It's good light novel, which is very funny. Story doesn't really has any major up & down and it's relatively very simple and sweet. Though I kind of started to get bored but it didn't last long since they cleverly ended story rather than dragging it any further. Nice short novel which will give you diabetes from all the fluff and sweetness. (ꈍᴗꈍ)

Kinda disappointed.. Cause the reviews said that it was really funny. Yeah I have smiled at first few chapter. But than I didn't find it funny.I finished it somehow. About the characters, ML kinda bland. Didn't feel anything. MC too naive and dense.i wonder MC has read so much bl novel so how can he be this much dense?male extras kinda annoying to me. While reading the novel my face was 😐😐.

My rating was originally 3 stars but since this novel had a super unique concept with good comedy to make me laugh out loud quite some times, I think its fair that I give it 4 stars.

First lets talk about plot, I actually had thoughts that it would be like some other novels in which the two leads get transmigrated and they gotta make the Mary Sue of that world fall from heaven and point out how ridiculous the plot is or stuff.I thought that would be all.But oh boi!... more>> I was so glad to know that I was utterly wrong! So this novel is really a parody of Mary Sue. Our two leads get transmigrated as the main couple of the novel and it was so hilarious to see that their character setting was really as depicted by the author like “Whenever he was happy, rose petals would fall from his head, whenever he cried, he cried diamonds and whenever he was angry, the clouds bellowed and storm came” it really happened my bruh it really did xDDD. They had a nine hectare bed to sleep. The bathroom was 20-30 min jog away. Their familes had the whole world’s economy in their hands. And the MC was the only one who could get everyone’s hearts. Actually, the thing is that not only crappy mary sue novels, even the novels we love use phrases and character setting like “he was as fragile as porcelain, his eyes seemed to reflect the whole world and his tears were as beautiful as diamonds” I always think they are really over exaggerating and then these points being brought to light and shown how ridiculous and hilarious they were, really made my day xDDD. Tho its such a pity that there was only one world, it would have been so much better if it was a QT with each world being a parody of different kinds of Mary Sue. But anyway, this parody part was the main theme and the best part of the novel that earned these 4 stars.

I don’t have much thoughts about the MC except that this cutie really was hilarious and dense. But I gotta say a lot of things about the ML. So before reading, I read some reviews complaining about the ML and the way they used their words, I had already imagined the ML as a rapist who was manipulating the MC even tho the MC was on the verge of tears due to disgust. But when I read it, bruh really? Aren’t you guys too over the top? The ML dared to change only a lil bit of the task because wasn’t it obvious from MC’s rose petals that he was enjoying it? And when even was the MC unwilling? And whats more, not much later the MC discovered the ML’s changes and ML admitted it and started being honest. Yeah, we all love Gentle and nice MLs. But I don’t think this ML is much bad tho?

These two were really cute as a couple. Fluff, fluff and fluff!! There wasn’t any smut but some scenes were really good *cough* spanking play *cough*.

It was such a treat to see that the extras were all about the CPs formed by the additional capture targets. The admiral and the Burglar short story was really kinky, if you know what I mean (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).

Anyway it was nice short light read, why hasn’t more people read it? Y’all give it a try! You’ll love this parody novel! <<less

System world setting is really unique.

The whole novel is supposed to be funny because of it. But I only find a few chapters are worth LOL.

MC : 'I am a straight guy'. So dense. Cute and adorable

... more>> ML : He is is mentioned as a typical CEO but I didn't find him as such. He is good to MC. He already had crush on the MC which was quite visible but the MC is so dense.

The relationship development is good. They just complete their tasks. Fluff is very limited.

ML extras : Typical ML character setting of BL novels.

Smex Scenes : Nothing is explicit or detailed; brushed over.

I didn't read the extras.

Main text is only 48 chapters so it can be read.

Recommended for a short read. <<less

It's a hilarious short novel on an unwilling MC forced to act out exaggerated and overdramatic Mary Sue (Gary Stu?) Plots with his rich, cold-faced CEO boss. Only to realise he is not as straight as he thought he was and that cold-faced boss is actually very very hot inside hehehe

Story - 5/5

T/L - 5/5

At this point (Ch48), we're done with the main story. The rest of the 16 chapters are extras. I loved the story. It's so ridiculous that it becomes hilariously good. The tropes of Mary Sue BL Novels are highly exaggerated to induce comedy and the novel is successful in making the reader laugh. The smut is surprisingly described is very brief manner, at least in the first 48 chapters. There are some kinky parts that are described in detail, but not the final act.

