Official translations are good. I'm thankful for the fan translations but there are times when it's difficult to understand.

Story building was great. But the FL was kind of a Mary Sue character. Understandable though since she is the MC. Plot twist was novel and unexpected ... more>>

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the 1st play through hero got contaminated with the demon magi and has a demon core in him, he became a candidate for the demon king avatar

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. Main genres would be comedy, romantic fantasy, rpg. It would have been nice if this was a little smutty since the ML and FL are in their 20s already. I was kinda waiting for them to combust lol. S*xual tension was just given a little extra story 😫. Anyway, good read but probably wouldn't read this again. 3/5 <<less

Before I begin, chapter 18 is near the end of the book because I am reading the original release, not this translation where each chapter is divided into more than 10-15 different chapters.

Now for the review. I choose a 3-star score because this is an average light novel. The only thing it excels in is selling the revenge plot, even if that starts to fall flat near the end of the book. The main problems of this novel are the following subjects:
- Main Character Growth
- Cliche/Boring Villain
- Lacking Tension

The main character does not show any character growth. Even the romance part is not that strong, at least in how it develops the involved FL and ML. This is a problem with most stories in the transmigration genre, where the MC had his character development before the first transmigration, after which their character stays the same. The only point in this novel where character growth happens and is impactful happens at the beginning, where she accepts that her relationship with the villain was abusive.

Then unto the Cliche/Boring Villain, the villain does not develop in any sort of interesting way. Except for just becoming more and more of a punching bag for the FL. This becomes boring to a point that I actually hoped the villain would succeed once just so that maybe something interesting would happen. But that never happened.

Finally, this story lacks any form of tension after the first meeting with the villain. He apparently is extremely incompetent despite being very successful in the first transmigration round. And even when he seems to be competent, his schemes get stopped by things that suddenly get revealed with no foreshadowing.

However in the end besides these points, the romance can be pretty sweet, and parts of the revenge plot can be satisfying. I think this novel is very good until the first gathering of all the different guilds and till that point is defiantly worth reading.

I want to delete this review but sadly I can't, creator please delete this, really thank you.