I Am Not Fit to Be the Male Lead’s First Love

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Only after Chu Yin died did she realize she was the first love (white moonlight) of the male lead in a novel.

The stubborn male lead fell in love with her at first sight when he was young, then took over the company when he was older.

Chu Yin was tortured by his crazy possessiveness and died a tragic early death.

Opening her eyes again, she returned to the day before she transferred schools and met Lu Zhen.

“Ding~ Bound to the learning system! Host can change the original script of the novel by learning!”

【You can change a word from the original script after completing homework!】

【If you place first in your grade, you can change one sentence in the original script!】

【If you place first in the college entrance examination, you can create your own ending!

Get rich! Be famous! Do whatever you want!】

That night, Chu Yin finished her homework and obtain the reward to change a word in the original script: “On the day of their first encounter, Lu Zhen walked into the school as light rain poured down the sky.”

The next day, Lu Zhen walked into the school, and a knife suddenly fell from the sky.

Young Lu Zhen: ?

Someone wants my life.

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The whole school knew that the daughter of the Chu family from the countryside swept the entire grade and placed first, and also took the throne of the school’s flower.

But one day, the whole school went crazy, saying that she somehow provoke the big devil Lu Zhen.

After doing bad things to the male lead, Chu Yin was cornered, feeling a little guilty.

The young man in front of her was like a trapped beast, his dark eyes that was restrained for two lifetimes, showed madness: “Want my life?”

“——Take it.”

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不当你的白月光
偏执男主白月光我不当了
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sansukini0923
sansukini0923 rated it
March 20, 2022
Status: c1 part1
The ML is not a scum.
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He is bound by the plot, but he awakened. The plot controls him that's why it seemed like he's abusive. The truth is that he is protecting her, but everytime he tries to explain why he can't let her go, the plot puts him in a lot of pain.

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It's a really good story. I enjoyed it a lot.
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WordEater
WordEater
March 6, 2022
Status: Completed
If Chu Yin or Lu Zhen told me to "roll", I will really roll.
Roll in laughter! 😂😂😂
I NEED MORE CHAPTERS OF LU ZHEN AND BOX! Wuuuuuu, I find the chapters really sweet there?
This is what's the deal with Lu Zhen being a jerk and what really happened in their previous life.
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Lu Zhen did not have a system (as far as I know from reading up to chapter 1-67) but he was forced by deux machina of that world. Remember how Chu Yin controlled the actions of her transgressors? Lu Zhen was like that. He was aware of this slightly but something kept from permitting him to tell Chu Yin before and in this present life.

The real story about the abduction was that Lu Zhen was enamored with Chu Yin but it was not as grave as what Chu Yin believed it to be (as seen from his actions with saving Chu Yin after she was locked up in that room-- but like she was so traumatized who would remember or realize that?). It was only after Chu Yin was attacked by hoodlums that Lu Zhen realized he needed to keep her by his side to prevent her from being physically hurt from his enemy and that the world suddenly tries to make him behave in a certain way. Lu Zhen tries to fight back those urges to make Chu Yin suffer but he was overpowered by the authority of that world. A real lunatic that enemy of his- so disgusting. It was not explained well but prior to that, Lu Zhen was still acting normal.

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I am shipping this fan girl and fan boy of Chu Yin together.

Clarification for Lu Zhen's "system"

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In their previous life, Lu Zhen was not connected to any system. He was just controlled with the whims of that world. He only gained a system in the extras for being rewarded as the most distressing and tragic ML but only for four limited times.

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RipeApricot
RipeApricot
February 28, 2022
Status: Completed
4/5

- it's not boring, I remember stopping myself from laughing out loud in the middle of 1am.

- I love the way that MC changed those words and cause something to happen.

- It's worth reading. This novel's charm will hook you.

Tbh I'm not a professional reviewer but I just like leaving footprints on where I have been so I'm leaving this review as a sign. And to also increase the Star Rate of this novel to help it shine and be notice by others.

- RipeApricot
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sunshowers
sunshowers
October 22, 2021
Status: c40 part1
Okay im sorry I've never left a review on here before but this story is absolutely hilarious, and the translation kills. I'm absolutely in tears with laughter at some of the ways CY changes the script-- she's genius! The writing is super quick-witted and imaginative, and I'm THOROUGHLY enjoying it. 10/10 can't wait to re-read.
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nevelvir
nevelvir rated it
November 1, 2020
Status: Completed
Not everyone will like this novel.

