This Quick Transmigration Experience Is a Bit Sweet

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This is a transmigration story following Zong Yuan and his system, 0046. In each world that he transmigrates to, he has to finish a mission but those missions somehow always revolve around the same person each time… With a new identity and personality in each world, the two male protagonists encounter and fall for each other over and over again.

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这个快穿有点甜
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12/19/23 KnoxT c134
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Souschef
Souschef rated it
January 29, 2021
Status: Completed
9/10 Fabulous! GongMC x thirsty Shou ML QT! Everything that I could have asked for!

A very sweet QT, each world is short and sweet, with no fuss, just lovey dovey. A brainless sweet romance QT novel, very similar to Beloved Husband.

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MC Zong Yuan binded with the system initially to lengthen his brother's lifespan for every successful QT mission he completed. At first, MC went with a playboy mindset and quickly got together with the ML when he confessed, but soon, he fell very deep and instead of focusing on the missions, his priority changed to looking for the ML and spoiling him rotten- with his c*ck.

Both MC and ML are OP and usually transmigrate into OP characters, and easily crush any small fries that block their way to love, so there is minimal drama and dog blood. The bit on the memory loss was a little confusing and felt a little forced, but it was just a small bump in the overall smooth road. S*x scenes were not outright written, but heavily inundated. I love the fact that the ShouML is such a s*x fiend in every world, that it is the GongMC that has to exercise restrain- it's a small and cute titbit.

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I would rate this lower than Beloved Husband, as each world was a little too fast, a little too quick wear, that it would have been nice to expand on each world a little more instead of just skimming through with just bare bones. Also, every QT seemed to end too abruptly, with no epilogues or happy ever afters. Most of them even end right after they roll on the bedsheets. Nevertheless, this novel is totally my cup of tea, I cannot wait for the translations to be completed to read again.
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some lemonade
some lemonade rated it
March 14, 2023
Status: Completed
MC (gong) : Zong Yuan

    • Spoiler

      In order to save his brother's life, Zong Yuan needs to complete missions.

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I really like this novel for many reasons, but mainly because of Zong Yuan. He doesn't fall in love quickly, but when he does, it's very interesting. Small arcs, quick to read, I got really excited at the end.

Arc 1

Fu Xin: 1-18 (+ extra: chapter 35)

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The first world he simply acted like an adult (because he is) interacting with a teenager (ML). But ML was very clingy and determined. MC accepted.

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Arc 2

Jiang Shengyan: 19-34

In the second world, I had a lot of fun.
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Zong Yuan missed ML, so a young master appears who acts very similar to his first love, which makes them become close, but Zong Yuan only starts flirting with ML when he realizes that his first love is the man of this world are the same person. Because of the bite. Yes.

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Arc 3

Mermaid: 36-42

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The third world was "vacation" and trauma. Zong Yuan, who is afraid of fish, now had his lover as a merman.

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It was quick, without much story, to talk about the MC's fear.

Arc 4

Qi Hanguang: 43-51

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MC is a ge'er (cis man who can get pregnant) and marries a man with two kids. Fortunately for him, this man is his beloved.

The two children are not ML's biological children.

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Just like in the previous world, Zong Yuan just wants to pamper his lover.

Arc 5

Glad: 52-58

I don't like
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vampire

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arcs, but I wanted to read more. Their flirtations are so warm.

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Zong Yuan touched his neck and smiled implicitly, "My baby is naturally reluctant to bite me."

ML is a vampire.

MC is a young master.

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In the middle of the night, Zong Yuan's immersion in work stopped, and Glad sounded with a trembling voice, "Zong..."

Zong Yuan kissed his red lips with a smile.

Keep working.

Glad wrapped his neck, half shy and half expectant, "Zong..."

"Yes?"

"Can you... shoot inside..."

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Arc 6

Zhou Jin: 59-65

Very confusing.
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It's about revenge. ML is the third young master of Zhou Mansion. He's already dead (ghost) and wants revenge.

Zong Yuan: I don't like children.

*child exists*

Zong Yuan: I'll protect you all my life.

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Arc 7

Zhuang Feiyu: 66-73

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ML is a very rich man. Zong Yuan is a young doctor and everyone falls in love with him. ML thinks he's straight, obviously he's not.

