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Xia Xingchi was very poor, until he died and transmigrated into a book to become a young master who was adopted back into a wealthy family, becoming rich in an instant!

It was a pity that the book’s moral values were distorted, and he was only cannon fodder while the fake young master who stole the show was the protagonist.

Loved by neither his father nor his mother, Xia Xingchi was forced to marry the frail and sickly villainous big boss. If he escaped the marriage, it would be the end for him. At the engagement banquet, the fake young master set up a trap to lure him into fleeing the marriage and making a scene, but didn’t expect that his eyes would light up on the spot as he rushed up excitedly to say, “Hey, husband!”

This appearance like an immortal, this perfect figure with wide shoulders and long legs……the little fortune hunter was disinterested. In his eyes, his fiancé Li Chengyuan was a gleaming humanoid cash machine!

Xia Xingchi resolutely sat on Li Chengyuan’s lap and held his hand affectionately: “Mr. Li, do you believe in love at first sight?”

— Whenever he heard the call of money, he believed.

Everyone was dumbfounded, thinking that Xia Xingchi was truly an idiot, and he was bound to be tossed to the ground by the villainous boss on the spot. Unexpectedly, Li Chengyuan lowered his eyes in silence, and smiled faintly after a moment: “I believe.”

In full view, he picked up Xia Xingchi and abducted him home.

Xia Xingchi was shocked: Wait! Let me go! Your script is wrong!

Facing the derailed plot, the little fortune hunter had no choice but to make money in the entertainment industry to get rich — while giving Li Chengyuan the most loving end-of-life care –

According to the plot of the original book, the villain was about to die.

Li Chengyuan’s face was pale, and he asked weakly in a low voice: “Will you agree to everything I say?”

Xia Xingchi thought of the 100 billion inheritance that would soon belong to him, wept with joy, and nodded with tears in his eyes: “Tell me, I will definitely promise you.”

To his shock, a certain dying person immediately rose up: “Mark your words.”

Xia Xingchi, who couldn’t get out of bed the next day: “Damn! A person dying of illness can also do this sort of thing!”

Li Chengyuan: I don’t know why he always thinks I’m going to die, so I have to show him otherwise.

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zuzuo3o
zuzuo3o rated it
January 26, 2023
Status: Completed
tsundere MC (who never admits his feelings) x sickly cold paranoid gong (who touches procelain)

its okay for short read without angst, its not bad like all their behaviour depends on environment they grow , not everyone can be perfect so dont mind me venting, do read it!!!! 🤗

as u can see summary its MC who loves money and paranoid ML ~so its ur choice to read ~

... more>> 🚫🚫has many suicidal attempts, su*cide, poisoning, killing

how to solve misunderstandings

author: makes ML touch death door

mc: ML isnt a type to be romantic at all

meanwhile ML who travels all the way to county to show his love to world

ml:i love you...

mc: there's no change in our relation its just like gold owner and substitute ;ML doesnt have romantic cells

me : 👀

anyway the story is full of misunderstandings

if they both could sit and talk and if MC was honest with ML it wouldnt have dragged this long or resukting in ML getting killed again and again.

also this misunderstanding is for story lets ignore it.

coming to og protagonist aka cannon fodder villain -its good to portrait when someone who always loves attention can fall into never ending pit of hate and getting crazy.i dont think he was brain dead villain its just how he is.

about ml's mental health I think it was ignored a lot : (

ML -goes crazy on his moms death day

mc- my 1st kiss is gone

me???? tf! <<less
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Grerutin
Grerutin
March 27, 2023
Status: c22
The nonsensical mindset of the MC and behaviour of the ML mean that you can’t get very emotional about the love story.

MC is too braindead, and his actions towards the MC are often contradictory, so he doesn’t feel like a real person reborn into a novel he has read, he feels like another NPC protagonist. Actually, the villain seems more like a real person, and the MC like the novel character: the ML witnessed the MC materialise out of thin air and fall into his bathtub, he has a consistent... more>> internal dialogue and point of view, and there is some vague story hints that he actually met MC when he was about 10.