I am a bit conflicted about the... more>> main characters but their interactions are funny. I don't necessarily agree that the ML is mol*sting the MC. They're forced to perform intimate scenes because of the system's mandates, and the ML decides to tweak the details slightly. I do agree that his actions aren't really 'proper' and falls slightly into the 'dubious' category. Like Efu-sama said in their review, the ML might be slightly manipulative, but he is also honest about what he did and why he did so. So, despite feeling disdain for his behavior, I also felt like I understood the ML as a person. And his actions, albeit not commended, seemed understandable and realistic in a way. As for the MC, he seemed more stereotypical as a 'straight' uke found in BL novels. He insists on being straight, but finds another side to his sexuality omce he becomes close to the ML. I love the interaction between the main characters in the real world as it seems more genuine and realistic. Overall, it's an enjoyable read but I'd advice not taking this too seriously since it's main purpose is to act as a parody of Mary Sue BLs. <<less

This novel had an entertaining premise that hooked me from the start. However, as I delved into the second half, it kinda started to lose its momentum and became repetitive.

Things I liked:

• hilarious one-liners
• fun premise with an over-the-top setting

Things I didn't like:

• repetitive: too many NPCs the MC has to conquer for bonus exp points
• romance was literally forced by the Mary Sue storyline/system. Dubcon-ish and felt pretty one-sided for most of the story
• no plot divergence possible: ML and MC were forced to follow the scenario instructions to a T. It would have been more interesting if they were able to break the story while still staying in character
• lack of chemistry between the irl characters: the Mary Sue novel characters had more tension and chemistry than the MC and his boss

The setting of the plot the MC is supposed to follow is so ridiculous. It's hilarious at first, but I skipped a lot and only read the interactions with the ML. While the first half of the story was fine, the second half was too much for me, so much second-hand embarrassment, and it became a bit slow with details I didn't really care about.

Also, I know it's a fake world and the MC and ML will get together, but I felt so sorry for the male extras who were... more>> toyed with by the kind of scummy MC.

At least they get paired off in the extras, and it seems whatever affection they felt for the MC disappears after their interaction with him. However, some are still left traumatized by it. (But there are no extras for the butler and prince, sadly.) As for the ML, some reviewers weren't happy with how he lied and took advantage of the MC, but the MC pretty much did the same to every other male extra (besides the last one, meant to make him jealous) so I didn't really mind. The MC for his part is so dense and that's where some of the comedy came from for me - but later it's just second-hand embarrassment, with how easy it is for him to toy with the extras, and then getting caught.

Overall, the story is too far into ridiculous for me, and that ridiculous setting is where the comedy comes from, so I skimmed more than I read. And after they got together, MC pretty much acted like the typical Mary Sue shou he was supposed to be parodying (but in a less ridiculous way) so I skimmed over those parts. I set 3 stars but it's more like a 2.5. I'd recommend it anyway because I just don't mesh well with comedy, and that's what this story is tagged as. It might be someone else's cup of tea, and it's fairly short and good enough to pass the time. <<less

If you're looking for dog blood-heavy bl, this is definitely not for you.

Transmigrated into an overly exaggerated mary sue world.

I laughed so hard that I teared up. My parents thought that I was crazy. I can't really explain to them that I was laughing because of rainbow/electric pee, rainbow pellets, the jealousy storm, and that they walk a thousand mile just to get to the bathroom and out of the bed, or can I?

Characters are okay, not too bad.

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I like fact the MC always think that ML's acting is really good, but the ML is just being himself. Lol.

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It's a really short one, but also very funny. The author was clearly frustrated with cliche fics when they wrote this, and I get that.

The cliches that were used-- I've never seen them around, but that made it funnier.

The MC was really, really naive, but not to the point that he came off as s*upid. He's the kind of character you want to give headpats no matter what he does.

The ML was so understanding (when he needed to be) and also very fast at admitting his mistakes.

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I loved the part where he got Ye Xi food qwq I couldn't see him eating rose petals anymore...

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Overall, it's a great novel, the plot is basically solving 'instances' and I loved that they had to redo it till they got it right especially for some parts hehe ;) 10/10 recommend! <<less

Two words: ridiculously good! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 I never laughed this much since The World Has Gone Crazy or Don't You Like Me? (Same author with Mary Sue). Never glad like this before for reading this novel. Translation is top notch too! Definitely a must read!

