Kaifuku Jutsushi no Yarinaoshi ~ Sokushi Mahou to Skill Copy no Choetsu Heal

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–Using healing magic on the world itself, I’ll start over.

‘Healing magicians cannot fight alone.’ Keare, who was bound by this common knowledge, was exploited again and again by others.

But one day, he noticed what lay beyond healing magic, and was convinced that a healing magician was the strongest class. However, by the time he realized that potential, he was deprived of everything. Thus, he used healing magic on the world itself to go back four years, deciding to redo everything.

This is a heroic tale of one healing magician who became the strongest by using knowledge from his past life and healing magic.

Associated Names
One entry per line
The Redo of a Healing Magician ~ Transcendental Healing of Instant Death Magic and Skill Copying
回復術士のやり直し~即死魔法とスキルコピーの超越ヒール~
Related Series
Elf Tensei Kara no Cheat Kenkoku-ki (Same Franchise)
Maou-sama no Machizukuri! ~Saikyou no Danjon wa Kindai Toshi~ (Same Franchise)
Upstart Pastry Chef ~Territory Management of a Genius Pâtisserie~ (Same Franchise)
Recommendations
Revolution of the 8th Class Mage (3)
Sevens (2)
The King of the Battlefield (1)
I Work As A Healer In Another World’s Labyrinth City (WN) (1)
Shikkaku Mon no Saikyou Kenja~ Sekai Saikyou no Kenja ga Sarani Tsuyoku Naru Tameni Tenseishimashita~ (1)
The Mage Will Master Magic Efficiently In His Second Life (1)

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Date Group Release
05/18/18 Idle Translations v6c14
05/06/18 Idle Translations v6c13
04/23/18 Idle Translations v6c12
04/17/18 Idle Translations v6c11
04/07/18 Idle Translations v6c10
03/24/18 Idle Translations v6c9
03/10/18 Idle Translations v6c8
03/04/18 Idle Translations v6c7
02/26/18 Idle Translations v6c6
02/18/18 Idle Translations v6c5
02/05/18 Idle Translations v6c4
01/01/18 Idle Translations v6c3
12/26/17 Idle Translations v6c2
12/17/17 Idle Translations v6c1
12/11/17 Idle Translations v6 prologue
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berdanka
New berdanka rated it
May 16, 2018
Status: v6c13
It's a nice novel for people who like this kind of stories and MC. I can't understand why people downvoting this novel just because of "explicit content". There are so much of JP novels with indecisive and pathetic MC that I'm starving for hard content. I thing we must be allowed to have some novels like this.

P.S.: EN translator is a nice guy.
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Wren
New Wren rated it
May 1, 2018
Status: --
As with most revenge novels, it started off okay. The premise is nothing new but it still piqued my interest. Then it trailed off a cliff. Look, I can handle dark, twisted MCs. I'm fine with all the rape, murder, gore, and torture. What I can't handle is inconsistencies.

You'd think after all the sh*t these dark type novel MCs go through, they'd be a little more determined in their revenge but NO. If it's a cute girl you get live and if you're a guy you die. Avoiding spoiler, some... more>> of the girls even get conveniently ret-conned just to make sure they don't die and get added into his harem. And as others have said, sometimes the guy decides to kill over a pebble, other times you can rape him in the butt with a hot stick and he'll decide to give you a second chance.

My last rant would be the pointless harem. I hate harems, I make a point avoiding moronic wish-fulfilment power fantasies that do nothing but go around being OP, cooking food, gathering girl, and breeding. I thought dark novels like these would be better, evidently, like Arifureta, I was wrong. The harem does nothing but detract from the main story (even though there isn't a main story aside from REVENGE#[email protected]%) If I wanted s*x I'd read hentai. Stop with these harem bullsh*t. <<less
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edytor
edytor rated it
March 29, 2017
Status: v1c11
As with most of the novels on novelupdates, overrated.

Author treats you like an idiot regurgitating the same information again and again.

The characters are so bland that calling them two-dimensional would be a compliment; I literally do not give a sh*t about any of the characters, even the MC isn't even fleshed out. This is made doubly annoying because he prioritizes describing game mechanics in-depth over actual character development.

