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JiYuan woke up to find that he has turned into a big beauty.

System : Our goal is to….

JiYuan (without any expression) : …become a man.

This is a story about a man named JiYuan who transmigrated into the body of an icy cold big beauty.

But wait, turns out he’s still a man, just that the original body has been raised as a girl due to some superstitious belief.

On the other hand, there’s a voice in his head called ‘System’ and Jiyuan has been told by ‘System that his soul will be destroyed if he didn’t follow the tasks given to him.

Follow JiYuan on his quest to clear his name from a murder charge while trying his best to complete the ‘randomly refreshed’ tasks given by ‘System’.

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先撩为敬
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11/30/17 IAmABanana extra 4 (end)
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KKristen
KKristen rated it
October 20, 2017
Status: c52
This BL novel is pretty good. Don't be fooled by the cartoon image at the top of the page -- this has a serious story, and the characters and story progression are more believable/realistic than some others.

Summary:

JiYuan, a good-for-nothing young master in the modern world, dies of alcohol poisoning and is reborn in an ancient fantasy world. The body he has taken over is a beautiful woman who was captured by the demon lord, just before she was going to be forced to marry a villainous man. But no one... more>> knows that the cold-faced miss is actually a "mister"...

When he's reborn, JiYuan is informed by the disembodied voice, "System, " that he must complete tasks for his new body's character in order to survive. Additionally, any actions deemed too OOC ("out of character") will result in his soul being eradicated.

Characters:

Usually, I like to write a detailed character description for the main characters, but I feel like too many details will give the interesting twists in the plot away. So for now, you'll have to make due with this:

    • The main character, JiYuan, is believable and not annoying. He behaves realistically for someone who suddenly died and was reborn in a strange world, and appropriately for the limitations "System" placed upon him. His change in mindset/perspective over time is gradual and makes sense.
    • The male lead, Ye Junchi, is devilishly handsome, mysterious, and dedicated, but he's also well-grounded. His character is consistent, and I appreciate the fact that even though he's domineering and possessive, he's not as "rapey" as many other BL men.
    • "System" is a surprisingly good character -- instead of a robotic voice or appraisal/stats screen, it's actually an artificial intelligence that interacts with the MC. Their conversations are comedic and System's "advice" add a unique aspect to the story.
Writing:

    • The story has an overarching crime-solving/mystery plot -- where the main characters are framed for a crime and spend the novel finding answers to resolve it -- but don't worry, the tone isn't too "detective" or "crime show"-like.
    • This BL story is steamy but not smutty. In comparison to many other stories, this one is pretty tame. PG-13, maybe, but not R.
    • The translation quality is good. A couple of minor errors here and there, but barely noticeable. Overall, it's very good, and much better than MTL.
Update:

The ending felt a bit rushed and didn't have as much tension as in the beginning of the story. I sort of lost interest in the last 5-10 chapters. I think I'm going to change my rating of this story to 4.5 stars, only because the ending felt lackluster. <<less
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Clearesta
Clearesta rated it
June 16, 2017
Status: Completed
This novel is beautifully done~ This is one of my fav novels out there ~

The plot mainly about solving a killer case (it suits with the description) and finding clue that will lead into a major case.

The author also makes stories about their pasts and how their personality became like that.

Author also makes the supporting characters not some 'masses-produced-personality'. All of them have their own personality.
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Reitian
Reitian
August 3, 2017
Status: Completed
I had some mixed feelings about this novel. It starts off with a good intro and world building, picks up a bit once they ... more>>
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get to the human world

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then slows down again when the story drops a lot of background information on the reader, and finally picks up at the end again. It felt like there were random details that you could piece together, but then the story drops an explanation on you and it feels a bit redundant. The absolute best thing about this novel is the banter between the System and the MC. The MC is pretty smart. While he's limited by certain rules, he finds ways to work around them, which lead to some really funny and awkward situations. The ML is super chill but he loves to flirt with his little beauty. The MC and ML's backgrounds both suited them well but somehow I didn't feel it was weaved into the story very well. It was THERE but somehow I felt when it wasn't specifically needed, it kind of got pushed to the corner of my mind to gather dust, until it got dusted off for the plot. The characters are all unique, and add to the flavor of the story, but I wish we got to see more of them in the ending. The author also makes a halfhearted attempt at the end to finish up all the tasks.
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We never actually get to see the moment JiYuan is finally freed from the system, but we can guess that he is freed in the last chapter.

