The Transmigrated Senior Martial Brother

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In novels with a stud there is always a Senior Martial Brother like this:

In the early stages of the novel, his innate talent is high, his cultivation is good, his appearance is handsome, and he has an intelligent, cute younger Martial Sister as a fiancée.

In the middle stages of the novel, he is caught unprepared and defeated by a young disciple (the protagonist) in the sect who’s hardly remarkable at all. From then on, he falls from his godly altar and loses his brilliance. Even his young Martial Sister leaves him for someone else.

In the late stages of the novel, he continues to turn dark, going down the Demonic Path and becoming the major villainous boss. However, the protagonist still ruthlessly defeats him and his soul is eternally sealed.

Once Qin Mo opened his eyes, he discovered that he had become this Senior Martial Brother.

Associated Names
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Xuyên việt chi đại sư huynh
穿越之大师兄
Related Series
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The Big Landlord (2)

Latest Release

Date Group Release
06/18/19 Betwixted Translations c32
06/11/19 Betwixted Translations c31
06/04/19 Betwixted Translations c30
05/28/19 Betwixted Translations c29
05/21/19 Betwixted Translations c28
05/14/19 Betwixted Translations c27
05/07/19 Betwixted Translations c26
04/30/19 Betwixted Translations c25
04/23/19 Betwixted Translations c24
04/16/19 Betwixted Translations c23
04/09/19 Betwixted Translations c22
04/02/19 Betwixted Translations c21
03/26/19 Betwixted Translations c20
03/19/19 Betwixted Translations c19
03/12/19 Betwixted Translations c18
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Attica
Attica rated it
December 10, 2018
Status: Completed
Your enjoyment of this novel heavily depends on a single factor: whether you enjoy the archetypal rapey Yandere without any good writing behind the trope. There, you've probably already made your decision.

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Summary: Transmigrated senior brother MC attracts the attention of a very very Yandere ML, who actively frames MC to isolate him

Pros: Extreme Yandere for those of you who are into that stuff. Some good ideas about "oh a single choice can turn someone into a saint or a demon" (... that aren't followed up on at all and don't... more>> make a lot of sense). And I guess morbid curiosity to see what would happen next to MC?

Cons: Oh boy.

    • Very abrupt and rushed writing style. It feels like ML falls in Yandere love over like 2 chapters. We don't get to see him fall in love, it's completely brushed over as "oh MC dropped by and helped him out from bullies, welp now ML is in love I guess). I think the author tried to give some side characters depth, but then they either a) got shafted by ML being possessive or b) abandoned that development and died.
    • The transmigration thing was completely dropped and honestly rather pointless.
    • The plot was just disjointed in general, without a central storyline/goal. The worldbuilding was pretty lacking, with the usual Xianxia "hey here have this random secret realm or other world thrown in out of nowhere".
    • MC's character arc is not hopeful at all. It's a relentless downwards spiral of his situation continuously getting worse, mostly because ML is ruining everything. The story ends on an awkward note riiiight as MC and ML were just beginning to reconcile.
Overall... yes, this is extreme Yandere with explicit noncon, and IMO it's not even well-written or deliciously angsty or anything. It's literally just that particular trope in the most stereotypical/meh form possible. <<less
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ElinaViolets
ElinaViolets rated it
May 24, 2018
Status: c01
I hope this novel gets fully translated by someone, for I see potential in this one.

The teaser is written pretty good; hardly to no grammar-errors, and you can follow and understand the phrases well.

I kind of envy those that will find this story later when it's fully translated, because although the premise isn't new by any means, I was still wondering how the author will handle their own version of the stereotypical "Senior Martial Brother"-storyline.
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monochromatics
monochromatics rated it
January 17, 2019
Status: Completed
Wow. Where do I start.

First, I would like to say that this is the first novel I completed entirely on my own (with the help of listening to it through Google Translate). This is a huge accomplishment to me simply because once I lose interest in a novel, I drop it like it's hot. I also have the attention span of a potato, so I can't believe I actually finished this over the course of 2 months. But why am I rating it 3 stars? (Really, it's 2.5 but I... more>> rounded up.) There's a few reasons, and they require me to spoil some things so I will place those in spoiler boxes.

I must say that I relatively enjoyed the first half to three-fourths-ish of the novel. I say relatively because I didn't understand everything. Qin Mo and Lin Zizheng does a lot of dimension/interface-hopping throughout the novel and I was just sitting there like, "Wait, what just happened???" but Plot (TM), I guess. If you ignore that, a lot does happen in every dimension, so you won't be bored out of your mind. The plot pacing isn't too fast nor too slow, but there are few times where the author uses time jumps without any warning. There are also some of your typical deus ex machina plot devices,

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e.g., Fox Lord/little fox turns out to be the prince of the nine-tailed foxes/fox tribe (?) and his older sister is super OP. She was chained in a place and Qin Mo's the only one who is able to save her just because he happens to be the descendant (or was it reincarnation... or maybe he just received the dude's martial arts, idr) of this guy whom I never really bothered to figure out who the heck he was - bc at that point I was just plowing on and stopped trying to understand everything lol. Due to this, she owes him a favor. As for the favor, well, even if I'm already spoiling things right now, I don't think I should spoil this. If you really, desperately must know, I guess you could PM me or something.