Presumably, MC blipped into the novel world and they had a cute moment where the ML fell in love with him and realised his world wasn’t real, or at least that MC is from another world. So when MC popped back into his world and fell into his bathtub, he knew it was the same boy he fell in love with.

im gonna keep reading for a bit, but if MC keeps sleeping in the same bed, hugging the ML, kissing him to placate him when he gets angry, and STILL can’t even entertain the possibility that the ML may genuinely like him, I’ll drop it. <<less
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Kari0904
Kari0904 rated it
August 17, 2023
Status: Completed
MC is the most irrational person in the novel, he is simply incoherent, extremely aggressive and seems to believe that ML owes him something.

MC treats ML as his "boss" but he just doesn't respect him at all, ML deserves better

Spoiler

ML receives a small wound saving MC and MC doesn't even want to apply medicine to him!!!. They also take the whole novel solving a misunderstanding, and only because MC for some random reason refuses to be honest

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Bb_me
Bb_me rated it
February 8, 2023
Status: --
Take the protagonist from "Bird Dude Nie Bufan" and put him in a modern setting. That is the story.

In all seriousness though, it's a pretty good novel (so far). The characters are likable, it has a decent plot and the Translator/s update almost every single day as I'm writing this review, which should really be praised since mandarin really is an ass to translate. 💞

... more>> Summary:

The protagonis, Xia Xingchi, transmigrates into the time when the cannon fodder 'ran away' from his fiance and accidentally meets Li Chengyuan (ML). What he didn't know, was Li Chengyuan was the fiance he ran away from, and he basically talked and explained BS to Li Chengyuan on why he left his fiance. When it was revealed who Li Chengyuan was.... he somehow bs-ed his way again and survived.

The MC/Protagonist:

Xia Xingchi can be described as a shameless cowardly type of person but he does have his morals. He can be shameless, but he does do his job well as long as he is paid. He might sometimes be a coward, but that doesn't make him easy to be trampled on. Like for example when an actor tried to embarrass him by saying his clothes were fake, he retaliated back even when he knew he'd likely get in trouble. (I think there were one chps 10-12)

S/N: My words don't give justice to how shameless and chaotic Xia Xingchi in the novel actually is. But he really is the embodiment of the quote: "I don't want peace, I want violence."

The ML/Love Interest:

Li Chengyuan may look like your typical overbearing, cold, possessive, wealthy Love Interest, and he does kinda fall in your average ML stereotype. But believe me, there's more to him than that. He has this very vague past regarding his illness, and there are subtle hints of mental and physical health issues caused because of such illness. There is a brief dialogue on chapter 12, where Li Chengyuan tells himself to lower his voice because 'they' might hear him. The 'they' I'm guessing must mean his family or at the very least, close relatives/friends.

I'm guessing that in the near future they'd reveal Li Chengyuan's past, but with the little hints scattered in the chapters, I already have a story in mind. Overall, 4.5/5 <<less
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FabiolAAA
FabiolAAA rated it
June 25, 2023
Status: c22
Obligatory : I didn't read the whole novel teehee

The novel's premise is so cute so I had high expectations. So this review is partly my fault for putting the bar too high.

The MC is obstuse. Really realLY REALLY OBSTUSE. When the tags say that he was dense I didn't think he would be obstuse too. I personally like MCs that are a bit dense since it makes for an interesting story but still, this is too much. Being dense is one this but being obstuse is where I draw the... more>> line. There's times when the MC is considerate to the ML.

Spoiler

like when the MC went to a restaurant with the ML and the ML was upset that the MC was stingy with the money he gave him so made him pay for dinner. The MC finds that the food is too expensive so he only buys the ML dinner so the MC has nothing to eat. (In the end the ML thought he was very endearing for doing that and buys him dinner)

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stuff like that made me want to keep reading a little bit more.

But in the end I dropped the novel because of a certain event.