This world is a reward.

ML is afraid of ghosts (he was a ghost in the previous world).

They adopted twins.

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Arc 8

Chi Xu: 74-83

Very good and funny scenes.

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ML is an assassin. MC just wants to flirt with his little assassin.

ML thinks he's pregnant (no mpreg in this world...)

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Arc 9

Mummy: 84-93

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MC has amnesia!!

His task is to discover the greatest secret of the desert.

Abel Alfred Ignaz Abbe (ML)

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I don't understand shit--

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Zong Yuan said blankly: "Death has taken care of you."

Zong Yuan pressed the mummy on the pillar with his backhand, supporting the pillar with his right hand, blocking countless inquiring eyes, "Hey, you, mummy, you should go find a mummy to talk about in love."

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Arc 10

Hua Chengyun: 94-100

I don't understand sh*t part 2 (Seriouss!!)

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ML is the third prince. Yeah.

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Arc 11

Sheng Minglang: 101-113

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Every time MC is touched by humans, tiger ears appear on his head.

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ML in this world is a 0 (shou/bottom) without salvation. This arc is bizarre.

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ML doesn't like the cat because his husband likes (jealousy)

MC is adopted!!

He accepted this statement easily, and Zong Yuan asked with great interest: "What is your wish?"

Sheng Minglang was a little bit uncomfortable, "F*ck, f*ck me."

Sheng Minglang: What my husband meant! If we catch this monster, we can have sex!

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Arc 12

The Marshal Is On: 114-125

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They're Zergs

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This arc starts to question everything!!

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MC has to pretend to be a female zerg

Zong Yuan has two "sub-female" older brothers

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"... there might be a real Ji Xing in Zong Yuan's reality." OMGGGGG

ML: I'll be your wife and kill the fish for you!

MC: Okay!

SO CUTE!!!!

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Arc 13

Yun Baizhou: 126-131

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In this world, ML is Zong Yuan's brother's teacher.

ML was a transmigrator before MC!!

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ML's name has been revealed!

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"For example, if you complete the task of the fifth world, your brain feels that this is the limit, so it starts to delete all the memories of the first world in order to make room for the next world."

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+ 2 chapters and extra.

IMPORTANT:

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ML's real name is Qi Zhuang.

In the end, the system will follow them.

Zong Yuan and Qi Zhuang met in childhood.

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I hope one day they translate completely, because MTL is really bad!

I recommend it to anyone who likes:

    • Sticky shou, Small worlds,

      No drama,

      Something lighter.
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qpzmal
qpzmal rated it
February 24, 2021
Status: c23
This is soo cute. I actually like it one better than Beloved Husband since the MC doesn't just fall in love brainlessly, but there's still a bunch of fluff and pampering. The endings were really abrupt for each arc: I was waiting for there to be a little cameo of their life afterwards, but then it was like bam onto the next world. Another aspect that I appreciated was that both the MC and ML were smart and naively kind to people. It's really light, and there isn't so much... more>> dog blood drama, as the focus isn't really on fixing the plot lines as it is protecting the shou. <<less
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FYalimar
FYalimar rated it
December 21, 2023
Status: --
well, the first arc didn't leave me with a good impression of the protagonist, he knows that ML is gay but he still acts very, very ambiguously with him, isn't it obvious that he's going to fall in love with him? The author tries to sell us this as if the ML's story was so sad that anyone who treated him well would make him fall deeply in love, but the reality is that the MC acted completely and explicitly very ambiguous, giving clear and visible signs that he liked... more>> him. the ML, but then he backs away saying that it was never his intention, that the ML misunderstood him, it is ridiculous and irresponsible!!!

Zong Yuan also did not firmly reject Heng xiu'xiu or any of the girls who confessed to him, he was never direct to say "I don't like you, in your dreams" and he let the ML take the initiative to scare them away without complaining, which It would make anyone think that they agree with him and like him. In short, in the first arc the MC acted like a bastard, giving people hope, I didn't like it at all, I don't know if I'll continue reading... <<less
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GoldenTiger0
GoldenTiger0 rated it
February 28, 2022
Status: Completed
MC is like a cool bad good boy. He did like ML in first world but didn't fall in love with him. There are some worlds in which ML's personality is a lil arrogant fiesty, but he becomes cute when with MC.