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The lack of explicit s*x scenes made me feel frustrated, not only because it would cut off RIGHT WHEN THEY DO IT, (IS THIS CENSORSHIP AH?) but also because I felt for a really long time that Ye Junchi was one-sidedly chasing JiYuan and that just didn't feel fair. I felt like maybe in bed JiYuan would act a bit differently and I really wanted to see it. Later they have cute scenes together that make up for it and shows JiYuan really did fall for Ye Junchi, he just has to show his love gradually because of the OOC limitation.

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Final thoughts: Started off strong, dragged on, 7/10. <<less
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Mi17
Mi17 rated it
November 21, 2017
Status: Completed
It's not the worst, but it's not the best so 3 stars. If you want to read a good BL novel where the ML bullies the MC then try either The Legendary Master's Wife or Counterattack of a White Lotus. If you want one with a bit of mystery then go with The Founder of Diabolism. Now for the review:

Writing wise I don't like how the story interposes the MC talking with the System in every scene. It's difficult to get into a scene when there are whole conversations the... more>> MC has with the System that no one else in the scene can hear. It basically feels like whatever action is happening just stops and so the flow of the story is pretty jarring.

Character wise the System really limits any kind of character development of the MC. You could say that the character that develops the most in the story is the System. The MC and the ML are the typical versions of the ML bullying MC cliche; there's just nothing really original in how the author writes the cliche.

Translation wise the translation needs an editor. It's readable and I'm thankful for that but to improve readability it needs to be edited. A personal pet peeve are translator interruptions in a story like if it's truly difficult to understand who's acting out which action in a paragraph then I'd prefer just replacing the "he" with the name rather than "he (name)."

So yes, 3/5. <<less
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Ichigocheesecake
Ichigocheesecake rated it
September 8, 2017
Status: c23
I AM IN LOVE . This is so adorable!!! This plot is really quite unique with how ye junchi is so tolerable. Quite a unique plot too!!! I secretly suspect that system is in love with the MC but this is just my guess I might be wrong.
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Midget_bunny
Midget_bunny rated it
August 1, 2017
Status: c23
One of my fave BL novel. It was really fluffy and cute. The ML especially is soo cute that you will not believe that he is a ruthless evil cold blooded demon king.

Here a little spoiler

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there is some reviewer said that the MC got no free will or something. I tell ya guys, this free will thingy or whatsoever will be manipulate by MC that he can control the system. N its not like the things that the system told MC to do is dark. It is more to comedy. Like run away from ML, steal smthg from ML. Also there are no rape... For goodness sake look at the tag be4 say something. After all ML is a straight.... Well b4 he met MC. Hehehe.

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if ur new to BL genre, then I think this story light enough. <<less
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Stephanie1399
Stephanie1399 rated it
July 29, 2017
Status: c22
Love this novel, I find it fun and easy to read. The characters are interesting and all have their own personalities and back stories. The main plot is interesting and serious (it's a murder mystery and framing situation that MC is try to solve with the help of others) but the author relieves the tension with the main character and side characters actions and inner thoughts. The main character is actually gay and not a man forced into a same s*x situation, which is nice, there are too many stories... more>> out there that are forcing MC and this is NOT one of them. This story is funny at times and serious at others and it keeps me coming back to read more. <<less
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stormcloud888
stormcloud888 rated it
July 30, 2017
Status: --
I had to leave a review after seeing the translators rant about the previous review here. I personally think the translator is doing a wonderful job translating. There was no problems with the idioms, very easy to understand. I hope that the translator can keep up the pace, it's gives me a happy feeling seeing this story updated.

