I were in FL's position, even if it was just a request... I GOT SO f*ckING ANGRY THAT I WANTED TO SHOUT AT THIS AUTHOR!!! FL then appears, and they got caught! I f*cking hate the ML. He doesn't deserve FL... She's better off with someone loyal... I really liked this, but I was disappointed... I didn't even bother finishing with that type of ML... (so unloyal..). They were about to get married too...

she's someone who is supposed to have no sin, but as far as I could tell... She should have 'pride' as a sin. Plus there's no way that someone is as pure as to have committed no sin, unless you didn't live at all. It's not like she's humble or modest, you can say. She blatantly blows herself up at any chance she gets, constantly reminding us, readers that she's a 'great' doctor and has lived for 20 + 2 years. It's too a point where it is the ticket for her to go the Imperial Palace (I forgot what it's called.) so that her father can go show her off to people. But when they get there, she's abandoned by her 'doting' father and is left to the wolves, who only want her as to climb up the hierarchy.

Not only did she decide to hide in a rose bush that would have stabbed you and left many holes, she stepped on the ML and act as if she's never experienced contact with a body before. Also, her 'doctorly' actions were poor and you probably wouldn't want her as your doctor.

Moving on from their initial encounter that was crudely done, it goes onto the MC's and ML's interactions that are as flat as Salar de Uyuni. The ML's attraction to the MC is that she makes his blood 'pump' because he has a condition where his heart isn't normally pumping blood. (Makes you kind of wonder how he's survived this long) Meeting the MC and drinking her blood (which tastes like chocolate (strange to say)) triggered the attraction. Then it turns strange but isn't bad, where the ML is an 'm'. The sounds of whipping made him feel excited. Just prostrating himself on his knees before her was making his blood pump faster than normal for him. *cough*

She then gets a 'wicked' idea after that little part to bite him as he wanted her to, to scare him. (Like... Did you forget that he's an 'm'? You're basically gifting him a present there ?. Her luck is as bad as ever, getting caught by her father as she straddles the ML. It really makes you wonder what the f*ck is actually going on and does the author remember that they're very young children?

Not only did they make up in the worst kind of way ever (with the MC acting totally OOC and not for her age), with a pointless red blanket/ sheet thrown over her father and her mother coming in to see this... like that's another sin there already for the MC, deceit. Ahem, but going on... aren't you a vampire? So how could you not tell that your lover is dead or not? Not only did you fail to use your senses, the make up was just a 'total misunderstanding' with both side not wanting to speak to each other...

I mean, come on! Hades warned her not to mess with fate but he was actually the one who messed with fate? To the point where he had a freaking CHILD with her? To the point where he cut the red string between the main couple and literally stabbed her with the scissors he used. And I read a spoiler that the heroine was actually the conniving "best friend" of White reincarnated. *sigh* There are only a few chapters left and I doubt we'll see character development or retribution from her.

This is super spoiler!!

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Aye, the heroine of the game is a reincarnator too. She is that two face best friend in MC's previous life.

She try to kill MC because of you know... same old habit but got punish in the end. And Luler X Chiwa is happy ever after~~

The big giant sigh is for the dog blood the author dumped this story with, in order to prove one cannot go against fate, she sacrificed the supporting male lead and their child.

Really, author you didn't have to go that far, I don't hate the ML because he's a sweet slightly yandere but I feel absolutely miserable for the7 also very sweet supporting male lead and their pitiful child.

She parted them when the child was only 5 years old, and gave them hope when MC woke up again several years later due to her child wanting her back and then parted them again for all eternity this time and the worse part is, MC doesn't remember one bit of it... she doesn't know what she lost.

I have to say I absolutely HATE memory wipe for the sake of convenience, yes supporting male lead probably did something wrong trying to cut the fate of MC and ml, but ML asked him to take care of her and fate s*upidly made it so that ML would die w/o every getting together with MC for TWO LIFETIMES!

Can I blame the supporting male lead for wanting her to not be in pain and grief for the rest of her life and so he severed her memories and connection to ml... I can't because he didn't do it entirely for selfishness.

But to go as far as to wipe her memories of her child, really f*cking great, I feel so damn bitter and fury at this, her child did nothing wrong, did he deserve to be forgotten forever by his mother? f*ckING NO.

It seems that the three of them knew each other. It all started when Hades was punished to live his life as a mortal being and then he, being a child tried to su*cide to go back to the Underworld, then a female child rescued him and he. Hades, became her foster brother. The MC was betrothed to her childhood friend which is the ML and the three played together. Soon a war broke out, ML and Hades has to go to the war and ML died protecting Hades, telling Hades that he needs to take care of MC now that he's gone. Hades knew that the ML and MC are destined to each other because of the red string of fate that is connecting them, so when he told the MC about the ML's death, MC cried and fell into depression. Hades then ask our MC if she would like to forget her lover. She said yes, because it is too painful for her to bear, so Hades, with a scissors of the Underworld that could cut the red string of fate, cut hers, so that she could forget all of her past memories and was sent to the Underworld. There, she didn't remember anything and Hades told her that they were lovers, they became together, she then got a son with Hades, the son then went to a "closed room" and was found by our MC touching the scissors of the Underworld that Hades hidden, but due to some sort of accident she cut herself with it and Hades came at that moment. Hades knew that the soul of MC will now go to the "Circle of Reincarnation" but he stabbed half of the scissor to MC's body, in that way, her former body will stay in the Underworld, their son then cried not knowing why his mother collapsed and why did his father, Hades, stabbed her mother's body. Then, Hades encountered White which has the soul of his former wife, he then decided to send MC's soul to a world where she's going to die fast, in that way they are going to reunite together in a faster way. After that, he then encountered the soul of MC's fiance that died after White because he couldn't live without her which is the ML's soul and thought of sending him to another world but when he saw that the ML and MC's soul has the red string of fate, he remembered his childhood friend and sent to him to a world where White was sent, there, they became Luler and Shiwa. Also, I think it's heavily implied that both Luler and Shiwa had that destiny to be together but Hades butted in. Hades is once again trying to bu*t in between Luler and Shiwa.