Although the end of each arc seems abrupt, they all end after few tidbits shown after MC's mission in the world is completed. So, once MC completes his mission, the arc is sure to end in 1 or 2 chaps no matter what's happening then.

The arcs are pretty unique,... more>> such as the one with Mummy. Not unique arcs have good stories though.

The List of Arcs:-
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  1. Youth Campus Love - Handsome and unruly MC × Being bullied and scheming ML
  2. Country Love - Hormonal Veteran tough guy MC × Irritable President ML returning home
  3. Survival on a Desert Island - Ichthyophobic MC × Mermaid ML (ps. ML is super strong in this one, love at first sight)
  4. Guarding the Frontier - Ge'er MC × Self-proclaimed-gong General ML (ps. Popular trope but never seen a ge'er gong. Everyone is like: Madam is so strong!!)
  5. Western Vampire - Delicious blood hormonal MC × Gentleman Vampire ML (ps. Lil' dogblood, gee)
  6. Ghost's Revenge - Sturdy atheist MC × Resentment ghost ML (ps. So sad he died before they met)
  7. President's Love - Handsome white-face Doctor MC × Domineering 30-something-year-old President ML whose lovers all like the doctor (ps. Vacation world, lovers ain't lovers & are just one-sided used-to-be crush on ML)
  8. Escape for Life - Being assassinated & seducing for saving life MC × Killer ML (ps. ML cute)
  9. The Mummy - Half-amnesiac MC × Desert Mummy ML (ps. This arc feels very nice to me. Love at first sight)
  10. Ancient - Monk MC × Weak-on-surface & want-to-conquer-MC ML (ps. Love at first sight)
  11. Cute Little Urban Demon - Fierce White Tiger Demon MC whose tiger ears are exposed when touched by a human × Shivering Anchor ML who doesn't like animals at all thinks it's cat ears (ps. ML did like animals but not too much)
  12. Zerg - Male MC pretending to be female bug × OP iron-blooded General ML (ps. It's good since it's MC's soul or else the male baby would probably be suffering from identity crisis or depression. Love at first sight)
  13. Warm City - Retreating as strategy, Young MC × Tender panic-stricken Uncle ML falling in love with 10-year younger (ps. Past reaveal time)
  14. Real world - World-hopping-to-save-elder-brother MC × Forgotten childhood sweetheart ML (ps. It's not all info about ML, don't hit me)
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And, although MC mid-way focuses on meeting ML again but he doesn't forget his original intention of world-hopping, i.e., saving his elder brother. The system can only extend his brother's life upto average human life span and make him healthy, not make him superhuman with lengthy lifespan. <<less
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LianeVert
LianeVert rated it
June 9, 2021
Status: Completed
This was the story that converted me to gong!MCs. Zong Yuan is such a sweet and caring boyfriend and his Shou is just adorable 🥺

They are both very infatuated and devoted to each other. MC might seem a bit indifferent in the beginning but that changes fast. also, it’s funny how the Shou is way more of a s*x maniac than the gong, our MC even had to take supplements to keep up with him before his physic was strengthened.

You won’t regret reading this story, MC is amazing and so is ML, they are always equal in strength and looks and it’s very cute.
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Da_An77
Da_An77 rated it
June 4, 2021
Status: Completed
Aah. This novel makes me giddy with how sweet the CP's love is. We have such a hot MC (the way the writer describe MC's hotness can make you blush) and one of a kind thirsty ML. They just complete each other really well. This is definitely one of my favorite transmigrate BL novel. My only complain that some arc just ends before it can reach its highest potential. Oh well, as long as the CP is together I will devour everything just to see them more.

P.S system 0046... more>> needs to be given more credits. He is an adorable and helpful one. MC and ML is lucky to have him around. <<less
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Killgore
Killgore rated it
February 10, 2021
Status: Completed
Ahh Loved it.

I love Seme Protags because I wanna see the pampering and I did. That is one of the reasons I love the novel also the fact that Shou is thirsty af and is shown increasingly in every arc. The Gong's initial troubles with a thirsty shou was also shown which made me very happy.

