Based off of the first 20 chapters, this seems like the kind of story I really enjoy. It reminds me somewhat of Black Tech Internet Cafe System, which is a story I enjoyed greatly. I laughed several times while binge reading the first 20 chapters and I have high hopes for the future.

Edit: Chapter 27, as well as some of the previous chapters, have been pretty problematic. I don't know if it's a translation issue, and editing/proofreading issue, or a lack thereof. Regardless, I can't continue to give this five... more>> stars after reading chapter 27. There're multiple sentences that just don't make sense and more that are written quite poorly. Here, I'll provide an example, so judge for yourself.

1: "Even those who were strong in building a foundation could directly apply to open a sect! Establish Sect Yipin! He was like He Yiming. He still needed to visit Haotian Academy and win the chief after four years before he was qualified to establish a sect."

This first sentence in the example makes perfect sense but after that it just goes downhill. The second sentence in particular, I've seen no mention of a Yipin in the story to my knowledge prior to this. Even if I had though, I'm still not certain that sentence would make any sense.

In conclusion, I'm docking a star because I can't honestly give something of this quality five stars. <<less

Pretty good so far, nothing out of this world in terms of content, but that's to be expected a review this early sis basically meh conaidering the novel literally just took its first step.

Translation wise:

Its good no big grammatical errors that break immersion although the way the translator puts notes is a bit annoying.

... more>> MC:

Pretty generic so far, I can say the story revolves around the system rather than the MC which is always going to be him reacting to whatever quest pops out and him outsourcing it to his "disciples".

Plot/world building:

Can't comment here because nothing has been unveiled as of yet but the MC basically

Spoiler

has the system summon a group of people to his cultivation world as 'players' and they do quests for him and regard him as npc

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Why not to read:

Well there's no reason that stands out i.e misogyny r*pe racism etc but it does feel like a story thats has nothing new to offer to the table so if you are looking for something revolutionary then don't look here <<less

So far this is a fun premise. It's very similar to Gamers of the Underworld, but taking on a different genre (eastern cultivators as opposed to western dungeon lords). I'm expecting these cultivators to get up to some fun hijinks worth a chuckle. Feels like the author enjoys the video game Amazing Cultivation Simulator and wanted to write a story around that. Hard to say as nothing is 1 to 1, but that's my initial feeling. Looking forward to new chapters. I'm hoping it avoids the pitfalls of bigotry that... more>> plague other comedy novels (racism, sexism, h*mophobia, transphobia etc) <<less