There is a clear explanation early on about why the FL doesn't know things even though it's "her book." Her book was set a few years later, in a different part of the world, and was more focused on different characters. What makes it an issue is the annoying and repetitive way the FL thinks! She realizes this herself, but then keeps acting surprised and confused about really trivial things.

My favorite example of this so far is about "the beasts." She knows that they are able to shape-shift. She wrote about it in her book. But she gets quite distressed when she sees the ML's beast shape-shift from a horse into a panther and realizes it's the one she wrote about. Because she wrote that the beast was a panther and (gasp dun dun dun) it's different. Darlin', that is a panther. That's how come you just recognized it. It shape-shifts into a panther most of the time he's "using" it. Which is the only time it showed up in the book. That's NOT DIFFERENT from the book! It's THE SAME. I do not see the issue here. 💀

the s*x part was part of the deal of og villainess and ml. MC was trying not to raise suspicion further (since ML was suspicious of her amnesia and thought that she was doing it to avoid their deal.) so she had to comply with it. It's not that she's chill about it but she needs to do it cuz she might (on her pov) gets killed if she doesn't

When they let Mara live and end up in a win-win situation. Mara lives, Holy City gets a protector from other larks. My favorite character from this novel is Mara. He's just so cute and pureeeee. Seriously, I'm so happy he got his happy ending🥹

Eugene was described as someone who is really powerful. She possessed the greatest Ramita in history and can even tame Kings' Hwansus and can kill larks. But all she did in the final battle was the Ramita sea that she wasn't even able to control properly😭 I thought she would be the one to handle Sangje but she wasn't even there. I thought she would have bigger role on that final battle considering her power was literally end for larks but perhaps I was expecting too much

It was too anti-climatic😭 Dude was reigning the humans for so long but got killed so easily not really easily but still it wasn't satisfyingly long I understand that Kings' was the literally like the kryptonite to Sangje but getting all the advantages (they also manage to have the seed that reveals where Sangje's true core was) aside from their numbers was too overkill imo. And Sangje not having a backup plan was so not "Story's final boss" like