The arcs were wonderful. Eventhough they felt like they were cut off suddenly it still had story. In the first arc, the MC doesn't exactly fall in love with the ML but how he grows... more>> to love the ML is depicted beautifully. There were a lot of arcs which is why I like QT's and it made me binge read the whole novel and I consider that as win. The Shou identity was revealed well and seemed well thought out rather than some half assed try. They eventually go back to real world and live forever.

But The arcs could have been expanded more. The entire arc will be pampering, chasing (very rare cuz the shou comes by himself) and teasing the shou, then the last or second last chapter will solve the villain/ target and then its done. I would have loved to see more but the story still holds up without it. Overall, loved the novel. Was a good and entertaining read.

Story - 4/5

Characters - 4.5/5

Translation - 5/5

Personal feelings when reading - 5/5 <<less
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Nana24
Nana24 rated it
May 26, 2021
Status: Completed
I enjoy reading this, but I feel that the novel can reduce the number of arcs so that every arc can have a proper ending and at least have a plot. I don't even know why MC are in that arc like u should give a background of what could happen to ML.

The good side of this novel was having a thirsty shou. (Most novels I've read did not have that)

There is a lot of fluff; MC and ML scattering their love everywhere and feeding us dog food.

Moreover, there... more>> are many diff. types of arcs.

Sad that we didn't know whether MC remember his memory of ML.... <<less
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gryffinpuff
gryffinpuff rated it
July 7, 2021
Status: c20
A bit early review, but don't think I can continue the book. I was really looking forward to a gong-QT finding his lover in each world, but the first arc was a letdown - the bullied kid became OP yandere in a blink of an eye... There's barely any plot; just here's the transmigrator, here's the sad shou, and here's some fluff, rest of the plot is up to the readers...
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Shadowdrop
Shadowdrop rated it
April 8, 2021
Status: Completed
I really love the variety of settings - from generals, princes and assassins to mummies, ghosts, beastkin and zerg. No complex plot, but a lot of interesting settings and funny antics.
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MeganError
MeganError rated it
February 8, 2021
Status: Completed
Not gonna lie, but I have special place for MC!Gong, it because I like to see what in they mind when they pamper the Shou. And this, one of couple dynamic I love, Sexy!Gong x h**ny!Shou :v I love how MC pamper our ML and it very rare to see Shou who demand s*x until we put candle for MC waist. LOL

Agree with @Souschef this novel just so sweet, not much dogblood drama or angst, brainless romance similar with Beloved Husband. But I like couple dynamic in this novel more,... more>> because MC give me more sexy Gong vibe even with different personality, specially when he tease ML. And the Shou is more h**ny bold.

It very short for every arc and there not much detail in the end (except, arc 1). Sometime I hope it has extra like Beloved Husband do. : (Well, I mtl it so there many detail I forgot and the setting in every arc is generic QT. But I really love this novel and the sweet feeling when I read it. <<less
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KartKid111
KartKid111 rated it
May 26, 2024
Status: Completed
This novel is alright, initially reminding me of "Beloved Husband" based on the summary.

However, it is unique on its own. I especially loved the first arc, which was compelling, interesting, and had a lot of potential. The transition to the next arc, about the MC living in the countryside with his mother and sister, felt abrupt. The change in the ML's personality was also odd. While I didn't dislike it, it varied significantly from the first arc without much explanation.

Regarding the MC's fish phobia, it appeared briefly in a few... more>> arcs before fading into the background. There was an explanation for how the MC got the phobia and a subsequent arc where he somewhat overcame it in the mermaid arc. It seemed like the author added it to add more depth to the MC and make him unique, but it felt a bit unnecessary.

Another issue is that many arcs were too short and abrupt. Some lasted a bit longer, but many ended randomly. The transitions between arcs weren't very smooth, often relying on the author's notes to signal the change. Occasionally it would transition nicely, in the later arcs. Probably because the author improved by that point.

Most of the worlds are interesting and have plenty of potential for development, which could improve the world-building of each arc. Unfortunately, this potential wasn't fully realized. Additionally, the plot felt lacking.

