ab*se of supernatural ability that he was born with to manipulate women into being his s*x s*aves... With a gross but amusing twist as a result.

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After being born with x-ray vision, constantly abusing it to see through clothes, it becomes even stronger. Now, he see's through skin, with no way to control it (As of c4)... Gross. lol

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I would say, "Beware, there's r*pe/blackmail." However, NovelUpdates has that in the Tags and the Translator also gave a warning that the MC is scum. So before I started reading, I knew it wasn't going to have fluffy bunnies and talking puppies. <<less

This novel is very hilarious, I never thought ero-novel could be this funny. MC's thoughts are unique.

You can learn about spirit and body tempering here and the girls aren't simple at all, don't underestimate them.. It's full of life!! :0

Ah, but for f*p material, it's not the best tho..?

Hell, I think imma reading this for the story --a

Go for "Inma no Hado" & "Sisters Violated Many Times in Dream and Reality" for f*p materials.. O.o

for haters, GTFO

Good novel. Quoting a guy in the comments, I came for the Ero, but stayed for plot. This is a very good novel, definitely for plot. Not "plot, " but plot. It's pretty interesting with some "academic" scenes in the midst. If you hate it, just stop reading. Why are all haters like this?

Surprisingly good story for a R-18 novel. The character development is good. The story isn't that ridiculous like the girl suddenly begging for d*** or mind break them with dream/magic but have a proper story.

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I am still confused with one character that somehow got forgotten.

Super awesome novel, the MC is truly a scum, but not a scum that do NTR sht, but a scum that protects woman while asking conditions of having s*x with them instead... Truly a good novel, super recommended for people who likes cool MC

Freaking love this story.

The author is a genius at making an interesting story. This is difficult because I'm better at saying negative things and I don't really have anything bad to say about it, aside from that forgotten girl incident don't really know what happened there. Anyway the author is definitely someone I want to see more of. Seriously I want to say loads of spoilers and point out the writing techniques he used, I want to talk about the hilarious growth of the characters and how the MC has... more>> his expectations exceeded in the most entertaining ways. It would be more entertaining to read the story then my review. <<less

My brain is so engrossed by the plot, character development, and writing, my brain took all the blood from my jin jin even tho I was trying to fap. Finally got off on the 8th hour with the help of a hot bath. Now I just need some sleep......

Update: so it changes to a battle novel later, if you don't like those, I suggest you stop after finishing the (see spoiler below) arc. ... more>>

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dog Rikka arc

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The author's online presence vanished a bit in 2017, but I'm glad he's back.

The cast is pretty vast and has similar names, Yuu, Yui, Yuki, etc so here's a list and description in case you get lost

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Suzuhara Moto - MC

Marina - Genki gf, Good at communication, my fav chara

Yuki - Deredere, Bullied girl, great character growth, kinda influential

Asahina Yuu - Tsundere, flat, strong spirit, M

Lolihina Yui - Asahina's sis, relies on Yukina

Yukina - Genki Boku girl, identifies as male

Hizuki - Yandare, Eye from sky

Rikka - Dog

Kazahana - Dog sister

Tamamushi - loli nee-san Bug user

Nanafushi - loli baa-san "Utility" Bug

Makiri - bug clan researcher from 300 yrs ago

Kudan - Enemy bug user, final boss existance

Alice - Agency worker

Mai Konohana - Random Ice wolf tribe girl

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An interesting pastime.

If you're looking for a different take on human relationships, character building, tempering one self and so on, this could definitely provide some food for the mind.

MC could be described with a single word as a gambler, but not a reckless one. He'll observe, calculate and act accordingly without going out of his way. The story contains a sweet mixture of angst, expectations, uncertainly, love, le*dness and other. And aside from occasional jumps or loose ends it flows consistently.

The characters are actually being developed actively and frequently find themselves in certain potentially very frustrating situations.

I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

P.S. I don't think MC deserves to be called 'scum' three times before one does even start reading the story.

P.S.S. For those who get to c70. Do. Not. Stop. There. Get up to c72 at least.

It gets so much better!

When you start reading this, you might be offended because of the topic, but keep reading and it gets so much better. As of 32, the first girl is hardly mentioned, she's apparently being "saved for later". However, there is another girl who he manages to "charm" and their interaction is getting better and better. She was originally a side-character but now she feels like a main lead. Really like the way the author describes things (or how Pun translates it) but right now, the vibe... more>> feels very sugary or vanilla. Maybe the feeling of encountering first love for the main characters? In fact, this is what provoked me to contribute to Pun's Patreon (first time donating to a light novel).

Hopefully this writing style continues without losing steam. This is a harem, so we'll see when the other girls start developing. If you like to read well-fleshed out characters instead of 2D girls, go for this! <<less

The story got better...

So far this is better than kininaru imo. Yes it's r*pe yes it's blackmail but the tags already there so if you dont like this kind of story move away. Also blackmail+rape=scum MC

If you can get past the dark themes (well, personally I didn't find it that dark), this is a worthwhile read. It's a dark comedy and the MC is an antihero of sorts. Good plot and character development.

I agree with a reviewer that said it's not the best as erot*c fiction, because it's not very descriptive in that department. Regardless, the scenes are always interesting though.

I'm glad the translation work resumed recently.

Surprisingly addictive.

Yeah, MC is a scum bag admittedly. Seriously, he's got super X-ray vision powers that could be put to OP skills like martial arts, surgery, or etc. However, he only uses it for peeping at women from checking out their c*astity or their weak spots. Despite all the MC's negatives, the MC's personality is very fleshed out.

