Konoha Hypocrite


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Crossing to the Naruto World, Uchiha Tonan obtained the ‘Legacy Inheritance System’. As long as the people who acknowledged him died, he could inherit all abilities of the deceased.


“Konoha’s higher-ups mistreated the Uchihas. So, I’ve decided to lead the clan to launch a coup d’état after three years.”

“Ding! Gained Uchiha clan’s acknowledgment.”

Two years later.

“Tonan, this is the evidence of the Uchiha clan’s betrayal. When all is said and done, it’s your clan. So, I want to hear your opinion.”

“I’ll always stand on the village’s side.”

On that fateful night, Tonan stood on the Hokage Rock, coldly watching the Uchihas’ annihilation.

He spread his hands, being grateful to his clansmen’s gifts.

The next day.

“Lord Hokage, I shed blood for Konoha and became the village’s sword. And this was how you treated the meritorious clan.”

“Tonan, didn’t you agree to it!?”

“I don’t know what you are talking about. The fury of clan extermination is irreconcilable. Today, I will destroy the Sarutobi and Shimura clans to appease my clan members’ souls in heaven.”

A high-leveled hunter often puts on a disguise to lower the prey’s guard.

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absenior19 rated it
January 19, 2022
Status: c426
P.S: the review I wrote below is of the original novel. But later on, this author's book was reported by some kids. So author decided to change the plot. Idk to what extent it has changed. As I read it when it was ongoing. I will say, try to find the novel on some site, which has not updated it. Or try to find the txt file. Best of luck.

I am at the latest right now. [ Chp 426]

Around this time, the future timeline plot is ongoing.

... more>> ---

MC is selfish, ambitious, and evil - basically no bottom line, so he can lick boots as well as go to any level of brutality, to achieve his goal.

His power itself make sure that He can not stand on the good side. As people need to die, still people who approve of him, so he can grow.

No heroine or romance of any sort, hell MC didn't even do se* or even felt lust or anything.

So no heroine, no family, no sister, or any sort of fetter.

He himself lead to the death of his parents in the very first chp- well they died after some time.

But still, you can see the outline of the story just from that chp itself.

It's consistent with that.

So don't worry there is no poison in this. I won't compare it with Reverend Insanity or any great book, as the world-building or plot is obviously of not that level. It's much more simple and more straightforward, without all those things.

But still, For an evil reader [ like me ], It's a really good read. Especially since it's ongoing. <<less
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Whiply rated it
March 25, 2022
Status: c38
It started good but it keeps getting worse and worse each chapter.

Inconsistencies are everywhere and logic keeps getting lower and lower.

-Mc's mother and father were very talented ninjas, then they became mediocre ninjas, then they became chunin's, then they became special jonin's, then they became genins! The author can't make up his mind about it, most likely due to poor planing.

-Hiruzen (who is portrayed as a paranoid control freak in this novel) keeps watch of geniuses, even sends Anbu personel to break into their rooms and steal their information to... more>> manipulate them better, but then, this guy somehow doesn't know about a very important development on an Aburame genius? (People from the Aburame clan use insects, mostly poison and stuff, this guy apparently hatched an insect that can not only heal a ninja, but also save a life. This Hiruzen doesn't know this and when he learns about it, he is like ''Oh, okay.''... Where is the paranoid old man that was portrayed until now?)

- MC thinks Kakashi is worthless in terms of power and talent... I mean, do I really need to explain this? Kakashi was portrayed as one of the greatest geniuses in the ninja history in canon...

The fact that Anbu can casually stroll into the Uchiha territory and break into an Uchiha child's home is kind of ridiculous when you consider that this child is considered as an incredible genius that the great elder of the clan values A LOT. Are you telling me that this incredible genius child (who awakened 3 tomoe Sharingan at age 6 and was praised and valued a lot by the clan's great elder) has absolutely no protection at all? Let me tell you, this kid got an assassination attempt by the way. Uchiha clan still didn't send somebody to secret protect the kid even after that. That just makes no sense.

This was kinda messy because I wrote on the phone, sorry about that, but yeah. That's about it.

It has the usual Chinese fanfiction vibe. Everybody is an a**hole, MC is an incredible genius, logic is knowhere to be found, etc. <<less
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Scott g rated it
January 18, 2022
Status: --
The novel has such a good content, and its not the generic ones. You will see a Main Character that manipulates everyone and uses them for his benefits, as he knows he is in the Ninja World, where danger is everywhere. The translation is super good too. I've read the MTL till now, super excited to see finally someone getting it to translate, specially a Human Translator. Recommend it 100%. Give a shot and you will be immediately fascinated by the content the novel shows.
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ImReallyBored rated it
January 18, 2022
Status: v1c1
So, I have read the mtl of this masterpiece, and I’ve got to say that it is the best Naruto ff I’ve ever read.

The scheming and deceptiveness of Tunan really stands out in this fic from the rest.

Even the development and relationship with each of the characters are fully fleshed out.

... more>> The writing quality in the first chap is a bit iffy but I have a feeling that it will definitely improve.