First, our MC is quite Mary Sue-ish. And what the past!ML does to MC is quite unforgivable.

But the story is light, with clear ending. Quite fluffy in the end and hilarious in many places.

Give this story a try.
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ike_00000
ike_00000 rated it
October 28, 2020
Status: c56
I thought this story seemed pretty interesting so I MTLed until c56. However, MC is SO mary sue and so much of the story is spent on her studying, which is quite boring. Plus I'm not a fan of the love at first sight troupe anyway, which is a huge part of this story.

That said, usually MTLing the stories degrade its value, so I'm still quite optimistic about this translated version. The story also has its good points; MC is a good character and there's a lot of funny scenes.... more>> Side characters can be quite cute, face-slapping is also hilarious. <<less
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ZooRoPa
ZooRoPa rated it
February 13, 2024
Status: Completed
It's actually a pretty good story. A lot of agony carried over from previous life which eventually resolves after the veils of mysteries are lifted.

The story is half revolved around FL's high school achievements and slowly unveiling the main plot.

Not much drama or anguish but certainly a lot of comedy, and full of emotions..
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totorototoro
totorototoro rated it
April 3, 2023
Status: c1 part1
LOVE LOVE LOVE.

Overall, hoped for an epilogue or a side story for all the wonderful friends she has encountered but nonetheless this is a great and short read. Highly recommend if you're looking for funny, good vibes, and fluffy romance with a happy ending. There are some plot holes and some questions you are left with but overall, recommend.

Spoiler below
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So both remember their past lives. At first, I didn't want to support the ML because of what he had done in the past, however, as you read on you feel his genuine remorse and see a change in his actions as he remembers the past. He is wholly repenting and loves her sincerely and quite humbly. We also find out the reason for his past actions. Make no mistake, his reason does NOT excuse his actions. However, it does put things into perspective and explain why he had been so desperate and adamant. I love the character growth in the ML and am glad they got their happy ending.

The FL stuck to her guns. She was sassy, SO FUNNY, and just a breath of fresh air from the green tea protagonists we sometimes read. She did not just fall for him and ignore the past. She made him work. She took her time and advanced their relationship slowly but surely. I loved her.

Omg and special mention for their "son" LOL. The silly guy is the kind of friend everyone wants to have. He's lively, bright, and similar to a sunflower as he just radiates positive vibes. Love him.

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dnd
dnd
September 9, 2022
Status: c28
The writing and translation is good, the plot also nice but I kinda don't quite like the story... It's just not my cup of tie I guess. But it's worth to try if you would ask me, at least other than preference all of story aspect is good.

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what I dislike is the cheating sistem of the MC. Like erase one or two side from novel and make it happen in real worlds. I felt somewhat uncomfortable reading it.

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AugusteDaisy
AugusteDaisy rated it
August 25, 2022
Status: Completed
I have mixed feelings. Well I know that her past is terrible things, it's really makes sense if she hate him. But, here's the thing, I found it annoying when she is like playing with his feeling, as example

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when she found a paragraph about the ML wanna buy a cat, then she change it to pig

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Really, I think it's not funny at all. Ok, fine, she doesn't know the reason for the past life problem. She was going crazy and killed. Ok I understand. But, can you be just a little, just a little, think about the reason? She always blame ml. And then she thinks she did the right thing, because of past life. This is just my opinion, I think this is not my cup of tea tho. Thanks for translation. <<less
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Eeria
Eeria rated it
August 21, 2022
Status: Completed
The novel is hilarious I found myself chuckling and laughing along. Loved the FL and the story, so different and unusual. Though I would not condone this kind of ML originally, couldn’t help but ending up liking him.
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sprihau
sprihau rated it
August 18, 2022
Status: Completed
The story started out pretty good but it got a bit boring in the middle. The main plot was finally unveiled in the last 1/3 which made the story seem too long. I did like the fact that she had to finish missions to obtain access to the story and to make changes to the story. Although the ending between the male and female leads was not something I liked and wasn't something that made complete sense. I do like that they tried to explain a lot of things. Being... more>> with a paranoid, crazy lover must have been very difficult. <<less
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MoominLiv
MoominLiv
July 7, 2022
Status: c69
This is probably one of the best “rebirth” stories I’ve read so far. Although its writing style isn’t very sophisticated and sometimes falls short, the way it tackles the storyline is very original. It has both tragic and humorous parts, so if you’re the type of person that doesn’t like full-on tragedy, I really recommend it.

