The author is so preoccupied with the profit that the novel became so chaotic because the writing itself is unplanned.

The updates are too rushed, resulting in many typos and syntax errors, which also makes it hard for us to read the translation.

Too many unnecessary chapters. Those fillers aren't even interesting at all. The author will just randomly write a chapter about meal time where the MC is cooking something for his foodie wife, which is boring and a waste of time.

There are some thrilling experience regarding the moments where ML meet his father (the man), Ye Shi nearly got beaten by the father's family, when this happens I really WHALSIALSKAO and to make it worse, MC at this time is not in ML side!! Well, in the end the father stop in time and it ends well.

And, the grandmother (ger) part... I think the review above already explain it that the r*pe part actually really annoying... it's clear as day that the he is got r*ped but the family did not get angry? bro he is your elder!!

MC, as I said, is not that PURE, he is scheming and can strategize way to maximize profit, pr to make his enemy worse if they touch his bottom line.

What is Mu Chen bottom line? Of course Ye Shi.

Honestly, at first, really at first before they got into the school (the sect I mean), I like ML. But when they got into the sect, especially in the part where ML's parents are trying to sucking ML blood by wanting many money in exchange of the secret book of ML's dad (ger dad of Ye Shi). But, Mu Chen did not agree. He feels that the parents are not telling the truth and only planning to fool ML.

For your information, ML's step father (non biological aka Ye family) is not treating ML well! That family even squander ML ger dad things! And make his dad in comatose state! You can imagine that this family is a villain right?

But Ye Shi hesitate a looot here. He feels like it's okay to give the money to the parents (bad parents) as long as the books is in his hands. He even feels like that MC is too much. Turns out, Mu Chen is right, the parents tried to fool them by exchanging the real book to the fake book.

And it also discovered that MC step father (bad parents) is involved in gambling debt because of MC doing! And you know what, this is what make me feels irk about ML.

Ye Shi, feels uncomfortable, that Mu Chen, is actually that bad.

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He shocked and absent minded when Mu Chen talk to him. But tbh I am so disappointed with his reaction😔

I remember Ye Shi is scared that Mu Chen didn't like his personality because he is bad, but he himself feels uncomfortable that Mu Chen is actually a scheming person?

Well, when I first reading it, I didn't take this scene seriously, but when re read this again (the second time), this moments make me feel... dislike to ML.

In addition, ML also riding over the head of MC... like so arrogant? I know he does that because MC always spoiling him but still... no

He is supposed to be tsundere, but he just comes off as standoffish and pretty self-centred. Ye Shi mostly takes everything Mu Chen gives him for granted, while on top of that taking advantage of Mu Chen's generosity with a lot of the things Mu Chen makes. Granted, in turn Ye Shi does share the inheritance he has with Mu Chen but...... something just rubs me the wrong way. It might be Ye Shi's lack of 'trust' in Mu Chen's abilities early on, followed by him taking Mu Chen's success for granted after he realises that Mu Chen can literally do anything. He also does a lot of small-minded things like misreporting how many pills Mu Chen needs to make for an order so he can skim off the excess for himself. Like, Mu Chen is willing to spoil him anyways so there's not much meaning in him lying to him like that?

For example, Mu Chen gets a 'master' later in the series, who basically after seeing how powerful Mu Chen is becoming, just up and declares himself Mu Chen's 'master' in front of a crowd. He never teaches Mu Chen anything, but does serve as a deterrent to other powers after Mu Chen heals him. Mu Chen doesn't care much for this 'master', to the point that when Ye Shi tells him to spike the master's food with laxatives, he does so???

ML is actually a part of a big shot family in another continent that will show up in the middle of the story. The story of his birth is also quite dog-blooded 😅 the Jack Sue plot is also have some secrets to it. But because our MC is too OP, he practically demolish the hundred years plot by himself.