A mixed experience

I have very mixed feelings about this novel. On the one hand, I appreciated that it was a true reverse harem with a real plot and genuine drama. There were moments that truly stood out and pulled me in emotionally. On the other hand, it also fell short in several ways.

Firstly, I felt the main character (MC) never truly loved any of the love interests. She appreciated them, yes—but she never even considered staying with them. That felt sad to me, especially considering how deeply they loved her.

Another... more>> issue: once each character is "captured, " there's no further romantic development for him. I understand the logic—if their attachment has reached its peak, why dwell on it? But as a reader, I wanted more. Not just around 20 chapters per character—I wanted 120 chapters that kept all six of them growing and evolving together.

So, while I really enjoyed the novel overall, I wouldn't call it a gem. It was a solid read—enjoyable, but not unforgettable. <<less

This story is so good! I really like the premise and am excited to see where it goes.

Seems like it got taken down from the translators site though? The links are broken...

I hope this didn't get dropped, it's really good.

It is surprisingly good for someone who doesn't like harem ending lol. I like how author explained 'the system' of the game in this novel, like it's not just randomly appeared without knowing the story behind it. It's unique tho for its genre.

All MLs have their own charms.

Yall... this is one of the most well written reverse harem novel out there. The FL is smart and quick witted, and the atmosphere of the novel isnt so dark and bleak although the plot kinda is.

The back stories of FL and the MLs are well written and none of them is irredeemable jerks. And I love how the author wrote abt the gameplay, its very good, still give FL some restriction and not making her way too OOP.

But nearing the ending theres barely any spicy scenes and the plot... more>> is getting heavier and heavier.. but its still very good. Cant wait for the author to complete all of the MLs back story (so far ots 3/6 ML done) <<less

I'm currently re-reading the new eternalune translation and please start with that one! The translation is much higher quality!

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I also have a grudge against the other translator because they are greedy and clearly they have low quality translations too...

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This is definitely more smut focused in the first 10 chapters but the plot is interesting. It keeps you engaged as you wonder what the next protagonist's moves will be. The protagonist isn't annoying too haha. Her actions make sense within the information she has. Her character progression in the story is realistic but enjoyable. The game prompts for progression keeps the story at a great pace and I've never been bored so far. I really cannot praise the story enough. It just keeps snowballing into greatness haha. You do have to commit but like I said it's not a drag to do so.

What I ADORE with this story is the love interests. They are complex and real. You'll meet some of these love interests and think to yourself "wow, what an a**hole" and this story explains everything on why they are. No love interests' personality is just "a**hole". There is intense character development made to these love interests and the unearthing of their backstories is so fricking satisfying. It's a great read I really suggest it! Plz support the newest translator they deserve it! <<less

This is one of the hottest reverse harem stories I've ever read and I love it. I'm just getting started, but I'm expecting a lot from this story, I'm excited.

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Imagine playing your favorite R-rated dating game, receiving a surprise gift that tells you you can play uninterrupted without any restrictions, you get so happy that you put the gift (a ring) on ​​your hand, plus you increase your nerve sensors or something, (that thing that virtual reality devices have so you feel everything and have a more real experience),... more>> but hey I digress, the point is, you're in a very hot game... and things get good and not so good.

Read the story of our pe*verted saint to find out more!!

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The variety of male characters is exquisite.

Ardal, Orias, Dion, Dietrich, Lucius and Adrián are so hot, attractive and are a gift to whoever reads about them (although they can also be a huge pain in the ass). <<less