World building is also bland, because the author keeps fleshing out tired old game mechanics we've seen millions of times instead of developing... more>> an actual interesting, deep fantasy world.

For an amateur translation it's not bad but it's not good either, it suffers from a lack of localization, grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes and awkward phrasing.

The author had a decent spin on the reincarnation/time-travel schtick but after the prologue he kept butchering it harder and harder. <<less
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SassyBlackKeyBoardWarrior
SassyBlackKeyBoardWarrior rated it
October 14, 2017
Status: v2c1
If you're looking for a decent story about a healer who was abused by his teammates, went back in time, got revenge, and became the strongest hero, turn around and walk away, this novel is not what you're looking for.

This novel is...a fulfillment fantasy. If I were to put a point on the matter, I'd say that revenge is the plot and everything else is secondary. World building is secondary, character development is secondary, even the abilities used is secondary. Everything in this novel exists to give you a fulfillment... more>> fantasy about getting revenge. That said if you were recently scorned by a man or woman and want to fantasize about raping them and breaking their mind repeatedly until their former self no longer exists, then magically healing them back to their prior unbroken condition only to do it all over again, then this novel is for you.

An argument could be made to say that this main character is an anti-hero. If such an argument was made, I would reply with: "The main character doesn't give enough attention to the overall situation to warrant being called an anti-"hero"." I'm a little over 22 chapters in and the overall feel of the novel has not diverged from "mindless revenge". Every action, every choice, every plan has been centered around revenge. The main character has mentioned a single thought, a single LINE, a single sentence related to the end portion of the story "defeating the Demon King" and he has only mentioned that line of thought once. Everything else has been about revenge. To point that I'm curious whether by the end of it all the author will even remember this basic point at all.

Something else that I'm dissatisfied with is how the main character continues to mind break people. Mind breaking for s*xual pleasure, mind breaking for revenge. I can see the warrant for those two, they make sense considering that this novels' overall feel is centered around being a fulfillment fantasy. However the main character does not stop, he continues to mind break even basic people who aren't even involved, purely to satisfy his "curiosity" to what their choices will be, which is blatantly stated by his own internal monologue. Not leaving aside the fact that the main character was abused in his past life, that is all the more reason why his revenge should be more targeted towards his targets and less towards the common people he meets along the way. However, the author does not go down this path and I find that disturbing. The main character is less centralized around getting revenge on his specific targets and more interested in screwing with random people "On the Way" to his dedicated targets, and this I find truly repulsive.

If I wanted to go a step farther I could even say that this novel is subpar even as far as fulfillment fantasy's go. The mind break is rather unoriginal and most of it is skipped over. Even the rape scenes/s*x scenes are basically "They f**ked, the end.". Just an overall, poorly written fulfillment fantasy novel. <<less
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Cryarc
Cryarc rated it
March 12, 2017
Status: c41
This series is written by the author of "Elf Tensei Kara no Cheat Kenkoku-ki", "Maou-sama Machizukuri!" and some other series. If you liked Elf Tensei then you'll probably likes this series too since it's using similar formula, but that also means negative aspects from it also carried over here.

Positively even though it's the jaded trope of redo a life for revenge, the author managed to make it flowing rather naturally and engaging. Since the author is rather seasoned writer, the plot is easy to follow and read. The MC is... more>> rather cunning and tricky maybe appealing to some readers.

Negatively, harem will ruin some of the mood similar with his other series. He is extremely ruthless and unforgiving toward males but hypocrite/soft toward females. Along with the story progression he will have girls following his orders. If you don't like out of the place harem it will probably feels a little bit annoying. <<less
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hellogarry
hellogarry rated it
July 10, 2017
Status: v10
I will be completely honest. I was hoping for a well describe s*x scene considering the plot and all I got is the scene getting cut every time. I had a high expectation so that was a bummer.

Setting that aside the premises is good just that the main character somewhat annoys me to some degree, probably because of how he thinks he is so kind but if you view it in other's person view he is just like any other antagonist in the story.
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Bloodline
Bloodline rated it
June 21, 2017
Status: v3c7
Short Description:

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The MC is the healing hero, seen as useless and just garbadge in the hero party. He got drugged to obey orders and was basically treated like sh*t. Someday he regains his personality and manages to turn back time to get his revenge. (All these things are naturally explained in the first few chapters)

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Warning: The MC is really an asshole.. If you look for a decent character you need to look somewhere else. This novel is driven by revenge but also by the MC's determination to live this new life without restrictions.