From what I see so far from the team is definitely good, and if it keeps going this way then the experience for readers, new to this will be a lot more enjoyable than mine.

All the best on this. Again, thank you for picking this up, we’re really grateful for Sublimis and your guy’s hard work. <<less
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Virtual Fantasy rated it
February 2, 2022
Status: c266
The novel is quite good and enjoyable XD

the MC have a system that give him the skills+stats of anyone who have faith in him, and man this dude is using his system to the fullest, he will learn everything he could learn and don't feel shy about it, he will train and train to master his skills and look for new ones, honestly the system here is just a mere tool for the MC to grow and lucky for me it can't talk. He understand that in this world u... more>> either kill be killed that's why he plan what he should do next, also he won't risk his life for some anime characters that he liked to watch in tv screen (naruto fans gonna cry a lot here XD)

He isn't a emotional person so don't expect him to really care about strangers who walk in the street, at most he will do it to get their faith and skills or increase his reputation ;)

some readers complain about his parents death but is what he did wrong! The answer is no! At that time his talent was simply garbage and the only people who could support him are his parents (keep in mind the MC isn't their actual son)

seriously why complaining about MC being evil in EVIL MC STORY!! He also A GAMER MC not sure if it's your first time reading a story with those two tags but at least don't come here and give a bad review for something anyone with 3 braincells could tell like bruh you find some ppl reading a yaoi novel then complaining about why the MC is gay like wtf do u expect <<less
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meaningofeternity rated it
February 1, 2022
Status: c366
The story follows Uchiha Tunan, a member of the Uchiha clan from the Naruto world. His golden finger is that he inherits the skills of any person who dies as long as he gains their recognition/approval.

His inner character is neutral evil and indifferent to everything. He has no true friends and considers himself the only one that matters. He doesn’t care about who he needs to kill, everyone is the same in his eyes whether they are an evil mu*derer or an innocent little girl. He doesn’t care about any... more>> human values such as family, reputation, justice, morality, romance, revenge, lust, pleasure, etc. He just uses these values as tools to progress himself, only looking to make the optimal decision. During many parts of the story it may seem like he is helping someone for the sake of good, but it is all calculated within his schemes.

As for the side characters, plot, and writing quality, they are all written very well. There are no two dimensional characters or annoying clichés. Every character feels fully fleshed out, the author does a great job with the way the MC manipulates everyone, and each scene is described very well.

At first I was hesitant on reading this novel because it is a Naruto fanfiction, but after reading it became one of my personal favorites. I never had any knowledge of the Naruto universe, but it was still easy to understand. If you like neutral evil and indifferent MCs, I highly recommend reading this as it is one of the very few that can be compared with Reverend Insanity. <<less
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Chocolateo rated it
February 1, 2022
Status: c357
A rare good book within the dark novel niche. Protagonist is cruel to the bones, not some half hearted villain MC. I recommend, this book. The reviews are split between 5s and 1s, it's not that the book as bad but that what happens in the book can make some people uncomfortable causing poor reviews. Give it a shot if you like dark novels.
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Empress rated it
February 19, 2022
Status: --
Just like the Summary, this novel's quality is above average. You can expect a heart rending betrayal and emotional rollercoaster as soon as you start reading.


In fact, this novel broke my heart in the first chapter. MC took over a child's body and procedded to plot the parent's demise to gain power up from the system.


If you haven't read novel where you wish for the MC death, then congratulation. You might be looking at one. Try it, and scream your rage at the MC.
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AbsAreHot rated it
June 28, 2022
Status: c157 part2
5/5. Easy.

the MC is absolutely despicable, and the second u sit down to play chess w him, you've already lost. The schemes are sooo deep. The world building isn't, not that it's bad either though lol

So I've seen some reviews trying to male excuses for him about how he's not evil and it's just the nature of his power— tell me ur a helicopter parent without *telling* me ur a helicopter parent.

Like did u miss Kushina, that Monastery dude, or any of the lines directly admitting his lack of care... more>> or emotional fluctuations???

Just enjoy it lol

Anyway came here to say that in the past few chapters, whenever there's a scroll-to-continue ad, some of the text is actually missing.

the ads that are just on the page r fine, but the ads that almost look underneath the page r not. Pls check this out <3 <<less
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IOnlySpeakFactsUGetMe rated it
April 15, 2022
Status: c101
This is by far very good. The story is quite logical and makes sense for the most part. And it’s dark with a scheming MC. Very similar to Reverend Insanity in terms of plotting. And who doesn’t like naruto setting with a more darker tone to it.
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HaracasAye rated it
February 1, 2022
Status: --
Translation of the novel is superb. The story is great for evil/rational MC lovers, he does everything logically and gets fairly psychological with his schemes. His goldfinger is also unique and makes the story much more interesting to read. Everytime I finish a chapter I want to know what happens next.
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Decarabia rated it
November 22, 2022
Status: c187
You will either love or hate this novel.