.
Spoiler

when the ML went to the soiree to accompanied the MC because he wanted to make the relationship public

(mind you the ML hasn't said this because he's a tsundere)

So the MC decides to go with a BUS to the venue because he's embarrassed to go in the limo the ML got for him. BUT HE DOESN'T SAY ANYTHING TO THE ML!?? THE SAME ML THAT HAS CONTROL ISSUES BECAUSE THIS s*upid bit*h TRIED TO RUN AWAY TWICE. SO WHEN THE ML FINDS OUT HE'S PISSED OFF AND THE MC DOESN'T SEEM TO UNDERSTAND WHY GOD YOU PISS ME OFF SO MUCH. OBLIVIOUSNESS AND DENSENESS IS OK, I DON'T CARE, BUT OBSTUSENESS IS SO INFURIATING THE ML DESERVES BETTER RRAAAHHH

AND LIKE it was SO OBVIOUS that a f*cking BRICK could see that the ML wanted to come with you. The ML literally bought a couple costume to match yours, he also CAME to the soiree literally WENT to the waiting room to bring you a coat because THE MC FELT COLD!

AND WHEN ALL THAT IS SAID AND DONE HE GETS READY TO WALK WHEN THE MC IS LIKE

He DoEsN't WaNt tO gO DoWN aNd wALK

I LITERALLY CLOSED THE TAB I WAS READING ON AND DROOPED IT.

LIKE BRO WHAT ARE YOU SAYING YOU OBSTUSE LITTLE PIECE OF SHIT.

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The ML in this novel is cute l love him. He's a black cat tsundere type. He deserves way better than the emotionally inconsiderate MC.

Regardless, I have to say, this novel is quite short chapter wise, but the chapters themselves are pretty long so it's quite a bit of content.

The translation is good and reads easy.

Tldr: I hate the MC he's obstuse. The ML is cool I fwh.

I wrote this review in anger so I might be harsher than it deserves. <<less
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Devrai
Devrai rated it
April 22, 2023
Status: extra 2
Better than 3 stars but worse than 4. The story itself is not bad but it's missing something. The side characters are 2d and even the main characters are not really that deep.

MC is set up as a little liar and money grubber but his heart is super soft and he lacks an evil streak.

ML is the epitome of tsundere. Cold big guy on the outside but does everything for his wife.

I do not get how ML fell in love? It all has this backstory that he recognized MC as... more>> his white moonlight.... but they were children when they met and there was really nothing s*xual going on.... so... yeah... and MC feel in love because he got pampered with money and protection of a big tigh.

Well... nonetheless, I was entertained enough. So I would recommend this as an in-between, since it is on the short side. <<less
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Potatoteeth
Potatoteeth rated it
April 15, 2023
Status: Completed
MC is a total cloudcuckoo-lander! His characterisation makes sense: ADHD, with not a lot of education, but bursting with energy, sensitive about pride, and in possession of a soft heart. Such a person is most adept at digging pits for themselves in real life, and it works very well to create comedy. The secondhand embarrassment is balanced beautifully by the cheeky writing. There are plot holes, but I enjoyed this a lot.

P.S. By clicking to read, you are waiving the right to expect maturity from anyone in the novel.
Spoiler

Knowing that someone would stop at nothing to kill him, ML wanders off alone to the same location on the same day every year in a psychotic daze, without preparation or bodyguards.

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MC may be trustworthy in an emergency, but in every other situation, he will not graduate from sweet burbling childhood to the day he dies. Just a heads up.

5 stars.
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HiddenHermit
HiddenHermit rated it
April 15, 2023
Status: Completed
Good read. At first I wasn't into the MC, Xia Xingchi, much and felt he was too money hungry. However, after I realized he was just dense, I started liking him. ML, Li Chengyuan, is the typical cold and domineering type. Both MC and ML have sad pasts.

Even though MC is an actor, the entertainment industry content isn't much... instead there is a good bit of netizen comments.

The plot is predictable based off the intro but there is twist. Reading this spoiler might ruin the reading experience since the... more>> author teases the reader with bits and pieces. The whole thing isn't revealed until almost the end.
Spoiler

MC was struck by lightning and died, transmigrating into ML's world. ML agrees to marry MC but according to the novel he was suppose to reject the marriage. ML had been searching for someone since he was 7 years old. ML believes MC is this person... even though the age is wrong.

It turns out that when MC was 10 years old, he had transmigrated to ML's world but didn't realize it. He met ML when his stepmom schemed to have him "runaway from home". MC took care of the sickly ML. However, on a rainy day when MC took ML's money to get medicine for ML, he was struck by lightning and went back to his world. MC woke up and forgot ML. ML waited and searched for MC but he was never found.