Personally I really like it.

This revenge/ (anti) hero novel is so good.

Of course there are similarities to other hero revenge stories.

But the way the author describes Kearus revenge upon various people is way better.

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I personally loved how he treated Princess Flare - I wonder what her reaction will be once she remembers everything :D

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I also really enjoy Kearus reasoning - as in when he decides to take revenge and when not. Sometimes he's just hilarious ;D

The female characters also have likable characters.

Plus I'm a sucker for Brainwash Novels. Even though it only appeared once so far I freaking loved it.

Also yes there is mature content in this novel, but it's rather described in a roundabout way. And I like that all harem members get the same treatment and attention.

So if you looked at the tags and they interest you, I would reccomend giving this novel a try ^^ <<less
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Neut
Neut rated it
April 27, 2017
Status: v2c8
A different and rather fresh (has been done before but not many) take on the "reincarnation".

I'm almost tempted to give this a 2, however, because of how one dimensional characters are and how the author frustratingly breaks his own world's "laws".

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An example would be in the bedroom/prison where maids, soldiers, etc rapes him for level but he explains it's almost pointless as it's much more optimal to do it in the morning (or something) yet after he meets setsuna he explains how it can be done 3 times a day like a meal. He also talks about he will only take revenge if flare is truly "trash" to take the moral high ground but looks forward to taking revenge on the gun/sword hero, even though it was flare who got them to treat him unfairly.

It also doesn't help how he killed the attendants even though he clearly has the ability to remove memories. Also even though kureha has been identified like an "enemy" (like the heroes), it's almost guaranteed that she is going to be spared just so his harem count can be increased (while the heroes will probably die due to them being male).

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This is so frustrating... Now that the MC has princess flare and is starting to develop feelings for her, we conveniently find out that her sister is the true "mastermind"... The plot hole being the hero has all the memories, so he should've known by healing flare that she had a scheming sister. But ok, that's even forgivable compared to the hero of the sword being a cross dressing female. Later the MC is going to conveniently point out that he knew all along that the hero of healing is a female and she is going to be added to his harem... WHYUDODIS AUTHOR

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metazoxan
metazoxan rated it
November 23, 2017
Status: v1
I have not gotten far yet so this won't be the most comprehensive review but I just wanted to take a bit to adress the premise, some basic issues with it, and some of it's initial execution.

First off the idea that there are 4 of these legendary heroes yet they find a need to brutally abuse the "healer Hero" is absurd IMO. In any RPG or even in real life medics and prized and valued. Additionally most humans will feel SOME level of gratitude to someone who saved their life.... more>> Of course people can be selfish and cruel but the level the author has them go to is pretty ridiculous.

Another issue is how the MC becomes OP. See apparently healing magic in this world doesn't speed up healing but instead returns things to a healed state. But he figured out how to abuse this and turn it into "Rewrite the state of anything as he pleases". But here is the issue... WHY DID NO ONE ELSE REALIZE THIS!?! Why is healing magic regarded as trash if it can really do all of this?

Whatever the case is between how naturally he ends up becoming OP and how unnaturally cruel everyone around him acts it all feels like a cheap set up for a "revenge" story. <<less
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jlkc
jlkc rated it
April 5, 2017
Status: v1c16
I'm giving it a 5 cause I'm biased towards stories that can cause that feeling of strong and raw emotions. I love betrayal stories that don't pull punches regardless of who is on the receiving end.

My one complaint is how the author went with a harem when he could have made it much more interesting. Harems are fine if you stick to two or at the most three characters and invest the time in them so they aren't one dimensional but few authors manage to pull it off well.... more>> For example he could have made it so the
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Amnesiac Princess becomes someone completely different and he ends up reluctantly falling for her or had the MC decide to side with the Demon Lord.

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garunix
garunix rated it
March 5, 2017
Status: v1c3
MC's cheat has already been established as combat experience + spirit eyes + knowledge of future events. I like the way he went back in time wasn't some standard reincarnation that happens randomly with no explanation (similar to many other novels) but is instead a premeditated and man-made event the MC was planning.