Starting with the MC, he is a psychopath in the truest sense of the word. He is self-centered and feels zero empathy towards anyone or anything. His own health is merely another chip on the gambling table, and he only ever takes safe bets. While he doesn't personally partake in some of the most cruel of actions, he doesn't mind inciting others into doing it. Because killing people who trust him allows him to grow, he just looks to maximize his profits at... more>> all times.


at one point, he orchestrates to make a young man from the countryside to r*pe his childhood friend and crush, and creates a scenario that led her to commit su*cide. Later, that event also caused the girl's grandmother to die. While the scene itself was only hinted at, you can guess how ruthless and indifferent MC is.


Next up is the portrayal of Naruto's world. It plays on the theories that lean towards a darker ninja world, because there are plot holes and things left unexplained in the original. The world is opportunistic and cynical, dog eat dog and no one is spared from what is "human nature", leaning towards evil, self-righteousness and hypocrisy. This plays out more on Hiruzen and Konoha council.

Another thing that I liked about this fic, is that there's a plausible reason not to change the plot direction. For instance, MC will not bother with Danzo for the most part, since Danzo's plans are to his benefit, and he will refrain from being too extreme and killing people too early, since he needs Sasuke and Naruto to be born in order to farm them. He can't be reckless. In many fics, there comes the problem where MC knows what will happen (like the Uchiha clan massacre or Obito's fall into darkness) and will try to stop it, but ultimately being unable to due to a dumb reason. Sometimes small victories will appear, not changing the end result. Fortunately, this doesn't occur here. Everything seems to fall into place naturally. <<less
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potatoPC rated it
August 27, 2022
Status: c368
Oh man what a ride almost cry to some of the lies MC told. Talk about ruthless this guy is couples steps behind Fang Yuan like for real. MC don't really fight so keep that in mind.
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Kemori rated it
June 9, 2022
Status: c145
Very much enjoyed this.

I see people calling the MC 'evil' - but what I see is different. I see a man who is out to gain power for himself and the system he has forces him to do that by first making people respect him before he kills them to gain their abilities and knowledge.

I would say the MC is neutral at most. Evil would be if he were to go around killing people for no discernible reason at all like a psychopath.
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Just_some_otaku rated it
November 15, 2022
Status: --
Is this novel on hiatus? I checked the chinese official qidian publisher and saw the last update in september.

I'm really loving this novel and even went ahead and read the MTL up until chapter ~430 (where it seems to be on hiatus). Any updates from the author? Can't seem to find anything.

With regards to the review, if you like Reverend Insanity, Warlock of Magus World, or Soul of Negary then I think you'll really like this. Once you get used to the Naruto world cross-over it even makes it more... more>> unique than these three novels I mentioned. I've read thousands of novels and I can't wait for this to be continued! <<less
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Queen77 rated it
October 9, 2022
Status: --
So I read this a while a go and had left it cos I really binged too much, I ended getting bored.

Crazy but it really happened, though I love this, I really got tired. Maybe it's cos I had too much of a good thing? Haha

Im giving this a 4 and it's true, (-1) it gets boring over time

Translation is great! Everything on point.

I do encourage y'all to read:) I
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red888 rated it
February 19, 2023
Status: --
I thought it would be better, at the start it was okay, and I thought it would become better but it just became worse as the chapters passed, the MC came across as edgy, maybe I'm just too old for this kind of love, if 14 y.o me read this I would have probably liked this hahaha, in my opinion, is not worth the time, Im actually shocked that the reviews are so good when it's so bad, the plot it's not good and the writing is confusing.
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Zeikfried rated it
October 11, 2022
Status: c25
Thoughts As I Read -

Chapter 8: ... more>>

"In fact, Hiruzen didn't quite understand some parts of Tonan's view. But from what he had heard all afternoon, he could describe Tonan in two simple words — loyal official."


From reading Power & Wealth, in my mind "loyal official" translated to "scheming cadre" ala the Communist Party.

Chapter 10:

Sarutobi Hiruzen looked at Uchiha Tonan's three-tomoe Sharingan. On the surface, he looked sympathetic, but his heart was brimming with joy. He thought this kid was a heaven-sent tool for him.

These are just my thoughts as I am reading, but I feel like the jaded perspective the author has towards authority is seeping directly into the Naruto characters' personalities.

Chapter 13:


Hiruzen looked the boy up and down and breathed a sigh of relief when he saw no sign of injury on his person. He asked, "My child, are you alright?"

It was fortunate such an excellent and faithful tool was unharmed. It would have been a big loss otherwise.


I understand the parallels between a military dictatorship like Konoha and the CCP, but even if Konoha is still at war, the author is really piling it on thick by projecting that self-serving attitude onto Sarutobi. The way main character "studies" the Will of Fire is the exact same way sycophants "studied" the Cadre bosses' doctrines to kiss ass and get promoted in "Power & Wealth." However, in "Naruto" Sarutobi actually believes in the value of "love" and treating individuals as family. It's not lip service to brainwash the villagers like the way the author is portraying.


That's enough. This novel lives up to its title. Succinctly put, it's a retelling of the Chinese Communist Revolution painted with a veneer of "Naruto." <<less
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