I am someone who hates reading about a powerless MC but somehow even though the MC has limited abilities it doesn't irritate me and is part of the comedy. Also it seems that... more>> the MC is gaining more ability to adjust accomplishing his tasks. I have to really disagree that there is any sort of rape in this story (sadly) if ur looking for dark this isn't quite it. <<less
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luisfe
luisfe rated it
July 30, 2017
Status: --
i tend to avoid chinese web novel, esp wuxia/xianxia (like I can differentiate them duh). but this novel is pretty good and fun to read. yeah, fun to read although the ML is a demon. the interaction between MC and ML is actually kinda funny if you read the following chapters. I'm even doubting the ML is a real demon. you won't see many demons that are willing to accept request when there's no contract or compensation.

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till chapter 22, he actually demanded a kiss. well, I kinda expect worse. he's a demon u'see. the ML is classic example of exaggerated rumors. yeah, he's smiling but not his eyes, he kills and slaughters and all. but that happened off-screen. and I recall he did say he killed some people but not that many to make blood river. he's also quite courteous to strangers. most of time, he's just chilling around. also I must emphasize something. there's no rape here. I can think rape scene or something similar in other chinese yaoi novel. but not in this novel. and with his traits, I doubt there will be. the most sexy scene is just kiss and grope, not penetration. I admit I want more but eh, none that kind here. the only thing I can think that restricts MC is the system. even so, MC is bantering with the system in every occasion. he even starts to change the body's personality aka OOC. that's......... pretty creative. oh, have I said their bantering is funny? most of jokes are from theirs. german orthopedic....? oh boy

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just like the title. it's all teases.
in short, light reading when I want something to lighten my mood. <<less
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earlgreyt
earlgreyt rated it
September 20, 2018
Status: Completed
The novel started out with strong potential but unfortunately went down as the story advanced. The translator also could benefit from editing.

The beginning was the pretty good -- the humor and tension between the characters made for some great lines, especially the System. The side-characters also had potential and personality, especially that smart and cool-headed girl. Unfortunately the ML and MC's relationship is too standard. Not only does the MC almost completely revolve around the ML (yes there is a mystery/plot but it doesn't really keep the reader's attention), he... more>> also doesn't encounter much friends/family, so everything starts dragging on.

The ML is pretty standard as well: OP, bad rep (but treats the MC well), arrogant and cold at first, super possessive later. The ML's bad rep reminded me a bit of QWFOD (way better story), so it had a lot potential, but... unfortunately, the author didn't utilize it well.

Overall, it was just difficult to care much about any of the events, esp since most of the time, the MC didn't care about the plot either and was just completing tasks set by the system for the sake in order to get away from the world. <<less
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Kleep
kleepart rated it
December 20, 2017
Status: extra 4
I really loved this one. I was curious going in since the reviews varied a bit but I was very happy. I enjoyed the characters and their interactions. I felt like the pacing was good. The focus on cultivation etc was fairly small and the story was more focused on the characters and the mystery they are solving.

I would have loved more to the story because it was so well done, but I don't mind that it wasn't there. What needed to be said was said. The story was well... more>> wrapped up, and I feel that the characters developed well throughout.

Also, for those of you who love some good consent, there's lots of that here! <<less
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RAGA
RAGA rated it
December 1, 2017
Status: c59
I really like how the characters' relationships develop in this one. I was worried because the MC is forced into a "role" that is VERY different from his real personality, but the author manages to make it work quite satisfyingly. I think my only gripe about this is that there's certainly areas where the author could've expanded the story a bit more, especially at the end, but we'll see how the extras wrap things up.