The premise is very interesting and the translation pace is good enough to keep my interest in the series. I'm worried about a few implications in ch3 as it seems like he will forgive one of the people... more>> who manipulated him. If it turns into a harem with her and the demon king I'll be pretty disappointed.

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Tarlos
Tarlos rated it
July 16, 2017
Status: v3c9
Not your typical JP harem novel. Although the premise is unoriginal (guy gets betrayed, but is given a second chance), the execution is very very unique. The villains in this JP novel are not left off with a slap on the wrist and a scolding. No, no, no, none of that easygoing stuff here. The MC is like one of those crazy dudes from a mindbreak hentai.

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He tortures the princess who betrays him, by repeatedly breaking and healing her fingers. Then he rapes her, brainwashes her, and kidnaps her.

He also turns one of his enemies from a man into a woman, and had him raped by his subordinates. Pretty original stuff eh?

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This is one of those novels where you shouldn't think too deeply and just turn off your brain to enjoy the ride. (The author contradicts himself quite a few times lol) It's quite different from most JP novels, and can be enjoyable if you're into this stuff, but is not a well-written or deep read by any stretch of the imagination. <<less
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Idle Translations
Idle Translations rated it
April 25, 2018
Status: v6c12
So after 5 volumes and a half, I decided to finally give this novel a review. Basically, it's bad. Only volume 1 is decent, but as the story kept going on, it just got worse. Ironically, the first volume had the worst translation. I wonder who translated that one... oh wait it was me and I can't be bothered fixing it lol.

This novel is a revenge novel, that basically acts as an advertisement for the light novel which has the actual revenge in it. I know the author skips r18... more>> scenes because they aren't allowed to put them on Narou, but like, if you're going to make an r18 revenge story in a site that doesn't allow r18 content, just replace it with something else, instead of skipping it completely. It's not like I want to translate a whole chapter of him raping someone, but I just don't like the fact that the author writes a paragraph about what the MC is going to do and then moves on to the next morning.

As for characters, they aren't unique at all, but you still end up remembering them because the author always puts their title or race right after their names, to make you not forget them. A lot of people are saying that the MC is crazy and I agree, but I think it's justified considering how much he was humiliated and messed up by the other people. So, I personally don't care about how he thinks in a completely inhumane way and tries to make excuses for why he is allowed to take revenge on random people.

And finally, the translation. Actually garbage. I was probably just really confused on how to translate different words because even though I'm kinda fluent in both languages, putting it all together was difficult. I also tried to stay as loyal as possible to the raws, which messed up the grammar pretty badly and I didn't even notice. Interestingly, some people thought I censored words in the novel of my own accord, without even checking the actual raws.

Overall, I might've been nicer and given this novel a 3 if I wasn't the translator, because god I even took a four-week break (two of those weeks was because I was on holiday though) since I just couldn't do it anymore. But I felt responsible, so I'm still going with it. Great novel btw.

EDIT: lol someone added revenge boner to the associated names list. Good one, but I had to delete that <<less
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GodlyGodMcGodGod
GodlyGodMcGodGod rated it
April 17, 2018
Status: --
I dropped this series a while ago. I forget specifically which chapter it was, but it was when certain spoilery events took place and became the nail in the coffin for me. To find out why, here:

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He ends up raping the sword saint "in revenge" for opposing him when, objectively speaking, had every reason to believe he was an awful criminal because every action he had taken in front of her looked shady as sh*t. Up until that point, he had respected her as one of the few people in the world with proper morals, and in fact she was demonstrating those exact same morals but in a way inconvenient to him. Prior to this, I was all for him treating the ex-princess like sh*t. She was the primary cause of all the pain he went through, so power to him. Slightly less enthused when he wiped her memory and it turned out that in nature she was actually pretty sweet and it was her upbringing that turned her into an ass yet his view of her remained the same, but I get it, grudges are tough to get past, we still good. Then we get to the bit with the wolf people, where he essentially blackmails an innocent wolf-person (who to be fair, is already a slave at that point) with saving her tribe into becoming a disposable piece for him. Yeah, I get it, she was already a slave lacking basic human rights, and why not use the situation with her tribe to earn her loyalty, sure. I personally am none too comfortable with him not even acknowledging her as an individual with feelings, but as a disposable weapon, I feel like he could have bought her loyalty with that tribe-saving thing without treating her as a toy/tool, but that's slavery for ya I guess. I'm uncomfortable but carry on. Then we get to the part I left off at, where he did some shady sh*t to make the Sword Saint think he's a dangerous criminal, and then when confronted he beats and rapes her. No, I get it, he's a selfish asshole on a power trip willing to fabricate the reason of "revenge" to punish anyone foolish enough to stand in his way. He's a scummy MC, and this series is a domination fantasy of him conquering and abusing the various heroines. I'll stick to my pu**y MCs, going on about friendship and kittens and what-have-you... Or at the very least ones who stick to justified vengeance.

