Alright, it's my 1st time posting a review here so please bear with me. I may update this in the future as more chapter is released.

This novel is actually one of the more decent ones IMO, the romantic aspect wise:

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Our MC is not a beta guy... and he actually proposed to the FML at the end! Hooray!

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Well because the novel is based on a fictional eroge so there are bound to have scenes that are interesting in nature.

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The life force checking (and its "consequence") is of course logical given the novel's setting, so I have to bear with it even though I wish it could be relocated to a latter part of the story

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At any rate, so far I find this is a fun treat to gorge on. Hope that later chapters keep up the same quality.

*Updated review: the end chapter IMO was rushed quite a bit, still at least it allowed our stoopid lovebirds to have a good ending there.

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On the other hand, that bit about the game's "MC"... that bastard is another reincarnated soul, and he's a nasty piece of work. Hope that he got cucked lmao

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Alright. Someone has to say it. This is a subpar novel with a cheat protagonist. That wouldn’t be enough to turn me away normally, but they started the main character as a child. And he’s been one for fifteen chapters.

Again, that’s fine normally. But why should a four year old be able to fight one of the strongest demons in the world at the age of 5? Why was he transferred to a forest full of demons by a sword skill of another child? Why the heck are they sexual... more>> using the children with the skills?

The last part is probably my main turn away, since it’s implied that he’s checking her life force in a way that stimulates her. Of course, the absolute lack of danger so early into the story is also awful.

But, if you like that stuff, go ahead. It’s not my cup of tea though. <<less