If it did end at c59, it's not a bad ending, but it does leave you... more>> wanting more ^^ <<less
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alexfilia
alexfilia rated it
August 12, 2017
Status: c26 part2
The MC is a boy living and dressed like a girl.... His family gave him to a infamous young master to be his pet but he was kidnapped by one of the infamous demon lords on the way.

Add poisons, murder mysteries left and right and missions given by the system for the MC to complete and you get an awesome read <3
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Diviana
Diviana rated it
July 30, 2017
Status: extra 4
I'm giving this 4 stars as of the end. This is a good light read. The focus of the novel is definitely on MC, ML, and their relationship. The other characters who appear also have well-defined personalities. Even the System has an interesting personality - actually the interaction between the MC and the System are my favorite parts of this novel. How the MC reacts to the tasks he is given is always fun to watch. Their relationship develops a bit slow which makes sense considering rumors that surround the... more>> ML and the restrictions placed on the MC. You get a better sense of them once they start working on the murder mystery.

For those who want to know how explicit the System gets with the MC's tasks

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While the System does heavily restrict the MC's actions early on. The MC eventually figures out how to remove the OCC problem.

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He realizes that since he is the owner of the body now if he gradually changes JY (original owner) 's disposition his actions won't be considered OCC anymore so his soul will be safe.

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There was one chapter that particularly disappointed me because it involved

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rape. The ML raped the MC because he was being affected by negative demonic energy.

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Other the rest of the novel was enjoyable.

The extra are sweet and paint a fluffy, married life.

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RiriXoXo
RiriXoXo rated it
July 30, 2017
Status: c22
I'm only on chapter 22, but I really enjoy reading this novel so far, and it's truly a hilarious read. At times, it's also so cute that I get second hand embarrassment lol (~>_<) ~. The plot is also very interesting and it leaves me wondering how everything will be revealed.

The characters are also not shallow as each of them have their own distinct personalities, and even the most disliked characters have their own understandable reasons for doing the things that gives them the "dislike" label. I especially like the... more>> MC and his System (their interactions leave me dying in laughter). I find the ML extremely sexy too. At first, I thought he was going to be a really sad***ic seme (which I'm neutral towards), but then.... \ (0////0) / <— only this face can describe how I felt after knowing more about him.

What I also found that was really interesting was the MC's condition of needing to fulfill a certain amount of tasks given by his System and the unbreakable OOC rule (is this considered spoiler? Idk ;~;). This is one of the reasons why this novel is different from the other bl novels that include a system. Heck, this MC's System is also so much more awesome and loveable. I always look forward to how the MC will try to outsmart his System.

If anyone needs a comedic, adorable, and unique read, this is the novel for you! Seriously, I love the funny scenes. Here's one of my faves (I'm sure this is a spoiler this time) :

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MC was cross-dressing and he pulled out the peaches he used for boobs and ate them. He had to use pomegranates as his new "boobs, " which made him look like he had a bigger sack. Lmao

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Many thanks to the author for creating such a fun novel, and many thanks to the translator for putting in their effort so that international fans can enjoy this. ^^ <<less
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GoldenTiger0
GoldenTiger0 rated it
February 26, 2019
Status: Completed
Very good. It has a nice pace and everything feels as if natural but one thing that confused me...

JY seems to have no feelings towards JiXi in that way even though he died to save him. And I wonder if JY told YJC about his transmigration. JY promised to tell YJC the reason why he always wanted to leave YJC.

Other than these, the story plot is very good especially the way each thing is revealed slowly but timely.
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bmb
bmb rated it
February 21, 2019
Status: Completed
I liked the novel overall, but Im not entirely satisfied because there are some important things unresolved at the end, like:

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what happens to the system and how did the MC ended up in this world?

did the MC tell ML about his transmigration and his past life and what happened then?

did he even tell his familiy and all the world that he is indeed a man and not a woman?