This was the big misunderstanding... it looked like MC had abandoned ML after he got all the money. Poor ML, living all those years thinking he was abandoned. : (

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The couple have a happy ending. <<less
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earlgreyt
earlgreyt rated it
April 14, 2023
Status: Completed
Comedic and fluffy novel!

Excellent translation. Really enjoyed reading it.

Very fluffy, not many challenges for the MC to overcome. The villains are very idiotic and evil and get their comeuppance pretty quickly without the MC needing to do much.

There's some overarching mysteries, some which are explained, and some which are not.

This is a good quick read for people who are looking for some mindless fluff and light entertainment.
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XianYiXi
XianYiXi rated it
April 22, 2023
Status: Completed
I have never seen brain dead fan comments prepared as much as in this one, for the sake of faceslapping. I wonder if fans like that really exist IRL.

Sweet story of Money grubber tsundere shou X sickly cold paranoid gong.

The misunderstanding in here toh ~

(ㆆᴗㆆ) (ㆆᴗㆆ) (ㆆᴗㆆ)

This also has near death experience, su*cide, su*cide attempt, poisoning etc. [Sh*t ML had to go through so many things]. Thankfully it's not a tragedy story instead a Happy ending one.

Thanks to the translator for translating this novel ❤️
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Fisukisuki
Fisukisuki rated it
April 12, 2023
Status: Completed
... too many bloody scenes... Oh how I wish it was a cursed words in English.

Be ready to read exciting scenes. It's not a lot, but twice too many for such a short novel... (　；∀；) haha

The Near-death experience tag does not lie...

... more>> This is not a Miracle kind of novel. But thank goodness it's not a Tragedy or Angsty either.

But it was definitely Hurt/Comfort kind of plot.

The story wasn't as Cheerful or Light as the Summary tried to paint it.

MC and ML able to survive in the end was because they're NOT an Idiot, and they do have desire to live. Okay, maybe ML's condition slightly different, but as long as MC wish for him, ML would give his best!

Anyway, beside those Heavy Exciting scenes, there's another good exciting moments!

While Considerate Gong ML is nice, sometimes I just want to read a Gong ML who can't hold back sometimes. I mean with how he expose his relationship with MC. He's being Subtle NOT Subtle and I LOVE IT!!! THAT WAS FUN!!! Love the Netizen's reactions. (ㅅ˙³˙) ♡

But MC's action doesn't lose either when he FINALLY announced Spectacularly and Absolutely Necessarily who the real Fiance is!

Seriously, this Novel was Truly Exciting for such a Short novel!!! Less than 50 chapters but every thing was Explosive!!! Soooo Good!!!

Im missing the last extra. Waiting to really complete this review!

But Never Doubt by True Eternal Love for this Novel! It may not be a Perfect one, but it was Totally Worth it!!!

New Added: The Last Chapter is Wild!!! 😆😆😆 LMAO OMG

The Last chapter was mostly feels like Pure for Fun. But not played as a Dream thing. And it was GREAT! I LOVE IT!!!

The point is: THIS NOVEL IS WORTH IT!!! <<less
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rorowingaway
rorowingaway rated it
March 31, 2023
Status: c44
  • storyline: 7/10 (-3 like he alrd know he "transmigrated" then why he still act like a lewser and be soft nd useless like that when in fact he is quite OP this is literally to change the chtr og design so that ML can make a appearance bs concept)
  • chtrs: 6/10 (-3 the MC low key annoyin cos the way the present him is just literally annoyin bruv, -3 the surrounding people always degrade MC so much like for what and the agent is so annoying also)
  • comments: so yes its quite ok but I wont re read this again
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baetriarchy
baetriarchy
March 4, 2024
Status: Completed
3.8/4

Not quite a 4, which in my book is a re-read, but still a delightful and well-written read nonetheless. If you're more into slice-of-life/modern danmei than I am, this may be a 4 or 5 for you.