Well, its known that the MC is a transmigrator who does missions that require him to transmigrate in different worlds for his system to heal his brother and all that.

But these so-called missions are barely mentioned in most of the arcs. They're either introduced later or at the end, with the system sometimes stating the mission is already complete. The reason is probably that it wanted to make the MC relax and enjoy the vacation world to reduce stress. Like the doctor and CEO arc. But where is the stress exactly? I just feel like I'm being fed dog food here and there.

The missions were sometimes explained, but they were often bare bones. Which also made it very confusing for me to understand the world-building in some worlds. Like the supernatural events which is related to MCs mission occuring in the, well, modern supernatural world arc that MC was in. Where he has white tiger ears resting on his head. I couldn't quite understand what his mission objective was so I had to pick from the context clues for several chapters to understand. Which could've been easily solved if the author just told us what the mission objective was or cared more about the missions instead of telling us so late or just saying the mission is complete.

And there was even a one point where the MC lost his memory due to a small accident, which felt unnecessary and poorly explained. It was done on a whim by the author themself (refer to the author's note in chapter 82).

Oh and the backgrounds of the MC and ML were well-explained in some arcs, but in others, details were sparse. We learn about the MC's current body's family background, relatives, and skills in some arcs, but sometimes there's nothing or just a few details.

But there are also a few good points in the story though, like how MC won't rely on just his lover's appearance in the first arc to identify him. Well, he did initially, but later on he didn't do just that. He relied on his feelings (?), it's a bit hard to describe but that's basically how it is. And the tension between the MC and ML is pretty exciting at some parts.

I love their romance and feelings for one another, I kinda hoped that MLs personality would remain the same initially before becoming more developed and in-depth, instead of suddenly adopting a new personality for each arc. But it wasn't too bad, I'll view it as the ML has a different personality in each arc due to different upbringing and traditional values set on him. Like his personality is influenced due to his environment (Since he basically has an identity and life in those worlds, unlike our MC, a transmigrator). But I kinda hoped one of his personality traits would stick with him through it all. Well, there is actually. His um, enthusiasm for 'papapa'... It's actually pretty funny though, not gonna lie. And the dog food is really sweet most of the time.

I plan to rate this novel as a 3/5 but, there were a few arcs that really moved my heart. Although the plot isn't particularly well-written, and the worlds end rather abruptly... The dog food is really sweet! ML and MC are so cute together, especially in the later arcs. It's more obvious and romantic. This novels clear objective is probably just romance! If so, then I'm willing to turn off my brain a little, embrace it, and willingly eat dog food! The most important part is that the MC is a very respectful gong and there was no instance of him forcing himself against ML! Just very sweet and more often that not, sensual! With some implied 'papapa'!

So I'll rate this a 4/5! Although the novel started a bit rocky from the start, the ending was really sweet. So I do believe it deserves this much at least. I loved the ending, I loved the reveal and the extra. It was sweet and beautiful. The novel, despite its flaws such as its abruptness and awful transition at the start, became more polished like a gem at the end. The author improved quite a bit from what I saw. My most favourite parts of this novel, was the start and its end. As well as the relationship between the MC and ML. <<less
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SlayrEye
SlayrEye rated it
February 22, 2024
Status: c98
The more the novel went on, the messier it got. First arc, we got to know that he has to complete a mission in the world he is. It was mentioned what the mission was. As it went on, the missions were mentioned only as an afterthought. It was only focused on MC and ML meeting, some misunderstanding/sweetness between them. The mission, it was mentioned nearly when the world is completed. And the thing that pissed me off the most is that the arc never really have a closure. It... more>> isn't mentioned their future. No need for a whole chapter, few paragraphs would have been enough to mention how their lives went on afterwards.

Some novels were good. Should have had more chapters and dwelve more into it. <<less
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Yumeru
Yumeru rated it
February 11, 2024
Status: Completed
Welll good reviews def worth the read of quick transmigration with Seme MC~~~ annnd ML is also straightforward when he realizes his feelings every arc for MC ehem even MC (seme) needs to be strong to cater for his lover's need *winks* every arc also had a touch of diff story from other QT noves. So it's not boring. There's also the suspense/revelation about their past. Compatible couple!!
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Shadesq
Shadesq rated it
September 25, 2021
Status: c52
I don't know what to say I have a mixed feelings about this novel. I like how it turned out but I do not like the ML I kind of feels like he is useless. Specially the 2nd arc leaves a bad impression of ML atleast for me. The portrait of love wasn't properly shown in this novel. It could have been better but it wasn't. An easy to satisfying bottom is good but I feel like author forget to show his personality or play his personality properly.