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Dassina
Dassina rated it
July 31, 2017
Status: v1c15
So far the writing is mediocre and the author makes a lot of mistakes. He will say 1 thing in a chapter and then completely contradict himself in the other. Some things are not explained well, and the main character is weird.

Character Analysis Rant:

I was unsure whether to admire his determination or scoff at his folly and weakness. His mentality is one of a weak beta (understandable as he was just a peasant) who was brutalized until he became determined to get revenge. So far I didn't have an issue... more>> with that. In fact, I can admire someone weak striving to be stronger. But his approach is utterly stupid and demonstrates his weak mind (beta male, sub tendencies, and just poor decision making).

I can understand that he thinks he cannot run, and maybe that is true. I can understand that he needs to acquire certain resistances. But what he does just reeks of weakness. He allows himself to act pathetic to reenact the circumstances that he hated. Instead of playing along and training himself, he allows himself to be brutalized to gain it that way.

And this might MIGHT have made sense, if he hadn't said one of his reasons. Part of the reason he does this is to ensure that his revenge is "justified." That by being brutalized AGAIN he can justify his revenge. This is stupid and shows a weak spirit. 1. He already can see that the princess has not changed. 2. Even if he has gone back in time, it is only 4 years. She is still the same damn person. 3. WHY DOES HE ACTUALLY CARE? He was beaten, raped, starved, drugged, and just abused for 4 years. WTF would anyone ANYONE ever want to give their abuser another chance.

So rather than going the crazy alpha (which wouldn't fit), crazy broken (might work), or just determined and sad person route (would work) he is just a determined (when he can make up his damn mind) yet weak sub. This reeks of a weak character, but is probably because the writer is Japanese and is trying to justify the MC's actions with weak Japanese "Sensibilities." That seems to be the best explanation as the hentai is off screen and fade to black, the MC seems to kill people randomly with seemingly no consistent logic, and the MC seems to be unable to make up his mind over whether to get revenge or not. He says he definitely will, and then the next sentence says well maybe not.

He decides to kill a soldier for harassing (propositioning) one of his girls but he decides to allow the soldier to hit him once, just to make it fair? What? He then kills the soldier. But a few chapters earlier one of his other girls was literally about to be chloroformed and he just hit the attacker. Did not even kill him.

One of his potential targets literally rapes little boys and then kills them so they never grow old and out of their "beauty." Said target raped the MC. The MC decides well maybe he is different in this timeline and shouldn't be killed. WTF. <<less
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Authn
Authn rated it
March 28, 2018
Status: v1c11
This novel is bad and here's why:

    • The setting is bland and unoriginal - it's your typical JRPG mechanics with middle kingdom and demons.
    • Main character's logic makes no sense: after vowing to exact revenge and getting a second chance by returning back in time, what does he do? He allows the very same pain and humiliation happen to him, because he needs a "justifyable reason" for revenge, as they haven't done much to him in the second timeline yet!.. Simply genius.
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      I mean, I understand he had no way of doing his revenge right away and the only way to get stronger is to heal (and receive skills and levels in the process) people for the princess - but he could still do all of this WITHOUT going through unpleasant experience, simply by agreeing to work instead of acting afraid and refusing. He WILLINGFULLY put himself through all of this, only because he worried that his desire for revenge might die out.

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    • The presumed "core" of this novel, the revenge part... is just lacking!
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      The only thing he does to his revenge target is just breaking fingers few times, several bruises with external wounds, following with rape (with a help of red-hot metal). And to make matters worse, the latter part (rape) is almost completely skipped, barely any description! Even the first part of the revenge is barely described!