  • First of all, little shou hedgehog MC Xia Xingchi is so freaking funny and the face-slapping that follows him is SO satisfying!
  • His first meeting with ML Li Chengyuan still has me in stitches (>w<) ~~ this poor guy is not allowed the luxury of face or decency lmao
  • XX is the typical tsundere shou who shows his little hedgie spikes but of course secretly has a soft side and LC is your typical cool, cold young master tycoon but the story takes a good amount of time to dive into each of their backstories such that these characters get fleshed out enough for their chemistry and motivations to make sense
  • Legitimately, LC's childhood backstory made me tear up UnU
  • With XX's secretly doting ways, it's pretty easy to see how LC would fall for him and later you get
    Spoiler

    explicit confirmation of LC's obsession due to meeting a compassionate XX in his childhood backstory

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    but honestly with how LC treats him for a good half of the novel--not communicating, being controlling, shutting down emotionally especially when he's jealous--I found it harder to buy that XX would develop deep feelings as quickly as he does for his personal sickly piggy bank
  • I also found the reality TV show arc absurd but 1000% hilarious and so fun to read about, I did NOT see it coming
  • There's a cat named Summer and you can tell the author is a cat person because the descriptions of huffing that sweet, sweet kitty fur is completely accurate. I'm always gonna read when a cat is involved
I think overall there's great pacing and good character development; what I like to see is not just development within the context of the relationship but also individual growth and I think this novel, for the length it is, did that well.

I'm personally more biased towards books with more action/adventure plot beats and this one felt a bit too slice-of-lifey for me, but the humor and excellent characterization kept this from being a drag. May bump it up to a 4 eventually!
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erialolita
erialolita rated it
September 22, 2023
Status: Completed
More like 3.5 but rounded up since the author kept it short. Just when I was really starting to get annoyed at the MC refusing to communicate the author started to wrap up the story.

MC, didn't really like or dislike him. He has his funny and fun moments, but I disklike how he treats the ML in the beginning, he is too hung up on the novel. Then he will realize things aren't what they seem, but then go back to being afraid of the "villain". I do like that... more>> he was more outspoken than most MCs in this type of novel.

ML was fine, but I was getting tired of him always being hurt or sick. It's like the author enjoyed tormenting the poor ML. I loved how he recognized his possessiveness was out of control and kept it reigned in.

Their romance is slow, but felt like there was progress with MCs feelings. Didn't get enough from ML's view though.

The entertainment part isn't a big part of the story, but I am okay with it. I hate when entertainment stories focus on the movie plot more than the actual story.

The people who deserved to get face slapped did. It was just a bit unfulfilling as there was no real conclusions about their endings.

The first extra isn't really an extra in my opinion, more of the actual last chapter. The 2nd extra wasn't my cup of tea.

All in all it was an easy and quick read. Translation was great, thank you translator. I may read again in the future. <<less
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astroVulpes
astroVulpes rated it
September 15, 2023
Status: Completed
Prefacing this with the fact that I really liked this plot and the characters. The foreshadowing was well done, and the urgency and emotion the ML shows by the end are completely justified.

That being said... this story has absolutely no reason to be in the entertainment industry. It becomes to feel like a strange add on because MC's amount of fans for most of the book make absolutely no sense. Even if someone was very beautiful if they had absolutely no recognizable work behind them, had only one interview and... more>> one variety show (later)... how many fans should they have? Whatever number you're thinking... tr*sh it. He has enough to end up squandering his opponents (with some possoble help from ML). Why? I just don't know. He barely speaks to the camera or shows off incredible skills, or a super charming personality. Only when the rich tycoon ML that people are paying attention to actually interacts with him does it make more sense for people to pay attention to him. But people will defend him like die hard fans... why? I don't know, truly.

The clear villains of the story are not well developed enough with their antagonistic behaviors to garner importance to the plot either.

The entire book would be better outside of the entertainment industry, there isnt enough time spent on making it important or involving it in the main plot and I think the romance and characters would have flourished more outside of it because when the plot was the most serious the unnecessary drama was added when it could have just been serious. <<less
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trash_generalist
trash_generalist
August 27, 2023
Status: c11
Uhm. I wasn't paying too close attention?? T.T Ended up losing interest early. But it seems fun. At least, the MC and ML dynamics are interesting if a bit simple (it's a short story, so simple is to be expected, I suppose).

