Urban Banished Immortal

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I, the mighty Telepath Starlord, got banished into the mortal world. The days in the mortal world are much better than those in heaven! Everything is here — money, authority and most importantly stunning beauties! I am from a rich family. Yes, I am indeed wealthy now. The kind of wealth where you would not want to displease me. Domineering CEOs, military big shots, business geniuses, you name it — I know them all! I know everything you are thinking about. You can’t defeat me anyway, how are you going to go against me? A century in the mortal world is only equivalent to a hundred days in heaven.
As an urban banished immortal, I will enjoy the heck out of my time in the human world and a huge commotion would arise in heaven!

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An Immortal From Heaven Who Got Banished Into The Mortal World
UBI
都市之天庭谪仙
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Lynic
Lynic rated it
December 11, 2017
Status: c700
I'm the translator of this novel. I really like this novel and it definitely deserves a solid 4/5 or above. But hey, it's my project I'm rating it 5 stars. Be aware of what you're getting yourself into. The length of the story is excellent and doesn't feel dragged. The MC is rather OP since he has lived for tens of thousands of years before getting banished from heaven as a result of peeping on a bathing fairy.

Pretty girls are almost everywhere but it definitely doesn't get too annoying (to... more>> me). There's a good amount of harem which I absolutely enjoyed for obvious reasons. Combining superpowers and cultivation, the style of the novel can be interesting. As the story is slightly linked to Chinese mythological figures and characters from the classical novel 'Journey to the West' like the Monkey King Sun Wukong, Jade Emperor and even Chang'er, it may seem foreign at first sight, but the story certainly isn't highly dependent on them to the level that it gets frustrating. As the translator of this project, I'll try my best in putting TL for better understanding.

tl/dr: If you're looking for a novel that combines humor, slight harem, cultivation and superpowers, you should definitely give it a try. <<less
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daryldyh
daryldyh rated it
November 7, 2017
Status: c350
This novel is AWESOME! Most of the early chapters are about character development and the main character's school life. More fighting and cultivating will eventually appear at around chapter 40-ish. However, unlike other novels like AWE, this series doesn't have as much cultivation, but more to the urban lifestyles of the characters integrated with some fighting of course. It's definitely worth the read, I especially like the author's humor.

P/s. If you're a naive boy who doesn't like harem, this novel is not for you.
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LeeEzekiel
LeeEzekiel rated it
January 22, 2018
Status: --
Let's not talk about the shallow characters, lightning fast developments, and sprinkled bits of racism. Those are all par for the course in this genre, so I won't let them affect my rating. You should be expecting that stuff anyway.

But the biggest issue of this novel is the extremely sparse, lazy writing. Chapters are pretty much 80+% dialogue, scenes jump without any indication (not even a line break or an extra space), and even the reactions are weak. Case in point, when the MC managed to trick one guy into... more>> bidding 5 million during an auction, we never even get to read said guy's reaction. The author always uses as few words as possible - if it can be skipped, he will skip it.

As a result this novel reads like the author's fever dream, a fantasy that was aborted before being completely fleshed out. Still, the banter can be pretty funny at times, especially when he brings out the drug wine. If you just want a light wish-fulfillment story to read then there are worse ones than this. 2.5/5 <<less
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Darkaeluz
Darkaeluz rated it
October 31, 2017
Status: c13
As of now this is a fun story with a lot of unexplained holes, a huge lack of translator's notes (as if the translator thinks we're Chinese and understand all the references) and with poorly defined separation between scenes (one moment someone is talking in heaven and the other the MC is in school, so you have to guess where the scene changes by yourself).

Ignore all of that and pick up speed reading it and it will be like riding a car at full speed in a gravel road: bumpy,... more>> full of holes but fun. <<less
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Liamrodhudson331
Liamrodhudson331 rated it
December 21, 2017
Status: --
It's basically a bad teenage erotica. If you're here for the cultivation then I'm sorry to announce you've come to the wrong place, there are next to no cultivation in this. The character interactions are extremely clunky and weird, feels like the dark fantasy of a ninth grader with eighth grade syndrome and dont even get me started on the heroines. They're all the same and have no real personalities to speak of. In fact if you mix up the names, you probably won't even realise who is whom. If... more>> those aren't enough to deter you from reading this then MC basically brainwashed the girls with his spirit wine. He didn't have to do sh*t to get girls, they just fall for him like moths to fire for literally no reason or for his wine. I call bullsh*t. <<less
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jiaowoge
jiaowoge rated it
December 9, 2017
Status: c700
A novel with OP MC and harem. For those who prefer more characters interaction instead of cultivation and fight stuff, this novel is for you. MC is basically an alpha male who just gets all the ladies.