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      What is the whole point of a revenge novel, if the revenge part is barely there?
    • And, apparently, it then goes straight into harem route... 'nough said.
Why would anyone read this novel is simply beyond me.

The only saving grace is the art (which is only a part of 2 LN volumes, that are not even translated) and MC's power, that despite being broken (overpowered) actually makes sense, at least for the most part.
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EvilGenesis666
EvilGenesis666 rated it
November 11, 2017
Status: v5c15
Firstly, I have to warn readers of inconsistencies in this novel, TL-or tries to correct them whenever he can but still, it's annoying when stats are messed up several times or the names (and even gender) of the characters as well as the laws and abilities of people.

Now about the world and people, it feels like a milder version of The Dungeon Seeker. Humans are extremely evil and treat everyone terribly (even other humans) , however even the other races are manipulative and cruel and have tons of negative traits.... more>> Now, I say it's milder than Dungeon Seeker because there is shown some sort of goal of those evil actions beside ''being evil because I can'' and there also some characters that are genuinely good (so far only the humans in the kingdom MC is in are terribly corrupted and greedy, we still don't know if all of them are like that).

As for the MC, he is pretty insane and hypocritical, perverted, cruel and has a twisted sense of justice but at least he stays that way so far and nothing that happens in the world changes his mindset.

I said insanity and twisted sense of justice because MC always wait for people he wishes to kill to first get on his bad side (or as he calls it : ''Get revenge points'') before he strikes them back since it gives him a reason for doing it. This already gets proven in the first volume when he
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waits for the princess to drug, torture and order bulky soldiers to rape him before he gets his revenge on her.

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About hypocrisy, he is ruthless to men, but becomes somewhat soft when dealing with females. I think this quote from him describes this trait pretty accurately :
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''To be frank, apart from my village and my first love, I don't really care about anyone, but only after this many people are here, I can become serious. I have to search for someone I can feel attachment to. As I thought, I can't come to like anyone unless it's a cute girl. Are there any girls that are my taste and will make me cry and shout when they get killed ? ''

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As for the his mindset overall, I would say it's quite on point for the world he is living in and that it's better than most ruthless and twisted MC's have because he knows he is ruthless and doesn't sugarcoat it in any way. Similarly to my last paragraph, there is also a quote that shows how he feels about his current life :
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''That path has already vanished long ago. I chose a different path.I became the hero of Healing, degenerated into a brute, and even while being self-aware that I'm a brute, I'm doing whatever I want to my heart's content and will grab everything. And also, I don't regret a single part of it. I have money, I obtained the best women, and both my body and spirit is free. I obtained overwhelming power. As if there is any happiness better than this!''

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Also, for the people who think that his second life is all about revenge and that he lives only for executing it, this is what MC has to say about it :
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''After I finish my revenge, I will live a long life, and living a life without anything remaining after my revenge is lifeless. I only think of revenge as a hobby to become happy''

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Now for the harem, I wouldn't say it's too good, since half it are his slaves and are brainwashed to love him, but at least there are much interactions and emotions shown from them and each girl has different traits then the other. Also, he doesn't treat his slaves too terribly like abusing them, he actually wants to improve them and because of that he often has a dilemma because it's a double-edged sword if they some day try to betray him. <<less
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RennasS
RennasS rated it
July 31, 2017
Status: v4c6
I give it 4 cos MC is too Mary Suu so by far he didn't encounter really hard obstruction.

MC is so broken I laugh so much.

I also looking forward to see how this gonna end cos while MC tell himself all he did is for revenge, he did do a good deeds that will lead to world peace.

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I hope Freya turn back into Flare and kill him and kill herself after that cos she both love and hate him.

His harem can keep the world at peace after his dead.

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summers
summers rated it
July 8, 2017
Status: --
Reading several chapters and I never knew what the point of it was. As an ecchi a good foundation was set, apparently hero's don't have level limits and s*x with them raises it, this forms the basis for MC's capture, rape, then reason for revenge. That's fine, problem is this world seems to view healers as useless?! Because who needs healing. After that I just got lost.

A test I use to see if I should drop book is if a skip dozen or more chapters and feel as if nothing... more>> has been missed, like there was just a timeskip or a scene change.