4.5 stars!!!LoL this novel is so much fun and cute.U basically relieved stress by reading this. No drama just laughter and cuteness. So refreshing!

Altho I did skip the extras as I thought they were unnecessary..

I managed to get through the main story and most of the first extra. Dear God that Mary Sue setting was too hard to get through. The main characters are hilarious and watching them live through the absurdity of a Mary Sue world was a lot of fun to read. The rainbow colored fluids and the marathon to the different parts of the house kept me giggling. I know some people feel a little weird on ML, since he took advantage of the missions to make his own fantasies come... more>> to life but I thought that was realistic. If you're in love with someone, you might take advantage of such a scenario so you can live it out one time in your life. I'm not saying it's right, I'm just saying it'd probably happen more than you think.

It's just that the Mary Sue world is too ridiculous I couldn't get through the extras with the male extras. It was just too much. Like I was fine with an extra where they use the MS world as their personal vacation spot that's smart but I just couldn't push past the ridiculousness any longer. <<less

first let me just laugh hhahahahahhahahah😂😂 DAAAMNNN this book got me rolling... peak comedy and a literal slap to mary sue novels...i got no words to describe the feeling of reading this book... you just have to read it!!

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in the other world... MC got rainbow pee and ML got electric pee! and alsooooo MC has flower petals falling from his heads and he is described as super gentle and he eats flower hahahahah and ML has a aura of tyranny and he can summon thunderbolts when he is angry😂😂😂😂 ITS SO RIDICULOUS AND THATS THE VERY REASON IT BECOMES SO ENJOYABLE

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JUST GIVE IT A READ AND GET SURPRISED 😂😂 <<less

High points! High points!

My first QT novel that got me bursting into laughter. One definite plus point was that there was only 1 world, and that allowed the author to write more detailed and also include all those nonsense inside. I teared at the moment . A feel good novel that really is well done is stretching the lunacy of BL fiction haha.

The story of the main cp is cute, elbeit the MC is a bit scummy. Love the ml, he is very realistic portrayed as someone who also abit flawed and pe*verted but it's actually quite normal. He is a very normal male human. Lol, . But at the end the extra males have their extra chapters of HE. So it's a good story. Actually this story also doesn't make common sense, so that it's that, makes the story funny and very realistic in the unrealistic kind of way. Just enjoy... more>> the fun. Thank you.

edit: just found out this author actually written some of my favourite sort stories! No wonder the extras cp stories are so nice! <<less

I loved this novel, it is a very entertaining parody, I laughed a lot at the jokes. And I loved the main couple, a dense MC and a little silly but very cuddly.
and a very in love and manipulative ml, but in a cruel way, just to win love MC.
If you want a fluffy novel without dramas and to laugh I recommend it 100%

This is a cute story and very well translated. I actually like one of the extra side stories the best, but overall I would read this again.

Yeah, this story is a harrasment towards mary-sue genre itself! 😂 Ah, like many bl novels, excessive description is a must. Slender waist, peach-blossom starry eyes, various kinds of flower petals falling off your head, hair drooping and becomes baby curls according to your mood swings and freaking rainbow pee and poop. Ah, the ML has electric pee too. A house that spans to 2 acres, 2 miles apart bedroom and toilet. A bodyguard every 20 metres apart. Totally Mary-sueish.

So all in all, this story is a getaway for people who's... more>> on the verge of mental breakdown from angsty and full of knives novel.

The romance comes off kind of naturally eventhough a bit fast paced since it only have about 40-ish chapters for the main couple.

I enjoyed the first extra cp too! <<less

(I'm French so sorry for my shitty English) 😅😭

Oh my God ! I love this novel! 😍

... more>> This novel is just so amazing! So cute ! But above all so funny! The author is just a genius! I think this is really the best way to make fun of Mary Sue novels! 😍😂

I love the ML so much who is so caring but also wild, and the MC, who is so off the mark and doesn't realize that the ML is madly in love with him! And besides, he brags after he notices right away when someone is in love with him just by looking him in the eye, and the ML who starts staring him in the eye for ages and is desperate that the MC does not understand that he is in love with him! This scene made me cry with laughter! 😍🥰😂

I pity ML Tsundere so much who is forced to watch the MC flirt with other men right in front of him. 😭😂

If you want to have a good time reading a cute but also ridiculously funny novel, look no further! You have found the rare pearl! I wish you a very happy and hilarious reading ! 🥰😘 <<less