One of the things that is so amazing about the story is the fact that there’s actually quite a bit of character development. Most stories like this have absolutely no change in the characters, and... more>> the leads forgive their abusers without any struggle or fanfare. In this story, the reconciliation is impossible until all the characters have changed and overcome the troubles of the past, meaning a lot of the story involves them coming to terms with their own trauma and emotions. The FL and ML go through a lot and you can see their mindsets and actions change, to the point where the originally toxic ML even becomes a rather sympathetic character. There’s a lot of intrigue and the narration is unreliable at times, which makes it very interesting to try and figure out who is telling the truth and who is lying.

The writing style and quality is a bit shoddy and sometimes has a strange pace, but it’s overall worth it due to the fascinating storyline and its interesting twist on the classic “MC dies and is given a new chance for revenge” plot. <<less
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tsukinosekaku
tsukinosekaku rated it
May 24, 2022
Status: Completed
Somebody hold me— there is absolutely no way that I thought this novel could surpass my expectations but it did. it did perfectly!

comedic? yes,

pain? yes

... more>> romantic? I’d say yes yes

plot-wise? a yes x100000000000

how is it so GOOD? I finished it in less than a day because it was so good. I had to pause and silently scream into the air at 3 am because of all the fluctuating emotions this novel gave me!!!

I thought that this is simply about a normal novel and there is not much plot and I wouldn't expect much but I was wrong! I was so wrong!

the development??? the planning the author had to go through had to be something!! it was amazingly written...

lu zhen and chu yin both suffered so much. in the beginning, I was completely 100% on chu yin but the novel took a turn at around 40 chapters in and lu zhen had his reasons for what he did.

I love how it took the sentences “you are my world” & “you are my God” LITERALLY. I’m serious— it makes “I’m crazy for you” mid now.

it took a lifetime for them to get the happy ending they wanted and it took so much pain and suffering on both sides to finally be together.

not sure if this is a spoiler,
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but I think the kdrama extraordinary you (webtoon: july found by chance) is very similar to this novel. I noticed some resemblance about characters having to ‘act’ out their role even tho their ‘self-consciousness’ is telling them otherwise. it’s only when the characters are fully aware that they are able to realise that they are bound by some rules. but I love this novel more because of the ending; how chu yin was able to write the ending she wants and ending the story.

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this isn’t a review but my pure 100% admiration and love for the novel, the writing and of course, the translation!!!!!! <<less
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nagpal
nagpal rated it
February 22, 2022
Status: --
Actual rating 4.5

I love a good redemption story with the appropriate amount of explanation or groveling, and this one while being a good read never quite lands the satisfaction I get from a good second chance story, I never saw the FL loving the ML in their first chance, the book alludes to the possibility that she has forgotten the good memories and the good ones are referenced a bit at the end but I am never convinced this FL ever had any real feelings for the male, I like... more>> that in the second chance she is more independent and is able to match the male capability wise and loved her antics at the start but if you have to convince me of their fate and their love, I am never convinced hence not a 5 star but a 4.5 from me. Still a good cnovel read. <<less
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hpae
hpae rated it
February 8, 2022
Status: c64 part4
Fantastic book! Funny and interesting plot. Character and world building are very believable and well done. Using study as a way to gain power to control the plot and ultimately the characters lives is a unique and motivating theme. ML is very sweet and devoted and the villain is evil and sick enough to be labelled a true villain. Worth re reading ! Hope the extras will be translated soon.
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MajorGPuff
MajorGPuff
February 6, 2022
Status: --
This author has a very strong ability to build a character, make readers 'bond' with the characters, create a believable world & story, & twisting the plot.

Seriously, it's crazy how ... more>>
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I hate the ML to the bone, . Was disappointed when I i saw signs of ML being the ML (yes I wished the second ML is the winner!), And then... Actually okay to see how ML is the ML at the ending

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Was a good read, enjoyed the 1st arc so much (when our FL is just beginning to come into contact with the system). Love the golden finger system because she is OP because she actually learned so hard, she deserves every single reward & every single OPness. <<less
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