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Now, the thing that really peeved me the most is that Lin Zizheng held on good for most of the novel. He was obsessive, yeah, but he never crossed the bottom line. This spoiler, you might want to read because it's a tag that some of you guys don't like (including me), or is a trigger warning for some people.

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I really hoped he wasn't going to do the one thing that turns me off the very most from novels - especially in this genre - and that is rape. I was so, so, so, SO (did I mention SO????????) disappointed. I read Attica's review when I was already around chapter 60 and I nearly dropped it, but I still held on to hopes. Yeah, no. And not only does he rape Qin Mo in a fit of jealousy, he does it several times I believe. He also forces a sort of lovers' binding flower thing on him, where if anyone other than your lover touches you, you get this burning feeling. (Eventually, this flower thing becomes significant for something else that happens later on.) I was so mad and felt so bad for Qin Mo that I shed a few tears. Yes, actual tears. I was so disappointed and sad that even when I got up to the part where Lin Zizheng says, "I love you" to Qin Mo, it did not have any effect on me.

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So that is the main reason why I took off stars. Honestly, I don't think I would've finished this novel if that event occurs early on in the novel. But since I was already nearly done, I decided that heck, I'll just finish it.

Now, the last thing. The ending. When I got up to chapter 103, I was under the impression that there were more chapters because there were still loose ends. It ended really abruptly and I was so confused lmao. But then when the author said in the author's section that she felt it was a good place to end, I was like, I guess you can sort of say that.

Spoiler

That's only because when Lin Zizheng asks Qin Mo if they could start over, Qin Mo goes, "I forgive you, but I don't think I can ever love you..." To that, Lin Zizheng answers with okay, but he thinks to himself that he has time and one day, Qin Mo will come to love him. Call me whatever, but I was satisfied that Qin Mo doesn't all of a sudden realize he's been hopelessly in love with Lin Zizheng all along. I know in some novels, a lot of hand-wavy stuff happens and everyone's happy at the end, but rape is just a big no to me. :/

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If you're not bothered by these things, then this is an okay read. Otherwise, you'll be happier spending your time reading something else. <<less
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rhianirory
rhianirory
October 31, 2018
Status: c6
i really like that MC take a while to adjust to his new life and his new body and he has moments when he fumbles and fails, like having no clue how to move his spirit power at first. it's a little more realistic than those novels where the MC takes half a paragraph to accept what happened and he somehow automatically knows everything about cultivation without even having to go through their "new" memories.

the only thing I find dubious is the MC's past identity as a surgeon. in c5... more>> it says he remembers his past 20 years of life.... there is no way a 20 year old could be any kind of a surgeon when 6 or 7 years of college are the norm to become a general practitioner doctor. it hasn't said anything about him being a genius child prodigy and he would have had to start college at age twelve or thirteen to be an established surgeon at age 20.

other than that, though, I am enjoying the story.

on a side note, I see the the people who rate all BL as 1 have been by. I honestly don't get their compulsive need to rate without bothering to read. <<less
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Delesaria
Delesaria rated it
October 21, 2018
Status: --
So far, it's been riveting. I like that the MC actually needs time to adapt to the transmigration and that he brings his experience and skills from his previous life with him. It's interesting to see an MC who isn't OP, but also isn't useless. The new translator is great; they made it a very smooth, enjoyable read.
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birdycrow
birdycrow rated it
December 9, 2018
Status: c10
I’ve only had Qin Mo for ten chapters but if anything happened to him I would kill everyone in this room and then myself. I would die for this precious bean, I would kill for him, if he gave me a smile I would destroy the world for him, , , anyway read this if only for how utterly precious and adorable Qin Mo is.
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Platos_Redhaired_Stepchild
MC named Qin Mo is a surgeon who reincarnates into an "evil villain" Xianxia character. Qin Mo acidentally changes the future of Lin ZiZheng aka "the hero" from a Righteous Cultivator to a Demonic Cultivator by being nice to him.

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Twist, history isn't changed that much, Lin Zizheng frames Qin Mo for the crimes QM was accused of in the novel so his life is ruined. This is all a plot by LZZ to keep Qin Mo all to himself because he "loves" him. Since Qin Mo is a cinnamon roll to pure and good for this world, reading about Lin Zizheng abusing him and conniving to murder his friends & loved ones & even pets is sort of nauseating.

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kisa-chan
kisa-chan rated it
April 26, 2019
Status: Completed
I was gonna rate it 1-star but then I enjoyed the first part of the story so I made it 2... and then another star for the translator...

It was there in the tag and usually I don't mind it since it's just a story, but WHOA.. I CANNOT OVERLOOK IT THIS TIME.. Dashixiong, I just wanna protect you...
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It was satisfying that in its last chapter, he didn't end up with him right away and said that he won't love him... although there were some hints there since ML did "die" for him.. In the bonus chapters, he did soften on him again so they'd end up together

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But still 3 stars... I'm still disgusted with the ML
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