Nice, heartwarming story. As Hell said, it takes about 5 min for a slow reader. Although I disagree that the psychology need improving. Her thought process didn't need any describing. That would only make sense if it was a longer story. Her thoughts were just were they way they were, and her mental condition was clear. And that's it. It's a short story for a reason.

Definitely recommended, but it's also straight up my alley.

You can see where the plot is going and the story is short enough to take not even 5 minutes, so you won’t waste much time.

The psychological aspects could be written better, but for a shorty written just for the shock value, this does its job well.

Also, the title is the ultimate spoiler for the girl’s conflict (sadly).

Still, not too many emotions in general.