I dropped it. <<less
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Yamato-shi
Yamato-shi rated it
January 23, 2018
Status: v3c10
Let's see the story isn't bad, nor good, flesh out I'd say. MC gets a sh*tty life full of humiliation and torture so he uses OP magic to reset time and try again, but this time he plans on take revenge on the ppl that did him wrong, so far so not so original.

You probably will like the novel till the end of first volume, I did, it's what comes after where I have a problem.

See, I know that since it's a revenge novel, with dark topics such as torture... more>> and rape, you can't expect much from the MC, like you can't hope for him. to be that good of a person, and I might have agreed with you before if it wasn't for him being utter sh*t. The fact that this is a revenge novel doesn't necessarily means the MC must be sh*t, take for instance Jumpei from Dungeon seeker, he has seen and lived worse sh*t than him, forced to crawl in a place where 99% of the ppl die in the first floor, in a world where even good is sh*t, but even then he still remains his humanity and sense of value, now this guy doesn't.

MC is just an hypocrite, he tries to find any excuse to take revenge on his target, cuz according to him he is a good person that won't do anything bad unless provoked, now you might think that's good except that he really believes he is a saint and a kind person, even though he is a psycho who brainwashed his companions into being nothing but s*x slaves. He calls others rapist murderes, and sh*t like that even though he has no problem breaking someone over a f**king cake, critics other for using drugs to rape even when he uses stronger ones to do the exact same sh*t.

Yes, it's a revenge novel, but that dosent mean that the MC has to be this much of a sh*t character, a good revenge story need a character with whom you can relate and root for, someone you can care for when he is in dip. This guy is not.

Another thing, this is a self insert type of novel, heavy on the porn side... or so you might think. Honestly while it does have a lot of s*x it's never describes it, just a few words of the MC saying how much of a stud he is, so the whole thing comes as unnecessary to the plot and is there just to ego stroke the author.

Something that I can rescue of all this bullcrap is the way he inacts his revenge on the main villains, they are somewhat cleaver and imaginative, sadly it amounts to nothing when 3/4 of the story is him making excuses to take revenge.

All in all this thing won't get past the 2 out of 5, it can be fun at times, and as I say the revenge descriptions are interesting, but the sh*tty MC and bland character just make this a pain to read.

Man I feel refreshed after writing this, think I'm gonna do this more often lol.

Pd: might be just my imagination, since I think this is a self insert of the author, but the author might be a misogynistic and homophobic, considering how he treats both women and gay ppl... dunno might be xd <<less
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Bondage Radish
Bondage Radish rated it
March 2, 2018
Status: --
I read Maou-sama and I liked it. I read Elf Tensei and I liked it. “Gee, ” I thought. “I’ll bet I’d like this one too!” I had high expectations. And maybe it met them! I don’t know. And I’ll never know. What was done to the MC was terrible, but I trudged onward. What he did to get revenge was gruesome... okay, I’m not going to judge him. He went through stuff I can’t say wouldn’t turn me into the exact same thing.

But after all that, I couldn’t grow... more>> to enjoy where it was and where it was going from there. I decided to check the reviews for a second opinion. I even opened the spoilers to see if there was something that would draw me in further, a reason to give it the benefit of the doubt. I tried so hard to give it a second chance, but nothing managed to convince me.

I couldn’t bring myself to give this a 1, but nor could I give it a 3. Using a 3, to me, says, “Meh. It’s not really bad or good.” Using a 1 would be my way of saying, “There are no redeeming features. This is garbage.” It’s better than garbage and worse than merely feeling mildly conflicted about its qualities. It’s my way of saying, “I can’t stand this, I vehemently reject it, but maybe you will enjoy it.” I can’t imagine you will, but I can’t say you won’t.

Some people like Dungeon Seeker, after all. <<less
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Anduin
Anduin rated it
July 31, 2017
Status: v3c9
The MC is powerful, but his personality is twisted. The way he takes pleasure in torturing his enemies disgusts me. He values himself above all else and sees the people around him as disposable. If not for these character flaws, I would have rated this series a bit higher. If you don't mind an edgy and twisted MC, then you can consider this a 4/5 review instead of a 3/5 review.
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