I would still... more>> suggest readers to read this novel before deciding. Cause what was unsatisfying for me probably won't be unsatisfying for you so give it a try then decide. <<less
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falling-up
falling-up rated it
May 21, 2021
Status: c35
I agree with the review by Souschef.

Before this novel, I wasn't one for seme protagonists even though I love male protagonist BG quick transmigration novels. I guess it's because I couldn't really relate to being thirsty for a shou? XD But the seme POV in this novel is so different from novels I've read before. One, he really does start off not caring too much, but then you get character development and he becomes one of the best pampering gongs I've seen. And his cute phobias, helpless adoration of the... more>> shou (and fear of shou's overwhelming Thirst), makes the gong pretty hilarious and human. No domineering CEO, yandere cut-out here.

Also, the s*x isn't explicit, but everything leading up to it--the teasing, the attraction, and s*xual tension--is implied in a fairly bare way without flowery substitute words like in most chinese webnovels, which totally ramps up the sexiness. Sometimes, the implications and tensions are better than the actual act. I don't know if the wording is from the original or the translation, but either way, two thumbs up to the translator--I've compared the mtl to the translation and you don't get the same flavor or feeling of submersion from the text in the mtl, so I've decided to wait to read using the translation.

This is my first review on this site, so I don't know how to use the spoilers function, but if I did I'd heap a lot more praise on this novel. <<less
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AelterG
AelterG rated it
October 15, 2024
Status: Completed
Very cute story that was pretty short and at times a bit cryptic but if you pay attention you get what’s happening (most of the time). I enjoy every story and the main story was also very interesting considering they could have totally missed each other.
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The Toast Man
The Toast Man rated it
January 11, 2024
Status: Completed
This is not a deep story. If you're looking for something emotionally impactful, this is not it.

Overall I think this novel is okay for a quick read, but I have quite a lot of critiques for it.

1. The start and end of each arc is extremely abrupt. There's practically zero explanation to how it ends or any smooth transition of the MC travelling to another world. The most indication you get is from the author's note, which is pretty bad and just comes off as lazy to me.

2. The backstory... more>> of the MC and ML meeting isn't fleshed out and is quite surface level. And we only hear about it at the very end.

3. The MC's purpose for transmigrating isn't well written. We are told that he's world hopping to save his brother, but his brother seems to be perfectly healthy when he returns to his home world, which makes it seem as if MC's efforts were not for much. I think it would make more sense if the purpose for transmigration was changed to the MC saving his own life.

4. The flow of the story sometimes is a bit sporadic. The MC and ML could be talking about one thing, and then they suddenly bring up another topic. There isn't a very good transition.

5. The build up of realising who the ML is in each world could've been more suspenseful. In some arcs especially towards the end, the MC easily identifies who the ML is a bit too quickly. The romance in general is quite fast faced, although I am okay with that. Honestly, I think the way the author writes their relationship makes it seem more like the MC and ML are roleplaying rather than actually world hopping lmao.

6. Some of the arcs just don't make sense and you have to shut off your brain to read. Like in the assassin arc, the ML's IQ suddenly drops like crazy, even though he's supposed to be a highly skilled assassin who always gets the job done. It's just too out of character. Personally I think it would've been better if the ML successfully killed the MC and that could've created good angst for the next arc. <<less
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erialolita
erialolita
November 5, 2023
Status: c66
Won't rate for now, got only to chapter 66 via MTL. I would read further, but MTL for this one isn't easy, I feel like I missed a lot in the last 3 arcs.

If I was to rate this now, it would probably be 3.5. This novel is a junk food type of novel, not much substance, but entertainingly sweet.

If this is ever translated, I would absolutely read again. I'm just not that invested in the story to turn my brain into mush with MTL.
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