Each character isn't the regular run of the mill Japanese ecchi character. They have their own personalities and will. As far as kink, the MC does most of it except extreme S&M, and... more>> all his interactions so far seem to be 1 on 1 even if others are watching. There's also no NTR yet.

I do like that the MC is such a dark and manipulative character. While he's like most pe*verted teen boys, he seems much more mature then his age. It's not just the physical aspects for him, it's also the mental warfare as well. He's truly a selfish character, but yet there are times when he seems unconsciously soft in how he treats his harem. It's scary how wise he is, but yet he knows his own limitations.

A truly great smutty series that is surprisingly more deep than most ecchi series. <<less

This story actually slightly better than I expected but there's been some sort of unusable plot only for certain grill like latest part with those yadda-yadda another ability user yadda-yadda and she snapped bc another MC grill yadda-yadda

Original TL Team dropped this just because they have some chapter which has some shonen-battle esque and he doesnt like it. And then there's another person who tried to cont. This but got attacked with insult n other just by e-mail. We need new TL team to continue this novel. There isn't plenty... more>> of novel which talks about gentle scumbag man like this MC <<less

Hey, found another Nikubenki-level le*d drama~! :) The MC is a scumbag. Scumbag of Justice, if I must say. Or maybe gentlemanly (conditional) scumbag? Despite his scumbag-ness, he won't hesitate to save the woman he's interested with. With his X-ray vision + fighting techniques, he shall beat anyone who dare to harm his women and saves those harem-candidate-in-distress.

It's a failure of an ero novel. It starts off okish, gets interesting mid-way, but gets disappointing afterwards. S*x scenes are mostly foreplays, and after a certain point in the plot, it's mostly the loli's who have s*x. Ero gets left behind and it becomes a cheap action novel littered with supernatural abilities instead. The MC's personality changes from an emotionless rapist to an overly sentimental wimp. The plot has too many holes and it's not well fleshed out. It probably wouldn't be a bad read to kill time if... more>> the work was complete, but it's pretty disappointing the way it is now. <<less

Started interesting, even with the forgotten character. Then it suddenly had a massive deus ex and poor plot. Now it is a battle novel? Author keeps forcing the Asahina route, despite being poorly thought out.

Tldr plot railroading, inconsistencies, and just weirdness.

I can't say its the worst nor can I fault it for being unabashedly hentai/ecchi/power-trip but it's definitely not something I can recommend. The MC is pretty unlikable and the heroines are weak and stereotypical. Oh yeah, there's no major antagonist as of chapter 16, the hero seems to steamroll through all opposition. Definitely a 'Mary sue' story.

Nonetheless, the translations are good and easy to read, definitely not machine translated.

You get "Plot" and real plot lol. The first few chapters = villain scum M/C, x-ray manipulating/raping. One girl likes the r*pe, but most don't.

Still, it is surprisingly good afterwards. He is the villain that kicks a group of bad guys ass for messing with other women. He doesn't do it to save the girls, he just doesn't like those guys so he crushes them until they beg him to stop and are afraid of him.

Anal/s*x toys/ bjs/ r*pe/making a girl c*m like 20 times (pu*sy torture) just everything and... more>> anything lol it in sane but still good

If you can get past the dark stuff, then you'll like it. <<less

4/5 or 5/5 s*x scenes.

1/5 everything else.

MC is a borderline psychopath who r*pes and forces people to eat insects. He intentionally provokes a girl into attempted mu*der and had little to no desire to stop it. His parents are conveniently regularly non-existent unless it helps MC get farther along with another character.

The s*x scenes and girls are the only redeeming qualities of the story. MC uses x-ray vision to see girls "weak spots" and give them increased pleasure (at least when he's not raping them) which I thought to be... more>> the most important aspect of the s*x but he's really only using it on 1 of the 3 (so far) girls. <<less

Started fine. MC is a cruel and sadistic f*ck, he doesn't start very likable 'cause he's too cold and he only knows how to give stick to his s*x s*aves and doesn't give them carrots, but he developed immediately and improves soon after few chapters, he becomes to be more considerate while still being a sadist, a good balance. That's a plus for me.

... afterwards around chapter 60+ it's still fine but the MC sometimes unbearable to take, MC who's a sadistic and dominant guy starts to act like... more>> a wimp when he's with Asahina, I don't get why the MC suddenly become a pu*sy cat whenever he talks with her. He's always the losing in their banters and he's always tongue-tied for no reason. He treated Marina (my fav character) so bad at the beginning tormenting her, but he treats Asahina (worse girl) so well, I get that the author wants to force their relationship but there's no improvement between them and they're both stuck in awkwardness. When MC's with her he's always out of the character it's like the author changed the Protagonist and placed a wimp stuttering virg*n as substitute with the same name. Aside from Asahina, all the other characters are really good and have amazing character growth and depth.

Good start but it's really going downhill. The plot isn't done well, it becomes like an action novel with quite a lot of plot holes. I read this for Ero, although I don't mind staying for the action but the motivation for continuing this becomes less knowing that the novel is unfinished.

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Best Girls

1. Marina (Wife material)

2. Yuka and Rikka (tie)

3. Yukina (i just love her, she's fun!)

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Overall — 3/5

I was hoping for this novel to be a bit similar to PLIC, but later in the story and Ero starts being left out and plot isn't satisfying. I might've given this another +1 point if Asahina improves her character. Tbh I would prefer Shirasaka Yukino from PLIC than her, even tho Shirasaka Yukino is annoying her character is well fleshed out and had a reasonable cause of her actions.

PS: if anyone read pass 90 chaps care to tell me if Asahina's character improves or whether the last chapter (ch153) is a cliff hanger?Might try to pick this up again, thanks! :) <<less