Heads up: Since there are a lot of dialogue and probably quite a lot of terms, it is most likely going to be messy for quite a few amount of people especially if translator doesn't do the glossary well. I'm not sure about the translation since I just read the raw so my review... more>> is just base on the raw and not translation.

There is also not a lot of repeating plots in this novel since there is only 700 chapters which is a plus.

Although the novel does get sort of boring between chapter 250-400+ in my opinion, this novel is still overall very good where I would give 4/5. If not for some things that happens at the back of the novel where it really puts one off, I would definitely give it 5/5. <<less
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ankushmelancholy
ankushmelancholy rated it
March 19, 2018
Status: c103
Wow this is bad, I mean really really bad. Actually I have good impression of Libersark as almost all novels hosted by them have are good. This one also had good ratings so I though why not, and boy was I disappointed. I am normally easy going and tried to give it a chance by reading upto 100 chapters. But this one is getting ridiculous. Seems like author is trying to portray a teenage wet dream atleast his shallow and non sensicalwriting style points towards it. He just points towards... more>> a girl as says that she is his wife and girl simply starts following him and this happens more than once. I feel its wastage of my time to even point its shortcomings as the list is pretty damn long

My suggestion : dont waste your time on this piece of crap. <<less
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Randomreader123
Randomreader123 rated it
March 18, 2018
Status: c20
2/10.

Wow, this is horribly bad. When others pointed out that it had the writing style of a 9th grader, I thought they just exaggerate but after reading 20 chapter I realized that they actually gave the writer more credit that deserved.

This is NOT even good as a self-insert wishfulfillment story as the writing is so bland and nonsensical.

There is no cause-effect, he wants a girl and she will just fall for him without any interaction; not even a simple scene like saving a girl to make her fall. He walks... more>> up to a girl, says "you are one of my wives now" and they say "okay" and stick to him.. And no, what I gave wasn't a summerized version, that's how it's written. <<less
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auroraRMC
PiCrazy31415 rated it
March 26, 2018
Status: c130
Love this, super enjoyable and chill novel. Gotta love a perverted, confident MC. The fact that he smoothly and easily adds the best girls to his harem is amazingly satisfying, and that he finally sleeps with a couple of them. He could get it on faster though. So far there hasn't been a very clear plot... though I am slightly annoyed how he sometimes is really generous and just agrees to give out his limited amount of priceless wine just willy-nilly. It's heart-breaking. Though I might just be a miser.

The... more>> novel is pretty strange in that it's almost entirely dialogue, which can be kind of annoying. Plus the s** scenes are just like one line that they are doing it, which can be underwhelming as well. Where's the NSFW content?? Overall very enjoyable, would have continued reading on MTL but just don't have enough time or interest to keep going (and the MTL is pretty damn confusing). <<less
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yotae
yotae rated it
March 4, 2018
Status: --
Love it, typical story with an op MC and a harem but here the MC is not some beta idiot, he know himself and act like he want. He is good at interacting with womens and don't lose his mind ... more>>
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and he actually sleep with his harem when he and the girls want

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but don't worry there is a "plot" who is not perfect but well applied, it's just you don't read a story like that for a really big plot but just to see the MC act badass, with a point of comedy, a shameless MC and how he get the girls with a little bit of romance. Good story to read quietly in your bed with a glass of coke. <<less
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Bakaleaf
Bakaleaf rated it
June 12, 2018
Status: c150
This is a GOOD novel to read, if you have some time to spent or just feel like reading something this is quiet good story. The Harem part

is real unlike many novel out their which has TAG harem but no touch to girls. Sadly this novel has a lot I mean a lot of many bad plots that make you feel like stop reading.

First the Comical force Comedy at this point I don't know if the author are being serious or just want to insert a joke out of... more>> nowhere.

Then we have unnecessary topic or force interest to wine, I have no idea if the author loves wine or what so ever but to be honest I already read a lot of novel that introduce wine but this novel is just to much the so called MC's wine are very OP.

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MC's wine addictive makes any person 100% insane and obedient (works best to girls), has over power healing effect and majority of medical related topic in this novel has to many b*llsh*tting operation to cure an illness but after a drink with MC's wine all got cure almost instant. I have yet to read if MC's wine can even resurrect the dead.

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Repetitive use of character background to the point that only the name was change, Highlighting Unnecessary characters that has no meaning, introducing some unknown character and explanations to the point you want to flip tables.

