Pirates Achievements System

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“Ron” found himself inexplicably in the world of One Piece, after he was hit by a speeding truck. Facing a life-threatening situation, our hero was rescued by the fourteen-year-old Nami. After discovering his capability of evoking an achievement system, Ron’s adventure in one of his favorite fantasy worlds has started.

Achievement: Small Fortune (Get 10 million berries)

Achievement: Self-Discipline (1000 hours of practice time)

Achievement: Berserker Mode (10,000 hours of practice time)

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Nami said with dull eyes: “what did you say…fifth-level magic?”

“Yes! it’s called The Last Judgment.”

Associated Names
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海贼之成就系统
Related Series
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Recommendations
Super Card System (1)
One Piece: The Soul Purchasing Pirate (1)
One Piece Talent System (1)
God Of Soul System (1)
Recommendation Lists
  1. Strike while it is Hot

Latest Release

Date Group Release
07/13/20 translatin_Otaku c71
07/12/20 translatin_Otaku c70
07/11/20 translatin_Otaku c69
07/09/20 translatin_Otaku c68
07/08/20 translatin_Otaku c67
07/06/20 translatin_Otaku c66
07/05/20 translatin_Otaku c65
07/03/20 translatin_Otaku c64
07/01/20 translatin_Otaku c63
06/29/20 translatin_Otaku c62
06/26/20 translatin_Otaku c61
06/24/20 translatin_Otaku c60
06/19/20 translatin_Otaku c59
06/19/20 translatin_Otaku c58
06/19/20 translatin_Otaku c57
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Draghnof
New Draghnof rated it
July 8, 2020
Status: c357
The story is very good for a fanfiction, the author follow the manga plot for more than half of the novel (the world plot) so all is really well made (even if knowing the manga it's impossible the world plot would be unchanged for nearly half of the novel... especially for Luffy :-/)

But sadly, the story deteriorate a little once the author deviate from the world plot. Although there are some exceptions, the author doesn't like to create powers for people with unknown ability, thus a lot of group... more>> of people will just be beaten in a few short sentences (for exemple
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Shanks and his crew, the men under Kaido other than the 3 disasters, Im, Edward Weevil, Mihawk,....

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) At 3 chapters from the end, it's so bad that I don't even want to finish.... I'll just finish for myself in my head.

The author made a lot of interesting things but never really developed his ideas and thus a lot of thing are left a little disappointing (
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the relationship between him and some important characters are often skipped for several tens of chapters and thus the relationship development is incredibly slow. At some point, the MC is "dead" and he can only survive in the long term as a spirit in the body of people with magic marks and thus he is in the body of Nami and thanks to the MC's power everyone thinks that Nami is extremely powerful and it helps the MC's organization to survive his "death"...... But why does he only possess Nami???? Also, the MC being a former navy was well exploited at first but when the World Government decided to kill the MC, almost all his former navy comrades just becames real foes of the MC :-/ And a lot of other such things

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The last thing is that I'm often not alright with the power level of some characters. (especially near the end)

But overall it's really good, one of the best fanfiction on the world of one piece ;-) <<less
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PewdsFan
New PewdsFan rated it
July 8, 2020
Status: c66
1) Grammar and overall reading experience - The translation is very good, makes sense and there are rarely typos.

4 STARS

2) MC and the plot - It's isekai, and the MC was a fan of one piece before he reincarnated there, so he knows the events and people, but doesn't really give a f* about the original plot (which is props to the author, because in a couple of fanfics I've read, the author is "scared" to deviate from the original plot and doesn't really add that much to the story).... more>> Going by my personal preferences the MC isn't ruthless enough. Don't get me wrong, his kill count is around 2000 around c66, but I prefer a ruthless and cold blooded MC. Then again the way he acts is nicely justified ->

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He helps Nami because she helped him earlier and isn't that ruthless, because he only kills his enemies for money. And his "mental abilities" help him overcome emotions.

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He grows super fast ->

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From nothing to rear-admiral power level in 1-2 years (around c70).

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The author nicely depicts how I think one piece characters would act throughout the story.

The system is similar to systems in authors other works (mainly One piece talent system), but is more defined and rewards more "widely" (for more activities).

The power system of the MC is based on runes, which have elemental powers (fire, wind, earth...) and "spirit power", which is overall pretty interesting to read.

4 STARS

3) Overall - The story is still developing, but so far is pretty good, the interactions are funny and realistic (to the one piece world), mainly for people who want a fast-paced story, power development and battles.

