This looked pretty promising but was fairly disappointing imo.

I rarely dislike MCs, but I do really wonder if the author did not like their own MC here at all? I honestly struggle to find any good traits in him. He's pretty dumb, both IQ and EQ wise and manages to jump into every and all obvious traps that are laud out for him. He seems to lack basic logical thinking ... more>>

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e.g. Beastmen world: has a peac*ck by its side and thinks its the ML's pet even tho he knows beastmen can transform...

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and is also very emotionally dense. He also relies a lot on his system and on ML and rarely provides anything by himself.

His plans and ideas are also laughable obvious and fairly bad, which gets noticed by many side character aswell. I honestly do not understand at this point how the ML fell in love with MC, whose pretty much only advantage is his primordial spirit (which he usually also only uses for his own benefit).

I don't usually mind face cons but this MC is a face con while not offering much himself, which kinda bugs me. There's also barely chemistry between the main couple and it often feels a lot more like a friends with benefits relationship than a love one.

The story was story wise pretty okay and I felt like the main plot could be intriguing, but I don't know if I will manage to finish this over my dislike for the MC. <<less

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It's okay for a QT novel.

As other readers have mentioned, the first couple worlds aren't really written with the best taste. The author seems to be in the camp of emphasizing certain elements for humor

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like the uncomfortable/bad s*x, but it can come off as just bad taste.

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Additionally, the main character isn't human, so his moral / ethical bottom line is pretty much non-existent.

Some of the later arcs were better to read and the ending was pretty cute.

I would definitely recommend Grammarly to the translator. There's a ton of grammatical errors and sentences that need editing to make sense. <<less

I won't complicate it. Translation is bad. Don't read it if u can't take the bad translation. I survived it because I dig quick transmigration novels.

If u want thick plot, deep character developments, good grammar, pls leave. Ur on the wrong novel.

This is good for quick light read who doesnt mind the obvious plot holes u will see. I rated it as such because I like it nonetheless.

As for the translation, it's really bad. 3/10. Then from 100+ chapters onwards it became half bad so that's like 5/10.

I like how I thought the story might get dragged because of something like misunderstandings, pettiness or any unreasonable & s*upid reasons but then the MC or ML or anyone already resolved it or avoided it from the star so bonus points.

That's why I was able to persist and enjoy this novel without rolling my eyes much and stopping to read later because of heart problems or my IQ needing a recharge.

I love it 🥰🥰

Would have enjoyed more of their life lol but that would be redundant cuz we know... more>> how their future will be. But then I remember about having children😭😭😭 I want more. <<less