At first, the chapters flowed well, and I could overlook the small mistakes. However, as I continued reading, it became confusing at times, and I found myself rereading sections multiple times. It became clear that there weren't multiple people working on the editing anymore. What a shame.

Ended up dropping after 13 chapters that felt much longer and not in a good way.

I'm not sure if it gets better or worse from here, but I think readers accustomed to MTL-ing might not mind as much.

Aside from the translation quality, which I am sure wouldn't bother that many people, the story lacks depth in its characters. It's too focused on dialogue, often followed by sudden information dumps. I often wondered if these details mattered, as they didn't help set the mood or develop the characters as a couple, so on.

It feels like a lot happens for no real reason, and yet, at the same time, nothing substantial occurs. In those 13 chapters, aside from what the description mentioned, all that happened was that the ML followed the MC all day, visited his workplace (which caused a stir), and later decided to shoot a commercial. That's it.

Ultimately, it didn't keep me entertained. I also wish the ML had more to him, he feels like a thin, blank character. What happened to him? I thought he would be an interesting character when I read the first three chapters.