So I read it until the end, saves from the pairing that's out in the extra chapter.

This is definitely higher end of fanfic, the author definitely read the original book, every plot is rigorous to the original and even modified things to improve the plot.

What I'm glad of is this novel doesn't shy away at modifying plot, plenty of plot is modified yet remain coherent. The story shy away the focus from the original character, making it not a copy of the original plot. Not to mention the introduction of... more>> rune magic is very unique, and is object of intrigue.

It's a good take of the new Harry Potter if I may say, compared to the reboot and retakes that puts nothing new, this kind of new focus is complete welcome.

And yeah adding to the other reviewer, the pairing at the end is unnecessary, yet it doesn't dampen the story since it only appears on extras. In fact if the author did not say it, I wouldn't have noticed. Regardless, this is worth 5 stars. <<less

The romance is the creepiest thing in this novel, and I am just happy that it's not front and centre for the majority of the story. No idea who's thought process, my assistant can eventually be a partner one day. Besides that it's one of the best HP fanfics I think in the Chinese genre. A major complaint with HP world building, a lot of things are not explained and the reason for this is due to it having a relatively soft magic system but also has some hard magic... more>> system rules which adds a bit of confusion. Thus, the author has a lot of liberty to add a lot of things to the world that makes it feels full and alive, and I am always a sucker for teaching characters, so this story is great on that aspect since he genuinely cares

Edit: I didn't mean for it to be one star I thought I put at 4. So my bad on that end <<less

One of the best renditions of the Harry Potter world I have ever read. It makes me want this world to be canon. It is that good. Felix Hap is a great protag although at first he appears a bit detached and cold. This novel is a very fun ride for anyone who is bored of the usual cliche of sticking to Harry Potter and friends in fanfics. Here, the MC is the one leading the golden trio to greatness, giving a different perspective on the story that I love... more>> so dearly.

Highly recommend this <<less

Fully agree with Mr SAM20. This novel is really good.

• • It isn't trivial because of the OP MC. He develops his magic and more importantly his character.
  • No system

• • The unnecessary retelling of the story is skipped, mostly focusing on the more novel sides of the story

• • The magic system is so much better developed than the source material - it explains the inner workings of e.g. Magical paintings and all kinds memory magic, what makes a powerful wizard actually powerful (in the original it is simply stated that Dumbledore is powerful, but how, in which way? Never said)
  • The time-turner plot-hole is filled in an interesting, but quite logical way

• • Some scenarios are altered for the better, but without changing the story too much

In short: the world created by Rowling is a lot more fleshed out.

Best MTL translation, I have ever read.
Best fanfic, I have ever read.

This is the Story of Felix Hap not Harry Potter. Most of the HP fanfic, just insert their characters in HP and then show Harry's story from the SI's perspective with some changes. But here Harry's journey is secondary. Although, we still get to see the Trio's school life a lot, but everything has changed greatly and we still see more then what we hope for.

The best aspect of this is the characters. They feel more real. I... more>> really really would like to see this fanfic as a movie. There is many things the Author added in the World but he doesn't change anything that is already established in the movies. Just adds onto it. The magic and the power level were the best surprise, the Wizards are much more versatile and way more stronger especially someone on the level of Voldemort and Dumbledore.

I really won't mind if the story went on for dozens more chapters. I feel the story ended abruptly, although all storylines are finished and it even stopped at a good time. But there is so much more the author can show. He has build an expansive world which can keep going even without the Main Character still being the part of the story.

I truly have no regrets with this. I usually don't say something like this is the best novel/fanfic I have ever read, because that sounds like a very big claim to me. But for this I can confidently say that "This is the Best Fanfic I have ever read." <<less

It feels refreshing to have a fanfic where MC barely knows the outline, and important parts of the story. Adide from that it's still an OP MC seemingly breezing by HP world with Mc's school years being skipped.