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SUMMARY — The MC is a moneygrubber that ended up being struck by lightning. After which, he was teleported into the bathtub of a certain villainous boss (AKA the ML). It's a bit difficult to explain, since the author skipped a lot of explanations. But the basic gist is... more>> that the MC ended up in a novel. His new identity is the real son of the fallen Xia family — with his fake brother being the protagonist shou of the original novel. In said novel, he's supposed to run away from a marriage set up with the villanous boss and then get his lunch box as all cannon fodders do. But things don't go how he expected it to.

First of all, the villainous boss actively sought out the engagement with the original owner. Second, they met beforehand in a bathtub lol. Though that meeting was fast and they didn't really communicate. Third, the ML seems to be hiding something — somehow, he knows the MC??? Anyway, all this combine into a messy engagement. The two begin to live together from then on. And all sorts of shenanigans ensue. <<less
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Pop_up_ninja
Pop_up_ninja rated it
June 22, 2023
Status: c48
This is a decent novel. The dog blood got a bit much towards the end of the novel which I think detracted, and the misunderstanding lasted waaay too long ... more>>
Spoiler

pretty much the end of the novel

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This is definitely a slowburn though. But it has its cute moments.

I would probably rate it as a three personally, but I've given it a four because it I actually pretty good. I'm just not the greatest fan of slow burn and misunderstandings that last until the end of a novel.

Lastly, the translation is really good! I can't fault it at all. <<less
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Crayonchii
Crayonchii rated it
June 22, 2023
Status: Completed
Great story actually. I love the dialogue love the plot but too many plothole n unexplained stuff. The writing was great at the same time its bad. Great with the dialogue n funny moment n plot. Bad bcause it's jumping around too much. If u wanna write story starting with point B n explain point A later, it shouldn't have loophole, but this one just have too many which leave me as a reader very frustrated. For example story start with the engagement banquet (if that's even a banquet, too... more>> chaotic n the surrounding scene not written well) , then there's like flashback MC transmigrating suddenly in front of ml, but the story between tht until the banquet not explained at all, like how did MC know he's xia xingchi how he return to tht family how long since he return there, how long from his frst meeting with ML to the second meeting? Just too many unexplained stuff!

Then there's the ending. What happen to those villains? Did MC ever properly told his story to ml, like how he died how he didnt mean to left ML when they were kids? It leave me so frustrating how MC dnt wanna just confess his transmigration earlier, ML kept asking n MC trying to gve dumb answer.

And then there's unnecessary moment like MC keep questioning if he is in love or if they were being ambiguous with each other, this near the end already I was like.. Uhm wasn't ML hve been acting ambiguous towards u the whole time u just suddenly questioning this late in the chapter??🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️ author like to waste words on smthing unnecessary n obvious or she/he already mentioned while leaving the necessary plot point unexplained.

Also the background story on the origin of mls paranoid n sickness feel so brushed off yet at the same time all the point explained properly. For example it didn't say directly his mom is crazy bcause the husband cheating n hve healthy child with his mistress but the hint is clearly there. So I assume the husband abusive towards her emotionally n tht drive her crazy n she blame it on her son being sick while his illegitimate son is healthy. It implies tht she thought he cheat on her n hve other child bcause her son (ml) is sick but our MC monologue said it's not ML fault to begin with bcause the illegitimate son is older than him.

Another point tht irritate me, TOO MANY UNNECESSARY netizen dialogue box. And almost all of them is toxic. Wether MC fans or xia yu fans both side is equally toxic. They keep tr*sh talking each other, too much cyber bullying. I notice this in a lot of chinese novel. It's rlly gve me bad view/impression on them. <<less
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WallEyeKnee
WallEyeKnee rated it
June 16, 2023
Status: Completed
This was a okay short read. It's ML pampering MC with angst at the start.

The whole thing focus on ML finding his childhood moonlight.

MC is funny but he's cowardly obsess with money, can't fight back alot so damsel in distress most of the time

Enjoy MC yapping his mouth with funny lines I guess
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ylial rated it
June 10, 2023
Status: Completed
Although the chapters are less than 50, the author have tackled all the key points of the plot.

Hilarious and good! The misunderstanding is kinda annoying, fortunely, it is resolved after some chapters
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