3, 5 stars

Gave the rating 4 stars just because I can't give a 3, 5. <<less
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Domar
Domar rated it
April 13, 2020
Status: c10
This one is alright, main character suddenly gets thrown into one piece world a few years before canon, he has no wish to follow the original events. His system let's him upgrade stats and learn magic, he starts with wind blade. Nothing special, but not bad either.
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sheehan0915
sheehan0915 rated it
May 4, 2020
Status: Completed
The story is about Ron who conquered the one piece realm.

fast pacing compared to his other works.

ranked 2nd place (1st is god of soul system[till end of one piece arc only]

good points

1. Great entry

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nami meets him before he is executed by arlong. This is feasible based on nami's personality

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2. Scaling of power is decent till before the fight with the nobles (aristocrat/government)

3. No actions are completely forced, all are somewhat in line with the character's personality.

4. Decent story

bad points.

1. Relationships feel a bit shallow.

its like there are things that happened that were skipped by the author (no story inconsistency though). Its like your watching a series and majority of the daily interactions and flirting were removed

2. System

could have designed a system that was not lottery based. The randomness and the initial exploration of magic was bad.

i prefer a skill tree type and skill books with accordance to achievements made with the system

3. All endings made by this author feels lack luster.

this maybe due to the manga not being finished, therefore having holes in the story and cut of progress.

4. Battles feels like a massacre. Well it is magic. Depends on the person reading.

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conclusion
overall all works of this author are good compared to other fan fictions in this library. <<less
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Greycat
Greycat rated it
May 3, 2020
Status: c30
What can I say about this store? It's actually really interesting. From the get go, we know we are throwing the canon plot off because we start meeting Nami. I won't spoil anymore than that but it's pretty entertaining. All in all, I recommend it. It's fun and entertaining so far.

When it comes to the system for this tale; tt's actually an original one, not just granting the power from other anime. Ron's playing around with magic and it's as powerful as you'd expect. Whether he can keep easily with... more>> the real powerhouses? We'll have to find out, but it's enough for him to deal with the fodder so far, and it's always fun to read that happen.

In terms of tone, the story doesn't take itself too seriously, so it's a light and pleasant read. Ron isn't entirely without personality either, nor is he just murder happy, being surprisingly cautious for one of these stories, rather than gun-hoe. It's a plus in my books.

This story has pacing. It's one of the first things I noticed about it. It switches between 'Story' and plot chapters, and Ron training every couple chapters. I've found that it has a good rhythm, keeping me from getting weary of the practice with his powers but also making me excited to see the progress he made in practice go into practical use. <<less
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Kamikazuchi420
Kamikazuchi420 rated it
April 28, 2020
Status: c26
I love the story on how Ron and Nami interact in the beginning, but the most impressive thing, is the translation quality, it's just high, you can read and instantly know what's going on, without getting confused
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M.A.T.R.
M.A.T.R. rated it
April 21, 2020
Status: c30
Very enjoyable and does great with the characters and setting.

The synopsis does a terrible job of showing how good the story actually is and fandom reads are usually garbage which sadly gave this read a hit.

Writing is phenomenal, Romance is not there and I'm hoping not be there anytime soon, setting is already set and ready, characters are fleshed out (Oda already fleshed them out mostly before this though, so that department was set), and the MC is actually an enjoyable and interesting person.

I forgot to mention the translator, definitely... more>> a cool person that banters in the comments sometimes and does a great job translating. <<less
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Poireau
Poireau rated it
June 3, 2020
Status: Completed
It's an above average fanfic to binge read (MTL is also ok).

    • Con: There are nothing much new about the world developpement that we already know about (if you've read the manga up to 2019). The author takes no risk at all...
    • Con: The MC is quite dull and don't really care about the world of One Piece. He really only care about his magic system, and how to unlock new achievements: those are just excuses for him to do something else than meditation.
    • Pro: The story is fast paced, and the first 50 chapters are good (4/5)
    • Pro: The MC system is not that OP
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      he is even "killed" at some point

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Infinit
Infinit rated it
May 19, 2020
Status: c39
This is a pretty good novel. Interesting plot and a good development and nice system of power and a cool headed MC. Pretty good read 🤩
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Ghalad
Ghalad rated it
April 29, 2020
Status: c27
This is a pretty chill novel, second-chance/system type of novels. A fast paced one, where the main character acquired an achievement system, which granted him runes to master different kinds of magic.

Refusing to follow the original plot, the MC started his journey in One piece world conquering variety of challenges.

if you want a fun, high paced story! This is the one for you! The translation won’t disappoint you either! Thank me later!
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