I feel for you Hades.

The whole Sunny plot is a bit bizarre. Why did she kill herself after tricking White and not at least try to tempt Will again? I guess the son sent her into the game world afterwards, but it is sad to think Sunny is stuck as a third wheel for White even after reincarnation. Did she even know Will was the prince ?

Would make more sense if the son attempted to reincarnate as White's son in the game world rather then put his mother through this cruel ordeal, but this whole part of the story is somewhat messed up and tragic really. Is all of this a punishment for Hades? Obviously nothing remotely human could continue for eternity without making a mistake, cruel cruel God administration.

I thought it was funny Will gave up on looking for White after moving a country and then a school for her because there were 6 White's in the school. I mean it is just comical. How hard is it to go to six different rooms in a school ?

It is actually unclear at the end the prince won't die at 20, we just have to imagine the problem is solved somehow.

when she transmigrates she's two, forget a 2yo body not being physically capable of somethings like talking properly or having high dexterity, she just solves up a "serious" relationship problem of her parents, that hasn't been talking to each other since before she was born with a prank (was it even serious at all?).

But from this she'll get a little bro.

Timeskips to when she's 5, lil bro is 2. Then next scene prince is coming over to her house and... Her mother is pregnant. Oh so there's a third one coming? No, she's pregnant of lil bro.

But wait... She's 3yo then?? No. She's 5. But in the scene she met the prince when she was 5, initially the prince was 10. Then he's suddenly 5y too and they're the same age. The same way in the future, the difference in age between her and her lil bro will be 3y, but in that scene the prince is visiting in which they're (now both) 5y, the lil bro that should have been 2y is still inside their mother.

Get what I'm saying?

after all what could you expect from our "genius" doctor/chemist/psychiatrist/psychologist? She could solve a relation ship problem so serious that got two (idk, 100y+? How old are they even) adults not talk to ea other for 3y!! Even with their first child being born and you don't know think they would have to talk about her (or to her. It makes it seem like her mom doesn't talk at all, lol) by just pranking them.

In the end it was only a misunderstanding of such a basal level you even wonder how they managed to become a couple and get married in the first place, much less wonder for how long they could continue married if they need a 2yo transmigrator genius kid to solve it for them.

Imagine if they had got a normal child... Poor them.

But likewise giving another example... The third couple that aggrieved/triggered me so. It starts with her going "oh no depression and su*cide are serious things it might take years to cure..." cue in next day (no, seriously) "she's going to kill herself! GO, SAVE HER 3RD ML, YOU'RE HER CP/OTP!!" *angel in shining armor rushes to the rescue* everything magically solves itself, curse and su*cide level depression by the power of LOVE!! (And only love this time. I swear the prince/1rst ML was by the power of S&M)

But I mean, why do we even need doctors right? When things can be cured by the power OF SM I mean, LOVE!

Gee, I wonder where did she get her degree w 20yo?

(That's actually the root of everything isn't it? She just bought that...

oh so we have 2 warring nations that decided to stop the conflict through a marriage... Ofc you two can drop the arranged marriage. I'm sure everyone will understand, it's not like there's a war going on and ppl (apparently) dyeing left and right, you two being happy and not having to marry someone you don't love is much more important! We will stop conflict anyway, no need for you to marry, I don't know why we thought of a marriage in first place. Actually... Why are we warring?

Or... Oh, so there are 3 races, and the angels are so much better/more prideful than demons and won't mingle with that evil race! But they do sell ppl to be s*xual s*aves of nobles? How are they worse than the demons again? Why do they despise each other?

But wait... Angels are just... Ppl with wings then? Same thing?

Or so the only prince/heir to the vampire kingdom can die any moment and won't live past... was it 20? And his parents are... Completely okay with it?? Not worried with succession in any way or form or even their kid?

So, is he being completely cast aside because of it or is he getting some training for he may be the future king someday?

And actually continuing last spoiler box. She graduated in medicine ok... But since when do doctors actually know how to MAKE (yes, make, not prescribe) not only medicine but also cosmetics??

And she's going on about how there must be anti ageing creams and whatnot cause she's already 13!!! But...

Aren't they vampires? That don't age and live till 500? Would there even be a need/demand for it? Oth the sunblocker that might be more interesting will probably be treated as a measly cosmetic instead of you know... Revolutionary, life changing technology for normal vampires that can now daywalk!

Which wouldn't change their whole economy and probably even their bellic power?

Around the ending it became weird! Like, What?! She had a son?! And What?! She had a fiancée even though she had a son?! And all those mysteries (ex: Noir) left by the author unfinished!

They were hit by the collateral damage.

Although I'm really not sure with the 3rd if I'll feel sorry for her or not. But she was still a victim.

'Cause if she wasn't reincarnated with her past memories and had a fresh start she would have been a different person. Also, she was used for a plot/scheme to make the MC go back to the Underworld. In a sense she's pitiful.....?

Anyway, the third was doubtful, however the other two was what really made me weep, hard.

Why would you choose other man over the King of the Underworld?!

And you also had a son with him!

You sure you have the right screw girl?!

Even though I know that a story with all happy-all-go-lucky ending is a little biased. But I can't help it! The story itself is biased too!

Like, Are you for real?! Aren't they just high school students?! And they can have s**. And I was like, WHAT?!

Oh my three views!