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One example are the chiefs of certain restaurant's so far MC already meet 4 - 5 some disappear other's follow MC, The Brother characters is annoying, The MC's 3 brothers are already confusing but the author adapt the same brotherhood system to even side characters. Student A, B, C and D appearing and disappearing from the story (author seems to lazy so most characters are named by letters) Keep mentioning people that was irrelevant or has no meaning for the story.

The annoying part are the MC's 3 brother: (Note: MC's age no idea around 14-16 yrs old)

    • Li Yao, an early-stage Innate expert, is a soldier and Guo Huai's sworn big brother. (30+yrs old)
    • Jia Yuan, one with incredibly high EQ, the third richest man under thirty years old in China, is Guo Huai's second brother. (Early 20's)
    • Wang Shen, deputy director of Wucheng Discipline Inspection Commission, is Guo Huai's third brother (late 20's)
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The girls in this novel are like a very very expensive doll's

Spoiler

They have characters but they are like puppets saying yes to MC's whim, some was just addicted to MC's wine.

Although it's really annoying but this part is actually good if you consider that this is HAREM tag

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The lack of support of expressing the emotion of characters

to certain events for example

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"Guo Huai waved his hand once, the flying sword in his hand instantly rushed out to Qin Long. After spinning around Qin Long's body, the sword then flew back into Guo Huai's hands. The upper part of Qin Long's long robe immediately fell into pieces."

-Chapter 97 (No reaction seeing a flying sword lol) -The idiotic medicine battle ended because of the wine, to much bullsh*tting and waster of chapters

"Second Brother, collect one million from every single esteemed guests who wishes to have their meal in Clinic of No Treatment. For every share missing, you must pay ten times as compensation, " Guo Huai said loudly to the fleeing Jia Yuan. "If you want to eat at Clinic of No Treatment, we can make meals for you, even though it's not that good."

"Meh, one million it is then. I want to taste for myself if the food Zhou Tianyang so praised is actually worth one million. If it's not, I will make you spit out the money you collected from me!" Jia Guyun said smilingly.

-Chapter 145 (1million for a food lol and everyone pays and eat happily lol)

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Novel is good but to many wrong turns and unnecessary plot being recycle making the objective boring as it is very repetitive.

After the exaggerated wine arc comes the medicine arc which

mainly use pills and acupuncture to heal and let's not forget that MC's wine is the most OP cure.

If you are a harem lover then you can add it to your collection but as a reader I can't say that you will really enjoy reading the story <<less
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SpaceMan89
SpaceMan89 rated it
May 9, 2018
Status: c3
No line breaks, gets confusing due to the scene jumping with no warning. MC's friends are in their mid 20s to early 30s and he is 15. Dude gets stabbed and shot before the merger and his relatives see it as nothing bad. F**ked up and poor writing.
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VvvV1225
VvvV1225 rated it
September 23, 2018
Status: c321
It's a novel for harem lovers, if you aren't a harem lover, dislike harem, looking for something deep with a good story-line and development then this novel isn't for you.
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whistle
whistle rated it
May 21, 2018
Status: c50
This novel could be, and likely would be if the story didn't read like a fever dream. Everything is insanely vague and characters just float around, popping into existence just to say a line or two before returning to the void from whence they came.
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shadowtrap2010
shadowtrap2010 rated it
April 24, 2018
Status: c56
This novel is good, if you read it the first time it is excelent. ofcouse if you contaminate your oppinion after reading soo many over used then any novel would be borring.

it like eatting chocolate the first few time and eatting chocolate everymeal for 100 years...!

  1. i like the fact that the MC didn't stuck with the 1 man 1 wife...
  2. he is OP
  3. beautiful wiffuuu... many
  4. Good bromance
  5. stupid enemy and good face slaping
  6. and he not SUPER FKING DENSE... (very important)
  7. i can forgive the fact that female quickly fall for him. I mean ppl tend to admired the higher power (super charisma belong to deity and the MC is a FK deity before he fall)
Overall I think it deserve 5 stars since

... more>> 2 stars for free service

1 for good gramatical and dint kill my brain cell to read

1 for good story (i like it and keep reading till the end)

1 for getting pass 100chapter (I hate drop story... atleast gime decent amount to bingle reading) <<less
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tides
tides rated it
June 5, 2018
Status: c152
Pretty good novel.

this should be what red packet server is. Just a funny novel about someone who are friends with the gods and have skills.

alot of characters drop in once in a while and people unfamiliar with chinese deities and gods will not recognise them but the novel is not geared towards these people (like the majority of translated novels, chinese novels are for the chinese people).
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