The beginning of the story wasn't too stellar and the story itself felt like it's trying to be dark and edgy without having the need to be. This could have been a Slice of Life story like the Lazy Dungeon Master if the MC wasn't transported back to his home world for all we know but the route was changed to be a try hard "dark" and "edgy" story with some intentional misunderstandings sprinkled it to add a bit more tension to the already lax story.

Also, it might be just... more>> me but it irks me that the MC isn't batting an eye at the fact that his dungeon monsters are using human women as baby making machines. If he doesn't know they're doing that then it's even more braindead. What's his use outside of pouring some occasional money to the dungeon? Decoration? Might as well have been a story about the succubus without that s*upidly useless MC. I might've enjoyed that story more rather than this MC that's not only lacking in personality but is also fcking useless like what the inhabitants of the other world he hates says he is xD. <<less

Nice enough story but badly written MC, try hard edge lord, who knowingly, as weak as he is inserts himself in uncomfortable scenarios where doesn't belong, and get mad because people don't respect him treats him as nuisance.

Also intro is full of plot holes. He got an ad for a game, he played it right away. He got asked to pay for an in app purchase before being able to start playing, and he did.

He was missing for a year yet his water and gas wasn't cut. And that's just... more>> the start of the novel. <<less

Started out fine. Fell off quite hard. The MC gets 1 billion star monster and all tension is immediately removed because his servant is the strongest monster in the world, but the novel keeps trying to focus on the dungeon even though the boss is basically unbeatable. There's not much else to it, just a very basic op revenge style story with hardcore edgy dark themes for no real reason.

an interesting dungeon story. Just a heads up: things get dark at chapter 13. This isnt a slow life japanese novel with cute monster girls serving the MC and having quirky misunderstandings, but a grim dark korean novel where monsters act like monsters when given vague orders and left to their own devices.

is great read so far... a dungeon building game that turn out to be real dungeon I another world. A typical story like that. The story about the second intruder solidify the story. That's really gruesome end. I feel like is not necessarily to include, maybe better just imply. But well I read several doujin with the same scenario.

So the story feels like a little bit of a mislead, it tries to give you that demon king thing, but it doesn't really key you in that that's the kind of story, and the character is sort of apathetic about what's happening which undercuts the brutality which now becomes this weird just expression of gore for I don't honestly know to what effect. I feel a little apathetic about it now and would rate it around a 3 star.

This tone shift and just some things not being transitioned well,... more>> as well as the design of the gore in relationship to the reader, I don't find it a good package. <<less

0/5 there is pretty much zero realism to the story at all which takes you completely
out of it. From the way which characters act and how the MC reacts to the environment
and his current situation.

read this if you are new to reading novels and like dungeons
and revenge