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To be honest I was looking forward to read about these matters in the extras and now Im dissapointed :/
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Chi
Chi rated it
July 29, 2017
Status: Completed
It's a fun read~

All starting from a rescue of a forced marriage, that suddenly became a murder case and people saying that the killer was the one who kidnapped the bride, ... more>>
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which isn't true..... and actually everyone was itching to kill that bastard, so in the end they used YJC's bad reputation to cover their act and so the mysteries of Agatha Christie's began.

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The MC (bride) is one of those many who transmigrated and received a system with quests and all, but unlike those op MCs his body sucks and, as consequence, is kind like a damsel in distress (as of the latest chapter, 22). So, stuck with a trash body, an hilarious system he has to strive to complete the quests.
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Luckily he at least has the help of the demon lord.

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Also, although the MC have to do the quests and try not OOC
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the MC was actually intelligent enough to start to make gradual changes on his persona, thus making Ji Yuan to be more and more similar to his real self and minimizing the risk of OOC and thus protecting dear life. The interaction between the MC and ML at first was rather cold (the kidnapped and kidnapper), but after the MC started to journey together it started to loosen up.

And the MC is a gay dude that sometimes seems rather conflicted over wanting to grab YJC, but he have to get it off from his head, after all YJC is rather troublesome (but not that bad person, more like "don't step in my feet or rub me wrong and you be fine") and a straight guy........ dear cocolot13579, the one who was groped up and down (just not the bird) by a gay guy wasn't the MC, the MC is the one who made the groping on YJC (and the MC liked A LOT of what he felt and I have my doubts that YJC was actually feigning unconscious and just left the MC do what he wanted to see what was his aim) and our MC isn't disgusted at all with YJC.......... since there's already a spoiler tag....

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"Do I 'lie down' now?"

System answered back wittily, "Do you want to 'lie down'?"

JiYuan : "... " To tell the truth, he doesn't resent being intimate with Ye Junchi.<<< (ch. 18)

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so, if YJC bend over there can only be joy~ hehehe~

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Edit after finishing reading:

This is one of the fell romance novels (be bl or bg) that there's no lil b*tch trying to get in the way, the female supporting character is actually likable and if there was a oneshot or short story about her development I would read.
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Luo Xiuyi chasing after her

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It sure was fluffy.... but I feel that the author could go farther....... but it's still simple and good.......... except for smut scenes that were cut (ノಠ益ಠ)╯︵ ┻━┻

That's why I give 4 stars, it was enjoyable but not epic.

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erialolita
erialolita rated it
November 20, 2018
Status: --
Story-

Not a bad read, fun story to pass the time, but easily forgettable. Probably will read it again in a few years and have a vague sense of familiarity lol. I had put off reading this for a while because I'm not that big into "system" stories but I actually found his banter with the system amusing, but it did drag a bit. Some of the chapters didn't flow nicely either and the OOC stuff was getting kind of old.

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I did find it refreshing that he was gay to begin with so no, "omg what is happening to me, I like men" issues. I also loved the part where he felt up the ML.

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If I could I would give it a solid 3.5 worth the read if you have time.

Translation-

First of all I want to say, I do appreciate all the work that goes into translating for us. That being said I also found it in bad taste that the translator called out a reviewer on their site and since then, the review has been deleted? I think everyone should be entitled to their opinions and shouldn't be coerced or shamed for it.

I didn't have the issue with the translator notes in the middle of the story like others. I would rather them then foot notes. I hate having to scroll to the bottom to see whatever it was for. For the explanations on certain Chinese terms which I already have been exposed to, its was easily skippable and wasn't a nuisance for me. <<less
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Nadeshikoslove
Nadeshikoslove rated it
September 10, 2018
Status: Completed
it was ok but I didn’t understand the charm of both characters. I still didn’t know who JY was neither felt he is anything special. So I didn’t feel any chemistry between both. The story was ok, bit boring though as there been nothing new.
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