One example is when they are competing with another company for investment. Said company has two partners. When the MC's team wins, and it is proven that the other company had some issue with copyright infringement, MC simply invites one of the two partners of his rival company just because he 'knows' that he is talented and a good guy. As for how he knows this, it's probably based on what he read online or in the book before he transmigrated (I doubt the latter, considering this investment arc wasn't a 'major event' according to the original plotline). There's no other explanation or interaction between the two. And in the end, when the latter agrees, he is directly invited to join the main project chat without consideration that he may be a spy or something else.

Like the mc's original body's situation. His grandpa separated him from his mother when his dad died. The grandpa showered him with love initially, but then the MC hurt himself and was suffering from mental disability. Even though the grandpa doesn't like the MC after that, why doesn't he let him go back to his mom? Like what motive did he have to keep him if he doesn't even like him? He was just acting like an ass because he has the bad guy role.

Another instance, and I'll use the example of that investment competition earlier, is when one of the two partners, who is the bad guy, insults women. A bit of a background about this scene is that the two competing teams need the investor's votes. There's three people whose vote matter, and one of them is a woman. The woman votes for the bad guy's company, but then the bad guy proceeds to insult the mc's team's female member by saying something along the lines of 'you are a woman so you can't possibly do this work'. He does this right in front of that female investor whose vote was clearly a tie-breaker for him.

Like there's one instance when the MC threatens people with a knife, but in a much later chapter, he is shown to strongly react to a knife handed to him because of past trauma. I get it that someone's trauma may not be triggered all the time but I don't think someone would willingly pickup a knife if they are traumatized by it.

That 2nd house Bo Wang should be give more punishment for the bulling of ML and white lotus villain shou should be in jail for all he has done. Too many ppl got away. Especially original Pei house mother and father! Scums if MC didn't transmigrate it would be hell for the original body owner

At the halfway point of the story when MC and ML reveal their true faces to each other, I really loved that they took the time to get to know each other from the beginning rather than jumping into anything.

Also can I say how I absolutely died laughing when MC literally passed out for a day and a half after their first time lmaooo

I don't understand another reviewer's thoughts on the ML. I don't know where he was manipulating the MC to be in a relationship. Maybe a bit desperate, but not manipulative.

MC was pretending to be a fool, ML was pretending to be blind. When their deceptions all come out in the open, MC like a coward, tries to run away in the middle of the night. ML of course catches him before he gets out of the house. ML requests the MC to stay to try to fall in love with him and MC agrees to try. MC is already in love with ML and just doesn't notice. ML is a bit clingy because of his backstory, but nothing excessive.

the game arc at the end fits the story, but at the same time felt off. Just felt like too much, I was bored through most of it.

I also didn't really like the MLs mom bit. I get the author was trying to tie up loose ends and I do appreciate that, but it was a too bittersweet in such a feel good part of the novel, felt out of place.

For example, ML grandfather which ended up alone because there was no people in his family want to take care of him, ML uncle who went to prison because of his crime, and the last is ML cousin who also had to go to prison, but in the end of his scene in the story he was realized and regretted everything that he had done.

There is also ending story for original MC in the book, ML's biological mother, and many more which are written with different endings.

Last, the story about MC adoptive parents is very sad (one of my fav scene actually), luckily we have a bonus chapter for their story.